'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: bellaaa
indu superb update
just loved the abhiya all moments
so i think piya also feel something for abhay
and now just wondering what wil piya do next if he love abhay
wow we are couple...love the line
cont soon

thanks a ton beenish!🤗 well what pia thinks is still nt clear dear.let us see..😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

Originally posted by: himanshu1990
Awesome update.

thank you. :)

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

res!
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Awesuum..awesuum...awesuum..tora!!!👏 👏
Mindblowing princess!! You rock!!!🤗
you know you have described everything so perfectly! I loved the car convo. N the tension btw them! Abhay defended hmself. His choice of words were apt! The part where he cntinues to look at her..till the signal turns green, speaks so many things!bravo!!👏
tora-risa cnvo was too good! Waiting to see what they do..😉
you have explained abhay n pia's inner turmoil soo well!! 👍🏼
the forum outbreak was soo natural..and ur depiction made it even more spectacular!!!👏

Loved the gym part! Wow tora! U knw the way u explaind abhay's physique..i cnt have words! It was damn good!! Like..really..i can never write like that you know..? You are an Ace!! U made it live!! Your descriptn infused lyf to the scene!! ⭐️
and nw am eager. Lets see..whats awaiting...😉
and thanks a ton dear..🤗 i could have never been able to take the story this far..wthout you.😳 thanks!🤗

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

Haaye haaye OMG OMG OMG *dancing*

Pleeeaaase update this sooner! This is kind of my favs! Do you know, I forgot the title of this story...then read the last chapter and I was like OMG that one... Finally!!!

Update was superb. Typical Abhay to be detached outwardly and sigh inwardly. He will never learn to improve 😆 Haaye haaye Piya checking out Abhay *starry eyes* are koi toh rok lo :P
and and and... I am there!!! So is Indu...and Dishu... *dancing*
sorry I'm just not very coherent now...too happy with the update...now update soon..preferably within a month..or a week... I won't complain. :D

*goes to read again*

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 12 years ago

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

updt ws superb 👏 👏 👏
xcited 4 nxt
bth r in luv 😆 nw d ques which is hovering over my mind is "who vil propose 2 whom & wen?"
sbs,sbb,IF ppl,gym... i cn visualize d whole scene & dis is d bst thng in ur writing⭐️

Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago

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Raatry

@forever.alone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

amazing update..damn abhay..why he doesnt confess his love for piya..i dont think piya has a deep feeling for anik .she also feels for abhay..waiting for their shooting track😛
btw that if part was funny😆

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago