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CHAPTER 1 ( INTRODUCTIONS)

AAJ PHIR MAUSAM NE LI HAI AJAB ANGRAYI
KHUSH HONA LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT,

AAJ PHIR HAWA PAR HAI MASTI SI CHAYI
URNE LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT,

AAJ PHIR HAR SU HAI KAALI GHATA CHAYI
BHEGNE LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT,


ABHI WO ITNA HI LIKH SAKI THI K BAHAR SE AATI AWAZON NE USKI SOCH KO ROK DIYA AUR AB WO BETH K UN AWAZON KO SUN RAHI THI JO ZINDAGI SE BHARPUR THIN. EK LAMBI SANS LE K USNE SOCHA K WO IS GHAR MAIN REHTI ZARUR HAI LEKIN WO IS FAMILY KA HISSA NAI HAI. PHIR ZABARDASTI APNI POETRY PAR CONCENTRATE KARNE LAGI LEKIN JO POETRY KUCH DAIR PEHLE BAHAR K MAUSAM KO ENJOY KAR K LIKHI THI AB USI POETRY KO WO APNE ANDER K MAUSAM K HISSAB SE DHAL GAYI AUR YE POETRY US K DIL KA DARD BAYAN KAR GAYI.
AAJ PHIR BHEED MAIN BHI HAI TANHAI
KHONE LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT,

AAJ PHIR JANE KYUN AANKH HAI BHAR AAYI
KHUL K RONE LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT,

AAJ PHIR MILNE KI UMEED SI HAI JAAG AAYI
ZINDAGI HONE LAGE HAIN MAIN TUM, AUR MOHABBAT.


RAAT BUHAT HOGAI AUR SUBHA USE COLLEGE JANA HAI YE SOCH K USNE PAGES KO APNE JOURNAL MAIN RAKHA AUR SONE K LIYE LAET GAI.

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GHANEY JUNGLE MAIN WO ANDHA DHUN BHAGTI JA RAHI HAI, HAR TARAF ANDHERA HAI, KUCH SAMAJH NAI AARAHA KAHAN JANA HAI. TABHAI USE KUCH LOG DIKHEY JO K SAB USKI ORE AARAHE HAIN, SAB BUHAT AJEEB SE HAIN, SAB NE KAALEY CHOGHEY PAHEN RAKHE HAIN, USEY BULA RAHE HAIN, US K PAAS AARAHE HAIN, WO CHIKHNA CHAHTI HAI LEKIN AWAZ USKA SAATH NAI DE RAHI IS SE PEHLE K WO AJEEB LOG USE PAKAR LETE...
TRIMMM...
ALARM SE USKI AANKH KHUL GAYI. YE SAB EK SAPNA THA IS BAAT K SAMAJH AATEY HI USNE KHUD KO SHANT KARNE KI KOSHISH KI.
"COOL DOWN PIA! SIRF EK SAPNA THA OR KUCH NAI."
DARWAZA KHULA AUR KOI ANDER AAYA. SHE KNOWS K KON HO SAKTA HAI, ONLY MISHA!
MISHA START MAKING FUN OF HER.
MISHA: YE HAIN HAMARI MISS PIA KHANNA! JIN KI SUBHA HAMESHA SAPNEY SE DARTE YA GHABRATEY HUE HOTI HAI, DARPOK!
PIA: GOOD MORNING MISHA!
MISHA: MERI MORNING TO HAMESHA GOOD HI HOTI HAI BUT TUMHARI OOO HAMESHA HORROR. SO, HORROR MORNING PIA.
PIA CAN'T SAY ANY SINGLE WORD TO HER AND GET READY FOR COLLEGE. PICHLEY DO DINO SE WO COLLEGE NAI JA SAKI THI SHE WAS SUFFERING FROM TEMPERATURE AUR CHAKKAR ALAG SE MUSIBAT BANE HUE THE. NOW, AB USE ABHAY KO FACE KARNE K KHAYAL SE HI CHIR MACH GAYI THI.
PIA(IN HEART): UFF! AB US ABHAY KO PHIR SE TOLERATE KARNA PAREGA. PATA NAI MAINE USKA KYA BIGARA HAI.
PIA WASH ROOM MAIN CHALI GAYI.
MISHA (HERSELF): WOW! EK YE HAI JO HORROR SAPNE DEKH K UTHTI HAI AUR EK WO HAI JISE UTHANE K LIYE HORROR TRICKS APPLY KARNA PARTEY HAIN.

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CAR SHOW ROOM MANAGER: SIR! AAP KOUNSI CAR KENA PASAND KARENGE?
ABHAY: BMW! I WANT BRAND NEW BMW.
MANAGER: SURE SIR! KIS COLOUR MAIN LENA PASAND KARENGE?
ABHAY: AAP K PAAS BMW K JITNE BHI COLOUR HAIN SAB DE DEN. I BUY ALL.
MANAGER(SHOCKED): WHAT? ITNI CARS KA AAP KYA KARENGE?
KISI NE ABHAY KA KANDHA HILAYA.
ABHAY AVOID IT AND ANSWER: TUM JANTE HO MAIN KOUN HUN, ABHAY, ABHAY RAICHAND.
KISI NE PHIR SHOULDER HILAYA.
ABHAY TO HIM: DON'T TOUCH MY SHOULDER.
MANAGER: SIR! AAP IN PAPERS PE SIGN KARDEN MAIN GARI KI CHABI LATA HUN,
ABHAY: GARI NAI GARIYON KI CHABIYAN.
MANAGER: SORRY SIR! I FORGET.
PHIR KISI NE KANDHA HILAYA AUR BUHAT ZOR SE HILAYA.
ABHAY: KYA TAKLIF HAI?
AND WAIT FOR KEYS. MANAGER COME WITH KEYS.
JAISE HI MANAGER SE CHABIYAN LENE K LIYE ABHAY NE HATH BARHAYA.
DHARAMMM KI AWAZ PURE KAMRE MAIN SUNAI DI.
ABHAY NE APNI AANKHEN KHOLIN GARIYON KI JAGA APNA COMPUTER, CUPBOARD AUR ROOM KI BAQI CHIZEN NAZAR AAYIN AUR MANAGER KI JAGA SID KA CHEHRA DIKHA.
ABHAY: OH! TO YE SAPNA THA.
SID: OH! OR YE HAQIQAT.(HE POINTING HIS SELF)
ABHAY NE APNE AAP KO BED SE NICHE GIRA PAYA AUR SID PE CHILLAYA.
ABHAY: WHAT BHAI! AAP ROZ MUJHE BED SE NICHE PHENK DETE HO?
SID: ROZ TUMHE UTHA UTHA K THAK JATA HUN. MR. 6:30 BAJ RAHE HAIN AUR IS GHAR MAIN 6 BAJE TAK SAB KO LAZMI UTHNA HAI, AALSI NA HO TO. DAD SE TUMHE ROZ BACHANA PARTA HAI. NOW, JALDI KARO MAINE DAD SE KEH DIYA HAI K HUM JOGGING PE JA RAHE HAIN AUR TUM 6 BAJE UTH K EXERSICA KAR RAHE THE.
ABHAY: SO SWEET OF U BHAI! AAP HAMESHA MUJHE PROTECT KARTE HO.
SID: NO MASKA! JUST READY.
ABHAY: O.K!
ABHAY APNA TRACK SUIT UTHA K CHANGE ROOM CHALA GAYA.
SID SMILES.

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ABHAY AND SID ENTER IN LOUNGE.
CHAND RAICHAND SAW THEM AND ASK.
PAPA RAICHAND: WHERE IS CHEENI?
ABHAY: KITCHEN MAIN.
SID: SHUT UP ABHAY! DAD US CHEENI KI BAAT NAI KAR RAHE.
PAPA RAICHAND: KAB JAGE THE?
ABHAY: SUBHA.
PAPA RAICHAND TO SID: SEE TUMNE ISE SIR PE CHARHA RAKHA HAI.
ABHAY: SORRY! MAIN TO BAS AAP SE FRIENDLY BAAT KARNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHA THA.
PAPA: I'M NOT UR FRIEND UNDERSTOOD. NOW, TELL ME WHERE IS CHEENI?
SUDDENLY MARSHAL(HOUSE MANAGER) ENTER AND WHISPERING IN SID'S EAR.
MARSHAL: SIR! WO SAATH WALE CHADDA JI K GHAR SE BUHAT AWAZEN AARAHI HAIN SHAYAD JHAGRA HO RAHA HAI.
SID THOUGHT (OH NO! PHIR PANGA HOGAYA)
SID: DAD! CHEENI GARDEN MAIN HAI HUM USE BULA K LATE HAIN.
SID AND ABHAY RUN TOWARDS CROWD.
SID BHEED KO CHIRTA HUA AAGE BARHA AUR JO WO SOCH RAHA THA WOHI HUA.
PADOSI(NEIGHBOUR) UNCLE CHADDA K BHATIJE K BAAL CHEENI K HAATHON MAIN AUR UNKA BETA CHEENI K PAIRON MAIN ULJHAY HUE THE.
CHEENI: AAJ TUM DONO KI KHAIR NAHI CHICHORON. TUMNE MUJHE CHERA MUJH PE LINE MARI, U IDIOTS.
SID: PRINCESS! JUST LEAVE THEM. DAD BULA RAHE HAIN.
CHEENI: NO WAY! AAJ TO WO SABAQ SIKHAUNGI K NANI KI BHI NANI YAAD AA JAYEGI IN LOFARON KO.
ABHAY KO BUHAT GHUSSA AAYA WO UN DONO LARKO KO MARNE AAGA BARHA BUT SID STOP HIM.
SID: STOP IT ABHAY! TUM PRINCESS KO LE KAR GHAR JAO INHEN MAIN DEKHTA HUN.
ABHAY: NO! INKI ITNI HIMMAT INHONE MERI CHEENI SE FLIRT KIYA.
SID: ABHAY! JUST COOL DOWN
AND SAID TO ABHILASHA.
SID: PRINCESS! TUMNE MERI BAAT NAI MANI TO MAIN TUM SE BAAT NAI KARUNGA.
CHEENI(EK THAPPAR BHATIJE KO JAR K): AIENDA AISI KOPI BHI HARKAT KI TO YAAD RAKHNA PURE DHERADUN KI LARKIYON SE PITWAUNGI, ABHILASHA RAICHAND NAAM HAI MERA ABHILASHA RAICHAND!
CHEENI GHAR CHALI GAYI AUR SID NE ABHAY KO ISHARA KIYA K WO SAB KUCH HANDLE KAR LEGA KYUN K SID KO PATA HAI K ABHILASHA KO LE KAR ABHAY BUHAT POSSESSIVE HAI USNE UN DONO LARKO KO MAR HI DENA THA AUR SID NAI CHAHTA K ABHAY KOI BHI AISI HARKAT KARE.

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PIA READY HO K DINNING TABLE KI TARAF AAYI.
PIA: GOOD MORNING!
NO ONE REPLIED ONLY ARNAB REPLIED.
ARNAB: GOOD MORNING PIA! AAO NASHTA KARO.
PIA SIT AND START TAKING BREAKFAST.
PUNCHI: ITS YUMMY MOM! U R THE BEST.
MADHU: U LIKE IT?
PUNCHI: OFCOURSE MOM.
PUNCHI MADHU KO EK SAATH DEKH K PIA MISS HER MOM TABHI PUNCHI NE USEY DEKHA AND SHE ANGER.
PUNCHI: TUM KYA AISE DEKH RAHI HO? KABHI HUM DONO KO DEKHA NAI HAI? JAB DEKHO AISE GHORTI REHTI HO. I'M WARNING U PIA MUJHE AUR MOM KO AISE MAT DEKHA KARO.
PIA: I'M SORRY DEE.
PUNCHI: DON'T CALL ME DEE. MAIN TUMHARI BEHEN NAI HUN KITNI BAR SAMJHAON.
MADHU: LEAVE IT PUNCHI! DON'T B TENSE. WELL YE BATAO AAJ DOPEHER KO KHANE MAIN KYA BANAUN?
PUNCHI: MERE LIYE PRAWN CURY.
MISHA: MUJHE KUCH ITALIAN CHAHIYE.
JAY: I WANT MOLI PARATHAS.
MADHU: O.K! NOW, GO TO UR COLLEGE.
PIA FEEL SO BAD.
PIA(IN HEART): KASH MERI B MOM HOTIN PHIR MAIN B UNSE APNI MAN PASAND CHEEZEN BANWATI.
PIA(HERSELF): KOI BAAT NAI PIA! TUM KUCH ZIYADA HI UMEEDEN LAGA LETI HO. ITS JUST O.K.
PUNCHI APNI CAR MAIN CHALI GAYI, JAY NE PIA KO SAATH LE JANE SE MANA KAR DIYA AUR MISHA PIA KO SAATH LE K NAI JA RAHI AS USUAL ROZ KI TARAH SAB APNI APNI CONVENCE SE CHALE GAYE. PIA AKELI PEDAL JA RAHI THI APNI SOCH MAIN GUM YABHI USE AISA LAGA K KOI HAI JO US K PICHEY AA RAHA HAI. SHE AFRAID TOO MUCH. PIA TURNS.


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"HMMM TO TUM LOG AAJ PHIR KUCH GARBAR KAR K AA RAHE HO?" MAMA RAICHAND SEE THEM AND TELL THEM HER DOUBT.
"NO MOM". SID REPLIED.
"HAMARE NEIGHBOUR CHADDA UNCLE KI PURI FAMILY PAGAL HAI." ABHAY SAID.
"WHAT! AB KYA KIYA UN LOGON NE?" HASEENA ASKED.
"LEAVE THE TOPIC MOM,PLEASE!" ABHILASHA REQUEST HER.
"O.K. WELL ABHAY! TUMHE COLLEGE JANA CHAHIYE, DON'T U THINK K TUM LATE HO RAHE HO?" MAMA RAICHAND SMILED.
"OH HAN! BUS JA RAHA HUN." ABHAY REPLIED N LEAVE FROM HOUSE.
SID ASKED TO ABHILASHA.
SID: TUM KAB SE COLLEGE JOIN KAROGI?
ABHILASHA: KAL SE. KAL MOUNT COLLEGE KI KISMAT CHAMKE GI KYUN K KAL ABHILASHA RAICHAND COLLEGE JOIN KARNE WALI HAI.
SID SMILES: THAT'S MY PRINCESS! I LOVE UR ATTITUDE.
ABHILASHA: AND WHAT ABOUT ME BHAI?
SID: OH! I LOVE U TOO MUCH MY PRINCESS.
BOTH SMILES SUDDENLY SID'S CELL RINGING.
SID: HELLO!
SID: YAH! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED?
SID: WHAT THE HELL?
SID: O.K! I'LL JUST COME, BYE.
ABHILASHA: WHAT HAPPENED?
SID: NOTHING PRINCESS! WO MERI INSTITUTE HAI NA JAH...
SHE CUT HIS SENTENCE.
ABHILASHA: JAHAN FAISHION, IT AND PATA NAI KOUN KOUN SE COURSES KA DIPLOMA DIYA JATA HAI?
SID: YAH! WAHAN EK LARKI HAI JO FAISHION DESIGNING KI CLASSES LE RAHI HAI. USNE SAB KI NAAK MAIN DUM KAR K RAKH DIYA HAI. HAR DUSRE DIN USKI COMPLAIN AATI HAIN AUR AAJ, AAJ TO USNE HADH KARDI HAI. SO, I HAVE TO GO THERE.
ABHILASHA: O.K! SEE U SOON, BYE.
SID: BYE! TAKE CARE.

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WOHI THI. PIA KA DARR KAM OR ULJHAN BARH GAYI. WO USEY AKSAR MILA KARTI THI, KOUN THI, KAHAN SE AATI THI KUCH PATA NAI, BUS AATI, KUCH DAIR SAATH REHTI, KUCH KEHTI PHIR ACHANAK HI CHALI JATI.
PIA: TUM AAJ KYA KEHNE AAYI HO?
SHE SMILED AND THEN SAID.
"HAR APNA AITBAAR K LAIQ NAHI HOTA."
PIA: U KNOW WHAT! HAMESHA KI TARAH MUJHE TUMHARI BAAT BILKUL SAMAJH NAI AAYI.
USNE PIA KI MASOMIAT KO MUSKURA K DEKHA PHIR US RASTE KO DEKHNE LAGI JAHAN SE PIA AA RAHI THI. PIA NE USKI NAZRON KO FOLLOW KIYA WAHAN KOI NAI THA PHIR ACHANAK MISHA KI BIKE AATI NAZAR AAYI.
"MISHA TO COLLEGE JA CHUKI THI PHIR YAHAN KAISE?" PIA THOUGHT.
MISHA NE US K PAAS AA K BIKE ROKI.
"CHALO PIA TUMHEN COLLEGE TAK LIFT DE DUN." MISHA SAID.
PIA ASK: BUT TUM TO COLLEGE CHALI GAYIN THIN PHIR WAPAS KYUN AAYIN?
"TUMHE LENE." SHE REPLIED.
PIA KO LAGA K US K SUNNE MAIN GHALTI HOGAI. MISHA AUR USE LENE WAPAS AAYE, IMPOSSIBLE.
MISHA: CHALO AB.
PIA: THANX ALOT MISHA.
PHIR PIA NE US LARKI KO DEKHA WO KAHIN B NAI THI.
MISHA: HELLO! HAMEN AAJ KI DATE MAIN COLLEGE JANA HAI. KIS KO DHOOND RAHI HO?
"NOTHING! NO ONE." PIA SAY AND SIT ON HER BIKE.
KUCH DAIR BAAD PIA NE MISHA SE KAHA.
PIA: MISHA! HUM GHALAT RASTE PAR JA RAHE HAIN.
"NAHIN YE SHORTCUT HAI." MISHA SMILES.
PIA: O.K.
"PIA EK MINUTE UTARNA." MISHA NE BIKE ROKI.
PIA: LEKIN MISHA! YE JAGA BUHAT AJEEB HAI. KYA HUA KOI PROBLEM HAI?
MISHA: NAHI KUCH KHAS NAI AUR WAISE B TUMHE TO HER CHEEZ SE DARR LAGTA HAI, UTRO JALDI.
PIA UTAR JATI HAI. SUDDENLY MISHA STARTS HER BIKE.
MISHA: SEE U PIA! TUM AGAR DARR SE NAI MAR GAYIN TO COLLEGE MAIN MILTE HAIN.
MISHA BIKE FULL SPEED MAIN BHAGA K LE GAYI. PIA AKELI US ROAD PE REH GAYI. USE KUCH SAMAJH NAI AAYA K WO KYA KARE.
USI WAQT US K PAAS EK CAR AA RUKI. NOW, SHE UNDERSTAND K WO LARKI KYA KEH RAHI THI.


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"HELLO!"
SHE RECEIVE CALL AND TALK.
"DON'T WORRY! SAB KUCH THEK HAI." SHE SAID.
"NAHIN ABHI USNE MUJHE DEKHA NAHI INFACT MERI SOURCES SE MUJHE PATA CHALA HAI K WO MERE BARE MAIN KUCH B NAI JANTI HAI." SHA SAID AGAIN.
"DON'T WORRY! MAIN YAHAN US K LIYE AAYI HUN. US KO LIYE BINA MAIN YAHAN SE JANE WALI NAI HUN." SHE LOOKS ANGER NOW.
"YAH! O.K I CALL U LATER, BYE." CALL DISCONNECTED.
(SHE HERSELF)"AB US OWNER KO B DEKHTI HUN MUJHE PUNISH KARNE CHALA HAI. MR. SIDDHARTH RAICHAND TUM NAI JANTE K TUMHARA FACE OF KIS SE HONE JA RAHA HAI, MAITHLI SE AND I'LL SHOW U WHAT I'M." MAITHLI SMILED.


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PIA NE PEHLE SOCHA PHIR CAR MAIN BETH GAYI. BOTH R QUIET, PIA THOUGHT.
"MISHA AISA KAR SAKTI HAI I KNOW SO, WHY I SIT ON HER BIKE. AGAR YE NA AATE TO MAIN KYA KARTI?"
PHIR USNE APNE SIDE PE BETHEY BANDE KO DEKHA AND THEN THOUGHT AGAIN.
"PERSONALITY BHI ACHI HAI, IQ BHI AUR FINANCIALY BHI STRONG HAI THEN WHY HE IS SO RUDE AND QUIET?"
APNI SOCHON MAIN MAGAN PIA KO COLLEGE AANE KA PATA NAI CHALA ACHANAK USE KHAYAL AAYA TO WO CAR SE UTAR GAYI ABHI PIA SOCH RAHI THI K THANX KAHE K WO CAR REVERSE LE K CHALA GAYA.
PIA ENTER IN COLLEGE BUILDING.

PRECAP:
"MISHA AUR ABHAY NE BET LAGAI HAI K ABHAY PIA KO HINDI K LECTURE MAIN SATAYEGA AUR TEACHER PIA KO WARNING DENGI."

Index;

CHAPTER 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46006015

CHAPTER 3 (LIKNESS,RAGGING & FRIENDSHIP)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=46305746�

NEW CHARACTER SKATCH.

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484786�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 1)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484801�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 2)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484818�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 3)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484927�

CHAPTER 5 (ABHAY'S SORRY)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47966998

CHAPTER 6 (ROMEO JULIET KA TIYAN PANCHA)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48255473

CHAPTER 7 (CONFUSION)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48501433

CHAPTER 8( Abhiya & agsha dance with sidmetz dinner)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48631067

CHAPTER 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49298857

CHAPTER 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49872948

CHAPTER 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52551937

CHAPTER 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52847839

CHAPTER 13 PART 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53521529

CHAPTER 13 PART 2

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=53521552�

CHAPTER 13 PART 3

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=53521575턑575

CHAPTER 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54321497

CHAPTER 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54908449

CHAPTER 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56046516

CHAPTER 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56686818

thank u

CHAPTER 18 -1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092649

CHAPTER 18 -2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092690

CHAPTER 18 -3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092744

CHAPTER 18 -4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092786

CHAPTER 19-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59894192

CHAPTER 19-2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59894232

CHAPTER 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62632859

CHAPTER 21 1-4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65202270

CHAPTER 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69306298

PRECAP:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72951985

CHAPTER 23 (1-4)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/82904912

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome part I loved it yaar.But who was the mysterious guy & Abhay piaki problem solve karne ki bajaye badhta hai?😕😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hey awesome part I loved it yaar.But who was the mysterious guy & Abhay piaki problem solve karne ki bajaye badhta hai?😕😊

thanks and that guy is revealed in my next post n misterious girl is stay misterious.😉 n abhay pia ki story main kuch change zaruri tha u just wait wo din bhi ayega jb wo problems solve karega😳
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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hey superb part.😊..who was the guy with car who helped pia...abhay pia ko pareshan karta hai...😕very bad abhay...😆& what does maithili want??...update soon...😊.
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poor pia, everybody is torturing her and who is this mysterious girl who comes to meet pia
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey...i loved ur ff...plz add me to ur pm list...update soon...will be waiting...
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great part...poor piya, feeling so sorry for her
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update!
Very well written. .
Sid is sho shweet. .
Abhilasha is a time bomb. . Kabhi bhi phat sakti hai. .lol
poor pia. . Every1 is against her. . She shud also hav a frend. . With whom she can share her feelings. .
Thanks for the pm. . Continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow
awesome
perfect
eager for the bet
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice udpate! I feel so bad for Piya, everyone is so mean to her! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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