FF#Main tum aur Mohabbat(#1) Closed - Page 67

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Wowww di I m speechless:-) I have no words ITS JUS SUPERB:-):-) hahahaha Abhay is sooo Cute:-):-):-) Loved the Bhagam Bhag of Abhay Pia and Agni;-);-) hahahaha;-) PLEASE EK REQUEST HAI Pia ko bhi Abhay ke liye Feelings kara do I WANT TO READ MORE ABHIYA:-):-):-)

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

loved the update , it was awesome 😃

tat abhiya fight was really cute and abhiya hiding agni was hilarous , glad tat jeh got his sabak , what an lamba upd 👏

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

LOL awesome update annokhi.It was fab & one hiliarious update.Abhay-Abhilash song comment baazi,Abhiya & Agni's scene.LOL poor Agni:P.Abhilasha in pool & Metz nai jo jeh ki bajayi hai.Gosh it was full bang on.Plz cont..😳

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Superb update. I loved it, specially the last part. That stretcher vala part was damn funny. I loved it totally. Plz continue soon and pm me.

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

Haseena: Abhay tum Chand ko jante ho.
Abhay (interrupt): Ofcourse! He is my Dad. Lekin Mom meri yaddasht nai khoyi.

Abhay: Kyun raaton ko main ab chain se so na sakun oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Aaj kal machar b to buhat hain.
Abhay: Kyun aata nai mujhe din main b chain o sukoon oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Garmi jo hai.
Abhay: Kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karun oo ooo...
Abhilasha: Dorey jo parte hain.
Abhay: Kyun tu jo bole koi sune na wo main hi sunun...
Abhilasha: Kisi b angle se insaan jo nai lagte.
Abhay: Dil ye bekarar kyun hai...
Abhilasha: B.P low hogaya hai.
Abhay: Is pe dhun sawar kyun hai...
Abhilasha: Dhun hi sawar hosakti hai musical instruments k liye jaga jo nai hai.
Abhay: Kyun hai ye khumar kyun hai tu bata...
Abhilasha: Bhaang jo pi rakhi hai tumne.

Loved d dialouges🤣

Abhiya & Agni were amazing😆

...continue soon & thnx 4 d pm:)

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

gr8t updt

awesome loved it 👏👏

cont soon

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

amazing update best part for me was dhunai of Jeh and poor Agni 😆

Originally posted by: deshdeewani

so sorry.can't comment.

very busy with exams.

will comment after 17th june.😊

CHAPTER19-1

Maithli ne apne servant se Dobriyals ki lane line pe phone karwaya k wo Jay ka friend baat kar raha hai, Jay uska phone nai le raha isliye usne lane line pe call ki. Madhu came in Jay's room but he is not there then she search Jay.
Madhu: Misha! Punchi! Jay mila?
Both: No Mom!
Arnab: Kahan ja sakta hai? (to Misha) Misha watchman ko bulao usse pucho may be usne Jay ko bahar jate dekha ho.
Misha: Yes Papa!
Misha go outside. Madhu realise Pia is not present there.
Madhu: Ye Pia kahan mar gayi? Kahin usne Jay ko nuqsaan na pohnchaya ho?
Arnab: Stop it Madhu!
Misha came back.
Misha: Papa watchman ne Jay ko hamare ghar k back side area ki taraf jate dekha hai, jab watchman round laga raha tha tab.
Arnab (thinking): Yani... Takriban half hour pehle.
Madhu: O God! Mera bacha. Chalo wahan.
All move towards there.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Sid move to and fro. He feel frustrated coz Haseena didn't answer him. He try to talk later but she ignore him. If Haseena reject Maithli then what will he do? That question tease him alot and he get frustrated and feel so helpless on this situation.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Doctor complete Jay's check up. Jay lay on his bed. Madhu, Arnab, Punchi and Misha sit around him. He came back in senses and shout "HELP"! "HELP".
Madhu: Jay! What happen? Why are you shouting?
Jay saw all who look worried.
Doctor: Ye darr gaye hain, inhen araam ki sakht zarurat hai.
Punchi doctor ko ghar k main door tak chorne jati hai.
Arnab: Relax beta! Hum sab hain tumhare saath.
Jay: Wo... Wo... (he is still scary.)
Madhu: Kya hua Jay? Tum wahan kyun gaye aur tumhari ye halat kis ne ki?
Jay: Witch... Han wo witch hi thi mmmu...jhhe... marna chahti thi.
Arnab: Jay! You need rest beta. Hum kal baat karenge. O.k chalo Madhu aur Misha.
Jay hold Arnab's hand: Nai, nai plz mujhe akela mat choren, Dad plz.
Arnab: O.k!
Arnab ruk jata hai, Madhu aur Misha chali jati hain, thori dair baad jab Jay sn jata hai tab Arnab us k room se bahar aa jate hain.
Madhu: Witch? How that's possible?
Misha: I'm sleepy so i'm going to my bed.
Punchi: Me too... (both leave.)
Madhu: Pia kahan hai?
Arnab (chir kar): Arey apne room main hogi jab dekho us bechari k pichey pari rehti ho.

On Other Hand:

Jay's Room:

A sound echo. "JAY"! "JAY..." Main tumhe le jane aayi hun, "JAY"! "JAY", "JAY" utho.
Jay wake up. She stand infront of him. She smile. Her dirty sharp teeth shown. Jay scare. She said: "JAY"! Main tumhe kha jaungi. I love Bar B.Q. Tum batao tumhara "Tikka" bana k khaun, "Kabab", "Tandoori" ya kuch aur?
Jay scare alot. He want to shout but voice not came from throat. She thinking and move her eyes here and there for shown excitement.
She: Mmm! Mere khayal se tumhara "Tikka" ziyada better rahega. "Jay's Tikka Boti" Hahahaha...
Jay forcefully shout "MOM"! "MOM".

On Other Hand:

Arnab Madhu fight stop coz of sound came from Jay's room. He shouting. Both move towards him. Jay's body full in sweat. After a minute, Jay feel better. Madhu ask and Jay told whole story about that "WITCH".
Madhu: Ye Pia hai. I'm sure.
Arnab: Tum pagal hogayi ho.
Madhu: Sirf wohi ghayab kyun hai?
Arnab: So rai hai. Jab jagi hoti hai tab tumhe pareshani hoti hai ab so rahi hai tab b...
Maithli came downstairs. Water bottle in her hand. She is in night trouser and shirt. She move towards kitchen.
Arnab: Lo dekh lo. So rai thi, pani lene aayi hai, dekh lo. Ab yakeen aa gaya?
Madhu: Hunh...
Madhu and Arnab thinking about Jay. Jay scare from witch and Maithli... An evil smile crip on her lips. She fill up bottle with water and move towards her room. A proud come in her walk.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Agni rest in room. Suddenly knock on door. He say "YES". Door open Abhilasha show her face first and say "May i come in?". Agni thought for a while and then say "YES". She smile and come inside.
Abhilasha: Hi!
Agni quietly saw her.
Abhilasha: Ammm! Ab tabiyat kaisi hai?
Agni: Buhat jaldi khayal aagaya meri tabiyat ka? Well, thek hun, warna meri behen aur tumhare bhai ne upar pohnchane main koi kasar nai chori thi. (Agni remember that stracher journey.)
Abhilasha look guilty.
Agni: Sorry to be rude.
Abhilasha: No! Its o.k. Actually meri himmat nai ho rai thi tumhara samna karne ki so,...
Agni (interrupt): Why?
Abhilasha: Abhay ne jo kiya wo mujhe pata hai. I'm extremely sorry. Meri waja se Abhay ne tumhen itna badly hit kiya.
Agni (sigh): No, not at all! Mistake was mine. Mujhe tum pe haath nai uthana chahiye tha. Tum to ho pagal aur immature si but i'm mature so mujhe itna aggressive behave nai karna chahiye tha.
Abhilasha: What? Pagal aur immature? What do yo mean by?
Agni ignore her question: Abhay ko ghalat isliye nai kahunga k agar meri behen ko koi hurt kare to main usko kisi b qeemat pe nai chorunga. So, in that case Abhay was right in his step.
Abhilasha asked: Main pagal hun?
Agni: I'm not a psychiatrist so agar tum kehti ho to main maan leta hun k tum pagal ho.
Abhilasha: What? Aur main immature kahan se dikhti hun? Bolo.
Agni point on her head: Wahan se.
Abhilasha look him with anger: Listen Mr. na to main pagal hun aur na hi immature. U r heartless.
Agni's face expression become too serious but Abhilasha still continue coz she didn't saw that expression.
Abhilasha: No feelings, no happy smile, Kuch b to nai. Zindagi kaise ji jati hai tumhe pata hi nai hai. U know what zindagi ko guzaarne main aur jeene main fark hota hai but u... aisa lagta hai faltu main zinda ho.
She look him, his expression is so painful now. His eyes layers wet coz of tears. Abhilasha quickly quiet. She saw him with surprise. He close his eyes to stop tears from falling. Take a long breath and for change the topic he ask Abhilasha.
Agni: Tum mujhe aap janab se kyun nai bulatin? Tamiz nai hai tum main?
Abhilasha sit as same position. Agni call her name. Abhilasha look him and ask "WHAT?"
Agni: Main tumse bara hun so, mujhe aap kar k bulaya karo jaise Pia aur Priya bolti hain.
Abhilasha: Kyun? Kyun? Kis khushi main? Main pagal hun jo tumhen aap janab kar k wo b Pia ki tarah bulaun?
Agni: So what's the problem?
Abhilasha: Coz u r her brother.
Agni: Han to jaise unka bhai waise hi tumhara b bha...
Abhilasha rapidly interrupt: Hey don't u dare han. Mere liye mere khud k official, gaurantee k saath wale bhai hi kafi hain. Main pagal hun jo tumko bhai bolun.
Agni: Han to problem kya hai tumhe mujhe bhai bolne main?
Abhilasha ne usey aise dekha jaise abi Agni ko kachcha chaba jayegi.
Abhilasha: Tumhe do behenen kam lagti hain? Wo b Pia aur Maithli jaisi behenen?
Agni: What do you mean by? Khabardar jo meri behenon ko kuch b kaha. Mujhe kam lagti hon ya na hon lekin tumhare bhaiyyon ko to tum ek b dozen k barabar lagti hogi.
Abhilasha yelled: How dare you? U fool... No i'm fool jo yahan aapse aapki tabiyat puchne aagayi "SWAMI JI".
Agni shock, Abhilasha rock.
Agni: Don't u dare call me that "SWAMI JI".
Abhilasha tease him: Swami ji!
Agni aggressive: Aahhh! I'm not ur Swami.
Abhilasha: So what? I'm calling u Swami ji.
Agni: Get out from here. Tumse baat karna fazul hai. I say out.
Abhilasha: Just chill Swami ji warna B.P high hojayega.
Agni: I'm not B.P patient now plz just leave.
Abhilasha: O.k Swami ji! Take care, Good night and Sweet dreaming.
Agni: Go to hell with ur Swami ji.
Abhilasha: Arey! Pehle shaadi to hone dain. Aap b na propose kiya nai aur honeymoon ki place batadi.
Agni pick a pillow and throw towards her. It hits her.
Abhilasha: Kya Swami ji ja to rai thi.
Agni: Get out right now.
Abhilasha leave. Agni hold his head.
Agni: "Swami ji". Oh no! Ye larki khud to pagal hai mujhe b pagal kar degi. God! Main kahan phans gaya.

On Other Hand:

Abhilasha laugh in her room.
"Swami ji! Ab pata chalega bachu. Bare aaye "bhai" banane chale hain. Buhat kam logon ko unka ideal milta hai and Mr. Agni u r my ideal. Aise hi bhai bana k apne pairon pe kulhari mar dun, no, never. U will be mine and u have to be mine. No one can take u away from me".
She went to dressing room for change night suit.

----------------------------------------------------------------------

scroll down.

.

.

.

.

.

CHAPTER 19-2

for vm and abhiya scence creadit goes to my sis Abhiyarockz (lamha)..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wxuym-xvsdw[/YOUTUBE]

At Terrace:

Abhay and Pia both stand with terrace boundary. Their back face the wall. They taking small sips of coffee and talking. Pia starring moon and Abhay focus her.
Pia: You know what Abhay! Jab mera koi dost, koi rishta, koi apna nai tha tab sirf ye moon hi tha jis se main apna har dukh share karti thi.
Abhay: Aur ab?
Pia: Ab...! Ab main apni saari khushiyan isse share karti hun.
Abhay: Aur jo tumhare apne hain, tumhare dost hain unse share nai kartin?
Pia: Karti hun bilkul karti hun magar jo mera pehla sahara bana usey main nai chod sakti. You know what's the most important thing?
Abhay: What?
Pia: I love to starring moon...!
Abhay (low voice): And i love to starring you!
Pia: Kuch kaha tumne?
Abhay: Aaan... Nai!
Pia: Abhay! Ek baat puchun?
Abhay: Bilkul pucho. Permission kyun le rai ho?
Pia: Tumne mujhse dosti kyun ki?
Abhay: Matlab?
Pia: Matlab ye k main wohi Pia hun jise tum napasand karte the, irritate karte the aur shayad nafrat b karte the.
Abhay hurt by her last sentence.Now he look at moon quietly and Pia look him for answer. Some moments pass quietly. Abhay move forward and put his cup on table. Pia come towards him and put her hand on his shoulder from back. She also put her empty cup on table.
Pia: Bolo Abhay!
Abhay look at her sadly and sigh.
Abhay: Maine tumse kabhi nafrat nai ki Pia. Han napasand zarur karta tha wo b sirf is waja se k Misha aur Punchi ne jis view se tumhara introduction karwaya aur jo kuch tumhare bare main bataya wo mere bure behaviour ki waja bana warna maine tumse kabhi nafrat nai ki Pia aur na hi kar sakta hun.
Pia: Kyun?
Abhay: Sahi waqt aane par zarur bataunga.
Pia: Par abi kyun nai?
Abhay: Tumhe abi janna hai?
Pia: Han!
Abhay look her and Pia get little blushed and confused at his look. She move to go down but Abhay block her way. She move another side but he block again. Pia look him and push him away but Abhay hold her hands and pull her close. Abhay start teasing her.
Abhay: So, Miss Pia! U want to know?
Pia: Let me go Abhay!
Abhay: U want to know naa?
Pia: No!
Abhay: But why?
Pia: Plz Abhay! Leave me and let me go.
Abhay put Pia's face up to look in her eyes.
Pia huskily: Abh... Abhay!
Abhay put finger on her lips.
Abhay: Ssshhh!
Pia look in his hypnotic eyes and lost. They both starring eachother. They both didn't realize when they coming more closer. There is no space betweem them. Now, Abhay hold her from waist and Pia's hand on his shoulder. Their faces coming more closer. Their lips just inches away to touch eachothers. Suddenly Pia's mob ringed and they both come back in senses. Pia jerkly push herself from him. They both didn't meet eyes. Pia controlling her breath and Abhay feel embarrace.
Pia (didn't meet eyes): Its too late now! I have to go bye and good night.
Abhay want to stop her to say sorry but she run fast. Abhay punch the near wall.
Abhay: Damn! What the hell was going just few minutes before? Why i can't control myself? What she think about me?
Abhay move to and fro.
Abhay: I have to say sorry to her. I don't want to loose her.
Abhay put his phone, type sorry msg and want to send but stop.
Abhay: If she refuses my sorry then what would i do?
Still he move to and fro.
Abhay: No Abhay! Stop thinking in this way. She is only urs. She accept ur sorry just send msg.
Thinking this he send msg.

On Other Hand:

Pia come in room, lock the door and control her breath.
Pia: What just happened between me and Abhay and why?
Pia move forward and sit on bed.
Pia: Thank God! Nothing bad happened. Agar wo msg nai aaya hota to...! Par msg tha kiska? Kahin Maithli ka ...
She quickly put mobile and check. She think right its Maithli's msg. Pia smile. Maithli daily send her Good Morning and Good Night wishes. Pia reply her and want to put her phone suddenly it ringed again. She check this time Abhay's msg blink. Pia open it and read. Its a sorry msg with sad emoticon. Pia smile again and reply him "Its o.k! Nothing wrong happen." with happy emoticon.
She put mob on table and go for taking bath before sleep.

Next Day:

Agni feel so easy and well coz he is free from his guilt (slap to Abhilasha). He said sorry to her. Now he is waiting for Maithli.

On Other Hand:

Abhay fall down from bed with a person covered in blanket. His eyes are closed.
Abhay: Pia! I love u. I love u Pia!
Sid remove blanket from his face and look Abhay as he doubt on Abhay's mental condition.
Sid: God! Isey saari behoda baaten mujhse hi karni hoti hain.
(Sid Abhay ko uthane aaya tha lekin phir us k saath hi late gaya tha jab achanak us k upar blanket aaya aur Abhay Sid ko lekar bed se gira.)
Sid push him away. Abhay wake up and saw Sid with stupid expression.
Abhay: Bhai aap... Not again.
Sid: Tum kitne chichorey ho Abhay!
Abhay: Measurement nai ki.
Sid: Tharki! Tujhe puri duniya main ek main hi mila hun har kisam ki behoda baatein karne k liye?
Abhay: Romantic! Not behoda! And by the way mere har romantic aur royal dream main ghus k taang aap aratey hain. Kabhi BMW ki keys haath main aate aate reh jati hain, kabhi main king bante reh jata hun aur ab...? Ab jo aapko sunna nai chahiye wo b aap se keh diya, sirf isliye k aap subha subha meri neend kharab karne aajate hain aur mere dreams ki b happy ending se pehle the end kar dete hain.
Sid: Shut up! Utho aur mun dho k aan ta k hosh main aajao chalo...

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Maithli call Rajiv Sahai.
R.S: Good Morning!
Metz: Good Morning!
R.S: Itni subha call karne ki koi khas waja?
Metz: Yah! Wo actually... Aapke sawal ka jawab dena tha.
R.S: Phir kya socha?
Metz: O.k! I'm with you.
R.S (sigh): Thank God! U r with me. Seriously mujhe laga k shayad main aakhri umeed b kho dunga. U can't imagine mere liye wo sab janna kitna zaruri hai.
Tears rolling in Metz eyer.
Metz: I know that. Maine kisi ko dard main toot'tey dekha hai. I never forget the moment when he crying on my shoulder for her. I can't forget his tears, his pain, his sorrow.
R.S: Plz don't cry Maithli! Just find out his happiness back. I want to saw him happy in his life.
Metz: I just hoping this coz i can't do anything.
R.S: I know! O.k thanx for ur corporate.
Metz: O.k, bye!
R.S: Bye! Have a nice day.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Abhilasha make fresh fruit juice. Her lips smile. She remember last night. How she change Agni's mood from sorrow to angry young man.
"I know there is something which made him sad. He is rude coz of some reason. There is something so painful behind his smile. But what? I have to find out".
She mix citrus fruit juice in other juices.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Haseena and Sid in Garden area.
Haseena: Sid! Go and propose Maithli.
Sid surprised: What? Maithli? You mean you agree?
Haseena: Han! Chand se baat karli hai. He is agree and said k ye shaadi jald se jald honi chahiye. I don't know how? But it will be. So Sid! Go, propose her.
Sid: Main usey apni sachai batana chahta hun.
Haseena: No! U can't. U have to propose and marry her. Just do it understand. Ab koi baat nai hogi is bare main.
Sid: But Mom!
Haseena: Propose Maithli or marry someone else. Choice is yours.
Haseena leave.

PRECAP:

Abhay confess Pia, Sid propose Maithli and Abhilasha found a truth about Agni.