'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
loved the update!
u described their inner turmoil well!

continue soon

thanks for appreciating!! 😊 wil update soon..nd may i knw ur name pls?

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Awesome update:-) Superb:-)

thanks rashi... 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz
superb...o pm me wnevr u updt...😳

thanks dear!! Will surely pm u... 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu
Amazing update
thnxx 4 pm

thanks neetu...most welcome! 😊

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megha sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

brilliant start.it was beautifully wrtn.both abhay & pia's conditions have been depicted well.do pm me nxt tym ven u update

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesum updt..u explained their pain very well🤗

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome...!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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Pari Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update

loved it

so Abhiya are not together n have broke up

It seems like Abhay was not sure of this relation

Beautifully written

loved the way u took rain as the basis to express Abhiya's feelings

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update!!!

The feelings were described beautifully...

So sad Abhiya separated...

Can't wait to find out why...

Cont soon n thx for pm😊

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Rimsha Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was awesome starter n thnx 4 pm n plz continue soon

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