welcome andOriginally posted by: abhiyalover04
shall be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Originally posted by: deshdeewani
sorry fr being so late.holding ears. no problem
update was beautifull.luved it so much.😊
what is the secret of piya? wait to know
so prem and priya is actually metz and agni.
dobriyal family is just to much.😡
chand punished abhay and cheeni.abhay cut abhilasha's hair.😆waise u did't tell us that apne baal dekhne ke baad abhilasha ne abhay ke saath kya kiya.precap seems very interesting.metz slap abhay.😭now he will think piya slapped him.abhilasha kiss agni😲why?😕where?☺️how?😳sid will come to know the truth because of his powers.by the way today is sunday.r u going to update?thank u so much fr the pm.😊
for read my ffOriginally posted by: arunsunita_gm
hey whn r yu going to update annokhi
plsss update fast and dont forget to pm megn tc ks hsd 😊
Pia eat dryt fruits. Agni enter.
Pia: Aap kahan gaye the?
Agni: Ab tum se kya chupaon...(sigh) Office k kaam se gaya tha.
Pia: Aapne kitni studies ki hain? Aur kya kya pasand hai?
Agni: Mmm...! M.B.A kar chuka hun, tumhare saath dobara parh kar ek aur degree lunga aur han computr software aur hardware main bhi diploma liya hai.
Pia: Hooo! Itna saara, Intelligent hannn...!
Agni: Tum kya banna chahti thin? Ya kya parhna chahti thin?
Pia (little disappointed): Ab kya faida.
Agni: Phir bhi...
Pia: Main poetess aur singer banna chahti thi aur degree BS in food and science ki hasil karna chahti thi.
Agni look her with surprisely.
Pia: Aapko meri mental condition pe doubt ho raha hoga?
Agni: Not at all coz khwahiahon ka direct connection dil se hai isi liye is main mantal condition ka koi sawal hi nai and you know what meri b kabhi aisi wishes hua karti thin.
Pia (excited): Sachi...! Plz mujhe bataiye naa.
Agni: Aah! That was...
Pia (interrupt): No bahana o.k?
Agni: O.k! I want to be an air force officer but also want to study in M.B.B.S... silly naa?
Pia: Not yet! Air force main b Dr. hote hain but why you didn't do this?
Agni: Coz of some circumstances. Choro aaj b jahan hun buhat khush hun.
Pia look him and think: Kamaal hai aisi kya wajah ho sakti hai jo inhen apni wishes se pichey hatna para...? Aur ab b inhen dekh k lagta nai hai k ye khush hain...
Agni: Kya soch rahi ho?
Pia: Aaahhhaaan! Nothing. Aap Maithli se kaho na k plz mujhe mere college jane den.
Agni: Sorry Pia but i can't. Wo buhat ziddi hai aur abhi wo kuch b nai sunegi. Jabse maine Priya ko bataya hai k tum uske institute main us k kisi friend se maili ho aur usey tum pe doubt hogaya hai tab se wo buhat ghusse main hai. Sorry to say but ab se tum na college jaogi aur na institute.
Pia: Hmm..! Waise mujhe Maithli k us friend se buhat darr lag raha hai agar unhen pata chal gaya to...
Agni: To... pata nai. Baad ki baad main dekhi jayegi filhal kitchen main chalo aur dekho k lassania kaise banta hai.
Pia: Wow! Cooking class. Lets go.
Pia dry fruits ki plate uthti hai aur chali jati hai.
Agni (in head): Poor Pia! Apni studies aur career b apni marzi se nai bana payi.
Agni (POV): Pia main janta hun jo tum parhna chahti thin uski fees buhat ziyada hai... aur jo tum banna chahti thin(poetess aur singer) chahti thin us k liye tumhara confidence... definately Dobriyals ki waja se tumne ye line choose ki but don't worry jo tum chahti ho wo zarur hoga. I promise.
Agni aur Pia kitchen main hain tabhi door bell ring hoti hai. Pia get worried.
Agni: Relax Pia! Main hun.
Pia (in head): Plz God save me, plz.
Agni door ki taraf jata hai.
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AFTER FEW DAYS:
Sid get confuse coz of Maithli.
Sid (POV): Aakhir ho kya raha hai... i'm totally confused. Us din mujhe laga wo Maithli nai koi aur hai but Maithli keh rahi hai k us din wohi thi kuch pareshan thi isi liye ajeeb behave kiya but mera dil nai maan raha. (Sid place his hand on his left side and feel silence.) Us din k baad wo dobara institute aayi b nai sirf cell pr baat hoti hai. Mujhe sach ka pata lagana hai. Aakhir pura sach kiya hai? Kahin Maithli kisi musibat main to nai hai? Ya phir... Ufff! Kya sach hai? Wo jo mujhe feel hua ya wo jo Maithli keh rahi hai?
Sid Maithli ka sach janne k liye institute jata hai.
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Abhay POV: Kya horaha hai ye sab? Pichley kuch dino se Pia kitni ajeeb si hogayi hai... college main itni rude aur angry hoti hai aur call and chat pe itni friendly hoti hai. College main ignore karti hai, Cheeni se b jaan churane ki koshish karti hai. Aakhir Pia k saath masla kya hai. Mujhe khul kar us se baat karni hogi
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Chand POV:Bas ab buhat intizar kar liya. Mujhe ab Abhay aur Abhilasha ko control karna hoga sirf kuch waqt aur intizar karna hoga uske baad... lekin is waqt mujhe Siddharth k bare main koi fisla karna hoga. I think us ki shaadi kar deni chahiye... Hmmm yehi sahi waqt hai. Mujhe Haseena se baat karni chahiye... ta k wo Siddharth k liye kisi aisi larki ko choose kare jo hamare liye koi nayi problem na khari kare.
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IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE:
Punchi apni dress choose kar rahi thi, usne apni puri cupboard k dresses living room main phela diye the. Misha and Jay busy in mobile. Madhu snacks le kar aati hai.
Punchi: Mom! In main se kounsi dress pehnun?
Madhu: Koi si b pehenlo... Meri beti sab main piyari lagti hai.
Metz (who enter exect time): Piyari ka to pata nai lekin sab main bhaari zarur lagti hai.
Madhu: Just shut up Pia! Tum apni hadh main raho.
Metz: What ever...!
Misha: Waise Birdy ye selection kis liye?
Punchi: You forgot? Arey Valentine aa raha hai.
Misha: Ye koun hai?
Jay: O Yah! Valentine. (in head) Is bar to main b specially celebrate karunga aur is valentine pe Abhilasha ko meri GF bana kar hi rahunga.
Misha: Valentine day... so boring... (in head) Hope Abhay aur meri friendship reunite hojaye.
Punchi (in head): Kaash is valentine pe wo handsome guy(Sid) mujhe mil jaye.
Madhu: Oh! to ye valentine ki tayyari hai. You carry on mujhe kitchen main kuch kaam hai.
Metz (in head): Valentine! Ab Pia k college main b stupid se tamashey honge. God ye sab thakte nai hain.
ON THE OTHER HAND:
Pia and Agni sit in garden.
Pia: Two days k baad har taraf red roses honge. Kitna acha lagta hai jab koi apko chahta ho, aap us k liye zindagi k jaise ehmit rakhte ho.
Agni: Hmmm! Kya hai two days k baad?
Pia: Arey! aapko nai pata? Valentine day hai do din baad.
Agni sun hogaya. Us k expression serious aur sakht hogaye. Wo utha aur chala gaya. Pia shocked.
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Next Day:
Sid realise that he is in love with Maithli. So, he start practise, how he confess his love to her.
Sid stand infront of full size mirror. Abhay and Abhilasha hide in Sid's wardrobe.
Abhay: Cheeni! Bhai ko pata chal gaya to?
Abhilasha: Tum to apna mun band hi rakho. Mere baal cut kiye the tumne mujhe abi yaad hai is waqt saath hun to sirf is liye k pichley kuch dino se bhai ajib behave kar rahe hain.
Abhay: Han! Baithe baithe kho jate hain, akele main muskurate hain aur...
Abhilasha: Oh shut up! Mujhe sab pata hai. Shuru hogaye totay(parrot) ki tarah teyn teyn karne.
Abhay: Hunnn!
Sid starts.
Sid (shy): "Main...main...tum...se...kuch kehna chahta hun." No yaar! That's not good. Kuch baat nai ban rahi. Mmm yah! "Jab se tum meri zindagi main...main...aaan" uff! Nai horaha mujhse.
Abhilasha: Abhay! Hamare bhai pagal hogaye hain.
Abhay: Iska matlab inko asylum main jama karwana parega.
Abhilasha: Nooo! Wahan to sab pagal honge.
Abhay: Tumhe kya lagta hai k jis asylum main bhai jayenge wahan sab normal honge?? Nahi.
Abhilasha: Oh God! Asylum k to Doctor b adhey pagal hote hain.
Abhay: Tum se kis ne kaha?
Abhilasha: Mrs. Chadda ne 15 saal asylum main Dr. ki hasiyat se kaam kiya hai.
Abhay: Ooh! Phir to pakka Dr. b pagal hote hain.
Sid: Kya kahun? Kya? O.k "I..." aaan nai ye nai bol sakta. (Sid idhar udhar chakkar lagane laga.) "I LOVE YOU" that's it.
Abhay aur Abhilasha jo ek dusre pe charhey hue the, Sid k "I love you" bolte hi disbalance hogaye aur wardrobe se bahar gir gaye. Sid quickly turn.
Sid: Arey nai!
Abhilasha: Haye meri kamarrr... Pehle hair cut kare aur ab mujh pe gir gaye. Ab kill b kar dena.
Abhay: "Nahi" Nahi bhai. Arey han to ye baat thi. (to Abhilasha) Apna shikayati daftar baad main kholna pehle bhai se nimto...
Abhilasha: Bhai! Koun hai wo...? Plz batayen na plz.
Abhay and Abhilasha both start jumping.
Sid: Stop it! Koi nai hai.
Both make pout.
Sid: Sach! Koi nai hai. Plz tum log apna mood kharab na karo.
Abhilasha: Phir apne "I love you" kyun kaha?
Sid (smile): Arey! Main soch raha tha k jab main Valentine celebrate karunga to kya kahunga apni Valentine se, kuch samajh nai aaya to "I love you" keh diya.
Abhay: Hope! Aapki Valentine aur hamari Bhabhi jald aaye.
Sid smile.
Abhilasha: Finger cross.
Sid: Now! Plz meri ek important meeting hai so, i take a leave, bye.
Both: Bye.
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Jay POV:
"I am in love... Yes I'm in love with Abhilasha. I love her. Tomorrow i'll confess my love. Kal main usey bataunga k main usse kitna pyar karta hun. OMG! Kitni khubsurat feeling hai. Ek candle light dinner arrange karta hun, afterall kal wo mere love ko accept karegi to mujhe us k liye kuch special karna chahiye. Hmmm, lets starts to do arrangements."
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Abhay POV:
"Main kal Pia se apna love confess karunga and i'm sure she'll accept.
FLASHBACK:
Abhay and Pia do net chat.
Abhay: You know what Pia! Pehle tum mujhe bilkul achi nai lagin, phir Cheeni ki waja se tum mujhe tolerate karne lagin tab tum mujhe achi lagne lagin aur ab...
Pia: Aur ab kya?
Abhay (smile): Jald bataunga.
Pia: Kab?
Abhay: Mmm...! Just wait for 4-5 days.
Pia: 4-5 days k baad kya hai?
Abhay: Mera sir hai...
Pia: Arey plz naraz to na ho. Nai puchti, ab thek hai?
Abhay: Han! Waise kya kar rai thin?
Pia: Nothing! Abi dinner kiya hai.
Abhay: Same here! Maine aaj Abhilasha k haath k bane rice pulao khaya hai. Eeewww.
Abhay k expression buhat funny hogaye.
Pia: O wow! Wo cooking b karti hai. That's great.
Abhay: Kahe ka great! Kisi din khao pata chale ga.
Pia: I already ate cake which she was made.
Abhay: Phir?
Pia: Phir kya. Hard tha but tasty tha.
Abhay (naughty): I salute you!
Pia: Just shut up Abhay! Wo acha cook karti hai bas ingrediants main garbar hojati hai.
Abhay: "Acha cook karti hai bas ingrediants main garbar hojati hai." Funny line thi na ye.
Pia: Ya to wo pulao khate nai ya Abhilasha ki burai na karo.
Abhay: O.k Madam as you say. Tumne kya dinner kiya?
Pia: Kyun?
Abhay: Janna chahta hun k tum kya dinner lena pasand karti ho.
Pia: Maine vegetable curry with fried rice aur gulab jamun ka dinner kiya hai. Waise main sab kha leti hun sirf ginti ki do teen vegetables nai khati.
Abhay: Chalo ye to pata chala k Madam kya khati hain. Well, dinner ka menu to bohat acha hai. Nice haan.
Pia: Agni ne menu banaya tha aur gulab jamun to unhone khud banai. Mujhe b sikhai.
Abhay ko laga k wo kisi un dekhi aaj main jhulas raha hai.
Abhay: Pia! I have to go, bye.
He logout and shut down his system.
FLASHBACK OVER.
Abhay: Agni! Kal tum haro ge aur main jeetun ga. Phir main tumhe Pia k aas paas b nai aane dunga. And i mean it.
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Sid (in head): Maithli! Kal main tumse naye rishte ka aaghaz karunga, hamari dosti ka. Kal se tum apne dil ki har baat sirf mujhse share karogi.
Sid smile.
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Agni look stars with myist eyes.
"Phir ek aziat bhara din(painful day) kyun? Ye kala aasman, ye chand mere har dukh k saathi hain. Mere aansun, meri muskurahat k gawah hain, mere dost hain. Sitaron tum jante ho mera dukh, phir batao mujhe kaise main muskuraon, kaise? Dua karna k mere dukh mujh tak rahen. Mere dukh ki aanch mere aas paas k logon ko na chue."
Tears droping from his eyes. He close his eyes to save tears in it.
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