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HI GUYS FOR TOOO LATE UPDATE. PLZ READ N COMMENT.


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NEW CHARACTER SKATCH:


RAJIV SAHAI:

He is new sports teacher of mount college. friendly nature and may be became a problem of riachands.

SEE NEXT PAGE PLZ FOR CHAPTER 4 ( PARTS 1,2 &3)

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CHATER 4(PART 1)

*PIA'S NEW CLASSMATE*

RAICHAND HOUSE:


MORNINIG SCENE:(AFTER ABHAY AND ABHILASHA LEAVE FOR COLLEGE.)
CHAND AND HASEENA WALK AND TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. THEY ARE ON FIRST FLOOR.
HASEENA: CHAND! TUMHE ABHAY KO ITNA WARN NAI KARNA CHAHIYE THA. WO ABHI BACHA HAI.
CHAND: NO HASEENA! MAINE JO KIYA SAHI KIYA, HE DISERVE THAT AND FOR YOU BOTH(ABHAY AND ABHILASHA) CHILD OR LITTLE BABIES. SO, DON'T SAY ANYTHING ME ABOUT BOTH OF THEM.
CHAND AND HASEENA MOVE TOWARDS STAIRS FOR WENT TO DOWN.
CHAND: ABHAY KI SHARARTEN DIN BA DIN BARHTI JA RAHI HAIN. WO APNI MANMANI KARNE LAGA HAI AUR US K SICK FRIENDS... WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THEM AND ABHILASHA HOW CAN SHE BEHAVE LIKE THAT? ROZ KISI NA KISI SE LARNE KHARI HOJATI HAI. EK RAICHAND HONE KA KOI PROUD NAI HAI US MAIN. SERVANT SE LE KAR GALI GALI BHHEK MANGNE WALE BHIKARI SE BAAT KARNA UNKI HELP KARNA AUR PHIR RAH CHALTE UN BHIKARIYON AUR OLD AGE HOME K LOGON SE UNKI HEALTH AUR PARESHANIYAN POCHNA, WHAT'S THIS? WO EK RAICHAND HAI AUR SARI ZINDAGI USEY IS NAAM SE JUDE REHNA HAI. WHAT KIND OF THINK SHE HAVE? YE SAB BAND KARWAO WARNA MAIN ABHLASHA KO...
HASEENA CUT SENTENCE: NO... NO CHAND! MAINE USEY SAMJHAYA THA ISI LIYE WO KUCH DINO SE KISI B SERVANT SE BAAT NAI KAR RAHI NA HI ZIYADA BAHAR JA RAHI HAI. SHE CONTROL HER SYMPATHY FEELING.
CHAND: MAKE SURE HER CHANGE REMAINS OTHERWISE I CAN'T HELP YOU.
SID ENTER IN LOUNGE AND FIND SOMETHING. USNE NEWSPAPER, KUSHAN, MAGZINE ETC SAB UTHA K CHECK KIYA. CHANDEENA SAW HIM WITH CONFUSING EXPRESSION. SID SAW BOTH.
SID: OH! MOM,DAD AAP! I THOUGHT K AAP OFFICE JA CHUKE HONGE.
CHAND: NO! BAS KUCH BAAT KARNI THI TUMHARI MOM SE. NOW, I'M GOING BUT WHAT ARE YOU SEARCHING?
SID: DAD EK FILE THI BAS WOHI DHOND RAHA HUN.
CHAND: OH! KAHIN USI PROJECT KI TO NAHI HAI JIS KI PRESENTATION AAJ TUMHE DENI HAI?
SID(IN HEAD): OH GOD! USI PROJECT KI DONO FILE HI TO HAIN EK PRESENTATION AUR DUSRI IMPORTANT CONFIGURES KI)
SID: NO DAD! OTHER ONE.
CHAND: O.K! BUT REMEMBER YE HARKAT KAHIN ABHAY KI NA HO.
HASEENA: NO WAY! HE IS RESPONSIBLE BOY.
CHAND LAUGH AS MAKE FUN ABOUT SENTENCE AND GONE.
SID: DON'T WORRY MOM! ABHAY CAN'T DONE IT. DAD TO BAS ABHAY K PICHEY PARE REHTE HAIN.
HASEENA MOVE HER NECK AS YES AND LEAVE FROM LOUNGE.
SID(IN HEAD): OH NO! US MAIN TO US LARKI KI PHOTO HAI. DAMN YAR! ITNI MUSHKIL SE EK PHOTO HAATH LAGI THI WO B, SHIT. BAS WO PHOTO KISI K HAATH NA LAGE. WO PHOTO AUR FILE EK BAR MUJHE MIL JAYE SAFELY PHIR US PHOTO KO TO MAIN CHUPA K RAKHUNGA.
SID AGAIN START SEARCHING.
IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE:
JAY, PUNCHI AND MISHA ALREADY GONE. PIA NOW JUST LEAVE FOR COLLEGE. SHE SAW ARNAB SO TENSED. SO, SHE ASK HIM.
PIA: AAA...AAP KUCH PARESHAN HAIN?
ARNAB: OH NO NO! NOT AT ALL AUR TUM BATAO STUDIES KAISI HO RAHI HAIN?
PIA: GOOD! AAAN (SHE STOP AND THINK WHAT SHE ASK BCOZ THEIR IS AN INVISIBLE BOUNDRY BETWEEN PIA AND DOBRIYALS WHO STOP HER TO BE PERSONAL AND FRANK.)
ARNAB: KYA HUA? KUCH CHAHIYE? AGAR KUCH CHAHIYE TO BINA JHIJAK BATAO. I'LL GIVE IT TO YOU.
PIA: THANX! BUT I DON'T WANT ANYTHING.
MADHU ENTER AND LOOK ANGRY SO SHE SHOUT ON ARNAB.
MADHU: ARNAB NASHTA!
ARNAB: OH YA! WO BAS MAIN...
MADHU CUT SENTENCE: DON'T MAKE EXCUSES. (TO PIA): AUR TUM JAOGI YA YAHIN KHARE HO K NIWALE GINO GI.
PIA HAS TEARS IN EYES AND SHE LEFT WITHOUT SAYING ANY SINGLE WORD.
ARNAB: MADHU! TUM BHI NA.
MADHU(ANGRY): MAIN CHAI LE K AATI HUN.
ARNAB (IN HEAD): OH GOD! KOI HAI JO SAB KUCH JANTA HAI. WO LETTER ITNE SAAL BAAD KAHAN SE AAYE? WHAT WOULD I DO? AGAR KISI KO YA PIA KO PATA CHAL GAYA TO? KOUN HAI JO ITNE SAAL BAAD US RAAZ KO KHOL RAHA HAI?
HE LOOK DISTURB.

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DOBRIYAL HOUSE:


"ARNAB DOBRIYAL! YOU HAVE TO PAY WHAT YOU HAVE DONE EARLIER."
KNOCK ON DOOR. USNE MUR K DEKHA, USKA MANAGER FILE LE K AAYA THA.
"THANX! AB TUM JAO AUR MUJHE DISTURB MAT KARNA." MANAGER LEAVE.
"JUST WAIT DOBRIYALS! TUMHARA JEENA KAISE HARAM HOTA HAI. YE TO SHURUAT HAI. YOU CAN'T IMAGINE K ABHI TUMHARE SAATH KYA KYA HONA HAI."
EVIL SMILE ON FACE.

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PIA SIT ON A PARK BENCH AND MADHU SENTENCE ECHOING IN HER MIND. SHE IS QUIET NOW.
"GOOD MORNING!"
PIA TURN HER NECK INTO LEFT SIDE AND SAW ABHILASHA.
ABHILASHA: HEY! YOU LOOK UPSET, WHY?
PIA: NO! I DON'T.
ABHILASHA: O.K! MAT BATAO BUT JHOT NA BOLO. WELL, LETS GO FOR COLLEGE.
PIA NE USKI CYCLE KI TARAF USHARA KIYA AND SAID.
PIA: IS PE?
ABHILASHA: HAN AUR KIS PE. WAISE B MERA DIL BUHAT BARA HAI. TUMHE CYCLE PE BITHA SAKTI HUN.
PIA: OH! THANX TWEETY.
ABHILASHA: YOU WELCOME CINDRELLA.
BOTH SMILE AND MOVE TOWARDS COLLEGE.


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IN COLLEGE:


ABHAY STAND WITH HIS CAR AND TALK WITH SID ON PHONE.
SID: SO! HAPPY NOW?
ABHAY: YAH! THANX BHAI WARNA MERA AAJ KA DIN BUHAT BURA GUZARTA. FINALLY AAP NE CHEENI KI NARAZGI KHATAM KARWADI.
SID: HMMM! BUT REMEMBER DON'T DONE IT AGAIN.
ABHAY: SURE! KYA HUA BHAI? YOU SOUND LITTLE WORRIED.
SID: AREY YAAR MERI FILES MISS HAIN AUR AAJ PRESENTATION HAI. DAD KO SHOW KARNI HAI WO FILES.
ABHAY(PANIC): OH! I SEE. WAISE MERE DOST AA GAYE HAIN MAIN JATA HUN, BYE.
CALL DISCONNECTED. OTHER SIDE.
SID: ABHAY! SUNO TO, AREY... LO JANAB NE CALL DISCONNECT KARDI.

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IN CLASS:


ABHAY GROUP ENTER IN CLASS. ABHAY STILL ANGRY WITH MISHA. ALL ARE TALK WHEN AGNI ENTER IN CLASS. SUDDENLY PIN DROP SILENCE IN CLASS. MISHA BROKE THE SILENCE AND ASK.
MISHA: O HELLO! APNI CLASS BHOOL GAYE HO KYA? YE LEFT SIDE SE DUSRI TUMHARI HAI.
AGNI: APNA NANNA SA BHEJA USE MAT KIYA KARO.
JAY: THAT'S NOT FAIR! AAP AGE MAIN BADE HO IS LIYE RESPECT DETE HAIN AUR AAP?
PUNCHI: LEAVE IT JAY! HUNH! MR.ATTITUDE.
AGNI: AUR KISI KO KUCH KEHNA HAI?
MISHA: ITNE BADE HO K COLLEGE MAIN HO. TUMHE TO UNIVERSITY SE BHI PASS OUT HO JANA CHAHIYE THA.
AGNI: JAB HAR SIZE AUR AGE K DOBRIYALS EK HI CLASS MAIN ADMIT HOSAKTE HAIN TO MAIN KYUN NAHI COLLEGE BOY HOSAKTA?
JAY. PUNCHI AND MISHA SHOUTS: WHAT RUBBISH?
AGNI: FOR YOUR KIND INFORMATION I TRANSFERED FROM ANOTHER GROUP TO THIS GROUP. SO, NOW THIS IS MY CLASS ALSO.
EVERYONE SHOCKED ON THIS NEWS. THEN PIA ENTER.
PIA: HI!
AGNI: HI! HAVE A NICE DAY KYUN K INKA DIN TO BUHAT BURA GUZARNE WALA HAI.
ABHAY: OH REALLY! I DON'T THINK SO.
AGNI: GOOD! MAT SOCHO. BRAIN K BINA SOCHOGE TO BIMAR HO JAOGE.
ABHAY: VERY FUNNY! MAIN HANSUN?
AGNI: AS U WISH! JO DIL MAIN AATA HAI KARO.
PIA INTERUPT: AGNI SORRY! WO COLLECTION NAI LAYI.
AGNI: MUJHE KOI JALDI NAI HAI. WELL, NOW I'M UR CLASSMATE.
PIA(EXCITED): WHAT? ARE YOU SERIOUS? WOW, BUT HOW?
AGNI: CLASS EK HI THI BAS GROUP CHANGE THA SO, WO B EK HOGAYA HAMARA.
PIA: THAT'S SO NICE. WELCOME TO NEW CLASS.
AGNI: OH THANX ALOT! WHERE I AM SIT?
PIA: HERE.
AGNI SIT ON PIA'S TABLE. ABHAY BECOME ANGRY WITHOUT ANY REASON.

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METZ IN INSTITUTE. HER MOBILE RINGEED. SHE PICK CALL AND MOVE OUTSIDE.
"HELLO! HOW ARE YOU?"
"I'M FINE!"
"NO WAY! I'M NOT WEAK."
"SIDDHARTH RAICHAND NE MERI PROFILE CHECK KI HAI."
"I DON'T KNOW! BUT USNE MERI PROFILE MANGI THI."
"YAH! MAIN SAMBHAL K RAHUNGI. YOU TAKE CARE, BYE."
MAITHLI DISCONNECT CALL.
METZ(HERSELF): OH GOD! PEHLE PROBLEMS KAM HAIN JO YE SIDDHARTH RAICHAND EK NAYI PROBLEM KHARI KAR RAHA HAI. WHAT HE WANT YAAR?
METZ BACK TO HER PLACE AND START WORK.


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ABHILASHA IS IN HER CLASS. HER CLASSMATE COME WITH AN ANNOUNCEMENT.
NUPUR: HEY GUYS LISTEN! OUR NEW SPORT TEACHER IS ALREADY REACH AND YOU KNOW WHAT? T FLIRT WITH HIM.
ABHILASHA: WOW! EK TO IS COLLEGE KI LARKIYON KO AUR KOI KAM NAHI HAI, SUPERB.
NUPUR: YOU ARE RIGHT ABHILASHA! I AGREED. YAHAN ZIYADA TAR LARKIYAN AISI HI HAIN BUT SAB NAHI HAIN.
ABHILASHA: YAH! EK MACHLI SARE TALAB KO GANDA KARTI HAI. CHEAP GIRLS KI WAJA SE INNOCENT GIRLS B DOUBT MAIN AA JATI HAIN.
NUPUR: HAN! CHALO NEW SPORTS TEACHER SE INTRODUCE HO K AATE HAIN. I LOVE HANDBALL AND YOU?
ABHILASHA: CRICKET AND FOOTBALL AUR BAQI GAMES B KHEL LETI HUN. CHALO.
BOTH WALK WITH OTHER STUDENTS WHO WANT TO MEET SPORT TEACHER.

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CHAPTER 4 (PART 2)

*MY VIEW IS CLEAR*


PIA AND WHOLE CLASS REACH IN SPORT AREA WHERE MOST OF THE STUDENTS ARE ALREADY STAND.
SOMEONE PLAY BASKET BALL VERY PROFESSIONALY. PIA TRY TO SAW HIS FACE. HE TURN DURING PLAY. PIA SAW HIS FACE CLEARLY. GIRLS WHISPERING " WOW". T SMILE AND SAID TO PIA.
T: NO PIA! HE WILL BE MINE SO, STAY AWAY FROM HIM.
ABHILASHA: INTERRUPT.
ABHILASHA: STAY AWAY WITH PIA YOU DIRTY FISH.
T: HOW DARE YOU? YOU BLOODY...
PIA: PLZ T! DON'T SAY HER ANY RUBBISH THING.
T: OH YOU! STAY AWAY.
SUDDENLY THAT PERSON CALL THEM.
"HEY YOU! STAY AWAY LADIES, COME HERE."
THEY MOVE TOWARDS HIM. WHEN PIA CAME INFRONT OF HIM HIS MIND CLICK A FLASH BUT HE IGNORE IT AND KEEP HIS FACE EXPRESSION NORMAL.
T: HI! HUM THORI DAIR PEHLE B MILE THEY, RIGHT?
HE REPLIED: HOW CAN I FORGET. (WHISPERING HIS SELF): GOD SAVE ME, PLZ.
PIA: HELLO! U CALL US?
HE SAID: HELLO GIRLS! HOW ARE YOU?
PIA AND ABHILASHA: FINE!
HE SAID: SO, WHY DON'T YOU BOTH JOIN ME IN BASKET BALL MATCH.
BOTH REPLIED: WHAT?
HE SAID: LETS PLAY A MATCH JUST FOR FUN.
T: NO WAY! MAINE KAL HI PEDICURE KARWAYA HAI AUR SANDAL MAIN BASKET BALL? NEVER.
ABHILASHA: BASKET BALL PE REHAM KARNE KA SHUKRIYA TEEE! (TO HIM): SURE! WHY NOT.
PIA: SORRY! I CAN'T.
ABHILASHA: JUST SAY YES PIA! MAIN HUN NAA.
PIA(SMILE): O.K! BUT SAMBHAL LENA YAAR.
THEY START PLAYING. HE GUIDE PIA BCOZ SHE LOOK SO CONFUSED AND PANNIC. ABHILASHA DUBBLING BALL VERY WELL. SHE PASS BALL TO PIA AND TELL HER HOW DUBBLING IT. PIA START DUBBLING AND SHE MISS ONE TIME, TWO TIME, THREE TIME AND MANY TIMES BUT STILL TRY IT. ABHILASHA SAW ABHAY WHO LOOK SO SERIOUS. PIA PASS BALL TO THAT PERSON. HE PLAY IT AND BASKET IT. PIA LOOK ABHILASHA WHO SAW ANOTHER SIDE. SUDDENLY THAT PERSON PASS BALL TO PIA WHO IS NOT LOOK HIM SO SHE LOST HER BALANCE, ISSE PEHLE K WO GIRTI SOMEONE SAVE HER TO HOLD HER IN HIS ARMS. SHE SAW THAT'S ABHAY WHO SAVE HER. AN EYELOCK BETWEEN THEM FOR FEW SECONDS SUDDENLY ABHAY LOOK ANGRY HE LEFT HER AND GONE FROM THERE. ABHILASHA SAW ALL SCENE AND ASK PIA.
ABHILASHA: HEY! R U O.K? SORRY MAIN TUMHE IGNORE KAR GAYI.
PIA: I'M O.K AND DON'T SAY SORRY PLZ. HEY! YOU KNOW THAT PERSON, WHO IS HE?
PIA POINTING THAT NEW PERSON.
ABHILASHA: NO! LETS ASK HIM.
PIA: R U CRAZY! NO WAY YAAR. MAINE TO AISE HI PUCHA THA.
THEN HE CAME TOWARDS THEM. T AGAIN INTERRUPT.
T: HEY! I KNOW YOU WANT TO MEET ME OUTSIDE. SO, LET ME CHECK MY SCHDULE.
HE REPLIED: SORRY! I'M NOT A PSYCATRIST.
T: WHAT?
HE SAID: OH! I THINK YOU WANT AN APPOINTMENT TO CHECK YOUR BRAIN?
ABHILAHSA: SHE CAN'T BCOZ ABSENCE OF MIND.
PIA, ABHILASHA AND HE SMILED.
HE TOLD THEM: OH! I FORGOT TO INTRODUCE MY SELF. SO, GIRLS I'M YOUR NEW SPORTS TEACHER AND MY NAME IS RAJEEV SAHAI.
AFTER KNOWING HIS TRUTH T FAINT.
ABHILASHA: I CALL MIUNCIPLITY ORGANIZATION, AAYEN AUR IS KACHREY KO LE K JAYEN.
PIA: OH MY GOD! ABHILASHA YOU R SUCH A ATOM BOMB OF FUN.
ABHILASHA: THANX DEAR! NOW, I HAVE TO GO. I WANT TO MEET SOMEONE.
PIA: O.K! SEE YOU SOON.
ABHILASHA SEARCHING ABHAY FOR TALK HIM ABOUT PIA.


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METZ SAW SID WHO ENTER IN CORIDOOR.
METZ: OH NO! YE PHIR AAGAYA.
SID SAW HER SO, HE STOP INFRONT OF HER.
SID(SOFTLY): HELLO! MISS KHUBSURAT. HOW ARE YOU?
METZ(ANGRILY): AATEY JATEY HAR KISI KO HELLO, HOW ARE KARNE K ELAWA KOI KAAM HAI? AGAR HAI TO PLZ WO JA K KAREN.
SID: OH! YOU LOOK ANGRY, WHY?
METZ: MERI PROFILE KYUN MANGWAYI?
SID: I'M SORRY IF U MIND BUT ITS MY INSTITUTE SO, MAIN KISI B STUDENT KI PROFILE CHECK KAR SAKTA HUN AND BE SERIOUS MERA IRADA GHALAT NAI THA.
METZ: WHATEVER! U ARE RIGHT OR WRONG, I DON'T CARE BUT DON'T INTERFARE IN MY PERSONAL LIFE.
SID(SLIGHTLY): PLZ COOL DOWN! I'M SORRY AGAIN.
METZ: GOOD! NOW, LEAVE MY WAY.
SID: PLZ TELL ME YOUR NAME.
METZ: DOBARA MUJHE MILE NA TO TUMHARA HASHAR BIGAR DUNGI. AAYE BADE "PLZ TELL ME UR NAME." CHICHORA.
SHE LEAVE FROM THERE.
SID: OH NO YAAR! YE TO BUHAT TERHI CHEEZ HAI. NAAM B NAI PATA CHALA AUR TASVIR B KHO GAYI.
CLICK ON HIS MIND.
SID: HOW CAN I FORGOT. YAHAN K INSTRUCTORS KO USKA NAAM PATA HOGA. SO, I SHOULD ASK HIM. HE STOP AN INSTRUCTOR WHO COME DOWN FROM STAIRS.
SID: JUST A MINUTE! CAN U TELL ME THAT US DIN JO LARKI AAYI THI USKA NAAM KYA THA?
ISSE PEHLE INSTRUCTOR METZ KA NAAM LETA METZ COME AGAIN AND FROWN ON SID.
METZ: YOU THARKI! AB AGAR MERE BARE MAIN KUCH JANNE KI EXTRA ORDINARY KOSHISH KI TO N.C.C.W WALON KO BULA K LE AAUNGI.
SID(PANIC): NO PLZ! I WANT TO KNOW JUST...
METZ CUT HIS SENTENCE: DON'T YOU DARE! AAKHRI BAR KEH RAHI HUN MUJH SE PANGA MAT LO.
SID: O.K! I DON'T ASK ANYONE AND NOT SEARCH YOUR PROFILE. HAPPY NOW?
METZ: THAT'S BETTER FOR YOUR HEALTH.
AFTER FEW MINUTES.
SID SIT IN HIS CAR.
SID: SHIT, SHIT, SHIT! AB KIYA KARUN. I REALY LIKE HER AND WANT TO KNOW ABOUT HER. KAHAN GAYI WO FILE JIS MAIN USKI TASVIR THI, DAMN YAAR.
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ABHILASHA: WHY U BEHAVE LIKE THIS WITH PIA.
ABHAY: THAT'S NOT UR PROBLEM CHEENI.
ABHILASHA: WHY? SHE IS MY FRIEND. MERA BHAI MERI DOST SE IS TARAH KA BEHAVE KARTA HAI, KYUN? I WANT ANSWER.
ABHAY: I HATE HER.
ABHILASHA: SHE IS NOT DESERVE ANYONE HATES SO, WHY U HATE HER.
ABHAY: SUN SAKTI HO TO SUNO BUT MUJH PE GHUSSA MAT HONA.
ABHILASHA: FIND! TELL ME.
ABHAY: SHE IS NOT INNOCENT. USKI WAJA SE DOBRIYAL HOUSE MAIN PROBLEMS REHTI HAIN, MISHA AUR PUNCHI TENSE REHTI HAIN AUR...
ABHILASHA CUT SENTENCE: THAT'S DOBRIYALS PROBLEM O.K AUR PUNCHI KI SEHAT AUR MISHA KI HARKATEN DEKH K AISA KAHAN SE LAGTA HAI K PIA IS PROBLEM FOR THEM? PIA IS NOT A PROBLEM DEAR BRO, SHE IS IN PROBLEM. KAMAL HAI JO BAAT MUJHE EK DIN MAIN SAMAJH AAGAYI TUMHE EK SAAL MAIN NAI AAYI.
ABHAY: U KNOW WHAT USNE BHAI KO KITNA KUCH BOLA THA JAB MAINE USKI RAGGING KI THI.
ABHILASHA: KYUN BOLA AUR WO TAB BHAI KO KAISE JANTI THI JAB TUMNE RAGGING KI AFTER ALL U BOTH R NEW TO EACH OTHER.
ABHAY: I WAS USING BHAI OFFICE DRESS SO, SHE SAY RUBBISH THING K TUMHARE BHAI KO SENSE NAI AUR KAISA BHAI HAI JO AISI CHEAP CHEEZON MAIN SATH DE RAHA HAI? ETC, ETC.
ABHILASHA: OH I C AUR TUMNE KYA KAHA?
ABHAY: MAINE KAHA K TUMHARE PARENTS NE TUMHE TAMIZ NAI SIKHAI AND U R BAD LUCK FOR THEM, ETC.
ABHILASHA: KYUN KAHA? U KNOW WHAT HER PARENTS ARE DIED IN AN ACCIDENT SO, WHY U WERE SAYING THAT RUBBISH THINGS.
ABHAY: US WAQT MUJHE KAISE PATA HOSAKTA THA THAT WAS FIRST INTRO. MUJHE BUHAT GHUSSA AARAHA THA K USNE BRO KO ITNA KUCH KAHA.
ABHILASHA: SAME THING! USEY B NAI PATA THA K HAMARE BRO HUM DONO K LIYE KYA HAIN AND HE IS COMPLETELY UNINFORMED K TUM KYA KARNE WALE HO UN K OFFICE SUIT K SATH. SO, SHE SAID. I'M SURE SHE WAS ALSO SAD AND ANGRY WITH UR RAGGING. KISKO ACHA LAGTA HAI SAB K SAMNE TAMASHA BANNA? KYA TUMHE ACHA LAGA JAB MERI RAGGING HORAHI THI. U PRAY K MAIN UN SAB KI BAATON MAIN NA AAUN. WHY? ONLY FOR THIS I'M UR SIS AND PIA HAVE NO ONE FOR PROTECT SO, U ALL THOUGHT THAT U CAN PLAY WITH HER EMOTIONS, DREAMS, WISHES AND HOPES.
ABHAY BUHAT SHARMINDA HUA.
ABHILASHA CONTINUE: PIA IS SOFT HEART GIRL. DUSRON KI BAATON MAIN MAT AAO. "PIA IS PROBLEM" KABHI DEKHA HAI USKI WAJA SE PUNCHI AUR MISHA KO TROUBLE MAIN AATE HUE? NAI NA TO PHIR WHY YOU BEHAVE LIKE JERK. ABHI B WAQT HAI TASVIR KA DUSRA RUKH DEKHO. PIA KYA HAI? KAISI HAI? KHUD JANO, DUSRON SE NA PUCHO. EK ACHE CLASSMATE KI TARAH BEHAVE KARO. KYA TUM SEH PAOGE AGAR KOI MERE SATH BADLY BEHAVE KARE? ANSWER ME.
ABHAY(ANGRY): I KILL THAT PERSON.
ABHILASHA: YEHI FARQ HAI MERE PAAS TUM HO, BHAI HAIN WHO SAVE ME SO I'M FEELING RELAX BUT PIA? NO ONE WITH HER. SO, SHE PROTECT HER SELF INFACT THERE IS SOME ONE WHO PROTECTS HER. BUT THAT'S NOT MEAN THAT U STILL TEASING AUR MAKE PRANK ON HER. PLZ BEHAVE LIKE MY SWEET BROTHER NOT A JERK.
ABHAY: I FEEL SO BAD THAT I HAD DONE SO MUCH WRONG WITH HER. I FEEL SHAMED.
ABHILASHA: DON'T DEGRADE UR SELF JUST SAY SORRY TO HER AND EVERYTHING GONE O.K.
ABHAY: O.K I'LL! BUT IF SHE REFUSE MY SORRY THEN?
ABHILASHA: I'LL CLEAR UR POSITION INFRONT OF HER. O.K NOW, SMILE PLZ.
ABHAY SMILE AND HUG HIS SISTER.


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AGNI AND PIA IN CANTEEN.
PIA: I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT U TRANSFERED IN MY CLASS.
AGNI SMILES.
PIA: SO CUTE!
AGNI: WHO?
PIA: UR SMILE!
AGNI: SAME TO U! BUT UR EXPRESSION IS MORE CUTE THEN UR SMILE.
PIA LAUGH: THANX! HAVE U INTEREST IN BASKET BALL?
AGNI: AAAH! I CAN PLAY FOOTBALL AND BASKET BALL BUT I'M BETTER IN FOOTBALL. WHY U ASK?
PIA: ACTUALLY RECENTLY I GOT INTEREST IN BASKET BALL. SO, I WANT TO KNOW THAT CAN U LEARN ME HOW CAN I PLAY? SPECIALLY DUBBLING? ITS INTERESTING.
AGNI: OH SURE WHY NOT! I MUST TELL U RULES AND ALSO TEACH U HOW CAN U PLAY IT.
PIA: THANX! CAN U DROP ME AT HOME?
AGNI: DEFINATELY! LETS GO.
PIA SIT IN AGNI'S CAR AND HE GIVE RACE TO ACCELATOR.

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CHAPTER 4 (PART 3)

*SID-ABH-SHA AVATAR*

NOW ABHAY LEAVES FROM COLLEGE FOR HOME. MISHA AND PUNCHI WALK TOWARDS THEIR CAR AND BIKE. MISHA SAW ABHAY AND CALL HIM.
MISHA: ABHAY! JUST STOP PLZ.
HE STOP AND SAW HER.
ABHAY: WHAT?
MISHA: HEY DUDE! WHAT'S UR PROBLEM MAN? ITNA RUDLY BEHAVE KYUN KAR RAHE HO?
ABHAY: NOTHING BUT PLEASE.
MISHA: WHAT PLEASE?
ABHAY CONFUSE THAT HE TOLD THEM ABOUT ABHILASHA OR NOT? BCOZ HE PROMISED ABHILASHA THAT HE WILL NOT TELL ANYONE THAT THEY BOTH ARE SIBLINGS.
ABHAY(IN HEAD): OH NO! AB KYA KARUN? YE CHEENI B NA PATA NAI KYA CHAHTI HAI. MUJHE BATANE NAI DE RAHI AUR KHUD? KHUD PATA NAI KAB BATAYE GI. AAHH! I CAN'T TELL THEM OTHERWISE CHEENI WILL ANGRY ON ME.
ABHAY TO MISHA: NOTHING! I WAS DISTURB. SORRY BUT PLZ I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN ANY SINGLE WORD ABOUT NEW COMER.
MISHA: OH I SEE! FINE BUT TUM...
ABHAY CUT SENTENCE: PLZ! KAL BAAT KARTE HAIN.
MISHA: O.K! TAKE CARE, BYE.
PUNCHI: BYE ABHAY!
ABHAY: BYE!

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SID IN HOME AND STILL FIND FILES(ALSO PHOTO) MARSHAL HELPS HIM.
SID: PLZ DHONDO MARSHAL! ITS REALLY IMPORTANT.
MARSHAL: SIR! I TRY MY BEST.
SID (HIS SELF): UFF YE FILES! DAD SE B JHAR SUNNI PARI AUR AB AGAR NAI MILI TO WO PATA NAI KYA KAREN GE AND THAT PHOTO ALSO MOM DAD NE DEKH LI TO BAND BAJ JAYE GI. PLZ HELP ME GOD.


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ABHAY STOP HIS CAR WHEN HE SAW ABHILASHA WITH POOR CHILD.
ABHAY: CHEENI! WHAT R U DOING HERE?
ABHILASHA TO CHILD: AAP JAO AUR KAL SCHOOL MAIN APNI ADMISSION FEES DE DENA O.K BUT PARHAI MAT CHORNA. AB SE TUMHARI FEES MAIN DUNGI.
CHILD: THANK U DIDI.
ABHAY: CHEENI! THAT'S SO SWEET BUT U KNOW AGAR DAD KO PATA CHAL GAYA TO KYA HOGA.
ABHILASHA: LEAVE IT BRO! DAD TO VALCANO SE INSPIRED HAIN KISI B BAAT PE PHAT PARTE HAIN AUR DAD KO BATAYE GA KOUN? MAIN TO BILKUL NAI AND U?
ABHAY(SMILES): DEFINATLY NOT. U DONE A WONDERFUL ACT SO, ITS IMPOSSIBLE. ME AND BHAI ALWAYS WITH U MY SWEET SIS.
ABHILASHA: LETS GO! TUM APNI KHATARA CAR AUR MAIN APNI SHAHI CYCLE PE.
ABHAY(LAUGH): O.K!

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PIA TO ARNAB: MUJHE AAP SE KUCH BAAT KARNI HAI.
ARNAB: HAN KAHO! KUCH CHAHIYE?
PIA: NO THANX! I WANT TO INFORM U THAT AFTER COLLEGE I'LL GO FOR BASKET BALL PRACTISE. CAN I?
ARNAB: OH THAT'S GREAT! SURE WHY NOT.
PIA: AAP KO KOI OBJECTION TO NAI HAI?
ARNAB: NOT AT ALL! INFACT I'M HAPPY FOR U. FINALLY TUMNE OTHER ACTIVITIES KI TARAF QADAM TO BARHAYA.
PIA: THANX ALOT! I HAVE TO GO BCOZ I'M DOING MY STUDIES.
ARNAB: SURE BETA!


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IN COLLEGE OFFICE. ALL TEACHERS MEETING HELD.
PRINCI: AAP SABKO URGENT NOTICE PE BULANE KA MAQSAD SIRF ITNA HAI K HAMARE DRAMA TEACHER ACHANAK CHALE GAYE HAIN AND NO IDEA K WO KAB WAPAS AAYENGE SO, CAN U ARRANGE DRAMA CLASS OR CAN U TAKE DRAMA TEACHER AUTHORITIES AS TEMPORARY. COMPETITION DAY QARIB HAI.
NO ONE READY FOR THIS.
RAJIV SAHAI: SIR! I'LL TAKE AUTHORITIES AT TEMPORARY TIME PERIOD.
PRINCI: R U SURE? STUDENTS KO SAMBHALNA ITNA AASAN NAI HAI. THEY ALL R NAUGHTY.
RAJIV SAHAI: DON'T WORRY SIR! I'M DOUBLE NAUGHTY SO, CAN I.
PRINCI: SURE AND BEST OF LUCK.
RAJIV SAHAI: THANK U SIR! FOR COMPETITION I THINK ROMIEO JULIET DRAMA ACT KARWANA CHAHIYE.
PRINCI: HMMM! GOOD IDEA BUT ITNI JALDI MANAGE KAR PAOGE?
RAJIV SAHAI: YES! I CAN SIR.
PRINCI: O.K! ALL THE VERY BEST!


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IN SITTING ROOM:


ABHAY AND ABHILASHA REST AFTER REACH AT HOME. SID ASK BOTH ABOUT FILES. ABHAY PANIC BUT CONTROL HIS SELF.
ABHAY: KYA BHAI KHUD HI SNAKE KI TARAH HAR FILE KO TREASURE SAMAJH K PEHRA DETE HO AUR HUM SE POCH RAHE HO.
ABHILASHA: NO BHAI! I DON'T KNOW.
SUDDENLY MARSHAL ENTER WITH PAPER PIECES AND CUTTED FILE.
MARSHAL: SIR! YE DUSTBIN MAIN SE MILI HAI. KAHIN ISI KO TO NAI DHOND RAHE?
ABHAY KI AANKHEN EK DAM BARI HOGAYIN. "OH NO."
SID: YE...! YEHI TO HAI WAHAN KAISE GAYI?
RAICHAND'S OLD SERVANT JO ABHAY AUR ABHILASHA KO JUICE SERVE KARNE AAYA THA SAID.
"SIR! YE TO KAL RAAT ABHAY BABA NE PHENKI THI JAB MAIN ABHILASHA BETI K LIYE DOODH(MILK) LENE JA RAHA THA TAB DEKHA THA."
ABHAY NE KHISAKNE KI TAYYARI KI BUT...
SID: STOP...!
ABHAY STOP AND HAS A PANIC SMILE ON HIS FACE.
ABHAY: HE LIE BHAI! I DON'T DO THIS.
ABHILASHA: R U SICK! HE IS MORE OLDER THAN US AND U SAID HE IS LIEYING. R U SURE U DOING NOTHING?
SID FROWN ON HIM: ABHAY! TELL ME THE TRUTH. (TO SERVANT): U CAN GO NOW.
HE LEAVE FROM ROOM.
ABHAY: SO...S...SOR...RRY... BHAI IT JUST MIST...
SID CUT SENTENCE: MISTAKE K BACHE AAJ TUMHE NAI CHORUNGA.
SID START RUNNING BEHIND ABHAY. BOTH RUN IN CIRCLE IN THE ROOM.
ABHAY RUN AND SAY: PLZ BHAI! I'M SORRY.
SID ALSO RUN: BHAR MAIN GAYA TERA SORRY. RUK TUJHE TO MAIN BATATA HUN.
SID TAKE A PILLOW FROM SOFA AND THROW TOWARDS ABHAY. ABHAY CAUGHT THAT PILLOW. SID TAKE ANOTHER PILLOW AND THROWN, THAT HIT ABHAY. SUDDENLY ABHILASHA WHO WATCH WHOLE SCENE ENTER FROM RIGHT SIDE WITH MICHEAL JACKSON DANCE AND SUNG A SONG
"BEAT IT" (IN HER WORDS) "BEAT HIM, JUST BEAT HIM, BHAI BEAT HIM, PILLOW HIT HIM, VASE HIT HIM, JUST BEAT HIM". SID AND ABHAY STOP AND SAW HER DANCE, LISTEN HER SONG AND ENJOY. WO DANCE KARTE KARTE LEFT SIDE PE CHALI GAYI. SID ASK.
SID: AYE! TERA HOGAYA?
ABHILASHA: YAH! U CONTINUE. TAKE THIS.
SHE GAVE FLOWER VASE TO HIM.
SID: THANX CHEENI!
ABHAY: NO! NO BHAI! NO PLZ DON'T.
SID THROW IT, ABHAY TAKE A SIDE AND SAFE. ABHILASHA ENTER AGAIN FROM LEFT TO RIGHT SAME WORK SUNG A SONG WITH BHANGRA
"LUDDI HAI JAMALO PAO, LUDDI HAI JAMALO, BHAI DUSRA PIECE UTHAO AUR ABHAY KI BAJAO, LUDDI HAI JAMALO PAO". BOTH STOP AGAIN AND ENJOY. SHE COMPLETE AND AFTER THAT SID THROW ANOTHER PIECE.
ALL GOING STILL 15 MINUTES. SID THROW THINGS, ABHAY TRYING TO SAVE FROM THEM, ABHILASHA'S SONG AND DANCE. BOTH STOP, ENJOY AND AGAIN START THROW AND SAVE GAME.
AFTER 15 MINUTES MORE. SID SEARCHING A THING TO THROW BUT HE DIDN'T FIND BCOZ HE THROW ALMOST ALL THINGS. ABHILASHA NE USEY AANKH SE ISHARA KIYA BUT HE DIDN'T RECOGNIZE. ABHILASHA ENTER AGAIN WITH
"DE GHUMA K, GHUMA K" AND DANCING.
ABHAY: ITS FOUL! TUM ABHI AAYIN THIN AB HAMARI TURN HAI.
SID: AYE! HUM KHEL NAI RAHE KYA TURN TURN LAGA RAKHI HAI.
ABHAY: JO HO RAHA HAI USEY DEKH K AISA HI LAGA.
ABHILASHA INTERRUPT: CAN I COMPLETE MY DANCE?
SID: YA SURE!
SHE ACT AND GAVE PAPER WEIGTH TO SID.
ABHAY SHOUT: NO PLZ! AREY KYA KAR RAHE HO MAIN APKA ZATI(PERSONAL) BHAI HUN.
SID: FILE KYUN PHARI?
ABHAY: NA NA PHARI NAI CUT KI. US MAIN WO PHOTO...
SID CUT SENTENCE: WHAT PHOTO? IT JUST FILE DAMN IT. THAT'S IMPORTANT.
SID PLAYING WITH PAPER WEIGTH.
ABHAY: SORRY! MUJHE PIA PE GHUSSA AARAHA THA AUR WO PHOTO...
SID: WHATEVER! TUM AUR TUMHARA 2 NUMBARI GHUSSA. MERI HI FILE MILI THI.
SID WANT TO THROW PAPER WEIGHT.
ABHAY: SORRY BHAI! PLZ YE NAI LAG JAYEGI.
SID: SORRY! MY FOOT.
ABHAY: PLZ BHAI! GHALTI HOGAI.
SID: GHALTI K BACHEY MERI ITNE GHANTON KI MEHNAT KO BARBAAD KAR DIYA.
ABHILASHA WHO STAND NEAR WINDOW MSG(THROUGH MOB) SID: BHAI JALDI KARO DAD KI CAR AAGAYI HAI.
SID(WHISPERING): OH NO! (TO ABHAY): U CAN'T SAVE ABHAY.
CHAND ENTER IN LOUNGE LISTEN SOME VOICE FROM SITTING ROOM SO, HE WALK TOWARDS IT. SID THROW PAPER WEIGHT ABHAY JUMP BEHIND SOFA TO SAVE.
SID AND ABHILASHA RUN AFTER SAW CHAND FROW WINDOW.
CHAND ENTER. AFTER FEW SECONDS ABHAY STAND AND SHOCK TO SAW HIM.
CHAND: YE KYA HASHAR KIYA HAI ROOM KA.
ABHAY(PANIC): WO ACTUALLY...MAIN...WO ...MAIN...
CHAND: QUITE! MUJHE TUMHARI "MAIN" MAIN KOI INTEREST NAI HAI. SAAF KARO ROOM KO JALDI.
ABHAY BACK IN FUN MOOD: MAIN KARUN?
CHAND SHOUT: NAHI TUMHARA BAAP KAREGA.
ABHAY IN FULL MOOD: I LOVE U DAD MUAAHH! THANK U SO MUCH.
ABHAY SAYS AND RUN OUTSIDE. CHAND WANTS TO STOP BUT HASEENA STOP HIM.
HASEENA: CHORO CHAND! ABHI BACHA HAI WO.
CHAND: O HASEENA! TUMHARA YE PYAR, YE LAAD HAMEN KISI DIN BUHAT BARI MUSIBAT MAIN PHANSAYE GA.


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NEXT MORNING:

PIA RECIEVE A PARCEL BEFORE ENTER IN COLLEGE. SHE SAW IN WHOLE COLLEGE "COMPETITION" PUMFLITS ARE PASTE. SHE READ IT. PIEON SAYS TO HER THAT SPORTS TEACHER CALLS HER WHOLE CLASS IN DRAMA ROOM.
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PRECAP:
*ABHAY'S SORRY TO PIA.
*MAITHLI BEHAVIOUR TOWARDS SID BECOME BETTER.
*PREPARATIONS OF ROMIEO JULIET PLAY.

SPECIALLY:

A BIG TO MY SIS "ABHIYAROCKZ" WHO CORRECT MY MISTAKES AND TYPE MY FF FROM REGISTER TO PC AND SHE IS ALSO FUNNY SONGS EDITOR.

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear ..
so nw abhay is going 2 chng his behaviour 2wrd pia ...
waiting 4 next update ...
pls pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow annokhi awesome update I so loved it yaar.Abhay,sid gight was awesome & usne Abhilasha ka dance was rocking😆😆.Finally Abhay realized his mistake.Lets c how Pia will react 2 his sorry & will agni & rajeev fell 4 Pia?😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update🤗...abhilasha is sooo sweet😊...waiting 4 abhilasha n agni scenes.😍😍..n the best part was the fight😆.😆..gosh u cracked me up🤣.🤣..i was laughing like mad.🤣.🤣🤣abhilasha's dance was funny .hope abhay understands piya soon😊...continue soon.😊..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww it was an awesome update anokhi . sid n abhay's fights were cute. thanks a lot for such an faboulous update dear . please pm me next time n update soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..ausum update..u updated after such a long time and it was worth waiting...

abhilasha is so naughty and abhay...usi ka bhai hai...pia was as usual..at her innocent best...what an update ya...gosh...m happy..abhay realised his mistake..wanna see how he says sorry to pia...now hope there is a new start of friendship..and love soon...

update soon..thanks for pm...

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