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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Lovely update...
Poor piya...

thanx 4 liking.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: madhuri16

well written🤗 ...so agni was the one who helped piya ...nice of him🤗.but i feel very bad 4 piya😭😭...can't see her like this😒...plzzz do make her happy.😊...

thanx 4 liking yes i will make her happy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
CHAPTER NO 3 (LIKNESS, RAGGING AND FRIENDSHIP)

RAAT KO PIA TENSION KI WAJA SE DAIR TAK JAGI ISI LIYE SUBHA THORI DAIR SE AANKH KHULI.
PIA: OH GOD! AAJ KAL KUCH BHI THEK NAI HORAHA, I'M LATE NOW.
PIA RUN WITHOUT TAKING BREAKFAST.
PIA IS ON HER WAY. SHE SAW HER, SHE IS SITTING ON A BANCH.
PIA: YE AAJ PHIR AAGAYI. AB KYA KEHNA HAI ISE MUJHSE?


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ABHAY IS ON DINNING TABLE FOR TAKEEN BREAKFAST. SID READING NEWSPAPER AND GIVE COMPANY TO ABHAY BUT NOT EAT ANYTHING.
ABHAY SEARCHING ABHILASHA.

ABHAY: YE CHEENI KAHAN REH GAYI? AAJ USKA PEHLA DIN HAI COLLEGE KA.
ABHAY DRINK WATER.
SID: KITCHEN MAIN HAI BREAKFAST READY KAR RAHI HAI.
ABHAY K MUN SE PANI KA FAWWARA NIKLA AUR SID K UPER GIRA.
SID: AYE HAYE DIRTY LARKE! YE KYA KIYA?
ABHAY: WO KITCHEN MAIN HAI. OH GOD! I HAVE TO GO I CAN"T BEAR HER BREAKFAST.

ABHAY BHAGNE HI LAGA THA K CHEENI NE ENTRY DE DI.

ABHILASHA: BREAKFAST IS READY. SIT ABHAY.

ABHAY: THANX! MAIN LATE HO RAHA HUN.

ABHILASHA: O HELLO! I'M ALSO IN UR COLLEGE NOW AUR HUM ABHI LATE NAHI HORAHE HAIN. CHALO TASTE IT.

ABHAY: KOI HAI JO MUJHE IS ATTYACHAR SE BACHAYE.
ABHILASHA: EXCUSE ME! WHAT ATTYACHAR?
SID: NOTHING! TUM BATAO K AAJ TUMNE KYA BANAYA HAI?
ABHILASHA: PARATHEY OR NAMKEEN CHAI(TEA). AAP BHI TASTE KARO.
SID: WOW! ITNA ACHA MENU BUT PRINCESS MAINE MOM DAD K SAATH BREAKFAST KAR LIYA THA. MAIN AISA KARUNGA LUNCH K LIYE PACK KARWA LUNGA O.K. NOW SMILE PLZ.
ABHILASHA: O.K BUT YAAD SE PACK KARWA LIJIYEGA AND THANX FOR LIKING MY MENU. ABHAY START IT.

ABHAY MAJBUR HO K BETH GAYA AUR KHANA START KIYA.
ABHILASHA: U KNOW WHAT BHAI! MAINE BARI MEHNAT SE PARATHEY BANAYE HAIN.
ABHAY(LOW VOICE): MAIN BHI BARI MEHNAT SE KHA RAHA HUN.
ABHILASHA: WHAT?
SID: AREY AARAM SE KHA RAHA HAI TUMHARI MEHNAT WASOOL KARNE K LIYE.

ABHILASHA: OH! AAP BHI TASTE KAR K BATANA K KAISE BANE HAIN.
ABHAY(SLOWLY): JAISE SHOES AUR BAGS BANTE HAIN WAISE.
ABHILASHA: ABHAY JO BOLNA HAI LAOUDLY KAHO. YE KYA LOW VOICE MAIN BOLE JA RAHE HO.
SID: DON'T HYPER PRINCESS! YE TUMHARI TARIF KAR RAHA HAI.
ABHAY: TARIF KARNE WALA KARNAMA BHI TO HO. IS BREAKFAST PE TARIF KARUNGA TO SHASHI(COOK) KO HEART ATTACK AAJAYEGE.
ABHILASHA: ENOUGH! KYA MUN MAIN BARBARAYE JA RAHE HO?
SID: HEY COOL DOWN PRINCESS! JA K PEHLE APNA COLLEGE BAG LE AO PHIR NASHTA KAR K COLLEGE NIKAL JANA. ISKO CHORO YE BAK BAK KARTA RAHE GA.

ABHILASHA GO FROM ROOM TO TAKE HER BAG. ABHAY JALDI SE KHARA HUA.
SID: FINISH IT.
ABHAY: WHAT? AAP KHUD TO MOM DAD K SAATH KHA K SAVE HO JATE HO MUJHE JHELNA PARTA HAI. I CAN'T EAT IT. ITS TOO HARD. ISE CHABATEY HUE MUJHE LAG RAHA THA K BAS AB MERA DANT(TEETH) MUN SE BAHAR AAYA, NO WAY.
SID: PRINCESS NE ITNE PYAR SE BANAYA HAI. SHE IS OUR SIS. AGAR MAIN NASHTA NAHI KAR CHUKA HOTA TO ISE DEFINATLY KHATA.
ABHAY: PLZ! I CAN'T. BUHAT BURA HAI YE AUR...
ABHAY KUCH KEHTE HUE RUKA AUR SID KO DEKHA JO USE NAHI BAL K USKI SIDE PE DEKH RAHA THA.
SID: PRINCESS!
ABHAY: OH NO YAR.
ABHILASHA: SO FUNNY! AGAR BURA KEHNA HI THA TO SAMNE KEHTE YUN PEET PICHE NAHI.
SID: LISTEN.
ABHILASHA: NO BHAI! ITS O.K AND THANKS FOR THIS LOVELY MORNING ABHAY.

ABHILASHA LEAVE FROM ROOM.
ABHAY: BHAI! MERA IRADA USE HURT KARNE KA NAHI THA AUR USNE TO BREAKFAST BHI NAHI KIYA.
ABHAY LOOK TOO WORRIED FOR HER.
SID: U KNOW K KITNA CHOTA SA DIL HAI USKA BUT U...AAHHH. JUST GO AND TAKE CARE OF HER AUR HAN USEY BREAKFAST KARWANAMAT BHULNA.
ABHAY RUN BEHIND ABHILASHA.

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PIA WENT TOWARDS HER.
PIA: HI! KAISI HO?
SHE: DON'T WORRY! KABHI KABHI HAMARI CHEEZEN HAMARI AANKHON K SAMNE HOTI HAIN BAS HUM HI SAHI TARAH SE NAHI DEKH PATEY.
PIA: I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT R U SAYING?

SHE STAND UP AND SAID.
SHE: KHUSHIYAN HAATH BARHAIEN TO THAM LENA SOCHNE KA WAQT MAT LENA KAHIN AISA NA HO K WAQT TUMHEN AUR TUMHARI KHUSHI DONO KO WASTE KARDE.
SHE GONE PIA TRYING TO STOP HER.
PIA: PLZ RUKO! I DON'T UNDERSTAND PLZ APNA NAAM HI BATADO.
A CAR STOP NEAR PIA. PIA SEE, ITS AGNI. SHE SIT IN CAR.

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ABHAY SEARCH FOR ABHILASHA BUT HE DIDN'T FIND HER.

ABHAY: OH NO! SHAYAD AAJ KUCH ZIYADA HOGAYA.
ABHAY WORRIED. HE SIT IN HIS CAR AND RACE IT AND ALSO SEARCHING CHEENI.

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CHAND: SID! KAL MISHA KA PHONE AAYA THA GHAR K NUMBER PE.
SID: MISHA?? OH, YA MISHA DOBRIYAL, ABHAY'S FRIEND.
CHAND: OH! ABHAY'S FRIEND. WO JANTA HAI K IS GHAR K RULE K ACCORDING IS GHAR MAIN NA TO KOI FRIEND AA SAKTA HAI NA HI KISI KA PHONE INFACT, IS GHAR MAIN KISI KA BHI AANA MUJHE PASAND NAHI.
SID: DAD! I KNOW BUT... DON'T U WORRY MAIN ABHAY SE BAAT KARTA HUN.
CHAND: GOOD FOR ABHAY'S HEALTH.
CHAND WENT TO OFFICE. SID THOUGHT.

"ABHAY, ABHAY MARWADIYA KARO HAR BAR MUJHE."

SUDDENLY HIS MIND CLICK AND DISPLAY A PHOTO.
SID: HMMM! I LOVE TO KNOW ABOUT U LADY.
SID CALLS TO INSTRUCTOR.
SID: KAL JIS LARKI KI COMPLAIN AAYI THI MUJHE USKI PROFILE MIL SAKTI HAI?
SID: THANX! BYE.
"I'M SURE PROFILE MAIN TUMHARI DETAILS K SAATH TASVIR BHI MIL JAYEGI MISS KHUBSURAT."
"AHH! FINALLY KOI TO HAI JO MERE DIL KO DHARKA GAYA HAI."

SID LOOK SO HAPPY AND EXCITED.

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ABHILASHA LOVE CYCLING. SO, SHE IS ON THE WAY WITH HER CYCLE. MISHA ENTER ON THE ROAD WITH FULL SPEED N OVERTAKE ABHILASHA'S CYCLE. SHE LOST HER BALANCE BUT SAVE FROM FALLING.
ABHILASHA: PSYCO! BAAP KA ROAD SAMJHA HUA HAI.
SHE CHECK HER CYCLE. MISHA STOP N TURN HER NECK TO SEE. SHE SAW CYCLE IS STAND AND A GIRL CHECK IT BUT SHE DIDN'T SEE HER FACE. SHE TURN HER NECK BACK. ABHILASHA SAW BIKE IS STOP N THAT GIRL NOW SIT ON IT. SHE OBSERVE BIKE AND GIRL LOOK N OUTFIT ETC.
ABHILASHA(HERSELF): BACH'CHU! DEKHTE HAIN KIS KI LUCK KHARAB HAI TUMHARI YA MERI. KYUN K AGAR TUM MUJHE AAJ MIL GAYIN NA TO DEKHNA YE OVERTAKE TUMHE SARI ZINDAGI YAAD RAHEGA AND I MEAN IT.

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AGNI N PIA STILL QUIET AS USUAL BUT TODAY THAT SILENCE BREAK.
AGNI: TUM KAL CLASS SE BAHAR KYUN THIN?
PIA CAN'T UNDERSTAND THAT WHY SHE SHOCK BCOZ OF AGNI'S QUESTION OR HIS ATTITUDE WHICH SHOW A RIGHT ON HER.
AGNI SEE HER FOR A WHILE.

PIA: WO...WO...WO ACTUALLY ABHAY PRANK WITH ME AND MAM PUNISH BCOZ OF MY LESS CONCENTRATION ON HER LECTURE WHICH SHE WROTE ON BLACK BOARD.
ABHAY: THIS ABHAY...!!! LISTEN DON'T SHOW THAT YOU R WEAK. IF U SHOW, EVERYONE PUSH U DOWN AND TAKE ADVANTAGE FROM U. ARE U UNDERSTAND WHAT I M SAYING?
PIA: YAH BUT WHAT WOULD I DO? EVERYONE AGAINST ME, NO ONE WITH ME.
AGNI: THAT'S THE REASON. WHY U FEEL IT SO MUCH? EK BAR DAAT JAO SAB K SAMNE, EK BAR JAWAB DO, SIRF EK BAR SHOW THAT U R NOT WEAK. U R STRONG AS U WANT THEY CAN'T BEAR IT.
PIA: THANX AGNI! AAP SERIOUSLY BUHAT ACHE HAIN. UR SMILE MAKE ME RELAX. JAISE KOI APNA MUJHE HIMMAT AUR HOSLA DE RAHA HO.
AGNI SMILES: YE LO ISI KI WAJA SE PARESHAN THIN NAA?
PIA TAKE THAT PAGE: OH MY GOD! YE AAP K PASS THA. I'M SO TENSE BCOZ OF IT.

AGNI: AWSOME CREATION.
PIA: THANX! U LIKE IT,WOW BUT HOW U FIND THAT ITS MY PAGE AND CREATIVITY?
AGNI: U SIT IN MY CAR MOSTLY AND ITNA ACHA ZAUQ(TASTE) PURE COLLEGE MAIN KISI KA NAHI HAI. WELL, IF U DON'T MIND I WANT TO SEE UR FULL COLLECTION.

PIA LOOK SOO HAPPY AND EXCITED: WOW, SERIOUSLY! I DON'T BELIEVE THIS. YOU MADE MY DAY AGNI. HAVE YOU INTEREST IN POETRY?
AGNI: I'M NOT CRAZY BUT LITTLE INTEREST AND ACHI CHEEZ HAR BA-ZAUQ(NICE TASTE PERSON) KO ATTRACT BHI KARTI HAIN AUR ACHI BHI LAGTI HAIN, THAT'S IT.
PIA: I WILL SHOW U MY COLLECTION. THIS IS FIRST TIME WE TALK MUCH.
AGNI CORRECT HER: NO! THIS IS FIRST TIME WE CONVERSE WITH EACH OTHER. NOW, WE REACH AT COLLEGE WITHOUT SAYING ANY FORMAL WORD U MAY GO.
PIA: O.K! SEE YOU SOON, BYE.
AGNI: YAH.

AGNI CALL SOMEONE AFTER PIA'S LEFT.
AGNI: I DON'T CARE! TRANSFER ME INTO ANOTHER GROUP.
AGNI: YAH! HURRY UP
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HE DISCONNECT CALL.
"DON'T WORRY PIA! AAJ K BAAD TUMHEN KOI PARESHAN NAHI KAREGA, NO ONE. NOW, YOUR TIME IS COME."
AGNI SMILE AND REVERSE HIS CAR FOR PARKING.

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MAITHLI ON PHONE.
MAITHLI: I DON'T KNOW! EK BAAR KA KAHA SAMAJH NAHI AATA? I WANT COMPLETE INFORMATION ABOUT THEM. MUJHE UN LOGON KI SANA LENE KI BHI TIMING CHAHIYE, SAMJHEY? AUR HAN, JO SAMAAN MAINE DIYA TO WO POHNCHA DIYA?
MAITHLI: GOOD! O.K I'LL CALL U LATER.

CALL DISCONNECTED.

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SID REACH TO INSTITUTE. USEY THORI DAIR PEHLE PHONE PE KAHA GAYA THA K US LARKI KI PROFILE DUSRI FILON MAIN MISS HOGAYI HAI. NOW, HE SEARCHING HER PHOTOGRAPH IN THOSE PICS WHICH CAPTURE LAST WEEK PARTY. HE TRY TO FIND IT. AFTER MORE SEARCHINGAND FEW HOURS HARD WORK HE FOUND HER PHOTO IN WHICH SHE IS IN ORANGE TOP AND WHITE TROUSER, LOOKING VERY PRETTY.
SID: FINALLY! I FOUND U MISS KHUBSURAT.

"ISHQ NE HUMKO NIKAMMA KAR DIYA GHALIB,
WARNA AADMI HUM BHI BARE KAAM K THEY."


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PIA ENTER HAPPILY IN COLLEGE, ABHAY WITH WORRIEDNESS, ABHILASHA WITH ANGER AND AGNI WITH MYSTERIOUS SMILE.
PIA: OMG! TO US LARKI NE SAHI KAHA THA MERI CHEEZ(PAGE) MERE SAMNE THA AUR MAIN BEKAAR MAIN PARESHAN HO RAHI THI.
PIA SMILE KARTE HUR CLASS MAIN ENTER HO GAYI.

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"PIA TUMHARI CHEEZ WAQAI TUMHARI AANKHON K SAMNE HAI JO TUM ABHI NAHI DEKH PA RAHIN LEKIN BUHAT JALD TUM DEKHOGI JO TUMHARE HAIN WO TUMHARE PAAS HONGE."
USNE SOCHA AUR APNE QADAM AAGE BARHA DIYE.

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MISHA: HYE ABHAY! KAISE HO? MAINE KAL TUMHARE GHAR PHONE KIYA THA.
ABHAY: WHAT? PHONE? (WHISPERING) OH NO! AB WO HITLER K FAN MUJHE NAHI CHORNE WALE.
MISHA: KYA BARBARATEY REHTE HO? KABHI TO LOUDLY BOLA KARO.
ABHAY: NOTHING AUR TUMHARE PAAS MERE GHAR KA NUMBER KAISE AAYA?
MISHA: PHONE DIRECTORY SE AUR KAHAN SE.
ABHAY: MISHAAA! PLZ LEAVE ME ALONE FOR SOME TIME.

ABHAY SAID AND WALK AWAY FROM HER.

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ABHILASHA IN PRINCI OFFICE. AFTER TAKE COMPLETE INFORMATION SHE LEFT.
JAISE HI WO BAHAR NIKLI KISI SE BUHAT ZOR SE TAKRAI US KA SIR GHOM GAYA USEY REALITY MAIN DIN MAIN TAREY NAZAR AA GAYE.

ABHILASHA: OH MERA SIR! UFF, BANDA HAI YA PAHAR.(SHE SIT AND HOLD HER HEAD FROM HAND.)
AGNI: AANKHEN SHOW PIECE K LIYE HAIN? DEKH KAR NAHI CHAL SAKTIN?

ABHILASHA KA SIR AB TAK GHOM RAHA THA USNE KOI JAWAB NAHI DIYA AUR NA HI SIR UTHA K IS BEHIS SHAKS KO DEKHA.
AGNI LEFT HER AND ENTER IN PRINCI OFFICE.


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T ENTER IN CLASS.
T: GUYS! I THINK WO LARKI AAGAYI HAI. LETS GO.

EVERYONE RUN BEHIND T.
PIA THOUGHT.
"BECHARI! PATA NAHI KYA KARNE WALE HAIN US K SAATH."



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JAY SAW ABHILASHA.
"WOW! SHE IS BEAUTIFIL."
JAY: HYE! NEW ONE HAN! CAN I HELP YOU?
ABHILASHA: I DON'T WANT ANYONE HELP, BYE.
JAY: HUUU! WHAT A CONFIDENCE, I LIKE IT.
JAY CALL HER AGAIN.


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ABHILASHA ENTER IN CLASS WITH JAY WHICH IS ARRANGE BY RAGGING GROUP.
MISHA AS MONITOR, PUNCHI AS TEACHER AND EVERYONE AS STUDENT.
ABHAY SAW HER AND SAY THANX TO GOD IN HEART. ABHILASHA SEE HIM BUT IGNORE.

ABHILASHA: JAHAN TAK MUJHE PATA HAI YE MERE SENIOURS KI CLASS HAI WHY U CALL ME HERE?
PUNCHI: UR CLASS WILL START LATE AND I'M UR ENGLISH TEACHER ALSO. NOW, SIT ON THAT DESK,

ABHAY WISH K WO NA BETHE. USEY SAB KI SMILE KISI GARBAR KA SIGN DE RAHI THI.
ABHILASHA: THANX BUT I DON'T WANT TO SIT BCOZ I'M NOT INTEREST TO TAKE ANY ENGLISH LECTURE.
MISHA: YES! WAISE BHI ENGLISH IS SOO EASY.

PIA WORRIED, SHE REMEMBER WHEN ABHAY RAGGING HER BY MAKE HIS SELF AS PRINCI OF THIS COLLEGE AND AFTER KNOW HIS PLANE SHE ANGER ON HIM AND SAY SOMETHING WHICH BECOME ABHAY AGAINST HER.
ABHILASHA: WHO SAYS ENGLISH IS EASY? YOU O.K JUST ANSWER IT PLZ.
ABHILASHA TO PUNCHI: CAN U PLZ TAKE A SIDE.
ABHILASHA WROTE ON BOARD SOMETHING AND SAYS TO MISHA "THEN FILL IN THE BLANKS WITH EITHER "YES" OR "NO".
ON BOARD SENTENCE IS
"OH ________, I'M A DONKEY."

MISHA'S EXPRESSION BECOME HORRIBLE. EVERYONE SMILE BUT ABHAY...? ABHAY KA DIL KAR RAHA THA K WO WAHIN BHANGREY DALE AFTER ALL USKI BEHEN THI WO.
MISHA STILL CONFUSE. PUNCHI THAK K DESK PE BETH GAYI. EK ZOR DAAR AWAZ AAYI. PIA KI HANSI CHOT GAYI KYUN K PUNCHI NEECHE AUR WO DEKSK JIS K 6 PIECES KO BUHAT PERFECTION SE JOINT KAR K RAKHA THA ALAG ALAG PAREY HUE THE.
PUNCHI: AAH! MERI KAMAR.
TRACKER: KAMAR DARD HAI TO MOVE LAGAO.
PUNCHI: JUST SHUT UP.

ABHILASHA LEAVE FROM CLASS.
PIA FEEL SO HUNGRY SO, SHE LEAVE CLASS FOR CANTEEN.


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CANTEEN SCENE:




PIA CHECKHER BAG. SHE LEFT HER PURSE IN HOME. US K PAAS PAISE SIRF WOHI HOTE THE JO ARNAB UNCLE CHUP K SE PIA KO DIYA KARTE THE MADHU MASI PIA KO PAISE NAHI DETI THIN. PUNCHI, JAY AUR MISHA YE APNI POCKET MONEY DOUBLE LEKAR BHI AKSAR KANGAL REHNE K DRAME KARTE K PIA CHAH KAR BHI APNE PERSONAL K LIYE PAISE NAHI MAANG SAKTI AUR AB TO USEY MAANGNEY SE CHIR HO CHUKI THI.
PIA THINK AND WANT TO LEAVE FROM CANTEEN. SUDDENLY AGNI US K PAAS SE GUZRA AUR KUCH RAKH K CHALA GAYA. WO AGNI KO ROKNA CHAHTI THI LEKIN WO JA CHUKA THA USNE APNI TABLE PE DEKHA JAHAN EK TRAY MAIN BURGER, FRENCH FRIES, SANDWICH, COFFEE AUR COKE RAKHI THI. THIS IS NOT FIRST TIME. IT ALSO HAPPENED IN PAST MANY TIMES. WO HAMESHA TRAY RAKH K CHALA JATA TA K PIA GILTY OR HESITATE FEEL NA KARE.
PEHLE PIA BUHAT DAIR INTIZAR KARTI, BUHAT SOCHTI PHIR SHE START EAT BUT AFTER TODAY'S CONVERSATION SHE SMILE AND START EATING.
ALL CLASS ENTER IN CANTEEN AFTER THEM ABHILASHA ENTER.

ABHILASHA TO PUNCHI: AREY ENGLISH TEACHER YOU ARE HERE IN CANTEEEN. IS COLLEGE MAIN TEACHERS BHI BUNK KARTE HAIN?
PUNCHI: IF U WANT UR I.CARD PLZ BEAR UR PUNISHMENT.
ABHILASHA: O.K AS UR WISH! GIVE UR PUNISHMENT MISS PUNCHI DOBRIYAL.
MISHA AND PUNCHI: WHAT?(THEY BOTH UNDERSTAND THAT SHE KNOW HER.)

ABHILASHA SMILES AS WINNER.


MISHA: FINE! IF U WANT UR I.CARD THEN HAMARI EK CONDITION KO PURA KARO, ITS OUR RULE.
ABHILASHA: O.K! TELL ME.
PUNCHI TO MISHA(LOW VOICE): IS PIA KO SABAQ SIKHAO. SHE LAUGH AT ME WHEN I DROP.
MISHA: O.K! IF U WANT UR I.CARD SO, GO AND SLAP THAT GIRL.

SHE POINTING AT PIA. PIA GHABRA GAYI AUR SANDWICH TRAY MAIN WAPIS RAKH DIYA AND TRY TO READY FOR SLAP.
ABHILASHA GONE TO SLAP PIA. USNE APNA HAATH UTHAYA, PIA NE APNI AANKHEN BAND KARLIN.SUDDENLY PIN DROP SILENCE IN CANTEEN.

ABHILASHA: HEY! U OPEN UR EYES.
PIA OPEN HER EYES AND SAW ABHILASHA'S HAND IN AT SHAKING POSITION.
ABHILASHA: WILL U BE MY FRIEND?
MISHA, PUNCHI, JAY, KABIR, T, EVERYONE SHOCKED. ABHAY CONFUSED. PIA BETWEEN MANY EMOTIONS, SHE AREN'T UNDERSTAND HOW SHE REACT.

PIA(LOTS OF HAPPINESS): WHAT? U...U...WANT ME AS...FR...FRIE...FRIEND?
ABHILASHA: YAH! IF U ACCEPT MY FRIENDSHIP, I'LL PROVE THAT UR DECISION IS RIGHT. R U?

PIA REMEMBER MISTERIOUS GIRL 2ND LINE "KHUSHIYAN HAATH BARHAYEN TO THAAM LENA". NOW, SHE DECIDED TO ACCEPT THIS HAPPINESS.
PIA SHAKE HAND WITH HER: YAH! I...I AM. THANKS AAJ KA DIN MERE LIYE BUHAT ACHA HAI.
ABHILASHA START EATING HER SANDWICH WHICH SHE PUT BACK ON TRAY.
ABHILASHA: MAIN GHAR SE KUCH KHA K NAI AAYI, ORDER AANE MAIN TIME LAGE GA. IF U MIND IT SO, THAT'S UR PROBLEM NOT MINE. I CAN'T BE FORMAL WITH MY RELATIVES AND NOW, U R MY RELATIVE.
PIA: NO! I DON'T MIND BUT HOW I AM UR RELATIVE?
ABHILASHA: FRIENDSHIP IS A RELATION DEAR. SO, HUIN NA TUM MERI RELATIVE.
PIA(SMILES): OH! DRINK IT. THIS COFFEE IS SUPERB.
ABHILASHA: SURE! WHY NOT.

SHOUT ON CANTEEN MAN.
ABHILASHA: AREY! MERA ORDER MUJHE DE DO MERE GRANSON KO DOGE KYA?
PIA SMILE AND LOOK SO HAPPY. SHE FEEL SOMEONE IS LOOKING HER. SHE SAW HERE AND THERE, THAT'S ABHAY WHO LOOK CONFUSE.
ABHAY THOUGHT "WHY CHEENI OFFER HER FOR FRIENDSHIP?"
PIA: IDIOT.
ABHILASHA: WHO?
PIA: THAT ABHAY RAICHAND! I HATE HIM. HE TEASE ME ALL THE TIME.
ABHILASHA: OH YAH! HE IS NAUGHTY BUT NOT DISERVE ANYONE HATES.
PIA: U KNOW HIM?
ABHILASHA: YAH! BUT DON'T ASK HOW. I'LL TELL U SOON. WELL, WHAT'S UR NAME?
PIA: PIA! PIA KHANNA AND UR?
ABHILASHA: ABHILASHA! AND U CALL ME AS U WANT.
PIA: NICE NAME! CAN I CALL U TWEETY. I LOVE TWEETY, MICKEYMOUSE AND BARBIES.
ABHILASHA: UR NAME IS ALSO NICE AND YES U CAN. I LOVE TEEDY AND TELETUBBIES AND I CALL U CINDRELLA OR SNOW WHITE, MY FAVORITE STORIES.

BOTH SMILES. MISHA COME.
MISHA: HEY! TUMHE APNA I.CARD NAHI CHAHIYE KYA? WHAT U HAVE DONE, HAN?
ABHILASHA: WHAT'S MY NAME DEAR?
MISHA: WHAT? HOW CAN I KNOW?
ABHILASHA: OH YA! HOW CAN U KNOW AFTER ALL U HAVEN'T MY I.CARD, IT CAN'T BR BCOZ I HAVE MY I.CARD MISS DABBARIYAL.
MISHA: HEY! U DON'T MISS PRONOUNCE MY SIRNAME.
ABHILASHA: BYE DEAR! N NEXT TIME BIKE KI SPEED FAST RAKHNE SE PEHLE APNE RESULT KA SOCH LENA. O.K. LETS GO PIA WE'LL EAT THIS INTO GARDEN.

BOTH LEAVE FROM CANTEEN.

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MISHA: WHAT THE HELL SHE THINKING BLUDDY...
ABHAY: STOP MISHA! TUM OVER REACT KAR RAHI HO.
MISHA: ME? NO WAY! THAT GIRL(CENCORED)
ABHAY SHOUT: STOP IT MISHA! U R JUST MY FRIEND NOT MY BEST FRIEND. EK LAFZ AUR US K BARE MAIN NAHI. KEEP UR MOUTH SHUT N BE IN UR LIMITS.

ABHAY LEAVE. MISHA DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THE REASON OF HIS BEHAVIOR AND WORDS.
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AT NIGHT:

IN STUDY ROOM:
SID WORK ON SOME PROJECT FILES SINCE MANY HOURS. HE FEEL TIRED, PUT THE OPEN FILE ON THE TABLE. HE PUT MAITHLI PIC FROM HIS POCKET AND SAW HER FACE AND SMILE AND HE FEEL RELAX NOW. SUDDENLY HASEENA CALLED HIM.

HASEENA: SID! SID COME INTO MY ROOM.
SID: YES MOM! AATA HUN.

SID NE MAITHLI KI PHOTO KO EK BOOK MAIN RAKHA JO GHAR K COMMON USE MAIN THI. US BOOK KO KHULI HUI FILE K SAATH RAKHA AUR HASEENA KI BAAT SUNNE K LIYE ROOM SE BAHAR CHALA GAYA.
ABHILASHA STILL ANGRY WITH ABHAY. CHAND GAVE WARNING TO ABHAY BCOZ OF MISHA'S CALL.
ABHAY IS VERY ANGRY. HE ENTER IN STUDY ROOM FOR RELAXATION. HE FIND THAT BOOK WHICH EVERYONE USE. HE SAW BOOK ON TABLE. USNE WO BOOK UTHAYI. HE SAW A PHOTO OF A GIRL LOOK LIKE SOMEONE.

ABHAY: OH PIA! DAMN YAR.
PEHLE USNE WO PHOTO SID KI KHULI FILE MAIN RAKHI PHIR MAITHLI K CHEREY KO BLACK MARKER SE PAINT KIYA PHIR JOSH MAIN AAKAR WO PHOTO PHAR DI AUR SAATH MAIN SID KI FILE K IMPORTANT PAGES BHI.
ABHAY: OH NO! MAR GAYA.
HE HIDE ALL PIECES OF PHOTO AND FILE PAGES AND GONE TO SAY SORRY AGAIN TO ABHILASHA AND AFTER THAT FOR SLEEP.

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PIA TO MOON: TUMHE PATA HAI AAJ MERI ZINDAGI KA SAB SE ACHA DIN THA. AAJ MAIN BUHAT KHUSH HUN, BUHAT.
PUNCHI, JAY AND MISHA SAY MANYTHING AND ALSO ANGRY ON HER BUT TODAY SHE IGNORE EVERYTHING AS AGNI SAYS.
SHE SMILES AND KAY DOWN ON BED FOR SLEEP.
ON THE OTHER HAND:
ARNAB IS SO TENSE BCOZ OF HIS PAST WHO MAKE HIM GILTY AND HE ALSO TENSE ABOUT SOME LETTERS.


PRECAP:


* SID KNOWS ABOUT ABHAY'S STUPIDITY.
* ABHILASHA CLEAR PIA'S POSITION IN ABHAY'S VIEW.
* NEW YOUNG TEACHER FOR SPORTS ENTER IN COLLEGE.

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..Abhilasha and Piya are friends...wohoaa..
awesome update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Nice update, its good pia got a new frind

ok i choose rajiv khandelwal for new sports teacherb ,because he is my fav
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome update
loved it
agni is a sweetheart. . He n pia r frends. . Yuppee

oho. . sid janaab is after miss khubsurat. . Hehe. . Very nice

abhilasha rocks. . I just love her. . Usne to panchi aur misha ka bura haal kardia . .haha. . Superb

i'm so happy 4 pia. . Finally, she also have frends !
The precap is very interesting. .

p.s: i will like hiten tejwani to be the sports teacher..he is a sweet person n friendly

Thanx for the pm
continue soon
tc
Edited by missglam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
wow...ausum update...loved it..pia and abhilasha frnds...loving it...super update...and i choose rajiv...update soon...thanks for pm...

many many happy returns of the day...may u have all ur wishes fulfilled...god bless you...

love peehu...🤗
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Wowww JUS FANTASTIC update dear... Loved it...Will pia Love Agni??NOOO?... Waiting 4 next update SUPER JOB... Thanx... HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR 🤗 🤗 🥳
Edited by rashi.rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
thnx for d pm
wow wonderful gr8t 👏👏
i m loving ur ff
nice suspense
i would prefer rajiv khandelwal as sports teacher
cont soon
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hey annokhi awesome update.I m happy atleast Abhilasha & agni r helping her.I guess they will play cupid b/w Abhiya.Plzz continue😳

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