Abhaiya-And i feel scared...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome indu...the pain of abhay n his pov written beautifully..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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madam u made me senty...abhay was all emotional nd sad nd scared aswell...he craved for piya...but same time he was afraid to loose her...his sad emotions of loosing his beloved ones in past was heart melting...thnks for writing this awwsm os...its os for me...now pls finish the os forbidden...like abhay i m craving for that os...my most fvrt one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Awesome yar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I just loved it.❤️Hugs 🤗 🤗 for writing this. 😊 😳 😳
The pain of Abhay,How He is afraid to lose pia,Want to be with her but still scares to go too much near her so that his fate,his destinty won't snatch away his Only happines,His Only reason to live away from her;Just like it has taken away all those whom He loved in his past,in his human life.😭
It really made my night.Thankyou so much for writing this Beautiful piece. 😊 And also made me all emotional at the same time for My Abhay and Pia.😭 😭Missing My Abhiya badly now. 😭 😆
Can you pls add me in your buddy list?I'm sending buddy request to you,Pls accept it and Pls pm me from next time whenever your write anything on Abhiya and If possible pm me the links of your previous works also.I will read and comment whenever I get time. 😳 Thankyou. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's beautiful beyond words Indu.
Abhay's pain was so well described!
Hats off. Take a bow!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indu this was so beautiful and amazing 👏 👏 just WOW!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indu that was fantastic n I am still finding it hard to believe u wrote it out in cell 😲 I find it hard to even text a message from it 😆 Ur an ace at handling emotions esp Abhay's. In each n every work of urs, u depict his inner turmoil so beautifully tat I am left with no words. Its a different story tat u also make me write essays 😆 Brilliant 👏 n I am more than happy to reading more of such nothings in future 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great post indu
well written abhay pain

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awsum
abhay's feelings were written so beautifully and superbly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Superb Superb piece of writing Indu! .
Inner feelings of Abhay written just perfectly! Seemed u were feeling Abhay's feelings n just jotting ur own thoughts.
Just perfect!

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