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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome...loved it...

u knw the song written in ur update is one of my fav...i always wanted to see abhiya dancing on this song

WOW THATS GREAT WELL ABHIYAROCKZ SUGGEST SONG AND SHE WROTE WHOLE DANCE SEQUENCE..and i got ur update...loved abhiya..their dance was like a dream...

now i hope..piya is not troubled by panchi and misha..update soon..thanks for pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

So Abhay is finally falling 4 Pia.And I guess now panchi & mish will take revenge frm Pia & Abhay ka toh Pia k liye prospective hii change ho gaya.I guess Pia is ignoring abhilasha as she lied 2 her,I hope abhilasha clear everything.Waiting 4 nxt update๐Ÿ˜ณ

NICE U PREDICT WELL ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

Danger striking 4 pia huh?? Awesome dear.. Eid mubarak

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

when r u updating dr!!!!

akshi maine ajj update karne ka socha tha but yahan load shedding bohat zayada ho rahi hai so i pakka kal updating๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annokhi

akshi maine ajj update karne ka socha tha but yahan load shedding bohat zayada ho rahi hai so i pakka kal updating๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜†

oks dr!!!! kal pakka!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
i will be waiting!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

nice part ...continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deshdeewani

hai!!just read ur whole stry.and this is extremely vry vry vry beautifull.๐Ÿ‘

u r a fablous writer.โญ๏ธ
and now all i m doing is just imagning this. 
plz!plz!plz!update soon.
waiting eagerly fr next.
plz!update soon.๐Ÿ˜Š

AND WELCOME๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
O.K I TRY TO UPDATE NOW AKSHI๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Abhay walk in road, saw moon with mist eyes and recall all moments with Pia from first meet to tonight meet. Smiling and feel unexpectable feelings which is now for him.



I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
don't wont to miss u, even a while

My life is so beautiful cause
Dear, its you..My LIFE

Hug me for my worries to die
my tears to dry and
my loneliness to fly

It hurts me to know
how i sometimes can be a little selfish
when it comes to you.

I am getting sentimental over you!
for god sake explain me why all this..

I miss you every moment of the day,
I keep me awake just to listen to you,
I keep me empty just for you to fill,
i keep me alive just to see you.

My mornings miss you,
my evenings seeks you
Where were you all these years,
why weren't there to wipe me tears.

Fear of the future is worst then pain of the past
still I bother the least, cause you are there

even seconds are too long to miss you
I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
don't wont to miss u, even a while



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NEXT DAY:


IN RAICHAND MANSION:

Sid go to Abhay's room for woke him up. He enter in room, look towards him and shock bcoz in the whole life of him first time he saw that Abhay is giggling during sleep.
Sid: Abhay! Wake up.
Sid (again): Abhay! Wake up yaar.
Sid pull Abhay's leg and Abhay drop from his bed.
Abhay: Haye! mar gaya. Kya bhai itna acha dream tha, main bas lene hi wala tha.
Sid: Kya?
Abhay: Kisss... Kisi ki books lene wala tha.
Sid: Tum aur books? Wo b kisi aur ki? I can't believe it.
Abhay: Uff! Subha hi subha mood mat kharab karo.
Sid: O.K! Jaldi karo aaj shaam ko dad aa rahe hain so, be in Raichand's limit.
Abhay (chir kar): Fine!
Sid smiles and dial a new number which is Maithli contact number and he get from her mobile when he drop her at home.
Maithli eating breakfast. Mobile ringed. She bite Paratha and recieve call.
Metz: Aelo (Hello).
Sid: Hello Maithli?
Metz: Yam... Oon? (Yes... Koun?)
Sid: Main Siddharth Raichand. Maithli baat kar rahi ho na?
Metz: Aaan... Aaa. (Haan... Naa)
Maithli ne mobile ring sunte hi big bite le liya tha parathey ka kyun k wo samajhi uss ki bua ka phone hai. Metz ki bua ki call hours se lambi hoti hai so jaan bachaney k liye liya gaya bite ab musibat ban gaya tha kyun k Metz se chewing nai horaha tha.
Sid: Now, Are you feeling better? Kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari?
Metz: Nine. (Fine)
Sid: Nice! Sorry bina bataye tumhara number le liya. Don't maind plz. Waise tumhari ye language mujhe pasand aayi, its really nice.
Metz chewing (angry): Gho To Ell. (Go To Hell)
Sid: Are you chewing? Eating breakfast?
Metz: Yan. (Yah)
Sid: O.K! Main baad main phone karta hun, o.k, Bye.
Metz: Hye. (Bye)
Sid: Hye nai Bye! Main tumhen institute main milta hun, O.K?
Metz: O.A. (O.K)
Call Disconnected.
Metz(in haed): Ye Raichand to ab kuch ziyada hi involvment kar raha hai meri life main.
Someone stand behind Metz.
"Chalo nashta pura karo thanda horaha hai. Hurry up."
Metz (replied): Hmmm.


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DOBRIYAL HOUSE:


Arnab exit from Pia's room and think.
"Kabhi kabhi lagta hai humne apne swart k liye Pia k saath buhat ghalat kiya hai. Madhu ki khudgharzi ek family ko le dubi hai aur ab... main Pia ko aise nai dekh sakta lekin main Madhu k khilaf nai ja sakta warna..."
Arnab take a long breath and move towards his office briefcase.


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RAICHAND MANSION;


Abhay and Abhilasha taken breakfast and Sid and Haseena discuss about meeting. Abhay infront of Sid and Abhilasha infront of Haseena. Rosey(maid) serve tea. Abhay look her and shock bcoz he saw Pia in place of Rosey who serve him tea. Abhay hold her hand and smile. Haseena saw Abhay.
Haseena: Abhay! Abhay leave her hand.
Abhay: Mom wo... (he look Pia but Rosey ko dekh k, he shock) Oh no.
Abhilasha (laugh): OMG! What a choice Abhay! Haath b pakra to ek maid ka.
Sid (enjoying): Aur maid b wo jis ki age above 35 hai, weight above 85kg hai aur han jo already 3, teen bachon ki maa aur do husbands ki x-wife hai.
Abhay: Very funny! Itni achi lagti hai to aap shaadi kar len naa.
Sid: Wah wah wah! Haath tumne pakra aur shaadi main karun.
Abhay: Maine to sirf haath pakra wo b ghalti se lekin aap ne to pura biodata bata diya.
Haseena: Stop it both of you. Sid! Wo chota hai, tum to bare ho so behave like mature.
Abhilasha: Matlab Abhay immature hai?
Haseena (frown at her): Don't try to divert my point.
Abhilasha make pout: O.K!
Abhay look his tea suddenly he giggled loudly and still saw in tea. Sid and Haseena look each other.
Sid: Don't you think something is wrong?
Haseena: I think we should consult a doctor for Abhay.
Sid: I agree! After meeting we consult a doctor for him.
Haseena nodded.
Abhilasha focus Abhay. Abhilasha's expressions are funny and interesting. Now, she try to saw in tea. Abhay still smiling bcoz he saw


Abhilasha: Mujhe to kuch nai dikh raha.
Abhay (chonk gaya): What?
Abhilasha: I also want to smile. Plz tell me naa kya dekh k muskura rahe ho? Mujhe to sirf chai dikh rai hai aur chai ko dekh k koun muskurata hai?
Sid (replied): Mr. Abhay Raichand aur koun!
Abhay (chirkar): Ya right! Main to antique piece hun naa.
Abhilasha: Dekha accept b kar raha hai.
Haseena enjoying siblings cute fight.


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In College:


Agni walk suddenly he stop and shock. Pia move towards him. He shockly saw that Pia's right hand bandage, mark on right side of forehead and a cut near left lip corner which is still little bleeding. She has tears on her eyes.
Agni: Pia! ye sab kaise hua?
Pia didn't reply him. Agni place his hand on her shoulder.
Agni: Pia! Kya tumhe mujh pe bharosa nai hai?
Pia start crying and hug him tightly. Abhay who just enter at this time look both. Abhay don't know why but fold his fingers as punch to control his anger. Abhilasha lose her patience and find Punchi and Misha bcoz she think that behind Pia's injuries both sisters are responsible. Rajiv Sahai come.
Rajiv S: What happend? Pia are you o.k?
Agni: Sir! She is injured. I think she need rest.
Rajiv S: Hmmm! Main rest room main Pia ko le kar ja raha hun tum first year k students ki basket ball practise main help karo. Main abhi aata hun.
Agni: O.K. Sir!
Rajiv Sahai Pia ko rest room main chorne chale gaye.

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In Canteen:


Misha and Punchi are laughing on Angad and Tracker's acts. Abhilasha look them angrily and reach on their table.
Abhilasha: What did you both have done with Pia?
Misha and Punchi stop laughing, look towards her for a second and ignore her question. Misha took her own cup of tea to drink but Abhilasha stop her and take that from Misha's hand. Abhay look all this.
Misha: What the hell? Give me back.
Abhilasha: First you tell me, What you have done with Pia and why?
Misha: Its none of ur business!
Abhilasha: It is Misha Dobriyal! It is.
Punchi: Oh really! How and who the hell are you to ask us?
Abhilasha: Pia is my friend and if she is in trouble or hurt just bcoz of you than i have the right to ask you. Now, tell me damn it! What you guys done her?
Misha: Huh... Friend! Pia (cencored)...
Abhilasha slap Misha tightly, she drop on the table.
Punchi: You bloody (cencored)...
Abhilasha want to slap Punchi but she stop her hand and take her both hands at the back and hold tightly.
Punchi: Misha slap her! (To Abhilasha) Buhat hamdardi horahi hai na us Pia se, abhi batati hun us k saath kya kiya hai. Misha just slap her.
Abhilasha tried to free her hands but not succed. Misha come towards her and want to slap but Abhay stop her hand and give her dagger looks.
Abhay: No Misha! Don't you dare to touch my sister.
All are in shock after knowing this truth.
Misha: What? Sister!
Abhay (shout): Punchi! Free her now.
Abhilasha massage her hands one by one. Abhay saw her. There is pain on Abhilasha's face.
Abhay: Don't you dare to touch her or hurt her again otherwise i'll kill you.
Abhilasha: Abhay! They both hurt Pia. She is injured bcoz of them.
Abhay: You both done nothing good! Don't even try to talk with me. Misha! This fake friendship is over now.
Abhilasha angrily saw Dobriyal sisters.
Abhay: Lets go Cheeni! You and Pia need a doctor.
Both leave. Rajiv Sahai listen whole convo and now thinking.

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Prem: Enough is enough! Now, we have to take next step as soon as possible.
Priya: Listen...
Prem cut sentence: No Priya! Not yet. Now, its time to take action not planning.
Priya: O.K but action with planning.
Prem: O.K! Talk later.
Call disconnected.

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PRECAP;

No Precap. Just think and scratch your heads whats going on next bcoz... ๐Ÿ˜‰

NOTE;

Sorry for mistakes๐Ÿ˜†



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Posted: 12 years ago

nyc dr!!!!

abhay is dreaming about pia!!!! cool yr!!!! n when sid wake up he was about 2 kiss her๐Ÿ˜† vah kya kam kiya sid ne!!!!!
n metz language was gr8!!!! loved it...  abhay ko har jagah pia nazar aa rahe hai!!!!! maid me pia n chai me pia!!!!! dat was awsum!!!! he is now love stucken!!!!
i want 2 kill misha n panchi... they hit pia!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก
n finally abahy knows how misha n panchi is n broke dere friendship!!! dats gr8...
i m imagining misha n panchi expression when dey came 2 know abhilasha is abhays sister!!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!!!
Edited by Akshi0019 - 12 years ago