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Sorry guys, was really busy with settling in my new job, so couldn't reply you all, thanks for your lovely feedback.

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Chapter 15  :

Rathod and Arjun was studying the evidences, while chotu barged in.

Chotu : Sir...GBK enterprises...unka ek consignment  land hua hain...and they are in hurry..aaj raat ko hi transport karne wale hain...

Arjun : You sure? Pakki khabar hain?

Chotu : Haan sir...my informer works there...itna huge consignment hain...phir vi aapni aadhe se jyada godown stuff ko chutti de dia...aur aaj hi saara maal transport karr raha hain...

Rathod : Agar tip mila hain toh..raid toh maarna padega!

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ETF conference room.

Kabir was working on his laptop and discussing something with Shree & Liza. While Sakshi entered.

Kabir : harish ke ghar se aa rahi ho?

Saakshi : yup.

She moved to the counter and made coffee for herself. She asked others if  they would like to have some, and all nodded positively. She made coffee for others too.

Kabir : Waise.. I thought  you gonna have off for today...kaal jo khel dekhaya tumne na!

Saakshi : (became conscious) maine? Kya kia?

Liza :Arre haan..how can you remember...you were drugged na!

Liza narrated the whole incident to Saakshi. Shree & Kabir started giggling on that.

Saakshi : GK ne Arjun ko confront ki! Really?

Kabir : Haan..tumhara doggi hain bara cool! Bohut friendly hain...but He didn't liked Arjun... Jab tak tum Arjun ki godh main thi...Lag raha tha arjun ko zinda chorne ka koi irada hi nahi hain uska...but jaise usne tumko chor dia..uska pura concentration tumpe chala gaya.

Shree : Aur Asia cheese se tu mujhe nahi milayi..i mean Arjun sir to dhamki di...kutte main dum hain!!

Liza : Haan...laag raha tha kavi bi Arjun sir ko kaat sakta hain!

Saakshi : accha! But Arjun ki toh dogs ke saath accha banta hain...dog squad main jitni dogs hain..arjun aur Chotu..dono ke saath unka understanding kaafi accha hain...phir GK aisa kyun kia?! Strange!

Kabir : Don't mind...but pet kum aur jealous BF jyada lag raha tha.

Saakshi : BF hi  toh hain! I mean tha..

Kabir looked at Saakshi briefly who had a mischievous glint into her eyes.

Kabir : Are you serious? I mean it's a doggie!!

Saakshi : Do you guys believe in reincarnation ?

Kabir : Iske saath GK ka kya connection?

Saakshi : Hain..bohot close connection hain...aur yeh bohot lambi story hain ..toh..rehne do.

Shree : Nahi! Main nahi chorne wala...ek toh roz mere bina tum teeno masti karti ho...upar se itna cool doggie...mujhe batao!!

Saakshi : (posed as if she gave up) ok! If you insist! It was long..long ago when I was a princess...aur ekdin subha subha..mandir se ghar aate waqt, maine kisi Sage ki pet doggi ko ghee ke laddu khila dia...bohot saara...

Shree : Kya! Doggi ko Ghee ke laddu!! Tujhe pata nahi tha doggies ko Ghee nahi hazam hota...unki far gir jaata hain!

Saakshi : Mujhe kya pata tha..main rajkumari thi..doggi ki nanny nahi!!

Someone asked : "Phir kya hua!"

Saakshi : Phir kya...do din main kutta clean hogaya...bilkul brass pot jaise..smooth...ek vi far nahi th uski poori body pe!

Again someone asked : "Hmm..phir!"

Saakshi : Phir uss sage ne mujhe shrap dia...ke agar koi ladka mujhe pyaar kare..toh main usse shadi nahi karr sakti..agar karr lia..toh next birth pe woh ladka mera pet doggie banke paida hoga!

Kabir : Kyun fek rahi hain!

Saakshi : sacchi! Tumn GK ko dekha na!! ek minute mujhse dur nahi reh sakta... agar mere baton pe yakeen nahi hota toh...Liza se pooch lo!

Liza testified for Saakshi.

Liza : Haan..she is right...GK always stick to her...Saakshi ki alawa usko aur kuch shayad samajh hi nahi aata!

Now that voice again interrupted : "Agar GK pe research khatam ho gaya ho..toh aab kuch kaam karle?"

All looked at the door, and found Arjun was standing their, leaning against the door, crossing his arms on his chest.

Shree : Sir! Oh...

Arjun stepped in and sat in his place.

Arjun : Liza, postmortem report?

Liza passed him a file. Arjun started looking into it.

Shree : Sir, Harish ke unregistered sim ka call trace ho gaya...usne koi call nahi...messages send kia jaata tha...

Arjun : Kahan?

Shree : eK mobile service provider ki no pe...wahi..jo sms & Voice mail services dete hain..B'day or anniversary greetings, songs dedication,  joks, beauty tips, promotional...

Kabir : Matlab...they are using a safe channel...and Arjun...I'm sure it's Ruhi.

Arjun : You sure!

Kabir : Haan..coz agar hum logon ko milna hota..toh hum usually aisi kisi services ki help lete the..ek sms, ya voice mail greetings...with certain meaning...which contained meeting time & place..or anyother urgent info we wanted to share...

Arjun : shree, service provider se pata karo...

Shree : I've contacted sir...they'll send the repot by evening.

Arjun : Hmm...aur Saakshi...tum, mazak ki alawa aur kuch kaam karne ka irada hain kya?

Saakshi brought out a tape recorder from her bag, and forwarded to Arjun.

Saakshi : anita's interview, khud sunlo.

Arjun took the recorder and left.

Saakshi : (grumbled) Akruchandra!

Kabir : Aisha kahan hain?

Saakshi : Sameer ke cabin main...maybe something serious.

Kabir : ek baat batao, mere peeth peeche yahan Aisha kya kya karti hain?

Saakshi : Excuse me?

Kabir : arre bolo na! aab toh rehti vi tumhari saath hain... koi hain kya jo mujhe competition de sake!

Saakshi : (checking Kabir out from head to toe) well...maybe yes!

Kabir : (frowned) Accha!

Their little conversation was interrupted by Aisha.

Aisha : mere bina hi joke maar rahi ho!

Saakshi : Are nahi...how's your date with Sameer?

Aisha : Rocking!

Kabir : kya?? kya kahan? Sameer!... I'mean really?

Saakshi : itna chowk kyun rahe ho?

Kabira : Sameer matlab! Chief na?? is kaise...who to aadmi hain!

Saakshi : Haan! Aadmi hi toh hona chahiye na!

Kabir : Haan ..par gay nahi...

Aisha : Kabira!! Khabardaar agar bakwaas ki toh! Rathod sir aisa nahi hain!

Kabir : accha! Aab main bakwaas karta hoon! Aur tujhe bada pata hain!! Agar oh thik thak hain..toh tu unke saath kya karr raha tha!

Aisha : Case discussion...aab iss  topic pe koi baat nahi hogi.

Shree : Kya? Yeh kaunsa topic hain?

Aisha : kuch nahi..isko bakwaas ki dohre padte hain...ignore him.

She moved to coffee machine to make herself a cup of coffee.

Kabir : Huh! Badi aayi mera mooh band karanewali...Aashu jaisi chez main koi aadmi nahi aurat interest legi...

Liza : Come on Kabir! This is  really a bad joke! I mean Aisha aisi nahi hain... bilkul nahi!

Kabir : Accha? Itni sure kaise ho?

Saakshi : Kyunki Aisha jiske saath dates pe jaati hain who aadmi hain...

Kabir : Nadia avatar main jaati hogi..

Shree : Nahi, Aisha banke hi jaati hain.

Kabir : Impossible! Aisha aur aadmi ke saath! Sakshi pinch me!

Saakshi : Sure!

Saakshi pinched on his knuckle and Kabir screamed.

Kabir : arre Queen of Ants! Itni zor se nahi!

Aisha : aapna faaltu drama band kar Kabir, nahito baqayda tera pitai karungi...

Kabir : Haan haan pata hain... tu iski alawa aur karr vi kya sakti hain...par Aashu, you really go for dates with men! (Aisha glared) I mean a man! Woh vi Aisha banke!! (he tried to suppress his giggle) Matlab..woh aadmi thik thak hain na.. kahi usme koi major problem toh nahi hain?!

He ogled and all looked at him shocked.

Aisha : (Flared up) Kyun? aisa kya problem hain ke main kisi aadmi ke saath date pe nahi jaa sakti?

Kabir : Kyun ki pichle 10 saal me tu kisi aur ko toh kya...mere jaise sensitive, smart aur good looking bande ko kavi ladki wali feeling nahi di... jab vi tu saath hoti hain, aisa laagta hain mere papaji mere sarr pe danda leke khara hain!

Rathod : Aab baccho jaisi harkat karoge toh kisiko toh baap ka role nivana padega na!

All looked at the doorways and saw Rathod entering. Asia moved to him and placed his coffee mug before settling into her place.

Rathod : Guys...We have some information about an illegal transaction... we're going for a raid...

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At a godown.

Some people are tearing apart the big sacks of flower and sorting out the small white packets, and putting them in a half filled crate of fruits, some men were taking away them and filled the crate with some more fruits and packing fillers, then sealed them. And some took them to a container resting aside. Two men were monitoring the whole process, they were looking restless.

Man 1 : Hurry up lazybutts! We don't have much time...

Man 2 : Aaj koi garbad nahi hona chahiye...nahi toh boss humko nahi chorga...you have only 20 minutes to wrap up everything!

A worker came to the first man.

Workr : Boss...woh last container main...

Man1 : Uski chinta matt karo...oh aaj deliver nahi hoga...tum yeh flours ko  manage karo...kisiko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki yhan flour sacks ke saath koi tempering hua hain, got it!

Orkr : It's my regular work sir..aap nishchint raho...

His voice trailed off by a big sneeze. Al looked at that direction.

Man 2 : arre dheere! Then looked at the man who sneezed.

Man 2 : who are you?

Man : Saab..main Tolaram...pehchana nahi!

He showed his all 32 teeth to his boss.

Man 2 : Tolaram!! Yeh kya hulia banaya hain! Maa kasam...aise bhoot bana hain...aaj toh teri biwi vi tujhse darr jayega!

He laughed at his own  joke...other 2 joined him looking at the flour smudged face of tolaram.

Tolaram : kya saab!! Mera hulia toh pani se dhone se thik ho jayega...aur meri biwi mujhe pehchan vi lega...lekin aapka...dhone ke baad aisa hoga ki aap ki biwi aapko pehchan ne se saaf inkaar karga!

Man 1 : (conscious) Kya matlab!

Tolaram gestured him to look behind...

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ETF took position around the godown, Aisha was not with the team, she went to meet an informer. Rathod   explained the whole plan again and ask everyone to be prepare for  the attack with their respective assault teams. Arjun asked Saakshi to  stay with Shree in the monitoring van, and she protested.

Saakshi : Main aaungi!!

Arjun : No way! It's an order!

Saakshi : Sameer!

Rathod : Sorry Saakshi...but I'm with Rawte today..you are staying with Shree.

Saakshi : But...

Arjun : Kya but! Aake kya karogi? Wahan koi action film nahi chalraha hoga...it's real...aur tum... koi help nahi karr paogi! Sirf problem create karogi... aur agar injured ho gaye toh aur musibat ho jaygi...chup chap yehi baitho! Got it!

Shree : Haan..tu mere saath baithk eaction film dekhna...mere bag main chips vi hain...

Rathod : shree! (to Saakshi)  his right..yehi ruko...waise vi backup team ko vi guide karne ko koi chahiye..you can do it...shree toh control panel chorke nahi jaa sakta naa!

Kabir :OK guys..I'm going in...wait for my signal.

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Kabir sneaked into the godown and hid himself in a dark corner, watching the men working inside. H as trying to measure the circumstances inside, but his view was blocking du to the big containers and packing boxes. He moved forward  a bit for a clear view, while he saw two men were coming to him, he hid behind some boxes.

The men stopped right in front of the boxes, and picked up to boxes while one's mobile buzzed.

Man 1 : Arre Tolaram! Yeh kya! Tera phone tere saath hain! Boss ne kahan tha na sab unke table pe rakhna..kaam khatm hone tak..

Tolaram : Kya karun! Mere biwi ko tu janta hain na ! har hr main phone karta hain...na uthau toh ghar jane ke baad chik chik chalu...isiliye saath hi rakha...tu jaa..main baat karke aaya..

Man 1 : Jaldhi aana..boss ne notice kia toh...

Tolaram : Haan..tu jaa...

Tolaram took the call and talked to his wife, as he cut the call, Kabir got his chance and placed a Karate chop on his neck. Tolaram fainted at once. Kabir smiled, this man is knocked out for at least 3 hours. He took off his cloths and changed with his, then he put some flour on his face so that nobody can recognise him. He picked up his box and moved to the men working.

He started working with them, and suddenly he sneezed because some flour entered his nostrils (for others)...& ETF got the signal to start the attack.

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As tolaram indicated behind them, the men turned around and found themselves surrounded by police, they looked at Tolaram surprise, who was grinning, pointing his gun at them.

Tolaram (Kabir) : Maine kahan tha na!..

His voice trailed off as a worker distracted them throwing an apple  on his hand, his gun fell down from his hand and one of the supervisors hit him on his face. A bout started between them and others started firing at the ETF, Rathod ordered all to answer them.

After 2 hours...2 men escaped, and 3 were caught by them, while others were shot dead. The arrested ones were not at good state too..they needed medical assistance too. Rathod asked Chotu to take them to the ambulance and he accompanied Arjun to seal the place.

Chotu and two constables took the captives to the ambulance while their path was blocked by three people. Chotu's eyes popped out seeing them. He saw two of them in many places, dealing in illegal stuff, but of his utmost surprise was the third one, the lady who was pointing her gun straight on Saakshi's head.

Nadia : Leave them...or I'll blast this lady's head!

Chotu : No way!

Nadia : Oh ya! (she put the safety catch on) Do you think I'm joking! (to her men) sabko lelo..

Chotu & other constables pointed their gun to them.

Nadia : Soch lo inspector! Iski jaan aur tum teeno ki...ek saath le lungi..aur tum kuch nahi karr paoge...

Chotu : Isski nahbat nahi aayegi...I'll shoot you first!

Nadia : Accha! Reflex naam ka ek cheez hain.. pata hain! Tum mujhpe goli chalaoge...mere finger aapne aap trigger dabadega..aur yeh ladki (pressed her gun on Saakshi's temple) upar..mere saath..what say? (she winked)

Chotu  signaled the constables to lower their gun. They arrested goons freed themselves instantly and gave chotu a winning smile.

Man 1 : Dekha! Tum log humko 10 minute se vi zyada nahi rakh paye...

Nadia : Shut it!..chalo niklo yahan se...( to her men) cover them...you know where to meet me..go..

One of Nadia's associates asked her if she was not accompanying them.

Nadia : I'm covering you guys... come.

Them men forwarded to the exit lane, Nadia followed them by taking small backward steps, dragging Saakshi along with her. All of a sudden, she winked at Chotu, pushed Saakshi aside and  shot two escaping men behind her, one who came with her ,and other she freed from chotu. Chotu got the signal and started firing in the air, while Nadia vanished  in the darkness of the night.

Chotu moved to saakshi and helped her to straighten up.

Chotu : saakshi, you ok!

Saakshi : (dusting herself) Yup!

Chotu : shree?

Saakshi : Uss aadmi ne sirr pe maara hain...pata nahi..

Chotu : Go to him...main yahan dekta hoon...aur Rathod sir ko bata dena ke..

Saakshi :   Mission successful!

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read on ..& you know what to do.

Edited by Shamsad1607 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres...
Arjun ki kuttu ko sath understanding😆😆
Yeah right. we have seen it in RFA too
Sakshi's story about GK & her past was damn hilarious 🤣🤣
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Coming to the case.
I don't know why but memory lapse these days. May be tiredness or tension...I really don't know. I have totally forgotten what this case was all about until I read Ruhi's name.
Kabir-Ayesha fight was so enjoyable. 
They both reminds me of someone. they always used to fight like that😊
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The scene at  godown was very well written. 
Most importantly the teamwork was present there unlike serial where all the scenes are reduced to The ARjun Rawte😳.
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The plan was not to arrest them but to kill them. but why???
they could have get some info from them.😕
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Ayesha. She is the super lady.
The only female lead who could actually set fire on screen. I am glad you showed her in nadia's avatar
Edited by laila1994 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part
continue soon pls
the story is still a grt puzzle;a mystery
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update api.
Loved it very much.
Very beautifully written.
Haste haste pet betha hoe gese.
Sakshi and her nautanki.
Kottheke muhurter moddhe dog and sage er golpo banye boslo.
And the action was mind blowing.
Aha at last Nadia showed her jalwa.
Very well written..
Con soonz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good job Atu
Will miss you re, jaldi wapas aana
The update was very good
kya kahani banayi hai Sakshi ne. GK as her lover wah
tho fir GK and Arjun ke war shuru hone wale hai.hihi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update atisha 
hilarious update 
haste haste pet main dard 😆
Saaksh ki nautanki 
& nadiya ka jalwa was mind bowing 😉
Well written 👏
Thanks for teh PM 
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Loved Sakshi-GK love story... kya kahani banai hai Supper Awwssmm...
Loved Kabir teasing Aisha...
Action was Amazing...
Nadia did her part awesomely...
waiting for next part
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part
Superb👏
gk and sakshi kahani is loved it😆😆
Loved Kabir teasing Aisha
arjun and sameer sudden entry is wow😃
Nadia did her part  good
waiting for next part
Cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

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this will remind me to comment on this story😳


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