FF#Main tum aur Mohabbat(#1) Closed - Page 53

Originally posted by: raichandroxx

nyc update khwaisg
i hope agni jaldi thik ho jaye..., yap he will😃
so pia agni nd metz ki behen hai wow!!!
is jeh ko to arrhh...jahan jata hai sirf tabahi machata hai huh!!
plz update soon nd thanx for d pm😊

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Awesome update di:-) sorry for late :-( I love the update:-)😃

But I Want more Abhay and Chand scenes:-) scene will be came soon

I jus love Abhay and Abhilasha:-):-) You r a Brilliant writter di:-) aawww so sweet

Love u...

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Amazing update superb

so Agni Metz and piya are siblings. yesss😃
i always thought that he was her brother.
finally Abhay saw piya.

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: _Monu_

awesome updts

so agni is pia metz bhai!! wow!!

it was unexpectd!!

im glad ki sid knows everything!!

n pia metz r supporting each other in this situation

n abhay is feeling guilty ..he should be!!

hope agni gets well soon

waiting 4 next updt

soo see uuu sooon

love yaaa

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

sorry for d late reply😊

thnx for d pm

lovely awesome gr8t 👏👏

cont soon

updt soon

Originally posted by: deshdeewani

nice update but a bit sad. yah it is

hope agni get well soon.

luved the way sid supporting metz and piya.

and this jay.😡abhilasha usay kabhi nahin milay gi.

its good abhay is regerting.

by the where is abhilasha?usay agni kay barey mein kab pata chaley ga?

waiting eagerly fr the next.

thanks fr the pm.😊

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu

Awesme story...
Waiting 4 nxt part...
Plzz add in pm list

Originally posted by: anukrati19

really sorry forlate reply😭 😭

Superb update dear

love it 😳

hope agni will recover

oh waiting how pia react after know abhay responsible for this

good job dear👏👏

love maithli pia emotinal part u write it very beautifully 👏

update soon thanks for pm👏

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update dear.I loved it annokhi plz cont..So Pia-metz r agni's sister & poor abhay.How will pia react whn she'll come 2 know truth behind agni's condition.Plzz cont..

SORRY FOR TOO LATE AND FOR LOVLY COMMENTS

CHAPTER 16

After few hours doctor told them that Agni is out of danger but they still kept him under observation for 24 hours. Doctor also not gave them permission to meet Agni.
Pia and Sid stay in hospital. Abhay went Raichand mansion and Maithli at Dobriyal house.

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Dobriyal House:

Maithli enter in hall. Madhu start shouting on her.
Madhu: Do din se lapata ho. Tumhari waja se hum sab pareshan hain aur tum itni relax ho jaise kuch hua hi nai. Kahan thin do din se?
Maithli's head terribly in pain. She didn't eat properly even she didn't sleep in these two days. Maithli ignore her question and move but Arnab stop her.
Arnab: Kahan thin tum Pia? Aise koi karta hai kya? Tumhare liye main police se lar para aur tum? Phone kyun nai le rai thin mera?
Jay (interrupt): Hogi us Agni k paas, uski khidmat kar rai hogi. Afterall Abhay ka ghussa to hum sab jante hain.
Maithli mind click on his sentence.
Arnab: Kya matlab hai tumhara?
Jay quiet.
Arnab: Jay main tumse kuch puch raha hun?
Jay: Nothing wo bas aise hi.
Arnab: Dobara beech main mat bolna. (to Maithli) Pia kahan thin tum?
Maithli: I feel sleepy so, plz don't irritate me, bye.
Maithli move towards Pia's room.
Arnab: Had hogayi hai, ye Pia ko kya hua?
Madhu: Main to pehle hi keh rai hun is musibat ko bahar karo.
Arnab: Stop it Madhu! Pehle hi main is k saath itna bara dhoka kar k pachta raha hun aur tum ho k...
Madhu: Ufff!

In Pia's Room:

Maithli take bath. After freshen her self she thought about Jay's sentence.

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At Hospital:

Sid: Pia! Tum b ghar jao. Main hun yahan.
Pia: Kahan jaun? Mera bhai yahan hai. Maithli ko majboori main Dobriyal house jana para. Waise b kyun jaun main? Main yahin thek hun kahin nai jana mujhe.
Sid (sigh): O.k! Tum aisa karo is bench pe lait jao. I think you need to sleep.
Pia laid but not sleep.
Sid: Good!

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In Raichand Mansion:

Abhay enter in mansion. Haseena saw him. He is shatter she worried.
Haseena: Abhay kya hua? Tum aisi buri halat main? Tum to Sid k saath farm house select karne gaye the na?
Abhay quietly saw her with mist eyes.
Haseena: Kya hua? Kuch to kaho? Sid... Sid kahan hai?
Abhay: Mom...
Haseena: Kya hua Abhay? Kuch to bolo? Kyun mujhe dara rahe ho?
Abhay told her everything. Haseena shockly saw him.
Haseena: I can't believe this... Abhay tum ne... No! Its not true.
Abhay: It is Mom! It is. I...i try to kill some...one Mom. I hate myself.(crying)
Haseena hold him in her arms and console.
Haseena: Don't worry Abhay! Kuch nai hoga. Sab thek hojayega.
Abhay hug her and she caresses his back to console. Tears rolling in Abhilasha's eyes who listen whole convo standing behind the door.

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In Hospital:

After 24 hours doctor shift Agni in room. Pia is in Agni's home. Maithli stay in hospital. Sid is in Office and Abhay came hospital.
Agni awake slowly slowly.
Maithli: Are you o.k? How are you feel now?
Agni blink his eyes to answer. Maithli understand what he say. Agni saw here and there to find someone.
Maithli: Pia ko dhoond rahe hain? Wo ghar gayi hai aap k liye parhezi khana bana ne.
Abhay enter in room. Maithli gave him angry look. He panic for a while then came near Agni.
Abhay: I'm so sorry! I don't want to do this but it happened. I'm so sorry. I feel shamed on myself. Plz forgive me and if you want to punish me then go ahead but plz Pia ko kuch mat batana... Plz...
Agni saw him and smile. He reply him but he feel little problem during talking.
Agni: No... Itsss... Okkk... I... I can...nnn underrr...standd. Maiiinnneee... ttum...heenn... mmuaafff... kkiyaa. Don'tt... worry... Ppiaaa kk...ko koii kk...kuchh nai bb...batayegaa. Butt nn...next ttimee... ap...apne... ghus...ghusse kko kaa...(panting) kaboo... rakhnaaa... aaurrr...
Maithli (cut him): Bas ab kuch mat bolen aapki tabiyat kharab hojayegi. Jo b baat hogi wo baad main kariyega.
Agni saw her as he want to say something.
Maithli: Don't worry jaisa aap chahte hain waisa hi hoga. Nai bata rai main Pia ko kuch, ab khush.
Agni nodded.
Abhay and Maithli exit from room coz Agni need rest.

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Agni's Home:
In kitchen:

Pia: Oh God! Ab kaise karun ye sab? Kiya banaun aur kaise? Maithli se puchti hun.
She dial her number and stop.
Pia: Nai agar maine Maithli se pucha to wo mujh pe buhat ghussa hongi. Uff! Kya karun? Bhaiyyu ko ab tak hosh aagaya hoga aur bhook b buhat lagi hogi, unhone ab tak kuch khaya jo nai. Ye doctors b naa...!
Ab Pia ko doctors pe ghussa aane laga.
Pia: Abhilasha se puchti hun... Nai nai wo jo batayegi wo to Bhaiyyu kha b nai sakenge. Phir...??? Abhay! Han Abhay se puchti hun.
Pia call Abhay. Abhay saw mobile screen then Maithli who ignore him. Abhay thori dur ja k call receive karta hai.
Abhay: Han Pia kaho?
Pia: Abhay! Help chahiye.
Abhay: Kaisi help?
Pia: Wo parhezi khana kaise banaun?
Abhay: Tumhe nai aata khana banana?
Pia: Aata hai but kuch khas nai do char cheezen jo mujhe Bhaiyyu ne sikhai thi. Parhezi ka to "P" nai pata mujhe.
Abhay: O.k! Mmm ek kaam karo Abhilasha ko phone karo aur us se kaho k Mom se puch k bata de ya phir tum khud Mom se baat kar lena.
Pia: Are you sure?
Abhay: Han! Mom expert hain cooking main aur parhezi khano main maine aur Cheeni ne expert kar diya hai unko. U know...
Pia (smile): Yah! I know u both "Chalti Phirti Aafat".
Abhay: O.k! Jaldi banao. Agni ko hosh aagaya hai aur doctor b allow kar chuke hain khana. So...
Pia: Yah! Bye and thanks.
Abhay: Bye!
Abhay serious and think.
Abhay: Agar Pia ko pata chal gaya k us k bhai k saath itna bura maine kiya hai to kya tab b wo mujhe aise hi apni choti choti problems main yaad karegi? Kya aise hi baat karegi? Kya mujhe muaf karegi?

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Pia came hospital with Abhilasha. Haseena guide her to cook. Abhilasha freeze after saw Maithli. Pia aage ja k ruki aur mur k usey dekhne lagi. Pia wapas aayi aur Abhilasha ko pakar k hila diya.
Pia: Wo meri behen hain jo mere jaisi dikhti hain.
Abhilasha: Aur wo mera bhai hai jo statue bana tumhari behen ko aise dekh raha hai jaise agar aankh jhapki to tumhari behen ghayab hojayegi ya phir mere bhai pe koi legal charge lag jayega.
Pia jo mun khole uski baat sun rai thi foran Maithli ko dekha wahan Sid ek hi position main khara Maithli ko ghoorey ja raha tha. Pia smile "Haye Mohabbat".
Pia: Chalo Bhaiyyu se mil k aate hain. Unko khana b khilana hai.
Abhilasha: No! Tum jao.
Pia: Lekin!
Abhilasha: Plz! Tum jao main yahin thek hun.
Pia move towards room.

In Room:

Agni lying. His eyes close. Pia knock on door and enter. Agni open his eyes, look her and smile. Pia look him with mist eyes. She came towards him , sit beside him, hug him and start crying on his chest.
Pia: Bhaiyyu! Kaise hain aap? Ye sab kaise hua? Aap ne mujhe kitna dara diya tha Bhaiyyu. Agar aap ko kuch hojata to...
Agni: Doll! Main thek hun. Kuch nai hua mujhe. Plz! Stop crying.
Pia sit and rub her face. Agni smile.
Agni: Good girl! Now, show me ur smile.
Pia gave fake smile. Agni try to light her mood.
Agni: Doll! I'm fine. Now, tell me khane main kya layi ho buhat zor se bhook lag rai hai.
Pia put her hand on forehead as "OMG".
Pia: Sorry! I forgot. Main aap k liye soup layi hun. Pia make him sit and help him in drinking soup.

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Pia roz Haseena se recipe puch kar khana bana k hospital aati. Maithli aur Dobriyals k darmiyan Q/A ka silsila abi tak chal raha tha. Metz pura din hospital, college aur institute k beech ghanchakkar bani hui thi coz Pia hospital main rehti ya phir ghar Agni k liye khana banane jati. Metz raat main Dobriyal house jati to uski thakan uska mood aur kharab kar deti. Abhay college k baad hospital aata phir ghar chala jata. Sid office main kam aur hospital main ziyada mojood hota. Abhilasha hospital aati to thi lekin coridoor main hi ghomti rehti. Agni se milne nai jati. Rajiv Sahai aur 1st year k wo students jinki Agni ne help ki thi wo b milne aate rehte but they didn't saw Pia and Maithli together.

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After 1 Week:

Agni want to talk with all. Abhilasha enter. Agni appologize with her. She forgive him. Abhay, Abhilasha, Sid, Maithli and Pia wait to know why Agni call them.
Agni: Thank u Sid for save my life, Abhay and Abhilasha to came hospital many times in a day. Thank u for all mere kehne pe Dobriyals aur dusron ko Pia aur Maithli k bare main nai bataya, Thank u. Ab main batata hun k Pia humse alag kyun thi? Aur Dobriyals kya cheeze hain?
Everyone ready to listen. Maithli relax coz she know everything but Pia want to know that which they both(Agni and Metz) not told her.

Precap:

* Agni in raichand mansion.
* Chand try to find someone else presence in home.
* Abhilasha slip in pool.
* Agni in trouble by Abhay and Pia.
* Metz beat Jay through hockey.
* Sid told Haseena about Maithli.

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