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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rimsha_Black420

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Posted: 13 years ago

@ she is the one,

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CHAPTER # 14


Abhilasha quietly saw Agni. When Agni came in sense he gave a tight slap on Abhilasha's face. She lost her balance and fall down. Her lip corner cut and blood is dropping. Abhilasha shockly saw him who leave from college now. Tears rolling in her eyes.

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Sid sit in his office. He think about Metz and Pia. He look tensed but suddenly he smile coz,

Flashback:


Sid watch business news. Abhay run towards him.
Abhay: Bhai mujhe bacha lo plz.
Sid: What happened? Everything is o.k?
Abhay: Wo Cheeni...
Sid: Princess?
Abhilasha enter. Abhay hide behind Sid.
Sid: Princess! Kya hua?
Abhilasha: See my hair.
Abhilasha show her hair.
Sid: Oops... How?
Abhilasha: That monster.
She point finger towards Abhay.
Sid: Abhay!
Abhay: Sorry but plz mujhe bacha lo. Mujhse jo hua by mistake hua.
Abhilasha (yelled): By mistake my foot. You...
Abhilasha run behind Abhay. Sid saw that she has a razor on her hand.
Abhilasha: Main tumhe ganja kardungi Abhay.
Sid: Oh no!
Abhay: Bhai plz bacha lo. Main ganja nai hona chahta phir Pia ko kya mun dikhaunga.
Sid's mind click.
Sid: Pia? Ye Pia beech main kahan se aagayi?
Abhay: Bhai stop her plz!
Abhilasha: Abhay Raichand! You will become Takloo Raichand. Just wait.
Abhay jump to sofa. Abhilasha do same. Sid suddenly stand b/w them by his power. Abhay and Abhilasha didn't notice bcoz they both are fumble in their matter.
Sid: Stop Princess!
Abhilasha: No! He cut my hair. I'll not forgive him.
Abhay: Sorry! By heart Cheeni.
Sid: This hair style suits you. Just need a hair setting. Plz for me don't do anything.
Abhilasha: O.k, fine! But i don't want to talk with him.
Sid: O.k! As you wish.


Flashback Over.

Sid (smile): Takloo Raichand!
Sid call Abhay but he reject his call. Sid try Abhilasha but she also reject.
Sid: Kya hogaya? Ye dono meri call reject kyun kar rahe hain?
Sid become worried.


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Pia is in her new bedroom gave by Agni.
Pia P.O.V: Thank God k Mr. Sid ne koi serious action nai liya mere khilaaf but wait a minute, wo kya keh rahe the Maithli se. Is he really love her? Lekin Maithli jaisi sarphiri larki??? Kya wo Sid k pyar ko accept karle gi ya phir... kahin wo Sid k pyar ko use to nai karegi Dobriyals k khilaaf?? Ufff! Itne saare sawal aur ek b jawab nai hai mere paas.
Aur ek wo Abhay aur Abhilasha hain... Kitne din hogaye Abhilasha se mile hue. Abhay se to do din pehle hi mili thi. Arey han! Aaj to Abhay ne kuch batana tha mujhe... Oh no! Kaash pehle yaad aajata to main college aur Maithli apne institute chali jati. Ab kya faida. Mmm!
Pia call Abhay.
Abhay saw his mobile screen and reject her call and type a msg to Pia. Pia's mob msg tone ring. She view msg.


"Muhabbat haar k jeena buhat dushwaar hota hai,
Usey bas itna keh dena bharam tora nahin karte."


Pia: Why he sent me this? Mera phone b receive nai kiya aur ye msg... "Muhabbat haar k". Kya hua Abhay ko? "Muhabbat".. Lekin kis se? Kahin aaj usne kisi se confess to nai kiya..? Lekin kis se? Kya usne Abhay ki Muhabbat ko accept karliya hoga?
Ufff! Pia stop it. Abhay chahe kuch b kare. Kisi se b confess kare tujhe kya... Why i feel...?
Abhay ko mujhse kuch baat karni thi aur ab wo mera phone b nai receive kar raha. Hope he is fine.
Pia think and worry for him and wait for Agni.


On Other Hand:

Abhay is crying. Look at the sky.
Abhay: Why? Why it happens with me? Why Pia? Why you do this? Tum wo larki thi Pia jise main pata nai kab aur kaise chahne laga, muhabbat karne laga lekin tumne us b**** Agni k liye... Why Pia? Why?
Crying badly.
(situation suit on this stanza)


"Rone se kya hasil kuch Aye dil-e-sodai,
Aankhon ki b barbadi, daaman ki b ruswai,
Hum log samundar k bichrey hue sahil hain,
Iss par bhi tanhai, uss par bhi tanhai."


He remove his tears.
Abhay: No Abhay! Tum itni jaldi haar nai maan sakte. Mr. Agni Singhania! Pia sirf meri hai sirf meri. Mere aur uske beech agar kisi ne b aane ki ya usey mujhse dur karne ki koshish ki to main usey jaan se maar dunga chahe wo koi bhi kyun na ho.
He burn in anger.


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Agni stand on a hill, jis k ek taraf chota sa park tha, ek taraf bare bare pathar, ek taraf road aur samne ki taraf ek khai aur us khai main ghana jungle, jahan insaan nai jate kyun k wahan jana mana hai.
Agni P.O.V: Mujhe Abhilasha pe haath nai uthana chahiye tha. Pata nai kaise maine... Wo larki b to kuch nai samajhti, Stupid, Immature. Jo b hai mujhe koi haq nai tha us pe haath uthane ka.
Agni feel guilty.


On Other Hand:

Abhilasha sit on college road bench. Tears dropping from her eyes. She rubbed her face. She saw her mobile screen, 12 missed calls show. She open calls directory. 2 from Pia, 7 from Sid and 3 from Abhay. Her mobile again ring. Abhay's name blink on screen. She press yes.
Abhay: Hello! Cheeni kah...
Abhilasha: Abh... Abha... Abhay...! (crying)
Abhay: Cheeni! Kya hua? Cheeni...
Abhilasha crying loudly.
Abhay: Tum... Tum kahan ho?
Abhilasha told him address.
Abhay: Main aaraha hun.
Call disconnected.


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Sid start finding Dobriyals background secretly.

On Other Hand:

Metz in coffee shop with Rajiv Sahai coz he invite her. Rajiv Sahai and Metz talking but Metz mind still think about Sid's confession, her slap to Abhay and that sucking Dobriyals. After coffee Metz say bye to Rajiv and call Agni. Tell him that she has something(Sid's convo) to inform him. Agni told her, where he stand. She move where Agni wait for her.

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Pia watch movie in Agni's room. Movie is "Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani". She watch movie after interval. Now it near to end where "PREM"(RANBIR KAPOOR) meet a person and gave him lift. Pia totally lost in movie suddenly she saw that she stand in church then Abhay enter. She turn.
Pia: O ye kya? Ye Kat aur Ranbir ki jaga hum do kaise?
Pia soch hi rai thi k t.v wali Pia boli "Plz! Ab itne romentic scene ko spoil mat karo."
Pia: Are you talking with me?
T.v wala Abhay: Aur nai to kya. Tum se nai keh rai to kis se keh rai hai. Aur koi hai yahan jo hum dono k romance ka bera ghark kare.

Pia aankhen phare dekh rai thi coz she aren't believe this is actually happened.

On T.V:


Pia(t.v): Kahan th
ay tum? Kitna intizaar kiya tumhara.
Abhay(t.v): Ek baar pukara hota dorh k chala aata.
Pia(t.v): O Abhay! Tum kitne ache ho.
Abhay(t.v): Pia! I want to say something.
Pia(t.v): Kabse is pal ka intizaar tha. Keh do aaj tumhe jo b kehna hai.
Abhay(t.v): Mujhe kehna tha k...
Pia(t.v): Bolo Abhay!
Abhay hold her and just want to do a kiss on her lips. Full romantic environment. Their faces just inches away suddenly Pia(original) mob ringed. Abhay and Pia saw each other and then they both angrily saw original Pia. Pia afraid. Mobile ring again. Pia awake.
Pia: What! Main movie dekhte hue so gayi thi? Aur wo t.v wale Abhay Pia? Ooh! Wo mera sapna tha. Damn! Maine aaj tak is movie (APKGK) ka start aur end nai dekha, interval se dekhti hun har bar. Oh God! Mera sir.
Mobile ring again. Agni's msg.
"Pia! Mera phone receive kyun nai kar rai ho? Agar busy ho to koi baat nai. Sirf itna kehna tha k mujhe aane main thori dair hojayegi pareshan mat hona."
Pia smile and type "O.K" and send.
Pia: Movie to gayi. Ab kuch aur karna parega.

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Abhay chill Abhilasha. Jay came and told him that Agni slapt her.
Abhay: What?
Jay: Ask her...
Abhay call Haseena. Say something to her and end his call.
Abhay: Cheeni! Mom car bhej rai hain tum us main ghar chali jana, o.k.
Abhilasha: Aur tum?
Abhay: Mujhe kuch kaam hai.
After few minutes car reach and Abhilasha go. Abhay move towards his car.
Jay: Agni ko dhondne ja rahe ho?
Abhay turn: Han! Us se puchne ja raha hun k usne meri behen ko haath kaise lagaya.
Jay: Wo tumhe park side hill pe milega.
Abhay: Thanx!
Abhay leave.
Jay(smile): Agni vs Abhay! Hahaha! Abhilasha meri hai Agni, sirf meri.


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Metz told Agni about her and Siddharth convo. Agni quiet.
Maithli: Chup kyun hain? Kya hua?
Agni told her about Abhilasha's kiss and his slap.
Maithli: Aap guilty feel kar rahe hain yehi buhat hai. Abhilasha ne anjane main aapko hurt kar diya.
Agni: Us ne mere zakhm kuraid diye isiliye mera haath uth gaya. Mujhe us k saath aisa nai karna chahiye tha.
Agni disappointed. Tears rolling in his eyes.
Maithli: Plz! Aap aise to mat roen plz.
Maithli rub his tears and hug him for relax him. Abhay reach and saw this scene. He felt that he burn in fire. He move towards Agni. Seperate both of them and catch Agni's colar.
Agni: Abhay! I'm sorry. I know tum apni sis...
Abhay slap him.
Maithli (shout): Abhay!
Agni: Abhay! I'm guilty. Plz meri baat...
Abhay slap him again. He angrily saw Metz. Metz want to say sorry for her slap but...
Abhay: Buhat pyara hai na tumhe ye. Is b**** Agni k liye tum sab chod sakti ho. Apni friend, apne lectures, tests har cheez is Agni k liye chod k bhag jati ho, hai na?
Agni: Abhay! Ye tum kya...
Abhay push him. Agni fall down. Abhay hold Metz shoulder.
Abhay (yelled): Answer me damn it. Answer me.
Maithli (shout): Han! Han hai. Buhat pyara hai mujhe ye insaan.
Itna pyara k is k liye main duniya ki koi b cheez chod sakti hun. Samjhe tum... Apni zindagi main sab se ziyada pyar agar kiya hai to wo ye shaks hai. Meri zindagi ka wahid aisa larka jo mera dost hai, mera teacher hai, mera humraaz hai, mera b...
Abhay's grip tight on her shoulder which hurt her then he slightly push her and move towards Agni who is injured. Abhay hit him badly through hands and legs. Metz try to stop him but he is not looking in his control. Ek junoon Abhay k sir pe sawar hogaya. Agni apne aap ko bachane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin bacha nai pa raha tha. Wo chahta to Abhay ko wo maar marta k Abhay yaad rakhta saari zindagi lekin usne Abhay ko kuch nai kiya coz he realize at this moment that Abhay fall for Pia and he can understand his condition in this situation. He decide to tell Abhay everything.
Agni: Listen me first Abhay plz.
Agni try to free his self from Abhay but Abhay not leave him. Abhay move him backward. Metz shout and begging for Agni's life but he aren't listen her. Agni still try to free his self.
Abhay (shout): Mera naam Abhay Raichand hai. Jo chaha hai wo paya hai maine. You...
Abhay push Agni with his full force. Agni not save his self and fall down from hill in that dark jungle.
Abhay shocked coz he didn't want to kill but he did this. Maithli freeze for a while and shout.
Maithli: Nahi! No no no... It can't happend. Abhay! Ye tumne kya kiya? Nooo.
Maithli shouting, screaming and want to jump from hill. Abhay stop her and hold her.
Abhay: Plz Pia! Sanmbhalo khud ko. Ye sab ghalti se...
Maithli (yelled): Ghalti se...?
Metz give him a tight slap.
Maithli: Ghalti se tum ne kisi ko maar diya? Ghalti se?
Again she slap him. She slap him 9-10 times and repeating word "Ghalti se" in each slap. Now she tired from slapping him.
Maithli: Abhay! You killed my brother.
Abhay shocked. Metz sit on her knee and cry loudly.
Maithli: Abhay! Tum... tumne mm... mere bha... bhai ko mm... maa... maar diya... Mera bhaii...!


Precap:



Abhay shockly saw Maithli and Pia who stand infront of him.😲


Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry guys there is some problem with my pm msgs... i can't pm anyone, i don't know why? it show me ur msg sent blocked so sorry for not pm... i was send pm to first 20 members but not send after that...😔 sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum upddt...finally abhay came 2 know agni is metz bro...eagerly waiting 4 d nxt updt...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum upddt...finally abhay came 2 know agni is metz bro...eagerly waiting 4 d nxt updt...continue soon

not only metz dear, abhay ki nazar main tou wo pia ka bro hai... rite? coz wo metz ko pia samajhta hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow! Khwahish
OMG! Kia update tha !
Poor agni.. I hope , he is fine !!
Abhay was behaving like a mad man...i hope..metz & piya forgive him...he didnt do it intentionally !!
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhay and Abhilasha Fight was damm Cute:-):-) jus love it:-) cont..,
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
so now agni died ???
no abhay didnt do that yar...
waiting 4 next update...
what will happened then???
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
grt update khwaish
ye kya gusse me abhay ne ye kya kiya!!!!!😲
are bt i forgot sid hai na vampy pwrs se bachayega hai na?
plz continue soon yar

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