Hey everyone. I'm new to not only this forum but India Forms. And I actually like it. I like how people discuss every episode here and predict what will happen in next episode. So I thought I would give my input too.
I haven't given much thought to it cause I was just curious as to what will happen next. Also I didn't wanna brainstorm about what title should I give it so I just wrote whatever came into my mind. Happy reading!
(continued after pranati's hotel incident on Ganesh puja)
Maan: Bhai aapko bhi lagta hai pranati aisa kaam kr sakti hai?
Maan kept asking the same question again and again but Reyansh was still silent. Since the time he brought back Pranati from the hotel where he saw one of his scariest nightmare in real life, he hasn't uttered a single word. Mallika's and Dadi's words were still ringing in his mind like an annoying alarm tune but unfortunately it didn't have a off button.
Maan: bolo na bhai....aap jabse aaye chup khade ho.
Rey: Maan abhi mujhe kisi se baat nhi karni tu ja yahan se.
Maan: Bhai agar aapne kuchh nhi kiya toh yeh log Prabhi ko insult krne bahar nikal denge.
Rey:Maan maine tujhse kaha na, please mujhe akela chhod de. Aur haan agar jugnu pooche toh bolna uski nai maa ki thodi tabyat kharab hai. Usse inn sab se dur rakhna hai.
Maan: thhik hai.
Maan went out giving up all the hope he had for Pranati to be defended by anyone in this house. Where Reyansh was getting ready to punch the hell out of his punching bag. After a few sets of boxing he grabbed the nearest vodka bottle and drank more than half of it in one gulp. He was covered with excessive sweat when he sat down on his bed and watching his feet.
Rey: kya batau tujhe Maan? Jab mujhe hi nhi samajh aa raha ki Pranati aisa kr sakti hai ya nhi. Jis Pranati ko main janta tha woh aisa kabhi nhi krti per iss Pranati ko main nhi janta. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki yeh wahi hai, meri Prani, jo khud se pehle hamesha doosron ka sochti thi. Aur kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki isse bada duniya mein koi selfish insaan ho hi nhi sakta.
He talked to himself while taking few sips of alcohol when Riya entered his room not even bothering to knock.
Riya: Rey Bhaiya, Prabhi ko hosh aa gaya.
He left his half finish bottle on the bed and ran towards her room. Luckily nobody knew about this except Riya and him. He asked her to give him and her a few minutes and also told her not to tell anyone about it before he is done talking with her. He slowly entered the room and closed the door behind him. Pranati jumped from the bed hearing that and ran towards the corner of the room. She was scared to her toe and one can easily analyse it as she was shivering way too much than a normal person should do. But Reyansh being Reyansh didn't pay a heed to it. He moved towards her and was just a feet away from her when he asked
Rey:Main tumse ek baar poochoonga Pranati. Tum uss Archit ke saath hotel mein kya kr rhi thi?
Pranati was silent and was trying to magically pass through the wall to get away from him. This gave Oxygen to the fire that was already raging through him. He moved even closer and held her arms tightly.
Rey:Bta kya kr rhi thi uske saath. Yahan toh badi badi batein krti hai ki vo sirf tera dost. Jugnu ke alava tera koi nai hai. Arre tu yaar ke pyaar mein itna kho gai ki tujhe apni beti ka bhi khayal nhi aya?
Pranati: CHHODO MUJHE CHHODO
She shouted on top of her voice and pushed Reyansh so hard that he fell on the ground 4ft away from her. She started running towards door and went straight to the big hall of Khurana's mansion.
Dadi: Oye ruk oye. Kahan bhagi chali ja rahi hai? Ab bhagna ka koi fayeda nhi. Tere kaand ab saari duniya ko pta chal chuke hai.
Mallika: Dadi isne toh aap logon kahin muh dikhane layak nhi chhoda.
Dadi: galti kr di main aisi bachalan ladki ko apne ghar mein laake.
Everyone kept passing mean comments on her, putting a question mark on her character while Rey just kept his quiet. Pranati closed her ears with her palms and tears kept flowing out of her eyes.
Pranati: BAS BAS.
She yelled and everyone turned silent.
Pranati:yeh sab inhone kiya hai.
She pointed towards Vardhan Khurana leaving everyone including Reyansh shocked.
So here it is. I'm not sure how many times I will update. I might give you a two in one day or none for weeks. But I can assure you that I will try my best.Edited by sanakhan240201 - 2 years ago
Hey everyone. I have no idea how to update chapters here cause I'm a Wattpad writer. I hope I did the write thing. If I didn't, I would be really glad if you guys help me. Happy reading!
Pranati:yeh sab inhone kiya hai..
She pointed towards Vardhan leaving everyone including Rey shocked.
Vardhan: ae lo....apne kaand chhupane ke liye tu mere uper ilsam daal rhi hai. Kal ko toh tu yeh bhi keh degi ki yeh sab dadi ne kiya hai.
Pranati: haan kahungi. Kyunki iss ghar ke logon ki lagaam toh daadi ke haath mein hi hai. Aur dadi koi mauka thodi na chhodti hai mujhe zaleel krne ka. Jaise unhe information pahunchi ki mujhe investors ki zaroorat hai unhone yeh kaam tumhe diya hoga. Jaise unhone Reyansh ko diya tha Riya ko phasane ka kaam. Aur aap sab (she pointed towards the random ladies in Khurana house) aap sab ek aurat hoke mere baare mein aisi baatein kr rhi h. Tab Kahan the aap sab jab main pregnant thi? Tab Kahan the jab main jugnu ki custody ke liye ladd rhi thi? Main btati hoon aap sab Kahan the. Aap sab log tab bhi mere baare mein baatein bna rahe the. Tab bhi aap log mujhe besharam aur bin bihai maa bula rahe the. Tab bhi aap sab mujhe society ke sanskar samjha rahe the. Per mujhe pta hai, main tab bhi sahi thi aur aaj bhi sahi hoon. Uss waqt maine iss ghar ke chirag ko chhod diya tha per ab nhi. Main....
Before she could continue, she felt a hand on her wrist. She saw Reyansh's burning eyes. He angrily pulled her up the stairs to his room and threw her inside.
Reyansh: bohot bol li tum. Ab yahan koi nhi hai toh apna yeh natak bnd kro aur mujhe sach btao.
Pranati: Agar tumhe sach sunna hota toh tum mujhe aise leke nhi aate. Tum chahte ho ki main vo kahoon jo tum sunna chahte ho.
Reyansh: toh tum kya chahti ho main maan loon ki Vardhan bhaiya ne kiya hai yeh sab? He is married for godsake.
Pranati: aur tum Khurrana's ke liye yeh kafi hai loyal hone ke liye? Tumhara toh bacha bhi tha Reyansh, tab bhi tum mujhe chhodke gaye the na? Vardhan ne hi yeh sab kiya hai aur main yeh proove krke rahungi.
Reyansh's anger had no limits now. But some part of him wanted Pranati to be true.
Reyansh: thhik hai. Agar teri baat mein 1% bhi sachai hui toh main khud vardhan bhaiya ko arrest krwaunga per agar nhi hui. Toh yaad rakhio, mujhse bura iss duniya mein koi nhi hoga. Chal teri sachai ka proof dhundne chale.
He turned around to get out of the room when Pranati said
Pranati: Ruko Reyansh. Mujhe tumhare ehsaan ki koi zaroorat nhi hai. Achha hoga agar tum ab apne ghar walon ki chinta karo. Kyunki main kisiko nhi chhodne wali, tumhe bhi nhi.
She wiped her face with the back of her hand and walked out like a true warrior. She walked straight to the main gate of the house. Once she was out she gave the last look to the name plate where it was engraved "Khurana's".
Next scene is shown that Archit was taking care of Navya and was trying to call the landline of Khurana house as her phone was with him. He heard a knock on the door so he ran to see who it was. He opened the door to find Pranati standing in the same yellow saree that she wore in Ganesh puja.
Archit: Pranati yar tumhe kab se contact krne ki koshish kr rha hoon. Tum thhik toh ho na.
He tried to go for a hug but she stopped him.
Pranati: Archit wahan kya hua tha.
Archit: yar tu pehle aake baithh.
He again tried to hold her arm but she didn't let him. She quietly went inside and sat on the sofa. He sat adjacent to her.
Pranati: btao kya hua tha wahan
Archit: maine phone per tumhari awaz sunni, tum bohot ghabrai hui lag rhi thi. Jab main hotel pahoncha toh tum behosh bed per laeti hui thi. Main tumhe uthhane ki koshish kr rha tha aur tabhi police aa gai. Woh keh rahe unhone ek sex racket pakda hai aur unhe laga hum bhi....
Pranati: toh unhone humme chhoda kyun?
Archit: Pta nhi. Reyansh officer ko kahin leke gaya, vapis aya aur tumhe leke chala gaya.
Pranati: toh ussne police walon ko bribe kiya. Jab tum aaye the tab room mein koi aur tha?
Archit: nhi sirf tum thi
Pranati: thhik se yaad karke btao Archit, kya tumne achhi tarah se room ko dekha tha.
Archit: I'm sorry pranati but nhi....main tumhe dekhke bohot darr gaya tha toh maine thhik se check nhi kiya.
Pranati: mujhe unn investors ka number chahiye jinke saath meri aaj presentation thi.
Archit nodded his head and quickly took out his phone. He dialled in the number with contact name Mohit and sons co.
Pranati: tum yeh Mohit and sons ko kyun call kr rahe ho? Meri meeting toh Arora cooperatives ke saath thi na?
Archit: nhi, maine toh aaj inhi ke saath fix ki thi. Aur Arora's ke baare mein toh maine aaj tak nhi suna....
Okay so if you guys want to give your input on how should story go or want a certain scene in it. I'll be really happy to write it. Also thanks for such a warm welcome 😊Edited by sanakhan240201 - 2 years ago
Awesome writing...looking forward to read more.......Welcome!!
Thankyou so much
This is great ❤ Do as you wish & can! Hoping to see you more in the forum & the other discussions (:
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