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Posted: 13 years ago

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ABHAY'S ROOM:

Abhay is sleeping. A cute smile on his face coz he saw Pia in dream suddenly Abhay's face expressions turn worried and tensed. He wake with a shout.
Abhay: Ye kya tha?
Abhay want to ignore and sleep again but he fails to do this.


ON THE OTHER HAND:

ABHILASHA'S ROOM:

Abhilasha (talk with herself): Uff! Ye Pia ka cousion Jay??? Meri jaan se chipak gaya hai, Kanton wala chuha na ho to. What would i do yaar? Pia se bhi help nai le sakti warna wo Punchi aur Misha usey aur pareshan karengi. Bhai aur Abhay ko bataya to wo us Jay ko maar dalenge. Haye! Kaash koi hero hi meri life main aa jaye to mere to Balley Baleey te Shava Shava hojaye. Is waqt kya karun? Sab so rahe hain agar wo saryal Agni sirf Agni hota na to usi se gappey lagati. Mmm... Pia! Han Pia se baat karti hun.
She dial Pia's number but no response.
Abhilasha: Pia lagta hai so gayi hai but mobile kyun off kara usne?
She thinking about her.


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Pia sit in a room which is dark. wo ro rahi thi kyun k usey darr lag raha tha. Khouf se uski aawaz bhi nai nikal rahi thi. Wo kisi ko pukarna chahti thi lekin kis ko? Koi bhi to aisa nahi tha. Abhay aur Abhilasha ye to abhi uski life main dost ban kar aaye they, wo haq hi kitna rakhti thi un par.
Ab usey apne parents yaad aa rahe the.
Pia (crying): Mammm...maa! Pappp...ppa! Kahan hain appp? Mujhe bbb...bu...hat darrr lag raha hai. Ppp...pleasee! ppplzzz! Aaap wap...wapas aaa...jayen. Muujjh...mujhe ya...yah...yahan se le jayen. Mujhe darr lag raha hai Mamma! Mujhe yahan buhat darr lag raha hai Papa.
She crying when a sound came from door. Door open, she saw a man stand but not recognize him bcoz a light came from his back.
Pia: Kkk...kon haiii?
He move towards and Pia move back.
He said: Take it easy Pia! Daro mat. Main tumhe koi nuqsaan nai pohchaunga.
Pia shockly Stand. Wo to apna wehem samjhi thi lekin ye aawaz.
Pia: No! Ye sach nai hosakta. Ye sach nai hosakta. Tum Aaag...
He said: Han main Agni.
(Koi room ki ek light on kar deta hai. Pia ko Agni ka chehra saaf nazar aagaya. Wo bilkul us k samne ek fit k fasley se khara tha.)
Agni: Sorry Pia! Lekin ye sach hai.
Pia aren't bear this truth and faint. Agni hold her to save her from falling on earth.


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NEXT DAY:

IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE:

Madhu, Punchi, Misha, Jay aur Arnab sab ek saath baithey thay. Unhen subha hi pata chala k Pia raat se ghayab hai. Arnab was worried. Madhu and child soo relaxed.
Arnab: Samajh nai aa raha kahan ja sakti hai wo? Aur is watchman ki to... duty k paise leta hai ya sone k??? Abhi chutti karta hun iski.
Madhu: Watchman ko kuch kehne ka koi faida nai hai. Meri samajh main to ye baat nai aa rahi k Pia itni shameless hogayi k raat bhar ghar se bahar... oh God! sharam nai aayi usey... Arnab! agar Pia ki waja se meri betiyon pe bura asar para ya logon ne uss Pia ki waja se meri bachiyon ko kuch kaha to ye main kabhi bardasht nai karungi. Understand.
Arnab: Madhu tum kya...
Madhu (cut sentence): Ek baat kaan khol k sun lo ab main Pia ko iss ghar main hargiz nai aane dungi. Pata nai kis k saath gulcharrey uraney wo gayi hai.
Arnab: Oh! Stop it Madhu! Kya bole ja rahi ho?
Punchi: Papa! Ap mom se aise baat nai kar sakte. Kya ghalat kaha unhone?
Arnab: Oh! To ab ye mujhe tum sikhaogi k main kis se kaise baat karun?
Jay: Punchi di ka ye matlab nai thi aap ghalat mean le rahe hain.
Misha: Aur nai to kya. Waise bhi jahan Pia ho wahan hamare papa kuch ziyada hi touchy ho jate hain.
Arnab (in head): Pata nai Pia kis haal main hai aur kahan hai? Kaash past main wo gunah nai kiya hota to aaj Pia... (Arnab lambi aah.. bharta hai.)
Suddenly door bell ring.


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RAICHAND MANSION:

Abhay: Ye weekend kyun aata hai?
Abhilasha: Han! Aaj se pehle weekend itna bura kabhi nai laga.
Sid: Kya baat hai? Aaj to dono ko weekend bura lag raha hai wo bhi un dono ko jin ka kehna ye tha k ek week main six weekend aane chahiyen.
Abhay: Very funny!
Abhilasha: You know what bahi main kal se apni friend ko call kar rahi hun but uska cell off ja raha hai. Now, i'm bored.
Sid: May be wo busy ho. (Sid uth k bahar chala gaya.)
Abhay (in head): Busy hunh! Us Agni k kehne pe cell off kiya hoga. Jab dekho wo Agni Pia ko teaching karta hua nazar aata hai. Dekh lunga us ko main.
(Abhay aur Abhilasha nashta kar rahe haote hain jab Sid bhagta hua andar aata hai.)
Haseena: Kya hua?
Sid: Mom! Plz save me. Mrs. Chadda mere pichey aa rahi hain. I want to hide. Help me Zalimo (Abhay and Abhilasha.)
Abhay and Abhilasha both are laughing.


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Pia open her eyes. She saw Agni who look in pain.
Agni: Are you o.k? Ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?
(Pia uth k baith gayi. Tears rolling in her eyes.)
Agni: Tum fresh hojao main tumhare liya nashta lekar aata hun.
Pia: Kuch nai khana mujhe.
Agni: Listen! Tum abhi depress ho. Hum baad main baat karte hain. o.k?
(Pia bed pe se utar k Agni k samne ja khari hui.)
Pia: Kyun? Kyun baad main baat karte hain? Abhi kyun nai?
Agni: Iss waqt main tumse kuch nai kehna chahta.
Pia: Kyun nai kehna chahte? Han, Kyun? Sharam aa rahi hai? Frienship jaise sache rishte main dhoka de kar sharam aa rahi hai? Kyun laye hain mujhe yahan wo bhi is tarah?
Agni: Pehli baat maine tumhe koi dhoka nai diya k mujhe sharam aaye aur dusri baat tumhe nuqsaan pohchane k liye nai laya yahan. So, Plz.
Pia: Wah! Nuqsaan pohchane k liye nai laya... "Pia! Yahan ki drink mat pina", "Pia! Akele suraj dobney k baad ghar se mat nikalna", "Pia! Har kisi pe aankh band kar k bharosa mat karna", "Pia! Kisi bhi anjaan shaks se lift mat lena". Ye hi saari baaten kahin thin na aap ne mujhse aur aap ne hi mujhe...
(Pia quite for a while, then she ask.)
Pia: Adhi raat ko mujhe mere hi ghar se iss tarah utha k lane ka maqsad?
Agni: Main tumhara bhala chahta hun iss liye...
Pia (Interrupted): Iss liya aap mujhe adhi raat ko utha k le aaye, wo bhi mere hi ghar se. Ek bar bhi nai socha k mujhe na paa kar kya soch rahe honge sab? Ye bhala karna tha mera, Jawab dain?
Agni: I know k mera tarika buhat ghalat tha but plz try to understand me. Main yun tumhe kidnap kar k nai lana chahta tha lekin halaat kuch aise hogaye the k...
Pia: K Aap mujhe utha k le aaye, han? Aap ne socha seedhi tarah faida uthane main time lage ga so, kyun na kidnap hi karlun? Boliye?
Agni shockly saw her. A sudden impact of anger hit him and he give a tight slap on Pia's face, voice of slap echo in room.
Agni: Pppiaaa! Ye kya keh rahi ho?
Pia (Putting hand on her face): Wohi jo sach hai. Aap mujhe yahan mera faida uthane k liye laye hain.(Shout)
Agni(Shout): Stop it Pia! Shut up! Itni ghalat baat kaise keh di tumne? Cheee
Pia: To phir kyun laye hain mujhe? Mujhe sirf sach janna hai. Warna main mar jaungi, jaan de dungi apni.
Agni: Thek hai sach bataunga tum ko lekin pehle kuch kha lo.
Pia: Nahi! Sach jane bina main paani bhi nai piyungi. Iss waqt mujhe sirf sach janna hai.
Agni (give up): Thek hai tumhe sach janna hai to suno...
(Agni usey sab bata deta hai. Pia shocked reh jati hai.)


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DOBRIYAL HOUSE:

Door bell still ringing.
Madhu: Kya musibat hai.
Madhu open door and freeze for a second.
Madhu: Tummm...


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PRECAP:
No Precap.


hope u all like it, plz leave ur comments.😃

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww.,... HILLARIOUS UPDATE DII:-):-) Abhay and Abhilasha laughs at sid hehehehe thats SO SWEET:-):-) And that Agni OMG:O why he kidnap Pia?? Wats the metter??? HOPE PIA WILL FINE:-):-):-) BUT WHY YOU ENDED HERE DI?? Cant wait for next part now...,...
Edited by rashi.rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nyc dr!!!!

its really gr8!!!!
abhay n abhilasha are missing pia!!!!
pia is already in so much pain!!!!!
y agni kidnaped pia????
now i m curious about his real intention!!!
waiting 4 d next part!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update dear. Thankx for the pm.
Edited by Jiya_tariq - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow!!!! jst awesome... wats coming nxt waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..loved it! M very eager to knw why has agni kidnapped piya...i hope piya is fine..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm the story is getting quite mysterious.
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Posted: 13 years ago
agni kiddnaped pia
i wonder y?
loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update..
Abhay-abhilasha-sid convo was great..bechara sid..mrs.chadda uske peeche..haha
OMG !! Agni kidnapped piya but why??
Madhu n her children r so insensitive..
Continue soon
thanx for d pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Khwahish 🤗 nice update so it was Agni who kidnapped Pia so my guess was right I thought it wanna know why he did so n Abhay n Abhilasha 😆luv them like alwayys n this Madhu n her kids i better keepmy mouth shut 😡 waiting for next n dont take so long next time n thanx for pm😊

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