'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 79

Originally posted by: meerubzara

wonderful update

thanks dear. and thanks for reading..😳

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update.abhay jelous of anik well abhay u have fallen in love piya accept soon.hope abhiya realise their luv for eachother soon

thanks ashu. glad you liked it..😳 ya they will soon..!😊

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Nice update 😃

hope pia get rid of anik very soon

thanks dear. 😳hmm..lets see..😛

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

ouch ouch h ...am unresing sooo late...sorry re......but i did read the update longgg ago..soon after u posted,u know that😊 ya..ya..i know!! u'r always late..😆but no worries,u'r my sweet princess afterall..😉so it's ok! 😛

the update was brilliantly written...each word each emotion was perfect...⭐️.aww...abhay is hopelessly in love...look at him.😳..!!!the way love changes a person...urghhh...why did he have to be stupid and waste time before when his heart always beats for piya..😡...he seriously needs anger management classes..😕. thanks princess..😳glad i could portray well...😊ya he is..! hmm..ya..wat to do..he is slow..😆 yep that's apsolutely right!

poor boy...he is so jealous of anik...but i want him to burn a little for giving pia so much much...yes yes i know i'm evil..😆 no..no..dear..u'rnt evil..😆it shud b..! 😛

and piya i guess is slowly realizing that she has lost her heart to abhay already...😳 hmm..mayb..!

i have no concerns for kate...but i feel a little sad for anik...he does have a soft corner for piya in his heart...but in the end i guess he deserves someone who can fully belong to him..as piya's heart already beats for someone else...😊

ya..u'r right there..he deserves to b loved..afterall he is a humanbeing..! n ya..pia was always meant for someone else..😊

well now my turn..hope i can keep it as good as u did...😛 yep u definitely will..infact u'r way better than me...! 😊

wonderful job once again fairy👏 thanks princess...thanks for such a lovely comment..🤗

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

but still things r same and wat if he again do d same thing due to some other reason... and by d way pia is happy wid anik and leaving anik and going wid abhay is really selfish part of pia and i dont wish dat... and in which book it is written dat always ur childhood best fren is ur lover and whatever... soory i am not good at xplaining my thoughts but hope u understood and at last i wish anik and pia together... plz understand may be i am wrong but dis is d way i think...

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Am sure Anik is a gr8 guy Indu n as a human being he's tons better than Abhay n maybe Pia deserves him 😊 But the question is does she want him? 😕 Trust me if Pia felt for Anik I would never have wished u to get Abhiya together. She clearly feels for Abhay coz even Abhay acted like an A class jerk 😡 going by Kate's words but still Pia couldn stop thinking abt him. So does Abhay deserve Pia more than Anik? Clearly the answer is NO. But the thing is Pia also feels for Abhay coz she could never hate him even when he treated her like trash n she longed to hear his voice n have him back in her life. She seems to respect Anik a lot n if she were to choose him not out of pity but out of love I would not contest that coz any sensible girl would do that but is love really sensible? 😕 Guess not. Also Anik deserves better than a girl who'll love him simply out of respect while her heart belongs to someone else. I agree with Trishna that friendships needn necessarily blossom into love. But even when Abhay was with Kate he felt deeply for Pia n Pia couldn get Abhay out of her heart though she was engaged to Anik. So is it fair for Anik is my question. But I will wait for the story to unfold n see which route it takes 😊

i agree with you mansa. love cannot b planned n wen it happens it's not necessary that the other person will always be perfect. 😊

u r rite indu though anik is gud and love pia but still pia's heart belong to abhay after watever abhay did u knw "dil to pagal hai" sometime the one who give pain give soothing and watever bad our luv did to make us suffer but we always find peace in that person only and dat is wat luv is forgive and forget and just luv and only luv... n if anik and pia get marry then dey would never be happy... wish anik find someone who love him...

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Superb smashing update tora... 🤗 the entire updzate was a pleasure to read!!! The words were litterally created deep impact over me!!! U wrote so so beautifully princess...u'r the best!!! 🤗
abhay juggling between his new found feelings and pia's happiness...was written in an extremly beautiful way!!! 👏
and him choosing pia's happiness makes abhay...ABHAY! N that is why nobody can b compared wth him!! He is special!! 😊
the rain scene was extraordinarily beautiful...i cudnot distinguish. Btw reality and words dear...it was such a pleasurable feeling!! 👏
The dhaba part was another brilliant piece of work!!! Lovely!! And the song sequence u inserted was a nyc thing to add!! The song was beautiful too n one of my favs! 😊 it made the update even moreee...beautiful...!!! 😳 and the trio bond was depicted wonderfully! Bt I felt bad for tora.! Aww..poor girl was so heartbroken wen the food got burned! 😔 but it proved to b beneficial for the trio and specially abhaiya!!! 😉
Lets see what pia has to say to abhay now!! 😛
And Wth this update u took this ff into new heights princess...that I possibly cud hav nver been able to do!!! 😊 thanks a lot for agreeying to join me dear... 🤗

I can't believe you guys ended it there! Beautfully written girls...and lovely pics too...and yeah this is a terrific news too!!!