'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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😳THE FIRST RAIN

Suddenly it started raining...she was sitting in her car...strange kind of sadness n lonliness was surrounding her...she was in deep pain...no, nothing wrong n her love life...name,fame,money,friends,loveable family and a supportive bf...she had all...but...yes,there's a big but..!!! ...inspite of all this she was lonely...there was a hollowness inside her...like something precious was missing...she loved rain..and today it was the first rain of the monsoon...n rain droplets kissing the ground..looked divine as always...but...she left a deep sigh...it wsn't reaching her heart...the ethereal smell..the droplets..the entire beauty gave her immence pain instead of pleasure...it reminded her of something...perhaps someone...dear to her...and suddenly her eyes caught the sight of a tall handsome figure standing afar..nd her heart overcame with agony..she looked away nd drove away...leaving the blue-eyed figure standing...getting drenched in the first rain...

Guys this is going to b a joint ss written by me and abhiora aka tora and my first ss as well...this is my very first attempt on writng sumthng abut our most sweetest couple abhiya..so guys plzz tell us wether we should continue this ss or nt..and plzz press the like button if u lyk...awaitng ur responce...😊
and special thanks to ayesha,tanzie..they have been a great inspiration to me😳

p.s. those who want pms plzz send a buddy request to me...😊
For chapter Index please scroll down. 😊
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res!!
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finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!!
Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago
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Chapter INDEX-

An Abhiya Joint SS- The First Rain
(written by Tora & Indu)

Link to Book 2-


BOOK 1-
Prologue- Pg 1

Character Sketch-

Chapter 1- Remembering The Past

Chapter 2- Echoes Of Joy And Tears

Chapter 3- Hidden Emotions

Chapter 4- So Near Yet So Far

Chapter 5- Good Old Memories

Chapter 6- Rekindling Relations

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-1)

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-2)

Chapter 8- Closer Together

Chapter 9- Moving Towards Light (part-1)

Chapter 9-Moving Towards Light(part-2)

Chapter 10-Unknown feelings-Unspoken words

Chapter 11-Phone calls and Sweet talks

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-1)

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-2)

Chapter-13-The Aftermath

Chapter-14- Facades and Masquerades

My Other Works -

Abhiya FF's -

My First FF : The First Rain
[written jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing

My Second FF : When Both Worlds Collide
[written jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing


My Fourth FF : Tell Me your Dreams
[Jointly written with Mansa Aka Mandy] Currently on hold


Fifth FF : Where Your Road Leads
[Writer tora-Concept by Me] Currently on hold


~~My Solo Works~~

Abhiya One Shots

First OS-The journey of a lifetime

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3246163/abhiya-os-the-journey-of-a-lifetime-edited-18oct

Second OS-I am with you forever

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3258523/an-abhiya-os-i-am-with-you-forever-edited

Third OS- Show me the Light

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78262806�

Fourth OS - And i feel scared

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3534613/abhaiya-and-i-feel-scared

Fifth OS -"Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating ?"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3595079/abhiya-was-it-raindrops-or-i-just-heard-my-heart-beating

Sequel to the Fifth OS- 'I Accept i do Love You!'

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pyaar-kii-ye-ek-kahaani/3626503/abhiyai-accept-i-do-love-u-last-chap-updtd-30july




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yes of course u shud continue nd plz add me to ur pm list...
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wow nice start pls add me pm list and continue soon!!😃
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its awesome continue it soon
loved it
please pm me when you update.
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Gr8 start Indu 👏 Loved it 😊 Good to know u n Tora r coming up with an SS. Title sounds good too. Waiting for character sketch n 1st chap n plz no sad track for Abhiya plz 😭

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Originally posted by: abhiora

res!!
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finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!!

it dsnt matter whz idea is it dear..coz u hav equal contribution in it...nd.i wud hav never been able to do this alone!!!😳
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Wow indu and tora, its awsome! But is it a sad story... Pls dont make saddy! And yes do pm me.
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Character sketch please nice start
Edited by love-piya-abhay - 13 years ago

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