Abhiya'I accept i do LoVE U!last chap updtd-30july

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Whew! And you were nervous about this..it is understandable! Because the emotions that you have written here are too too complex and yet you have explained them so beautifully.
I always love how you describe the pull b/w Abhiya..you always do it perfectly..a flawless execution!
I loved the part where he breaks the glass and then Piya's concern.
They were just so...abhiya! I can't think of adjective for this beautiful piece of writing...so update the next part soon!

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Raatry

@forever.alone

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow..beautiful..really amazingly written indu..😳
abhay's anger,feeling,possessiveness was written so wonderfully..😛
u r truly an amazing writer🤗

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

res
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Indu that was incredible👏👏
The way you described abhay's pain and his feelings was amazing😳
that jeh grrr... how dare he😡
but what abhay said to pia was not good 😭 kyon usse itna rudely behave karta hai...😭
overall the update was fantastic

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

res di pls update soon!!😃

lovely part!!..abhay will never get aparted from his stay away mission...like it's his tag!!'stay away from me...'😆

waiting for next

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res.!!😊

Really Excited for the sequel.😃 Hope you liked My dance.😆

Pls Update Soon Indu di.!!😊😳😳

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ress !i cant wait to read it plzz update soon! dear ,you are just awesome👏 the way you write the pull towards abhiya👏 👏 👏 !their inner turmoil 👏👏👏 !!you are one of the top writter of our forum in 👏👏present👏👏 !!time!no one can beet you !if somebody ask who is my favourite writter😉 then it will be only you!!ekta mam writter should take lessons from you😉!!i just loved your writting skills👏👏 👏 !i am glued till the end of the chappy 😳!btw when i got to know you are writting the sequel!i get really excited 😳!i used to come every other hour to check that you updated or not😳 !i have read it earlier when the time you updated but i did not comment!sorry😳!abhay jealous loved it😳 and the dialogs of abhay😳 !!piya feeling uncomfortable 😳and jay kissed her😳 !! Plzz update soon dear ! 😳 😉 👏 hug from me to giving us such a wonderful update 🤗 btw

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Post updated!!! 😳

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Once again u ve left me spellbound wid ur words!!! It was sooo sooo beautiful. I always say d way u describe Abhay's state of mind, it seems i m listening this all from Abhay himself. Abhay's dillemma was described beautifully n jealousy streak was brought out beautifully. Dekhte hain ye jalan kahan le jaati hai Abhay ko😉 Piya as usual trying her best bt our sadu n adamant Abhay raichand is never gonna confess his feelings. Looking forward to d next chappie😃. continue asap.

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