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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Awesome update dear.
Loved every bit of it.
I was laughing hard during that jay and abhay sid part.
Agni and abhilasha was good too.
Wow precap seems interesting.
Plz continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

thank u so much rmuk...thank u..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u so much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome post annokhi.Sorry 4 late comment but net kharab tha.I loved Abhiya scene & evn Abhilasha-Agni scene.Y haseena asked Sid 2 marry metz soon?Whts chandeena plan.LOL poor jeh.Plz cont..

thank u so much shirish...😃 tere comment ka mujhe hamesha intezar rehta hai...😉
Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

sorry for being so late.holding ears.i was so busy with exams.

update was fab

luved it so much.😊

jay ki halat ka parh kar to maza agaya supreb.👏

agni-abhilasha fight was to cute.she called her swami ji😆luved it.now i want her to call him swami ji.i know agni is "heart holder"but looks like he is hurt by someone.wondering what is the truth of agni?😕

omg!abhilasha is already in love with agni.now lets see how he will fall for her?😍

abhiya scene was very sweet.🤗she is not angry with abhay,is she?hope pia realize her real feelings towards abhay.

God!akhir abhay ko sari behoda baaten sid se he kyun karni hoti hain.😆

yeh rajiv sahai ko kya jaana hai?kya maithli agni kay baray mein baat kar rahi thi?😕

yayy!haseena has no problem with maithli-sis's relation.lekin kya maithli haan bole ge?

and yah how can i forgot.vm was very beautifull.⭐️

precap is very interesting.

waiting for sid's prposel,abhay's confession and agni's truth.😊

update soon and

thanks fr the pm.😊

by the way i have changed my user name.deshdeewani was my oldest user id.this is the new one.don't forget to pm me.thanks

thank u so much deshdeewani... 😊love ur long comment... thank u...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 20


One week passed with lots of memories. Agni's care by everyone, Abhilasha's deadly cooking with Agni, Metz, Pia and Abhay survivour. Metz formal behaviour and rude with Abhay. Abhay's stupid dreamz, Pia's simplicity, Sid think about decision related to Metz. Haseena trying to find out that species thing in that twins sisters.
Today they leave from Raichand Mansion, Agni and Pia in Agni's house and Metz in Dobriyal house.
From last one week Jay still saw that witch and listen her voice everyday. Now a psychiatrist try to find his psycho problem.
Punchi met Sid coincidently and after that she decided to confess.
Misha want to take revenge with Pia and Abhilasha for broke her friendship with Abhay.
And now, Abhay, Abhilasha and Sid are sit in their living room with sad faces and sigh one by one (coz Agni, Pia and Metz gone).


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Day passing silently... Agni is better... Maithli almost near to know about Dobriyals secret... Pia falling for Abhay... Abhay want to confess his love for Pia infront of her... Sid select magical words for propose Maithli... Jay and all Dobriyals survived in many troubles and problem.

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Rajiv and Maithli meet in ice cream parlour.
R.S: Kya socha phir?
Metz: Maine kya sochna hai...
R.S: Itni mayusi kyun? Sab thek hojayega, believe me.
Metz: I want to believe you but...
R.S: I'll handle, don't worry. Just tell me name.
Metz: Who's?
R.S: I knew that you achieve your target. Just tell me her name is...?
Metz: Abhilasha Raichand!
R.S: Abhilasha Raichand? Pia's friend right?
Metz nodded.
R.S: Are you sure? Is she suit for that place?
Metz: She is perfect. She likes my bro...
R.S: Oh! That's great.
Metz: O.k! Now, i have to go. Pia is waiting for me, Bye!
R.S: Bye!


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Sid call Metz.
Sid: Hi! How are you?
Metz: I am fine.
Sid: I want to meet you.
Metz: I am busy right now.
Sid: Tomorrow?
Metz: Yah! Tomorrow we will.
Sid: That's great! Thank you!
Metz: Bye!
Call disconnected.


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At Night:
Raichand Mansion:


Sid doing reharsal, how he propose Maithli, Abhay thinking about his confession, how he would confess his love for her, how he express his feelings about Pia infront of her. He want a unique and romantic situation. Now, he is sleeping but his mind still thinking. Abhilasha planned to meet Agni in his house. She want to give him surprise to reach there.

On Other Hand:
Agni House:


Pia watching Agni and Metz's childhood movie. They both were too naughty. She enjoyed it saw her parents in movie, she feel that she missed something, no she missed everything. Her parents, her childhood, her naughtiness, her childish acts, her life's innocent, loving, caring period.
Agni create a web around Dobriyals. He set all the step of his game plan which he already started.


On Other Hand:
Dobriyal House:



Madhu and Arnab disturbed coz of Jay's psycho behaviour. Misha has doubt on Maithli and Punchi think about Sid (two days ago she confess her love infront of Sid, but he appologize and reject her love coz he love someone else) now she think about that girl. She want to know who is she?
Maithli disturb coz of many disturbance in her life. She confuse about her and R.S decision. She worried for Pia, she tense coz of Agni's spoiled life, she insecure about herself. She doubt about Sid, she angry on Abhay, she want to know about Abhilasha. Maithli sigh and close her eyes and sleep.


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Pia hang on stem and Abhay hang on another one.
Pia (shout): Abhay! Ullu k...🤬 🤬🤬
Abhay (shocked): Pia! Tumne mujhe gaali di?
Pia (yelled): Abey saaley, gaali na dun to kya duaen dun?
Abhay: Pia! Aise kyun keh rah ho? Kya hogaya hai tumhen?
Pia: Pagal hogayi hun. Jab se tum mile ho main pagal hogayi hun.
Abhay (mist voice): Pia! Aisa kyun keh rai ho? Maine kya kiya hai?
Pia: Mere pichle janam k dushman! Tumne mera jeena haram kar rakha hai, cartoon network k Johny Bravo.
Abhay: Pia... tum...
Pia (interrupt): Just shut up! Tumhari waja se main is dal pe latki hui hun. Andhe the tum? Dikhai nai de raha tha k side main khai hai.
Abhay: Its just an accident. Main...
Pia cut sentence: Han tum us larki ko dekh rahe the. Us par se nazren hatti to tumhen pata chalta na k hum dono marne k liye khai main latak jayenge.
Abhay: Listen tum...
Pia again cut: Enough! Main marungi ya nai ye baad ki kahani hai but you...
Pia put her foot on that stem where Abhay hang.
Abhay: Pia! Ye kya kar rai ho?
Pia: Tumhe mout ki neend sula rai hun.
Abhay (panic): Pia! Plz don't.
Pia push her foot. Stem move slightly. Abhay shout "No Pia". Pia again forcely push. Abhay place his hands near stem joint for saving himself. Pia saw that now she forcely kick on his hand. Abhay lost his balance and grip from stem. He fall down. A voice echo in whole place "Piaaa".


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P.S: Sorry guys for too late and too short update coz i am busy now a days so this is small one. But after Ramdan Kareem you will get a super duper long update that's promise.



Precap:
Pia saw that mysterious girl again. She was crying.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice n what is Metz upto with R.S. n again it must be Abhay's some stupid dream I guess in d end
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Posted: 12 years ago


Nice update with a jhatka yaar
Omg what was was it piya or abhay dream them hanging from. Stem and piya pusihing abhay 😲 Continue soon ofcourse
What is r.s. and Metz up to
Lol haseena
Finds a mystery between piya n Metz

I hope jaldhi Metz n Agni complete their mission
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Posted: 12 years ago
It must be sum stupid dream of Abhay!! What is Maithli upto?? Is she planning to harm Abhilasha?? If yes then hope not both abhiya n sid metz relation will break...anyways thanks for the pm...update supa soon n supa dupa big next time please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update👏
so sid will propose metz, pia is falling for abhay and metz wants angi and abhilasha together...interesting...
oh god abhay's dream🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

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