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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

Omg!!! Sach mein bichare romeo juliet k play ki dhajiya ud gayi... Wonderful yaaar... I specially loved abhilashas dailouge latest zamaana hai bomb se uda do saale ko...awesome...waiting for nxt update

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

superb update..khwahish !! 👏 thanks alot

it was awesome.. 😆
hans hans kar pait mei dard hogaya...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
every scene was fab.. my pleasure
abhay in tarzan dress!! haha... & abhilasha's dialogues were hilarious!! hats off... bohat acha update tha..
precap is very interesting
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc

take care
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update...loved it...fab ya...


omg...i was laughing like stupid while reading the play...my sis thought that i have lost it...u really write comedy well...well done!! no words to describe..and abhay in tarzan dress 😆..omg...its lil difficult to imagine...but..really..u did great work...update soon..thanks for pm...

u all courage me. 😃n sorry if i disappoint to u all for romance. actually i can't write romantic scenes😆 but jahan necesory hoga wahan try zarur karun gi.😉 infact jin logon ki ff parhti hun unhi se romantic scens 😳write karna seekh rahi hun.😉
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya07

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz pm me the next tym u update

yap sure.😃
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Hey annnokhi di😃...

for making me feel so speciel



the update is jus


and the play so funny



sumthin 4 u...



😃Hope you continue soon😃

rashi i love ur this comment.
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

hahah sachi pura play ki dhajiya uda di Abhay nai.Tarzan clothes mai aa gya & Pia balcony mai latki rhi.Abhilasha rope se latak gyi ahahhah.Kya fulltoo fatak tha😆😆

hey u enjoy it thanks yaar. 😃
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hey khwaish wonderful n funny updt..loved it thanks

agni was soo sweet ...abhilasha mmuuaahh rocking as always!!
romeo juliet play ka toh sattya nas ho gaya..lol
acp assistant ranja laila majnu tarzan sab ko add kardya..
wwooww it was fun to the core!!!
i hope abhya n agni-abhilasha story will start soon !! yap it starting after 2 or 3 more updates
cant wait 4 next!!
love yaaa!! =)

take care
Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Nice update! The Romeo and Juliet play was super funny! 😆 Poor Agni, the play didn't go accordingly but I guess its all good because the audience liked it! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER # 7

( confusion )



SID AND METZ COLLIDE WITH EACH OTHER.
METZ: OUCH! DIKHAI NAI DETA KYA?
SID: SORRY! SORRY! WO MAINE DEKHA NAI K TUM SAMNE SE AA RAHI HO MAIN JALDI MAIN THA.
METZ: EXCUSE ME! AAP SE TUM? BE IN UR LIMIT.
SID: LEKIN FRIENDSHIP MAIN "AAP" BOHAT ODD LAGTA HAI, NAI?
METZ: FRIENDSHIP MAIN ODD LAGTA HAI, ZABARDASTI KI FRIENDSHIP MAIN NAI.
SID: YE ZABARDASTI KI FRIENDSHIP HAI?
METZ: MERI MARZI KI B NAI HAI.
SID QUIET SUDDENLY, METZ NOTICE.
METZ: WELL, ITNI JALDI MAIN KAHAN JA RAHE THE? MAINE TO AAJ KOI SHARARAT NAI KI.
SID: NO WO..., I JUST WANT TO ASK YOU THAT KIYA TUM MERE SAATH LUNCH PE CHALOGI?
METZ: SORRY MAIN SHOPPING PE JA RAHI HUN SOOO.
SID TAKE LONG BREATH "AAHHH".
METZ: I THINK DINNER PE CHALTE HAIN, WHAT SAY?
SID(HAPPY): OH! YA SURE, WHY NOT. THANX O.K. MAIN TUMHE JOGGING PARK KI SIDE SE PICK KAR LUNGA, O.K?
METZ: SURE! NOW, CAN I GO?
SID: YA! YAH!
METZ LEAVE AND SID SMILES.

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AFTER RECIVING AWARD.

RAJIV SAHAI CLEARED ALL CONFUSION TO ABHAY AND ALL OTHER STUDENTS.
RAJIV SAHAI: WAISE TO HUM ROMEO AND JULIET KA PLAY KARNE JA RAHE THE LEKIN MUJHE KUCH AISI INFORMATION MILI JIS K BAAD MUJHE YAQIN HO GAYA K YE KUCH B BAN SAKTA HAI BUT ROMEO JULIET KA ROMENTIC PLAY NAI BAN SAKTA ISI LIYE MAINE IS PLAY KO CREATIVE CATEGORY MAIN ADD KARWAYA AUR AAP SAB KO TO PATA HAI K IS COMPITITION KI YE CATEGORY PARTICIPENTS KI ACTING SKILLS AUR UNIQUE IDEAS PE DEPEND KARTI HAI JIS MAIN KISI B SERIOUS, ROMENTIC AUR DUSRI TARAH KI STORY AUR DRAMA KO NEWLY CREATE KAR K UNIQUE IDEAS K SAATH PERFORM KIYA JATA HAI.
ABHAY: SIR! AAP KIS INFO KI BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN? AUR AAP NE CATEGORY CHANGE KARDI HUMEN BATAYA B NAI, THAT'S NOT FAIR SIR.
RAJIV SAHAI ENJOY ABHAY AND HIS GANG EXPRESSIONS, LOOK TOWARDS AGNI AND SAID.
RAJIV SAHAI: AREY YAR! TUMNE INHE BATAYA NAI. DEKHO SAB K CHEHRE KITNE PARESHAN LAG RAHE HAIN. NEXT TIME AISA MAT KARNA.
AGNI: O.K SIR!
RAJIV SAHAI: CHALO AB ACHE BACHON KI TARAH FLASH BACK MAIN JAO AUR INKI CONFUSION DUR KARO.
AGNI SMILE AND SAID.


FLASHBACK:


ABHAY TO HIS GANG: KOI B DIALOGUES YAAD NAI KAREGA INFACT US AGNI KA KOI SA B ORDER KOI NAI MANEGA. O.K FRIENDS?
ALL: SURE! WHY NOT.
ABHAY: GOOD! AB KYA KAROGE UNCLE.


FLASHBACK OVER.


AGNI LOOK AT ABHAY WHO IS IN SHOCKED. HE SMILE AND SAID.
AGNI: HAIRAN MAT HO BATATA HUN K MUJHE KAISE PATA CHALA.
ALL AND SPECIALLY PIA WAIT FOR HIS ANSWER.
AGNI: MAIN US DIN TUM LOGON KO PRACTISE K LIYE BULANE AAYA THA TO MAINE TUM LOGON KI SAARI BAATEN SUN LI THIN.
RAJIV SAHAI: AUR YE SIDHA MERE PAAS AAYA, MUJHE TUM LOGON KI PLANNING K BARE MAIN BATAYA ISI LIYE MAINE CATEGORY CHANGE KARDI.
SAB K MUN SE EK AWAZ NIKLI "HAWWW"
RAJIV SAHAI: WHY HAWW! AGAR TUM LOG NAUGHTY HO TO MAIN DOUBLE NAUGHTY HUN AUR WAISE B ITNA TO BANTA HAI KYUN AGNI?
AGNI: BILKUL SIR AUR APKE IS FAISLEY K SAHI HONE K SABOOT B MIL GAYE THE AUR YAQIN B PAKKA HOGAYA THA. FOR EXAMPLE, TUMHARA PRACTISE K DARMIYAN SERIOUS NA HONA, TUM SAB KA SCRIPT DEKH K DIALOGUE DELIVER KARNA YAAD KARNE K BAJAYE, ROMEO KA DRESS AUR ROMEO KA LAST MINUTE PE GHAYAB HOJANA.
AGNI SMILE.
ABHAY(WHISPERING TO HIM): SO WHAT UNCLE! WINNER TO PHIR B HUM HAIN, NOT YOU.
JAY, PUNCHI AND MISHA INVITE ALL.
"HEY GUYS! AAJ HAMARE GHAR MAIN EK PARTY. SO, ALL ARE INVITED. SIR YOU ALSO."
JAY TO ABHILASHA: PLZ! AANA ZARUR. MAIN WAIT KARUNGA TUMHARA.
ABHILASHA: OFCOURSE! MAIN ZARUR AAUNGI BUT PIA K LIYE JUST PIA K LIYE.
SHE LEAVE.
JAY(SMILE): KISI K LIYE B AAO. AFTER ALL PARTY IS JEET KI KHUSHI K LIYE NAI SIRF TUMHARE LIYE ARRANGE KARWA RAHA HUN.
MISHA AND PUNCHI: PLZ ABHAY! REACH ON TIME.
ABHAY(IN HEAD): THANK GOD! DAD OUT OF TOWN HAIN AAJ AUR ENJOY KAR LETA HUN KAL K BAAD TO WO DYNAMITE AUR UNKE DANGEROUS RULES HI SAR PR SAEAR RAHENGE.
ABHAY: SURE!
ALL ARE INVITED BUT NO ONE CAN INVITE AGNI BCOZ OF THIS PIA FEEL SO BAD SO, SHE WENT TOWARDS HIM.
AGNI: SORRY PIA! TUMHE WO SAB IS LIYE NAI BATAYA K TUM CHUPA NAI PATIN AUR MAIN NAI CHAHTA THA K TUM KISI PROBLEM MAIN PHANSO.
PIA: ITS O.K! I CAN UNDERSTAND. ACTUALLY MAIN APKO INVITE KARNE AAYI THI. PLZ, AGAR AAJ SHAAM KO AAP B DOBRIYAL HOUSE PARTY MAIN AAYENGE TO MUJHE ACHA LAGEGA.
AGNI: BUT...
PIA: PLZ!
AGNI: O.K! I'LL TRY.
PUNCHI, MISHA AND JAY ANGRILY SAW PIA.


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"MAINE JO KAHA WO SAMAJH LIYA NA, THEK HAI. MILO MUJH SE WAHAN. O.K." SOMEONE SAY
REPLY FROM ANOTHERONE.
"THEK HAI. DON'T WORRY MUJHE PATA HAI K MUJHE KYA KARNA HAI. TUM MERA INTIZAR KARO."
CALL DISCONNECTED.


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MISHA, PUNCHI, JAY, T, KABIR, INFACT ALL ARE GOING FOR SHOPPING IN SAME MALL BUT IN SEPARATE SHOPS.
AGNI ENTR IN MALL FOR BUYING A GIFT FOR PIA BCOZ SHE WON. AFTER FEW MINUTES ABHAY AND ABHILASHA ENTER IN MALL. ABHAY FOR ABHILASHA'S SHOPPING AND HIS OWN DRESS FOR PARTY AND ABHILASHA FOR SHOPPING AND PIA'S GIFT.
AFTER FEW MINUTES METZ ENTER FOR BUYING A DRESS FOR DINNER (BCOZ SHE HAS NO TIME FOR PREPARE DRESS IN SHORT NOTICE) AND SHE ALREADY HAVE PLAN FOR SHOPPING AND AT THE ACCURATE TIME JUST BEHIND TWO STEP OF METZ PIA ENTER. MR. DOBRIYAL GAVE HER SOME MONEY AT MORNING SO, SHE WANT TO BUYING SOMETHING FOR HER SELF.
METZ AND PIA DONO EK DUSRE K SAATH CHAL RAHI THIN SIRF DO QADAM PIA METZ SE PICHEY THI. PIA IDHAR UDHAR DEKH RAHI THI, METZ APNE CELL MAIN BUSY THI. PIA CHOSE A SHOP FOR OUTFIT AND MOVE TOWARDS IT AND METZ USE STAIRS FOR GOING UP SIDE.


(MOST IMPORTANT THING SAB GROUPS OR INDIVIDUAL AAYE HAIN KOI NAI JANTA K UN K DOST B YAHAN HAIN.)


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DOBRIYAL HOUSE:



MADHU SHOUT ON SERVENTS FOR PREPARATION OF PARTY. MISHA, JAY AND PUNCHI INFORM HER K WO COLLEGE SE MALL CHALEY GAYE THE. PIA NE MR.DOBRIYAL SE PERMISSION LI THI SO, MADHU KO KUCH NAI PATA THA.
MADHU: UFF! ITNE KAAM HAIN AUR YE LOG SHOPPING PE CHALE GAYE MAIN AKELE KYA KYA DEKHUN? AUR YE PIA? TANG AA CHUKI HUN MAIN IS LARKI SE PATA NAI KAHAN REH GAYI.
SHE DIAL CATERING NUMBER FOR DINNER ORDER.


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VAMPIRE WORLD:

1ST VAMPIRE: SAHI WAQT AA RAHA HAI. BAS AB SE US LARKI PE NAZAR RAKHO.
2ND VAMPIRE: JAISE AAP KI MARZI.
1ST VAMPIRE: PATA KARO WO HAI KAHAN?
2ND VAMPIRE: JEE!
1ST VAMPIRE: AB TUM JAO. JAB US LARKI KA PATA CHAL JAYE TAB AANA.


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PUNCHI SID KO DEKH K RUK GAYI.
PUNCHI: OMG! YE TO WOHI HAI.
SHE REMEMBER K " USKI CAR KHARAB HO GAYI THI AUR SID NE USKI HELP KI THI."
PUNCHI: WOW! WHAT A PERSONALITY! I WISH HE WILL BE MINE.
PUNCHI USEY PASAND KARNE LAGI THI LEKIN EK DO COINCIDENCE K ELAWA SID US SE KAHIN NAI MILA AUR NA HI SID NE AISI KOI KHWAHISH ZAHIR KI. PUNCHI SID KO DEKHTI RAHI AUR DUSRI TARAF JAY AUR MISHA ALAG ALAG CAHLE GAYE.


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PIA IS IN JEWELLERY SHOP FOR BUY A SIMPLE PENDENT. SID ENTER, HE CAN'T SEE PIA BCOZ SHE STAND ON ANOTHER SIDE.
SID TO SHOPKEEPER: MUJHE KUCH NAYA AUR ACHA DESIGN DIKHAIYE.
SHOPKEEPER: SIR! PENDENT OR COMPLETE SET?
SID: PENDENT!
ANOTHER SIDE:
PIA: YE WALA DIKHAIYEN.
SHOPKEEPER: ITS PRECIOUS MAM! YOU CAN'T BUY IT.
ITNI DAIR MAIN USEY PIA KI MONEY RANGE PATA CHAL GAYI THI.
PIA(UPSET): O.K, THANX!
WO BINA KUCH LIYE WAPIS JA RAHI THI. JO PENDENT USEY PASAND AAYA THA WO USKI RANGE KA NAI THA.
SID KO SHOPKEEPER NA PENDENT K LIYE DUSRI SIDE PE BHEJA JAHAN PIA KHARI THI.
SID AND PIA FACE OFF. SID ASTOUNED TO SEE HER HERE.
SID: HEY! TUM YAHAN?
PIA SHOCKLY SAW HIM.
SID: AREY! AISE KYA DEKH RAHI HO?
PIA GHABRA K WAHAN SE EK DUM BHAGI. SID NE USEY AWAZ DENI CHAHI LEKIN WO JA CHUKI THI.
SID(CONFUSED): MAITHLI MUJHE AISE KYUN DEKH RAHI THI?


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SOMEONE: ARE YOU READY?
ANOTHERONE: HAN! LETS GO.
SOMEONE: SURE! LET THE GAME BEGIN.
BOTH SMILE.


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METZ CHOSING DRESSES. SHE SELECT A DRESS WHICH LOOK EXPENSIVE. MISHA EXIT FROM DRESSING ROOM AND SAW HER.
MISHA: ISS PIA KO TO ABHI BATATI HUN.
SHE CAME TOWARDS METZ.
MISHA: TUMHARI ITNI OQAT KAHAN SE AA GAYI K TUM ITNI EXPENSIVE DRESSES LE RAHI HO?
METZ TURN.
METZ: EXCUSE ME! MINE YUOR OWN BUSINESS.
MISHA: O HELLO! MUJHE B TUMSE BAAT KARNE MAIN KOI INTEREST NAI HAI O.K. SIRF ITNA BATAO K KIS SE PUCH K US (CENCORED) AGNI KO TUMNE PARTY MAIN INVITE KIYA, HANN?
METZ: PAGAL KHANE FULL HOGAYE HAIN YA BHAG K AA RAHI HO?
MISHA: STOP RUBBISHING, ANSWER ME.
MISHA TIGHTLY KEPT HER HAND ON METZ SHOULDERS.
METZ: WHAT THE HELL! LEAVE ME.
MISHA: NAHI! FIRST ANSWER ME DAMN IT.
METZ: OH GOD! ITS HURTING ME.
SUDDENLY METZ PUSH MISHA AND SLAP HER FORCEFULLY, MISHA SUCH MAIN GHOOM GAYI. PUNCHI ENTER IN SHOP AND SHOUT.
PUNCHI: PIAA! HOW DARE YOU?
SHE WANT TO SLAP METZ BUT METZ STOP HER HAND. METZ NE PUNCHI KA HAATH USKI BACK PE LE JA K DABAYA.
PUNCHI: AAAH MAMMA!
METZ: SHUT UP! YOU MAMMA KI BHENS. MOTI, MUJH PE HAATH UTHATI HAI. SHE FREE PUNCHI, PUNCHI MASSAGE HER HAND. MISHA STAND WITH PUNCHI.
METZ(POINTING FINGURE ON THEM): YOU BOTH NEXT TIME BEVARE WITH ME, WARNA WO HAAL KARUNGI K YAAD RAKHOGI, NONSENSE.
METZ LEFT SHOP.


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PIA ENTER IN ANOTHER SHOP WHERE ABHAY AND ABHILASHA ALREDY PRESENT.
PIA SEARCH A T-SHIRT FOR ABHILASHA AND SHE GOT IT.
PIA: PACK THIS.
SHOPKEEPER GAVE HER BILL. SHE PAID AND TURN WANT TO GO ANOTHER SHOP BUT STOP.
PIA: SHAYAD MAINE ABHI ABHILASHA KO DEKHA HAI.
ABHAY AUR ABHILASHA DONO FIGHT KAR RAHE THE. ABHAY CHAHTA THA K WO APNI AUR ABHILASHA KI DRESS SELECT KARE AUR ABHILASHA B YEHI CHAHTI THI K WO APNI AUR ABHAY DONO KI DRESS KHUD SELECT KARE.
ABHAY: I CHOSE IT.
ABHILASHA: NAHIII! MY CHOICE IS BETTER THAN YOU.
ABHAY: MERI BAAT MANO! I'M ELDER THAN YOU.
ABHILASHA: HAA! JUST FEW MINUTES. DRESS TO MAIN HI SELECT KARUNGI WARNA MAIN BHAI SE COMPLAIN KARDUNGI.
ABHAY: MAIN B BHAI KO COMPLAIN KARUNGA.
ABHILASHA: KYUN? KYUN? KYUN?
ABHAY: KYUN K TUM MERI BAAT NAI SUN RAHIN, I'M UR ELDER BROTHER NAA.
ABHILASHA: OH REALLY! MR. ABHAY RAICHAND?
ABHAY: YES! MISS ABHILASHA RAICHAND.
PICHEY KHARI PIA KI AANKHON MAIN AANSU AA GAYE. ABHAY AUR ABHILASHA FIGHT KARTE KARTE DUSRI SHOP KI TARAF CHALE GAYE.
PIA(CRYING): WHY! WHY ME? SAB MERE SAATH HI AISA KYUN KARTE HAIN?


"ROZ KHA LETE HAIN HANSTE HUE CHEHRON SE FAREEB,
KYA KAREN APNI NIGAHON MAIN MURAWWAT(LIHAZ) HAI BUHAT."




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JAY BUY A WESTERN DRESS FOR ABHILASHA.
JAY: THIS IS PERFECT. HAA! I LIKE YOU ABHILASHA AND THIS TIME YOU CAN'T IGNORE ME.
JAY SMILES.


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ABHAY SAW PIA.
ABHAY: PIA YAHAN?
ABHAY SAW PIA RUBBING HER FACE.
ABHAY: IS SHE CRYING?
WO US K PICHEY GAYA. SHE LOST IN CROWD. ABHAY RUN AND FOND HER.
ABHAY: PIA! TUM YAHAN? AND WHY YOU RUBBING YOUR FACE?
METZ: EXCUSE ME! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU, HANN?
ABHAY: PIA! ARE YOU O.K?
METZ: UFF! LAGTA HAI DHERADHUN K SAREY PAGAL IS MALL MAIN AA GAYE HAIN.
WO ABHAY KO SUNA K CHALI GAYI.
ABHAY: MAIN HI PAGAL THA JO AA K PUCH LIYA. BEKAR MAIN MUJHE JHAR K CHALI GAYI.
ABHAY'S MOOD OFF NOW.


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PIA SAW AGNI WHO STAND WITH A GIRL BUT SHE CAN'T SAW HER FACE BCOZ HER BACK ON PIA'S SIDE.
PIA WANT TO SAW THAT GIRL FACE AND MEET AGNI BUT THEY ARE MOVED AND PIA MISS THE CHANCE.


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METZ SELECT A DRESS AND GO TO CHANGE ROOM. PIA ENTER AND SELECT A BLACK DRESS AND TRY IT.
METZ CHECK ALL DRESSES ONE BY ONE. ON OTHER SIDE PIA FINALL THAT DRESS FOR PARTY.
PIA: PLZ PACK THIS.
PIA DUSRI SIDE PE CHALI GAYI. METZ BACK TOWARDS COUNTER.
METZ: PACK THIS AND BILL PLZ.
PIA THINKING ABOUT ABHILASHA AND ON OTHER SIDE BILL IS READY BUT METZ BILL.
METZ: WOW! WHAT A BILL. AAH! NEVER MIND. TAKE THIS.
SHE CLEAR ALL BILL AND LEAVES.
PIA BACK TO COUNTER.
PIA: BILL PLZ!
"UR BILL IS CLEAR MADAM."
PIA: WHAT? WHO DID THIS?
"YOU MAM."
PIA: MAINE...KAB?
"ABHI MAM AND PLZ OTHER PEOPLES WAITING FOR BILL CLEARENCE PLZ."
PIA CARRY HER BAG.
PIA(CONFUSE): O.K! THANX.
PIA (THINKING): MAINE BILL KAB PAY KIYA?


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AGNI SELECT A SHIRT FOR HIS SELF.
ABHILASHA: NO! THIS IS NOT SUIT YOU.
AGNI TURN AND FROWN ON HER AND IGNORE HER.
ABHILASHA THANDI AAH BHARTE HUE BOLI.


"YE ANDHERE TO SIMAT HI JAYENGE EK DIN AEY DOST,
YAAD AAYE GA TUJHE MUJH SE GUREYZAN HONA."


WAH WAH.
AGNI(SLOW VOICE): STUPID... IDIOT!
ABHILASHA: THANX FOR COMPLIMENT. WAISE MUJHE NAI PATA THA K IS STRICNESS K PICHEY ITNA SHARARTI MIND B HAI.
AGNI NE WO SHIRT WAPIS RAKHDI AUR WAHAN SE CHALA GAYA.
ABHILASHA: INTERESTING! WELL, MR. AGNI MUJHE MUSHKIL CHEEZEN BUHAT ACHI LAGTI HAIN. AB TO TUM SE DOSTI KAR K CHORUNGI. AGAR TUM TEERHEY HO TO MAIN TUM SE ZIYADA TEERHI HUN.


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PIA IN PARK. WO GHAR JANE K BAJAYE PARK AA GAYI THI.
PIA CRYING.
PIA: WHY ME? WHY? KYUN MERE SAATH AISA HOTA HAI? NO ONE... NO ONE IS THERE WHO IS FEAR WITH ME. MADHU MASI HATE ME, I ACCEPT. MISHA PRANK ON ME, I ACCEPT. PUNCHI DI...OH NAI... PUNCHI HURT ME, I ACCEPT. JAY AND EVERYONE STAY AWAY WITH ME, I ACCEPT BUT WHY? WHY? ABHILASHA LIE WITH ME. WHY? ONLY AGNI! ONLY AGNI WITH ME. NOW, I'M SCARED THAT IF HE IS NOT FEAR WITH ME THAN WHAT WOULD I DO? HE IS THE ONLY KIND PERSON IN MU LIFE. PLZ PLZ DON'T GO AWAY AGNI. DON'T TELL ANY LIE WITH ME.
PIA CRYING WHEN SOMEONE SIT ON HER BENCH AND PLACE HAND ON HER SHOULDER.




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DOBRIYAL HOUSE:



MADHU, MISHA, PUNCHI AND JAY BUSY IN PARTY PREPARATION AND ALSO VERY ANGRY WITH PIA BCOZ OF ABSENCE AND ALSO BCOZ MISHA SLAPED AND PUNCHI HURT BY HER. MISHA PLANNED TO TAKE REVENGE BUT AFTER PARTY.

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PIA SAW HER. MISTERIOUS GIRL AGAIN.
PIA: KYA DEKHNE AAYI HO? MERA TAMASHA? MAIN ROTI HUI ACHI LAGTI HUN TUMHEN? KYUN AATI HO MERE PAAS? CHALI JAO ABHI ISI WAQT. KUCH NAI SUNNA MUJHE, LEAVE ME ALONE PLZ.
PIA NE APNA SARA GHUSSA US PE UTAR DIYA.
SHE REPLIED: NOW, YOU FEEL BETTER, RIGHT?
PIA REALIZE THAT SHE FEEL GOOD NOW.
SHE SMILE AND STAND FOR GO BACK.
PIA: I'M SORRY! WO PATA NAI KAISE MAIN...
SHE CUT SENTENCE: ITS O.K PIA.
PIA: AAJ KYA KEHNA CHAHTI HO?
SHE REPLIED: AAJ SIRF KUCH DENE AAYI HUN, YE LO.
USNE EK AJEEB SA PEN DIYA.
PIA: WHAT'S THIS? ITNA AJEEB SA KYUN HAI?
SHE REPLIED: SAWAL NAI! APNA KHAYAL RAKHNA AUR MERI IS AAMANAT KA B.
SHE LEAVE FROM THERE.
PIA: AAMANAT???
PIA: AB KYA HONE WALA HAI MERI ZINDAGI MAIN? SUDDENLY SHE REALIZE: OH NO! PARTY HAI AAJ TO. BHAG PIA.
SHE RUN.


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ALL ARE READY. SID IN BLACK DINNER SUIT, ABHILASHA WAER METZ DESIGNING DRESS WHICH GIVE BY SID TO STOP ABHAY AND ABHILASHA'S FIGHT, THAT'S A MAXY STYLE PINK & PURPLE FROCK. ABHAY WEAR WHITE JEANZ AND BLUE SHIRT. ABHILASHA AND ABHAY LEAVE FOR PARTY AFTER THEM SID ALSO LEAVE FOR DINNER.

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PIA ABHI APNE ROOM MAIN AAYI THI AUR MADHU SE THEK THAK DANT(SCOLD) KHA K AAYI THI AUR AB TAYYAR HO RAHI THI.

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ABHAY AND ABHILASHA ENTER IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE. PUNCHI WEAR SHORT WESTERN DRESS, ABHAY FEEL SHAME SO HE IGNORE HER AND SAW HERE AND THER FOR MISHA. ABHILASHA SHOCKLY SAW PUNCHI, ABHAY SAW ABHILASHA.
ABHAY: CHEENI! SHAME ON YOU AISE KYUN DEKH RAHI HO USEY?
ABHILASHA: AREY! USEY SHARAM NAI AA RAHI TO MUJHE KYUN AAYEGI. MAIN TO YE DEKH RAHI THI K PUNCHI NE YE DRESS PEHNI KAISE HOGI?
ABHAY: STUPID!
HE MOVE TOWARDS MR. DOBRIYAL TO SAY "HELLO". NOW, ABHILASHA SAW MISHA WHO WEAR GHANJI AND SHORT PAINT.
ABHILASHA: WOW! 21ST CENTURY KI UJRI HUI HEER.
MISHA: EXCUSE ME, YOU?
ABHILASHA: AREY! KYA ISI SE GHAR KI SAFAI KAR K ISI DRESS KO PEHEN LIYA HAI?
MISHA: SHUT UR MOUTH!
BUT ABHILASHA SUDDENLY MOVE FORWARD BCOZ SHE SAW PIA WHO JUST ENTER THIS TIME. ABHAY FOLLOW ABHILASHA'S EYE POINT AND...😍


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* ABHAY, PIA AND AGNI, ABHILASHA DANCE.
* SID SMILE BUT SUDDENLY METZ...

NOTE;

PLZ READ CAREFULLY PIA & METZ MAKE U CONFUSED.

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely post maza aagaye matz ne sab ko acha maza sakhaya . poor pia very lonly always pain . i loved u ff fultu masti mere tarf se b panchi aur misha ko do punch marne tha . bachare abhay acha fool banaya agni ne . sid and matz awesome .waiting what happened next thnx 4 pm .cont.soon .
Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago

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