'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 4

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Gr8 start Indu 👏 Loved it 😊 Good to know u n Tora r coming up with an SS. Title sounds good too. Waiting for character sketch n 1st chap n plz no sad track for Abhiya plz 😭

thanks mandy.. 😊 will try to update soon alng wth the CS...
Dear no luv stry cn b wthout pain..pain nly strenthns d bond mre...n its an abhiya ss aftal..so chill..dnt worry..just wait!! 😊

Originally posted by: flora212

Wow indu and tora, its awsome! But is it a sad story... Pls dont make saddy! And yes do pm me.

thanks dear! Hm..for tht u hv to wait..😉
will surely pm u...

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

<font size="5">Character sketch please nice start </font>

will soon update alng wth d cs...nd thanks..😊

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Awesome start I must say as a 1st time writer u did gud job.V know tora is awesome writer & u'll also prove gud as a writer.Plz cont..😳</font>

thanks shrish..😊 will continue soon...

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
my name is Alicia pm

thanx alicia..wil pm u:-)

Originally posted by: ramita94

hey great start wanna read more plz pm when u next update😊

thank u ramita!!will be updating soon:-)

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Good job girls pm me when you update. 😉

thanx shreya:-)will pm u:-)

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

nice start
cntinue soon

thanx !!wil cntnu asap:-)

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome prologue. Pls continue soon and add me in ur pm list.

glad u liked it romi!!will surely pm u

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Nice start Indu and Tora do pm me. And subho noboborso

thanx snigs!!!will pm u:-)shubho noboborsho