Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum|Prayansh ss - Page 6

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by aquaHP


Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show. 

It's completely fine, I'm just glad people are reading it!

And you just have me the best compliment ever!!!!!!

Thankyou 😊😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by vswarup



Completely agree with you.......each update makes you curious about the next part....

Thankyou so much😊😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Happy Reading!


Episode 12


Jugnu came from school with her dad and went straight to her mother.


Jugs: aaj na nai maa aap mujhse bohot khush hongi.


Pranati: please mt kehna ki tumne principal per firse prank kiya. Jugnu tum samajhti kyun nhi ho ki woh tumhe school se nikal denge.


Jugs: Arre nai maa mujhe bolne toh do. Yeh dekho. 


She took out a paper from her bag and gave it to Pranati. She looked at it and the curve of her lips formed a perfect semi circle.


Pranati: full marks Jugnu, kya baat hai meri bachi tu toh badi intelligent nikli. Very good beta.


She hugged her happily


Rey: kya baat hai ninja, I'm so proud of you. 


Jugs: pta hai teacher bhi hairan ho gai thi ki mere itne marks kaise aa gaye. 


Jugnu sat with both of them and told them stories of how her friends and teachers reacted.


1 day later 


Doctor was checking Pranati's pulse. 


Doc: you seem fine now. Just remember not to take too much stress. 


Pranati: thankyou doctor.


Doctor went away and Pranati made a phone call. 


Reyansh came home in the evening and went towards the kitchen and asked the cook...


Rey: Pranati, mera aur Jugnu ka khana ready hai? 


Cook: Ji saab. 


He handed him the tray and Reyansh took it to Pranati's room.


Rey: Shaam ko dawai lena bhool toh nhi gai thi? 


Pranati: kya yaar tum boring logon ki tarah pura din dawai dawai kehte rehte ho. 


Rey: tu mujhe boring keh rhi hai? Khud ko dekha hai kabhi?


He saw Jugnu coming out of washroom.


Rey: chal ninja khana khate hai.


"Surprise!" He heard a loud voice to see his two brothers and Riya with pizza boxes.


Maan: Prabhi aap yeh khichdi chhodo hum pizza khate hain


Rey: kya pizza khate hain? Usse allowed nhi hai.


Pranati: Reyansh aaj doctor ne mera dhang se check up kiya aur bola ki main bilkul thhik hoon. Main pizza bhi kha sakti aur bed bhi chhod sakti hoon.


Rey: tu jhoot toh nhi bol rhi na?


Pranati: tumhe lagta hai ki main kabhi pizza khane ke liye jhoot bolungi? Main sach mein thhik hoon. Aur waise bhi, meri beti ke full marks aaye toh party toh bnti hai na


Jugs: bilkul sahi kaha nai maa aapne. Aap logon ko nhi khana toh koi baat nhi main hi saara kha loongi.


She jumped and took all the pizza boxes and ran with it while Maan Armaan and Reyansh ran behind her. Maan put on some music and they all had a mini party in Pranati's room. Few hours later it was finally over and Pranati and Reyansh were cleaning all the mess.


Pranati: Reyansh tum jaake so sakte ho baaki ka kaam main kr loongi.


Rey: tu jaake rest kr, main yeh sab kr loonga. Tu abhi abhi toh thhik hui hai aur tune itna dance kr liya. 


Pranati: main bilkul theek hoon Reyansh.


Rey: waise Jugs...(Jugnu looked at him)...jab teri maa bilkul thheek ho hi gayi hai toh mere paas tum dono ke liye surprise hai. Main tumhe kal kahin bahar le jaa raha hoon.


Jugs: kahan Bandar papa


Rey: abhi toh bola surprise hai. Maine soch Saturday hai toh thodi outing toh bnti hai na. Tum dono subhah taiyar rehna okay?


They both shook their heads excitedly. They eventually cleaned up all the mess together and slept peacefully. 

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Next morning....


Pranati entered Reyansh's room 


Pranati: Reyansh main aur Jugnu ready hai, tum hi late......aaaahhhh. 


She immediately turned around and closed her eyes as Reyansh was naked with a jeans on. He laughed seeing her reaction.

(Let's be real guys, ek aisa scene toh bnta hai na?😂)


Rey: Abe tu toh aise behave kr rhi jaise tujhe pta hi nhi insaan aise dikhte hai. Arre itni mehnat se body Bnai hai maine. Thoda show off toh Krna bnta hai.


Jugnu: bandar papa hum kab chaleinge? 


They heard Jugnu coming and this time Rey shouted and ran inside the bathroom. It was now Pranati's turn to laugh. Jugnu entered the room to see Pranati laughing alone in the room.


Jugnu: Nai maa lagta hai aap kuchh zada hi thhik ho gai ho, akele mein hasse ja rhe ho. Waise yeh Bandar Papa kahan hai? 


Pranati: woh abhi bathroom mein taiyar ho rhe hai. Aur tum abhi tak chapal mein kya kr rhi ho? Jao shoes pehnke aao. 


Pranati instructed and Jugnu walked out lazily and Pranati started laughing again. Reyansh peaked from the door to see if Jugnu is still there or not. Seeing the coast clear he slowly came out and wore the T-shirt that was kept on his bed.


Pranati: kya hua, insaan ki body hai, badi mehnat se Bnai hai, show off kro na....hahaha


Rey: tujhe badi hassi aa rhi hai. Abhi btata hoon. 


He started tickling Pranati and she ran around the room while he kept chasing her. He caught her and tickled her more


Pranati: achha achha sorry.


It was then when Reyansh finally noticed what Pranati was wearing.


Rey: yeh tune kya pehna hai? 


Pranati: suit pehna hai. Kyun achha nhi lag raha


She asked nervously making a sad face. Reyansh found it really cute. 


Rey(smiling): nhi bohot achha lag raha hai per hum bahar ghumne jaa rahe hai, mata rani ke satsang per nhi. Aaj ke liye kuchh aur pehn le.


Pranati: per mere pas sirf suit hain


Riya: pranati didi mere pass kuchh hai aapke liye, chalo main deti hoon.


They both looked at Riya and Maan who were standing at the door


Rey: ho gai teri problem solve, chal ja jaldi se change krke aa, hum late ho rahe hain.


She nodded and went out with Riya. He saw her going away when Maan cleared his throat purposely to grab his attention. Reyansh Saw him and rolled his eyes as he knew what was coming his way.


Maan: kya baat hai bhai aap prabhi ko date pe leke jaa rahe ho?


Rey(with a sarcastic smile): usse aur Jugnu ko ghumane le jaa raha hoon, date pe nhi.


Maan(teasing): aise achanak se kyun?


Rey: tu na apna dimag zada mt chala. (He turned towards mirror to set his hair) Jugnu kabhi aise bahar ghumne nhi gai hai toh maine socha usse le jaun. Waise bhi kuchh hi din bache hain uske saath. 


Maan: kuchh hi din? Kyun?


Rey: main Jugnu custody Pranati ko de raha hoon.


Maan: kya? Per bhai kyun?


Rey: pranati Jugnu se bohot pyaar krti hai. Jitni zarurat jugnu ko Pranati ki hai, utni hi zaroorat pranati ko jugnu ki hai. Aur main toh hamesha se hi rishte mein teesra tha na. Toh bas.


Maan: per bhai aap dadi ke khilaf....


Rey: dadi ke khilaf toh main already ja chuka hoon na. Ab tum ek khoon kro ya do, saza toh utni hi milti hai na. Tu yeh sab chhod, tera aur Navya ka kya scene hai?


Maan: bhai main soch raha hoon Navya ko btane se pehle, Armaan se baat kr loon.


Reyansh turned towards him in confusion and then grinned. He moved forward and stood in front of him.


Rey: Maan usse pehle baat krna sahi toh hoga per tujhe pta hai na Armaan kitna bada kamina hai. Bohot bada siyapa ho jana hai.


Maan: ab pyaar kiya hai bhai toh thoda toh ladna padega na and Navya is worth it.


He smiled and left Reyansh with yet another overthinking session. He then remembered Anisha saying ' thoda apne liye ladd lo' 

Edited by sanakhan240201 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

reyansh acting mature.....is something tough to imagine as of now.....but in case of pranati and jugunu he always does the right thing......hopefully.....he decides to fight for her.....after all she is worth it....

Posted: 3 years ago

Update next part soon... Can't wait

Posted: 3 years ago

Whoo.. Rey doing things for pranati.. taking her on a date opps i mean drive😂

Cant wait for such episodes in the show😍 

Keep writting.. its so lovely❤

Posted: 3 years ago

Had a full on smile on my face for the entire episode!


Beautiful ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Happy Reading!


Episode 13


Reyansh and Jugnu were standing impatiently in the hall. 


Jugnu: Nai maa aap kitna time lagaoge? Hum kitni der se wait kr rahe hai.


Riya: Arre Jugnu teri nai maa taiyar per bahar nhi aa rhi. 


Riya is seen pulling Pranati down but she kept hiding herself behind her.


Pranati: yar Riya, yeh sab college mein thhik lagta tha. Maine toh aise kapde college mein bhi nhi pehne.


Riya: Arre toh aaj pehn lo na didi, nai cheezen try krne ke liye koi age nhi hoti. 


Pranati: Riya please main firse suit pehn leti hoon na


Riya: achha ek baar sabse poochh lete hai fir aapko change Krna hai toh kr lena. 


Pranati: nhi nhi nhi please.


But Riya pulled her forward for everyone to see. Pranati was in ripped slim fit jeans and an off shoulder top. She kept fidgeting with her fingers and looked nervous as hell when Jugnu spoke


Jugs: kya baat hai nai aap toh mujhse bhi achhe lag rahe ho. 


Armaan: sahi mein, aaj aap pehli baar bahu type material nhi lag rahe. 


Maan: Prabhi aap sach mein bohot achhi lag rhi hain. 


Riya: dekha maine kaha tha na, aap aise hi chinta kr rahe the.


Pranati's eyes diverted to Reyansh who was eyeing her up and down in awe. She slightly lifted her eyebrows to ask him how she was looking. He lifted his hand and joined his thumb and forefinger and made a OK sign in response. She blushed swing that so averted her eyes from him.


Jugs: papa ab hum chalein?


Rey: haan beta. Chalein pranati?


Pranati(still blushing): haan


Pranati took Jugnu's hand and walked while Reyansh was still staring at her standing on the same spot.


Maan (teasingly): aaj toh pranati aur bhi hot lag rhi hain


Rey:abe bhabhi hai teri


Maan: bhabhi nhi bhai Prabhi hain. Waise ab lagta hai bhabhi bnne ka bhi chance hain


Rey:tujhse toh baat hi Krna bekar hai. Main jaa raha hoon.


Reyansh walked out too leaving a smiling Maan


Maan(to himself): chance toh hai.

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Pranati: Amusement park!


The little family stood in front of the biggest amusement park in delhi. 


Jugnu: yeh amusement park kya hota hai?


Rey: andar Chalke dekh. 


They went inside and reyansh bought tickets for all three of them. Jugnu seemed extremely happy seeing all those rides. Of course for an orphan kid, it's a huge deal. Her finding her mom and dad didn't really matter to her as she always thought that she doesn't need anyone to take care of her. But there were these moments that she thought having parents are such good thing. She was experiencing those things that she watched other kids enjoying with their parents.


They all went to bunch of rides together. Jugnu thoroughly enjoyed herself this all fit perfectly in her definition of 'fun'. Reyansh and Pranati was also happy seeing jugnu enjoying all this so much. They were almost done with all the rides, only Ferris wheel was left.


Jugs(pointing towards Ferris wheel): chalo hum ispe bhi chalte hai. 


Rey: hum ispe nhi jaa sakte ninja. 


Jugs: kyun?


Rey:kyunki teri nai maa ko heights se darr lagta hai.


Pranati turned towards him totally surprised.


Pranati (whispering): tumhe yaad tha?


Rey (whispering too): jab college ke clock tower per mera murder hote hote bacha ho toh yaad toh rahega na


Pranati (still whispering): konsa murder? Maine sirf tumhare haath pakda tha


Rey (still whispering): pakda tha? Noch diya tha. Khoon nikal gaya tha mere hathon se.


Jugs:aap dono kya baatein kar rhe ho?


Rey: kuchh nhi beta.


Jugs: chalo hum chalte hai.


Pranati: ruko Jugnu, tumhein iss ride per jana hai na, toh chalo chalte hai.


Jugs: per aapko toh darr lagta hai na


Pranati: meri bachi ke liye kuchh bhi. Aur darr hi toh hai, bhag jayega.


Rey: ek baar dhyan se soch le. 


Pranati: tum chinta mt kro, iss baar khoon nhi krungi. Chal Jugs.


Reyansh shook his head amusingly and went ahead on the ride with them. Pranati sat between Reyansh and Jugnu as both of them wanted outer seat. As expected she was really scared. She closed her tightly and her hand grabbed her jeans on the knee area. Jugnu was thrilled to be at that height and was amazed by the view of the beautiful lights from the top.


Reyansh looked towards Pranati and smiled seeing her in that state. To him, she looked really cute. He slowly slipped his hand in hers on which Pranati opened her eyes


Rey: Noch le jitna nochna hai.


She smiled and interwined her fingers with his. She was really amused by his behaviour these days. They both kept looking in each other's eyes till the ride was over. To her and his surprise, she actually didn't scratch his hand. They awkwardly left each other hand after they broke the eye contact.


They left the park and had dinner in a restaurant


Jugnu:ab kya bandar papa?


Rey: ab beta Ice cream khate hai, bta konsi khayegi? 


Jugnu: chocolate toh main khati rehti hoon maan chachu ke saath. Aaj main aapka favourite flavour try krti hoon. Aapko konsa pasand hai?


Pranati: blueberry 


Rey(whispering): tujhe yaad tha?


Pranati( whispering too) : lucky ke dhabe per chole aur parathhe khane ke baad ek ice cream ke flavour se mood kharab ho jaye, toh yaad toh rahega na.


Reyansh rolled his eyes. While this was happening, Jugnu had already asked the ice cream vendor for a blue berry icecream. She opened and tried it and made a disgusting face. Reyansh saw her face and rolled his eyes again


Rey: tu isse chhod ninja (he took the ice cream from her). Tu apni maa ki tarah mango ice cream hi kha.


Reyansh asked the vendor to give two mango ice-creams while Pranati smiled at him for remembering yet another thing about her. They all ate their ice creams and walked to the car. Jugnu was so tired that she slept in the car itself. 


They reached the Khurrana house and Reyansh carried sleeping Jugnu in his arms to Pranati's room. He carefully placed her on bed and covered her with sheets. Pranati kept admiring him from afar. She saw a really good dad in Reyansh.


I'm sorry guys....I am just going through a bad phase now. But I hope it didn't affect my writing. 

Edited by sanakhan240201 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Take care man, this can wait! Hope you have better days soon ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Take care..hopefully things will improve soon....and if required take a break from this.....though you need not worry...it was a beautiful update ❤️

Prayanshu together as a family is a site to behold.....



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