Arjun FF : Blue Shadow. Ch 17 p.57

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Hello everyone, I'm starting a new fiction. It's another thriller with Arjun and ETF. Who read myArjun FF : Haunted Mansion,You can say it's a sequel of it because everyone's background story is same here...& the team also. Sonali is not here, but her name would be mentioned in some places. And yes I'll try to put some glimpses of their pasts. Specially Saakshi.

But if any of you didn't read Arjun FF : Haunted Mansion, she(or he) has nothing to worry..Because it's not a typical sequel...you can enjoy it as another case fiction of ETF.

The credit of starting it goes to Rimi (Rimi_invisible)...otherwise I would never posted it here. Especially when the show is ending...and I have least number of readers for my stories.

Now concept - the case starts with a dead body found in Nasik highway. It looks like a random killing but when ETF took the case...it leads them somewhere else.

So Starting...

Blue Shadow

CS : Scroll down

Preface : Scroll down further.

Index :

Chapter 1 : Page 1

Chapter 2 : Page 6

Chapter 3 : Page 8

Chapter 4 : Page 12

Chapter 5 : Page 15

Chapter 6 : Page 17

Chapter 7 : Page 19

Chapter 8 : Page 21
Chapter 9 : Page 26 (posted by NATURESHIVANI)
Chapter 10 : Page 32 (Posted by Armagadon)

Chapter 11 : Page 35 (Posted by NATURESHIVANI)
Chapter 12 : Page 38 (Posted by NATURESHIVANI)

Chapter 13 : Page 43

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3928672&PID=110561823&#p110561823">Chapter 14 :page 47

Chapter 15 : Page 50

Chapter 16 : page 53
Chapter 17 : Page 57

My Index : The whimsical world: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3897429

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 10 years ago

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Character Sketch :

TEAM ETF: (All are same as the show)

Commander: Sameer Daam Singh Rathod

Second-in-Command: Arjun Suryakant Rawte

Investigation Officer: Ayesha Kapoor & Chandrakant Patil ( Ex- commando)

Tech expert : Shreekant Sen

Forensic Expert : Lisa D'cruise

Public and Media Communications officer : Saakshi Anand -an Ex crime journalist.

Other characters will come forward according to the story.

Other Characters :

a. Sonali Mitra : Ex- colleague and friend of saakshi. ( she is from my fiction Haunted Mansion. She is mentioned in some portions of the story)

b. Kabir Singh : Ayesha's friend and a Senior inspector (will come forward with the story)

NOTE: The author doesn't owe the characters, names of the places, people, or establishments. Those are used here only for the sake of the fiction.

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Preface :

1.50am, A Nightclub in Mumbai.

A girl in a red-black short dress was sitting at a corner with a glass of champagne. She looked not interested to the dance or anyone showing interest in her. She posed a straight face but was nervous inside. She was waiting for someone. But it seems that person would not show up. She finishes her drink and got up, when a man in mid 30's blocked her way.

Man : Hey lady...I was watching you, you are alone?

It was not a question but a statement.

Girl : I think so...but today I'm not in mood...so excuse me.

Man : Going home? Let me drop you...but after you share a drink with me...

Girl : I've finished my drink..but if you insist, I won't mind...

Man : Sounds good...

Girl : But I need something else also...

Man : Let me guess...you need a toffee?

Girl : (Smirked) I'm not a child...but I Like those toffees...

Man : Then you need to join me for a dance (he spread his hand) May I?

Girl : (placing her palm on his) With pleasure.

They moved to the dance floor.

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4.50am, Nasik highway.

A black SUV braked at the roadside and a girl rolled down from it. The SUV zoomed forward. It was the same girl at the nightclub, but the difference is, she is dead now.

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Now, tell me, should I continue?

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 11 years ago

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

ahaaa..caught you...😉😉😉😉😉😉

i loved this surprise...🥳

finally a sequel...omg...loads of kisses and hugs from me atisha...😳❤️

i love you sooo much...🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome start..akdum atisha estyle...👍🏼😎

offcourse continue..and i know you will pm so go ahead..😃

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

I didn't read HM beacuse of shifting problems , But I will definitely read this😊

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Unres.
Wow amazing new story
interesting start w8ng 4 part1 plz continue soon

Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

superb start👍🏼

couldn't read HM cuz of exams...

but will surely read this😊

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

so nice of u to start a new one just after finishing the haunted mansion
eagerly waiting for the case so continue soon and pls don't forget to pm me for the updates 😊

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Atisha..you introdused Sonali as a team member...loved that...
She was one of the brilliant characters of HM eventhough I was
not so happy and convinced with her in first few updates...
And at that time I expressed my confusions also...
But she was really intelligent and she played a major role in solving
the case in HM...nice to see her as a team member...

And I m happy that you decided to come up with a sequel of that
awesome work...I am really excited to read another thriller from you... 😊
So cont soon..

Anyways...I will try my best to be a regular follower of the story
and to give you a genuine feedback...

Thank you...