'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Wow great update! That braty kate uff...what the hell?? I want to kill her right now. Idiot! Hope abhay realise his mistake...and abhiya realise love!
Update soon.

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
Pia is avoiding Abhay!! am hating this catty chick!!😡

Want to know the reason to why Abhiya fought! continue soon

Thanx for the pm!

yep!! dear, catty is dengerous!!! thnx..yep will continue asap!! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
awesome update indu.I loved it.So in sub concious mind abhay still know he was at mistake.Oh hate kate she is a b***h.I hope Abhay realize his mistake soon but wht happened 3 months back.Plz cont..😳

thn shrish..glad u lykd it!! 😳 yep,bt his consious mind isnt ready to accept it yet!! lets see what he does!! will continue soon..😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: flora212
Wow great update! That braty kate uff...what the hell?? I want to kill her right now. Idiot! Hope abhay realise his mistake...and abhiya realise love!
Update soon.

<font size="3">thnku nafi..!! 😳 ya.. me too hope so!! Lets see wat happns!!!</font>

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

His gf is Kate but he is dreaming of Pia...hmm maamla kuch to hai 😉
love the way you described it Indu... Now me waiting what happens when they bump into each other... Continue soon guys!

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

loved the update indu...abhay dreaming abt pia...hmm...dal me kuch kala hai...😉 bt hosh me tha to kate ka nam raat rha tha idiot😡 oh i hate his gf so much😡 lets c wat happens when they come face to face...continue soon nd thanx for d pm😊

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Hey dear awesome upd , I hate this Kate sooo much grrr , hope abhay and Kate gets separated soon and wow abhay ki gf Kate & he is dreaming about piya hmmm in acp praduyuman language

' kuch toh gadbad hai ' , waiting eagarely for next upd and very much eager to see oops I mean read abhiya's face off upd soon dear

Edited by sweetmonaya - 13 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Nice update dear.
I hate that kate, she is arggh 😡
poor abhay he is so confused.
Now abhiya will come face to face.
waiting for the next part.
pls continue soon.
thanks for the pm. 😊

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago