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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Okies take ur time! shall be waiting😳

thank u...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne
really nice update...please continue soon..eagerly waiting...and ya...thanks for the PM...😃

thank u so much...

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
thnx for d pm
gr8t 👏👏
cont soon
updt soon

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Wow Amazing update.
poor piya n her mom it was very sad story
omg how will Abhay react when he comes to know that his mom n dad n brother are vampires.
thanls for the pm
precap eagerly waiting its very interesting.
sorry for late reply. no problem😊

thank u so much shivani...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

thanks...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: deshdeewani
sorry for being so late.holding ears. no problem😊
update was very nice.
luved it.😊
finally the truth is out.
mudhu is sooo cheap.and arnab i can't belive this.after all this he is acting goody goody with piya.disgusting.hate them.😡
abhilasha abhi tak agni ka haal puchne nahi aayi.why?
and why is rajiv sahai is with maithli?kya wo janta hai kay piya aur maithli alag alag hain?aur konse jawab kay baray mein baat kar raha tha wo?😕plz sid kay saath kuch bura mat karna.
really feel sorry for sid.hope abhay don't react badly with him after knowing the truth.
plz give us a cute abhiya scene😍 and sure
agni-abhilasha proper mulakat.😍 sure
waiting eagerly for the next.
update soon and
thanks fr the pm.😊

thank u so much ...

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
Nyc dr... Cont soon

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

soo much guys for your precious comments and support...

glad you all like my ff...

really thankful to you all...

for updating late... 😭

i know i said i update next chapter yesterday but i can't update coz of time shortage...

plz ...

now finally i update chapter 18 today...

chapter 18 is on next page...

do read, hit like button and leave your precious comments... 😊

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Dobriyal House:

Madhu move to and fro in room. She look tense.
Madhu: Agar mujhe pata hota k ye larki meri musibat ko khatam karne k bajaye khud musibat ban jayegi to main usey ghayab hi na karti.
Arnab: Abhi b waqt hai sab kuch bata dete hain Pia ko.
Madhu: Tum pagal hogaye ho? Kya bataoge? Han?
Arnab: Yehi k Pia k parents...
Madhu: Just shut up Arnab!
Arnab: Main ab pachta raha hun Madhu.
Madhu: Tum pachtate raho, tumhari waja se main apni bachi ko mout k mun main nai dal sakti, samjhe.
Madhu gave him angry look and leave.

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Raichand Mansion:

Chand check his important files. Haseena kept his important things in his travel bag.
Haseena: Chand! Sab rakh diya hai maine.
Chand: Thanx Haseena!
Haseena: Your welcome!
Chand: Haseena! Main ek week k liye ja raha hun to kyun na tum Sid se baat karo uski shaadi ko lekar.
Haseena: Lekin Chand...
Chand: No Haseena! I think Tina is perfect for him. She is orphan, na koi friend na koi janne wala. Hum apna vansh aage barha sakte hain. Tina is perfect for this.
Haseena: Chand! Tina is dumb and deaf.
Chand: I know! That is great for us. Na wo hamari baatein sun sakegi na hi kisi ko wo bata sakegi jo wo dekhegi.
Haseena: Wo pehle hi itni takleef main hai hum usey aur takleef kyun den? Uska mis use kyun karen.
Chand: Haseena plz! Stop pretending emotional.
Haseena sigh.

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At Hospital:

Agni: Its impossible.
Abhay: It is possible.
Agni: No! Its not.
Abhay: Yes! It is.
Agni: I am sorry.
Abhay: Plz...
Agni: Not at all.
Maithli get bored to saw this. Pia enter.
Abhay: I promise aap khush hojayenge.
Agni (fake coughing): "Aap"? Abhay tumhari tabiyat thek hai?
Abhay: Topic change na karen. Han kahen.
Agni: Nahi!
Pia to Metz: Ye ho kya raha hai?
Metz: Abhay, Agni ko apne ghar le jana chahta hai for best care.
Pia (happy): Really?
Metz: Tum itna khush kyun ho? Agni ki care main usse ziyada achi kar sakti hun.
Pia quietly saw her. Who look disagree with Abhay.
Abhay: Plz! Acha sirf ek din. Agar ek din main aap better feel karen to wahin ruk jana nai to wapis aajana o.k?
Metz: Abhay! Are you mad? Fractures hue hain inhen. Yahan wahan k khel main inko kuch hogaya to?
Abhay disappointed. Agni saw Pia's face expressions, looks unhappy.
Agni: O.k, fine! Only in 1 condition. Jab main bolon tab mujhe mere ghar puhncha dogey.
Abhay (whispering): Isi bahane ghar ka pata mil jayega "yes".
Agni: What?
Abhay: Nothing and yah as you say.
Pia smile. Metz walk out to show her anger. Agni saw door and sigh.

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Next Day:

Haseena: No way! Abhay tum pagal hogaye ho. Jis ghar main tumhare friends kuch pal k liye enter nai hosakte wahan tum ek patient ko lana chahte ho wo b unlimited time k liye.
Abhay: Plz Mom! You are so sweet. I love u naa and u buhat saara love me... Plz.
Haseena: Stop buttering.
Abhay: Main bol chuka hun Agni ko.
Haseena: Mujhse puch k kaha tha?
Abhay: Plz Mom! Wo aaj jis halat main hain sab meri waja se plz. Apni ghalti sudharne ka ek moqa mila hai mujhe plz.
Haseena: Abhay tum Chand ko jante ho.
Abhay (interrupt): Ofcourse! He is my Dad. Lekin Mom meri yaddasht nai khoyi.
Haseena: Tum mujhe koi sentence complete kyun nai karne dete. Chand tumhari waja se mujhe ghar se nikal denge ek din.
Abhay: Aapko ghar se nikal diya to unko chain kaise aayega. Neend b nai aayegi. Jab aap kaam se out of town jati hain wo raat ko pure ghar main "Aatma Shanti Ram" ban k ghumte rehte hain.
Haseena: Tumse kis ne kaha aur ye "Aatma Shanti Ram" koun hai?
Abhay: Maine khud dekha hai darr b gaya tha main aur "A.S.R" hamare college ka purana chokidar hai buhat khaufnak dikhta hai.
Haseena: Abhay!
Abhay: Plz Mom!
Haseena: "Only ek week". Chand out of town gaye hain sirf isliye ijazat de rai hun.
Abhay: Ek week? Mmm o.k na hone se hona behtar. O.k Mom! Thank you.
Haseena: Your welcome.

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Abhay is soo happy coz his Pia came at his home. He sung a song "Dil ye bekarar kyun hai" but Abhilasha start passing comments.

Abhay: Kyun raaton ko main ab chain se so na sakun oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Aaj kal machar b to buhat hain.
Abhay: Kyun aata nai mujhe din main b chain o sukoon oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Garmi jo hai.
Abhay: Kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karun oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Dorey jo parte hain.
Abhay: Kyun tu jo bole koi sune na wo main hi sunun...
Abhilasha: Kisi b angle se insaan jo nai lagte.
Abhay: Dil ye bekarar kyun hai...
Abhilasha: B.P low hogaya hai.
Abhay: Is pe dhun sawar kyun hai...
Abhilasha: Dhun hi sawar hosakti hai musical instruments k liye jaga jo nai hai.
Abhay: Kyun hai ye khumar kyun hai tu bata...
Abhilasha: Bhaang jo pi rakhi hai tumne.

Abhay: Cheeni! Bhar main jao. Itne ache gane ka bera gharq kar diya.
Abhilasha: Lo wo to tab hi hogaya tha jab tumne gana gane ka socha.
Abhay: Cheeni tum...
Abhilasha uchalti kudti jane lagi.
Abhilasha sung:

"Main chali, Main chali,
Dekho Pia ki gali,
Mujhe roko na abhi,
Main chali, Main chali."

Abhay's mind click "PIA".
He want to say something but Abhilasha start again.

"Na na na Abhay na,
Mujhse favour na mangna,
Maithli boli thi mujhe,
Akele aana so,
Main chali, Main chali."

Abhilasha gone. Abhay put his hand on head.
Abhay: Maithli...?

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Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago

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khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Next Day:

After Chand leaving. Sid and Abhay came with Maithli, Pia and Agni. He is on stracher. Abhilasha saw them. She didn't expect k Agni waqai aajayega.
Abhilasha: OMG! "Wo aaye hamare ghar khuda ki qudrat hai, Kabhi hum unki toti haddiyon ko to kabhi un k phate sir ko dekhte hain."
Haseena (warn): Abhilasha!
Abhilasha: Sorry Mom!
Abhay introduce Haseena to Agni, Maithli and Pia. After saw Maithli and Pia, Haseena feel something creepy.
Haseena: Abhay aur Sid tum apne dost ko room main le jao. I think he need rest.
Abhay and Sid do as Haseena say. Haseena saw both sisters. Both give her thankful smile.
Haseena: Aap log baitho main khane ki arrangement karwati hun.
Haseena leave. Abhilasha came towards them.
Abhilasha: Wow! Mujhe yakin nai aaraha. Jab bhai ne kaha k tum yahan aarahi ho tab b nai.
Pia (smile): Yakin karlo meri sweet si tutifruity.
Maithli smile. Pia and Abhilasha hug each other.

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Sid and Haseena came away from Raichand mansion.
Sid: Yah Mom! Ab kahiye kya kehna tha aapko?
Haseena: Sid! We know k hum koun hain phir aise main un logon ko yahan laana...?
Sid: Its o.k Mom.
Haseena: Its not o.k. Agar unhen pata chal gaya to...?
Sid: Mom! Abhay aur Cheeni b to hain. Kya unhen ab tak pata chala? Nai na. So, just relax. Now, tell me actual matter plz.
Haseena: Sid...(sigh) Chand chahte hain k hamari generation aage barhe.
Sid: Main kuch samjha nai.

On Other Hand:

Abhay starring Pia. Pia's eyes closed. She resting on sofa. Abhilasha is in garden. She want to make a bouquet so she plucking different types of flowers and roses. Maithli went to Dobriyal house. Agni rest in room which give by Sid.
Abhay: Pia!
Pia (open her eyes): Hmmm! Kuch kehna hai?
Abhay: Han! Wo... Tumhen neend aarai hai?
Pia: What? Abhay main rest karte karte sogayi thi aur tum mujhe utha k puch rahe ho k mujhe neend aarai hai?
Pia look angry.
Abhay (in mind): Looking so cute.
Pia: Abhay! Kya hua?
Abhay (in mind): Kya bataun? Na ye bata sakta hun k tumhare bhai ki ye halat maine ki hai aur na ye keh pa raha hun k main tumse buhat pyar karta hun.(sigh)
Abhay: Nothing! Main aata hun thori dair main.
Abhay bahar ki taraf jane laga.

On Other Hand:

Chand forget his file and his meeting postpond for some hours. So, he came back to Raichand mansion. Abhilasha saw him. Bouquet drop from her hand. She saw him and run towards inside from back side door coz Chand can easily saw front entrance. Abhilasha running suddenly her feet slip and she drop in pool.

Another Side:

Abhay move towards entrance he saw Chand. His eyes become wide. He run towards Pia. Pia saw Abhay who run towards her and look affraid.
Abhay: Pia! Bhago.
Pia: What?
Abhay: Chalo bhago. Bhagte bhagte batata hun, chalo.
He hold her hand and run towards Agni's room.
(betweem running)
Abhay: Pia! Mere Dad aagaye hain. Unhen pata nai hai tum logon k bare main. Wo yahan kisi ki entry allow nai karte stay to buhat dur ki baat hai.
They stand infront of Agni's room. They both are panting.
Pia: Hoo! Tum... Mujhe ab bata rahe ho you...
Abhay (interrupt): Plz thori dair k liye apne bhai ko chupao.
Pia: But...
Abhay: No but plz. Hamen unhen chupana parega. Dad ko zara b shak hogaya to wo Mom pe ghussa honge. Plz for my Mom.
Pia: O.k! Kya karen?
Abhay: Tum andar jao main stracher lata hun jo hospital se aayi thi.
Pia: Wo wapis le kar nai gaye?
Abhay gave her naughty look.
Pia: Oh God! Abhay tum pagal ho? Tumne stracher churali?
Abhay: Han! Apne pados main ek aunty hain un k liye. Kya pata tha k ye hojayega. Main le k aata hun.
Pia (think): Stracher problem kar sakti hai. Jo wheel chair Maithli layi thi us se help leti hun.

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Dobriyal House:

Maithli enter. She feel hate for then. That Dobriyals play a beast role in her family life. She listen Jay's voice which is full of proud. She came near door. They all are sit in Jay's room.
Punchi: Really Jay!
Jay: Yap! Us Agni ki to watt lag gayi hai. I'm so happy. Jab jab wo Agni Abhilasha k saath nazar aata tab tab mere seene main aag lag jati.
Misha: But Abhilasha hi Agni k paas mandlati rehti thi. Agni to us se dur rehne ki koshish karta tha.
Jay: Waja chahe jo b ho. Ab Agni Abhilasha aur Abhay se nafrat karne lagega coz us Abhilasha k liye hi to Abhay ne usey itna maara.
Maithli's mind click: Ise kis ne bataya k ye sab Abhay ne kiya? Us din b ye Abhay k ghusse k bare main bol raha tha to kahin isi ne to...
Punchi: Whatever! Isi liye ye Pia b sara waqt ghayab rehti hai.
Misha: Hogi apne us Agni k paas.
All laugh in cheap way.
Maithli: Bloody b****!
Jay: Main har haal main Abhilasha ko hasil karna chahta hun. Kya tum log mera saath dogey?
Misha: Wo mujhe kuch khas pasand nai hai but anything for you Jay.
Punchi: Yah! Anything for you bro aur is tarah hum Pia se uski new best friend ko alag kar sakte hain.
Jay: Oh yah ofcourse! Mujhe Abhilasha k saath Pia ki friendship pasand nai.
Misha: So, Miss Pia! Be ready kyun k hum tumhari pehli aur akhri friend ko tumse buhat jald dur karne wale hain.
Maithli move towards Pia's room. She decided.
Maithli: Jay! Tumhe to aisa sabaq sikhaungi k dobara mere bhai ko ungli b touch nai kar sakoge. Pia ka tum log kuch nai bigar sakte. Main jo hun tumhari har chal tum pe ultane k liye. Abhilasha tumhe ab kabhi nai milegi Jay. Punchi aur Misha! Wait and watch. Tumse tumhari pehli aur sab se bari wish main kaise drop karwati hun.
Maithli smile for revenge.

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago

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