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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 8

( Abhiya & Agsha dance with sidmetz dinner)



METZ CONFUSED BETWEEN SHOULD SHE GO OR NOT?
METZ: AMMM YAMMM! WHAT WOULD I DO YAR? YE RAICHAND TO KUCH ZIYADA HI INVOLVE HO RAHA HAI. UFF! NO YAR I WANT NO ONE IN MY LIFE.
" O.K. METZ JUST TAKE IT EASY. AAJ HI SAB CLEAR KARDO." METZ HERSELF.
" THAT'S GOOD! NOW, I'M READY TO GO." METZ SMILES.
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CAMERA CLOSE UP START FOOT TO HEAD, MOVE SLOWLY. START:
" SILVER SANDALS, SILVER AARA PAJAMA AND BLACK ANARKALI DRESS WITH SILVER EMBROIDERY AND BEATS WORK. SIMPLE SILVER PENDENT WITH BLACK BEATS. CUTE SMILE AND SHINY EYES WITH LONG SILKY HAIR.: THAT'S PIA WHO LOOK A FAIRY THIS TIME.
ABHILASHA: WOW! GORGEOUS! HAINA BHAI?
SHE ASKED ABHAY BUT NO REPLY. SHE SAW HIM AND MOVE TOWARDS HIM.
PIA COMING DOWN THROW STAIRS SLOELY.
PUNCHI: HUNH! BEHEN JI KAHI KI.
MISHA: MERE FACE KO SLAP KIYA THA, YE SMILE KARTI HUI MUJHE ACHI NAI LAG RAHI.
ABHILASHA SEE ABHAY AND ENJOY HIS EXPRESSION AND ABHAY...
ABHAY MUN AUR AANKHEN DONO KHOL K FREEZE HO CHUKA THA.
(WO KEHTE HAIN NA)

DIL KISI KA HO JANAY MAIN SIRF EK LAMHA LAGTA HAI

ABHILASHA WHISPERING ABHAY:


" NA DEKHO ITNI BE-BAKI SE AFSANA NA BAN JAYE,
NIGAHON K TASADUM MAIN BARI TASIR HOTI HAI."



BUT ABHAY NOT LISTEN HER. USKA DIL AJEEB LAY PE DHARAK RAHA THA. PIA NOTICE ABHAY WHO FOCUS ON HER. SHE LITTLE FEEL EMBARRESED.


" YE KIN NAZRON SE AAJ TU NE DEKHA,
K TERA DEKHNA DEKHA NA JAYE."



AGNI ENTER. PIA RUN TOWARDS HIM FOR WELCOME. ABHAY FREEZENESS OVER NOW.

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SID WAITING BUT METZ...
METZ REACH AT TIME.
SID: HELLO! HOW ARE YOU?
METZ: HI! FINE.
SID: YOU LOOKING GORGEOUS.
METZ WEAR KURTA AND JEANZ.
METZ: TEST YOUR EYES PLZ.
SID(SMILE): WAISE MAIN KAFI DAID SE INTIZAR KAR RAHA THA.
METZ: SO WHAT? I'M ON TIME. MAINE TIMHE WAQT SE PEHLE AANE KO NAI KAHA THA.
SID: O.K. O.K. I GIVE UP! NOW, SHALL WE GO?
METZ: SURE!


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MADHU SAYS SOME WORDS TO ALL GUESTS.
MADHU: MAIN BUHAT KHUSH HUN K ITNE SHORT NOTICE PE AAP SAB AAYE AUR MERE BACHON KI KAMYABI MAIN SHARIK HUE. PUNCHI AUR MISHA NE IS DOBTEY HUE DRAMA KO ITNI ACHI TARAH SE SAMBHALA K KYA BATAUN. ALL CREDITS GOES TO MY DARLING DAUGHTERS.
ABHILASHA, ABHAY AND PIA SHOCKED ON THIS CHEATING. AGNI MOVE TOWARDS MADHU AND SAID.
AGNI: EXCUSE ME MRS. DOBRIYAL! I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING. PLZ GIVE ME MIC.
MADHU: YA SURE!
SHE GIVE MIC TO AGNI.
AGNI:
GOOD EVENING TO ALL OF YOU! THOSE WHO WAS PRESENT IN COMPITITION AND THOSE WHO WASN'T LET ME CLEAR YOU THAT I AGREE MISHA AND PUNCHI WAS A PART OF PLAY BUT MRS. DOBRIYAL WASN'T PRESENT IN COMPITITION SO, SHE NEVER KNOE THAT, THAT WAS A TEAM WORK. EVERYONE FOR EXAMPLE: RUHI,ABHILASHA, KABIR, MISHA AND PUNCHI ARE A PART OF PLAY AND THEY DONE THEIR BEST BUT THERE IS TWO NAME WHO DOING SUCH A NICE WORK WITH HILLARIOUS DIALOUGES, THAT'S ARE ABHAY AND PIA. PLZ GIVE THEM A BIG APPLAUSE. (EVERYONE CLAPPING). IF THEY DON'T USE 100% SENSE OF HUMOR PLAY WAS FAILED SO, ABHAY AND PIA ALSO ABHILASHA, RUHI, KABIR WELL DONE JOB GUYS.
ABHAY SAW AGNI BCOZ HE GIVE COMPLIMENT TO HIM
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ABHAY(IN HEAD): OH MY! I DON'T BELIEVE YAR UNCLE GIVE ME COMPLIMENT.
MADHU FEEL AWKWARD.
ABHILASHA LOOK HAPPY AND PIA FEEL FREE AND A BIG SMILE ON HER FACE. PUNCHI AND MISHA LOOK VERY ANGRY.


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SID'S ORDER SERVED BY WAITER. TABLE ARRANGE BY PRAWN CURY, ROASTED SHIRUMPS, CHIKEN MANCHORIEN AND MANY MORE SEA FOOD AND OTHER CHINESE DISHES.
METZ: YE WAITER PURE RESTAURANT K ORDER HAMARI TABLE PE SERVE KAR GAYA SHAYAD.
SID(SMILE): NOT AT ALL! THIS ALL FOR YOU. SHALL WE START.
METZ: O.K! YA SURE.
SID: NE PRAWN CURY SERVE KI PHIR SHIRUMPS SERVE KIYE. METZ AANKHEN PHARE USEY DEKH RAHI THI.
SID: WO ACTUALLY MERI SIS NE AAJ BUHAT MEHNAT SE DINNER READY KIYA THA MAIN USEY INKAAR NAI KAR SAKTA THA SO, I ALREADY DONE. YOU START MAIN TUMHE CHAMPION SE COMPANY DUNGA.
METZ SMELL BOTH DISHES WHICH SERVE BY SID AND SAW HIM.
SID SMILE BUT SUDDENLY METZ START SNEEZING.
SID: WHAT HAPPEN MAITHLI! ARE YOU O.K?
METZ: I HATE SEA FOOD! I'M ALLERGIC FROM SEA FOOD.
SID: OH! I'M SO SORRY.
SID CALL WAITER AND GIVE BACK ALL SAE FOOD.
METZ: I'M NOT FEELING WELL. PLZ I WANT TO GO BACK HOME.
SID: BUT...
METZ CUT SENTENCE: NO BUT PLZ! I'M SORRY TO SPOIL YOUR DINNER BUT I PROMISE WHEN I FEEL GOOD WE GO ANOTHER PLACE FOR DINNER OR LUNCH.
SID: O.K. AND PLZ DON'T SAY SORRY. LETS GO I'LL DROP YOU AT HOME.
METZ: NO!
SID: PLZ I CONCERNED A DOCTOR AND THEN I'LL DROP YOU AT YOUR HOME.
METZ: NO DOCTOR PLZ!
SID: O.K MISS KHUBSURAT! AS YOU WANT.


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ABHAY MOVE HERE AND THERE IN PARTY, CONVERSE WITH OTHERS BUT STILL FOCUS ON PIA. NOW, PIA FEEL MORE EMBARRESED. JAY WANT TO DANCE WITH ABHILASHA SO, HE SUGGEST DANCE GAME IN WHICH PARTNERS ARE CHANGE. FIRST JAY ASK WITH ABHILASHA TO DANCE BUT SHE REFUSE AND RAN TOWARDS ABHAY. EVERYONE CHOSE THEIR PARTNER BUT NO ONE ASK AGNI THAT'S WHY PIA MOVE TOWARDS HIM AND ASK HIM FOR A DANCE AND HE ACCEPT HER REQUEST. EVERY ONE TAKE THEIR POSITIONS. SONG "NAZAR SE NAZAR MILE" START PLAYING.




Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai (ALL START DANCING)
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye
Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye
(AGNI LEFT PIA SOON AND SHE DANCE WITH RAJIV SAHAI)

Kab armaan machlenge (ABHAY STARRING AT PIA)
Kisko hai yeh pata
Kab mausam badlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera
Nazar se nazar mile
(PARTENERS CHANGE AND PIA DANCE WITH KABIR AND ABHAY WITH MISHA BUT STILL LOOK PIA)
Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna
Nazar se nazar mile
Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna
Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai
Jaage jaage koi sota hai
Bin chaahe kahin khota hai
Kahin aisa na ho jaye
(PARTNERS CHANGE AGAIN)

Baatein jo karengi baat baat mein (ABHAY WANT TO DANCE WITH PIA BUT THERE IS A LITTLE TIME TO REACH PIA TOWARDS HIM)
Khawab hi khwab honge saari raat mein
Hoga jab pyaar tujhe hoga jab karaar mujhe
Toh yeh sochle
Kab armaan machlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Kab mausam badlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera
Nazar se nazar mile
(AGAIN PARTNER CHANGE)
Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna


(IN THE END OF THE MUSIC PIA FINALLY COME TOWARDS ABHAY AND ABHILASHA TOWARDS AGNI)

Aayega woh pass ke jo door hai (HE TAKE HER HANDS AND PUT ON HIS SHOULDERS)
Mann jaa ke hona yeh jarur hai (ABHAY AND PIA START DANCING)
Woh dil toh deewana hai
Kab kahan maana hai (THEN PUSH HER AWAY AND THEN PULL HER BACK)
Tu yeh soch le (PIA TURN HER FACE TOWARDS LEFT SIDE BUT ABHAY PUT HER FACE INFRONT OF HIS EYES)
Kab armaan machlenge
Kisko hai yeh pata
(ABHIYA ARE TWIRILING AROUND)
Kab mausam badlenge (PARTNERS CHANGE. PIA WANT TO GO BUT ABHAY PULL HER BACK BCOZ HE DON'T WANT TO LET HER GO. ABHILASHA DANCE WITH AGNI BCOZ SHE DON'T WANT TO DANCE WITH JAY THAT'S WHY SHE CAN'T LEAVE AGNI)
Kisko hai yeh pata
Pyaar ho jaata hai kaise
(HE THROW PIA DOWNSIDE)
Jane na jane na jane na jane na dil tera
Nazar se nazar mile
(THEN PULL HER BACK TURN HER AND PUT HIS FACE ON HER SHOULDER)
Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
Jo yun koi saath chale
(PIA FALLS IN ABHAY'S ARMS)
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna
Nazar se nazar mile
(HE PULL HER BACK AND MOVE HAIRS FROM PIA'S FACE)
Nazar se nazar mile
Ho dekhengi aankhein sapna
(ABHIYA EYELOCK. PUNCHI NOTICED AGSHA BCOZ JAY LOOK ABHILASHA UPSETLY)
Jo yun koi saath chale
Jo yun koi saath chale
Woh lagne lagega apna

(ALL ARE CLAPPING FOR EACHOTHER)


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PUNCHI! THIS IS IT! NOW, PIA CROSS HER LIMITS.
MISHA: THIS TIME SHE HAVE TO PAY FOR EVERYTHING.
PUNCHI: YOU ARE RIGHT MISHA! ISS PIA KO TO MAIN AAJ NAI CHORUNGI.


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PARTY END. ABHAY AND ABHILASHA WANTS TO LEAVE. AGNI SAY GOOD BYE TO PIA.
PIA: THANX ALOT! AAP AAYE MUJHE ACHA LAGA.
AGNI(SMILE): ANYTHING FOR YOU AUR HAN PLZ THANX MAT KAHA KARO. O.K. BYE, TAKE CARE.
PIA: O.K! SEE YOU, BYE.
PIA TURN AND SAW ABHILASHA CAME TOWARDS HER.
ABHILASHA: SORRY PIA! AAJ TO TUM SE BAAT HI NAI HOSAKI.
PIA JUST SMILE AND MOVE TOWARDS RUHI. ABHILASHA WANT TO FOLLOW HER BUT JAY STOP HER.
JAY: YOU KNOW AAJ TUM BUHAT KHUBSURAT LAG RAHI THIN.
ABHILASHA: MUJHE TUMHARE CERTIFICATE KI ZARURAT NAI HAI.
JAY: MAIN TUMHARE LIYE PRESENT LAYA THA.
ABHILASHA: KYUN? SHAADI HAI MERI? BIRTHDAY HAI MERA? LISTEN, MUJHE HAR INSAAN SE GIFT LENE KI AADAT NAI HAI. APNI GIFT UNHI KO DENA JO IS GIFT K LIYE MARTI HON SAMJHE.
JAY: HEY...HEY! PLZ SORRY, DON'T MIND O.K.
ABHILASHA LOOK HIM AS WARNNING AND EXIT FROM ENTRANCE.
PIA NOTICE ABHAY SAY BY TO MISHA, PUNCHI, MADHU AND ARNAB BUT STILL FOCUS ON HER. NOW, HE CAME TOWARDS PIA.
PIA(KUCH GHABRATE HUE): O.KKK... ABHAY! THANX FOR COMING AND GOOD BYE.
ABHAY QUIETLY SAW HER. HIS EYES HAS NEW SHINE WHICH PIA AREN'T UNDERSTAND.
PIA: AB...ABH...ABHAY! GOOD NITE AND BYE.
ABHAY STILL CONTINUING. FOR A WHILE UNCONCIOUSLY PIA BLUSHED.
PIA: ABHAY! ARE YOU O.K?
ABHAY SMILE AND NODDED. HE TURN AND LEAVE FROM DOBRIYAL HOUSE.
PIA: SHAYAD TABIYAT THEK NAI HOGI. ISS PLAY NE SAB KO TIRE KAR DIYA HAI.
SHE MOVE TOWARDS HER ROOM.


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ARNAB DOBRIYAL THINKING AND WORRIED.
"HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE? AISA KOUN HAI JO ITNE PURANE RAAZ KO JANTA HAI? KUCH SAMAJH NAI AARAHA. AGAR YE RAAZ BAHAR AA GAYA TO? NAI! MAIN APNE PARIVAAR KO KISI B QIMAT PE TOOTNEY NAI DUNGA."


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(SOMEONE AND ANOTHERONE NAME SHOWED. ITS CHATING CONVERSATION.)
PREM: DON'T YOU THINK HAMARI SPEED THORI SLOW HAI?
PRIYA: NO ITS GOOD! ITNI JALDI APNE MAQSAD KO PANE K LIYE HUM KOI GHALTI NA KARDEN. I'M SURE ITS WORKING.
PREM: YAH! I DAMN SURE MR. DOBRIYAL KA B.P. AB NORMAL NAI HOGA SOCH SOCH K DIMAGH THAK GAYA HOGA.
PRIYA: KYA FAIDA KUCH HAATH NAI AAYEGA. SAR PATAKH PATAKH K THAK JAYEGA LEKIN KABHI PATA NAI CHALEGA K ITNI PURANI BAAT KOI KAISE JANTA HAI.
BOTH SMILES.


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ABHILASHA BACK HOME WITH DRIVER BUT ABHAY DOESN'T.
HASEENA: WHERE IS ABHAY?
ABHILASHA: MOM! HE WANT TO WALK SO WO WALK KARTE HUE AA RAHE HAIN.
HASEENA: TIME DEKHA HAI RAAT K 10:30 BAJ RAHE HAIN. CHAND KO PATA CHAL GAYA TO JANTI HO NAA KYA HOGA.
ABHILASHA: I KNOW BUT MAIN AUR BHAI BATAYENGE NAI, ABHAY KHUD KO PHANSAYEGA NAI AUR AAP... AAP MOM HONE K NATAY HAMEN PROTECT KARENGI.
HASEENA(SMILE): NAUGHTY GIRL! JAO ROOM MAIN, CHANGE KARO AUR SO JAO MAIN ABHAY KA WAIT KARTI HUN.
ABHILASHA GIVE HER GOOD NITE KISS AND GOING. "LOVE YOU MOM! GOOD NITE."
HASEENA(SMILE): LOVE YOU TOO! GOOD NITE.
NOW, SHE WAITING FOR ABHAY.


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PIA CHANGE HER DRESS AND WANT TO SLEEP BUT SUDDENLY PUNCHI AND MISHA ENTER WITH WEIRED EXPRESSIONS. PIA FELT DANGER.
PIA: EVERYTHING IS O.K?
BOTH WALK TOWARDS PIA.
PIA(PANIC): WHY YOU BOTH LOOKING ME LIKE THIS? PLZ DON'T COME NEAR ME PLZ...PLZ...


PRECAP:

* PIA HUG AGNI.
* HASEENA AND SID WORRIED ABOUT ABHAY'S STUPID ACTS.


''HAPPY EID MUBARIK''


Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsum dr!!!

abhay pia dance was gr8!!!!
n pia has mesmerized abhay... dats cool!!!!
jay is clinging 2 abhilasha!!!!
i hope she gets rid of him!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!
n waiting 4 abhay stupid act!!!!
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update dear
abhiya dance was awesome
abhay felling for pia
abilasha ne to jey ki band baja di
madhu ka pachka.
yeh past ka razz kya hai
pachi and misha such a jerk yr ghar se bahar nikalo phar se pia ko thang karegai
my request yr ek bar matz ko pure din ke liya pia se replace kar do yo matz madhu panchi jey misha ko sabk sakha sake. waiting for next
thnx 4 pm
same to eid mubarak
Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update, hope panchi misha bechari pia ko chod ne, afterall unhe jhad to metz se padi thi, pia se nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear. ye misha panchi pia ke saath kya karne waale hain?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey khwahish fab update 😳 i think metz didn't eat anything coz she is a vampire . dance was amazing . precap sounds interesting . lots of mysteries in next chappy i think . eid mubarak to u too sweetie 😳
thanks for the pm n update soon 😳
take care😳
Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...
will misha and panchi harm pia?
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loved the update especially the abhiya romance on the dance floor. Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part annokhi.🤗...
i luvd it ⭐️...
abhiya's dance was cute...agsha was also cute...😍...
agni is so sweet.😳...madhu needs that..talking all credits 4 her useless daughters😡...
so abhay is falling badly 4 pia.😍...
is maithli a vampire????n who r prem n priya😕...
wat is that punchi n misha up tooo????😡hare yaar i really can't take out birdie😡...ussey tandoori banadey....continue soon..😊.


Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

yaar nice post 😊

panchi misha jay aur madhu ka meyz se plz band bajwao bahut tang karte hain npia ko😡

abhay has already fallen for pia yippeee😊

update soon ntake care😊

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