RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 18

Third chapter is out! 🥳

A very beautiful description of Fall 😳
A wonderful chapter again! 👏
And so the new Superstar RK is Rishaan Kapoor. Who looks and behaves a lot like Rishabh Kundra...and now RK has finally found his Madhubala...in Maya. Loved that last part !😳

For those interested...Rishaan, like Rudra, is also a name of Lord Shiva. It means "a good person".

An interesting equation between RK and his PA, with undertones that speak of personal familiarity and yet outward professionalism...RK seems to not care about the moon eyes his PA makes at him...

I kinda pity and yet sympathize with Meera more and more as the time passes ...and whats this! Meera is Bittuji's daughter! So a inherited trait of taking care of Superstars ! 🤣

And Rudra continues being his condescending rude self 🤣
And Maya is still unaware of the storm chasing on her heels! 🤣

So how exactly will our new RK meet his new Madhubala ?

To find out, stay tuned for the next chapter..😎

wow me first after ankita

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Mumbai, India.

"My brother needs some time alone. Are you really this dumb to not see that or you are just another stupid PA of Superstar RK who has fallen for her boss? My brother is a grown man, not a lost puppy. He can take care of himself. Stop bothering him and me."

She sighed at her own stupidity and walked towards the elevator. 'So, it is right what they say', she thought as she entered and adjusted herself in the elevator which was full with men in suits, 'Rudra Kapoor is a first class misogynistic jerk!'

Ooh myy u posted the second chapter too ...

just read ... so the superstar is at Canada 😳 ...so the lazy stubble man is RK ..loving it !!!👏 ⭐️

btw the name Rudra cracked me up ...Maria better this guy be really lame in the story ...😉 just kidding ...



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Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Montreal, Canada.

After a long time, she felt blessed that she had a genuinely amazing time with a nice person whom she could call her friend now and to add to that she had dreamless sleep, which made her all the more chirpy. However, she did not know that she had slept after taking away someone else's sleep last night.

love those lines Maria !!!! 👏 😳


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Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

'Yeah, that would surely do,' he thought as he smirked and bought a DVD from a local movie store. He sat back in his car and drove away, leaving behind a confused Indian shopkeeper rubbing his eyes and wondering if he had just been hallucinating.

Note: I will be posting regular updates till we reach the 8th update and after that, depending on the response I get for the FF I will post weekly or biweekly.

@red : why does even the slightest note of a movie" DVD " makes me blush ..its the DVD effect ..am no longer able to differentiate the movie DVD's 😆

the next lines where u mentioned an Indian shopkeeper is so apt ..sure that guy must be wondering " Did i really see the super star RK in my shop ?"

dearieee ..please keep updating soon ...when i read i usually love to read without break..n am sure response or no response am here reading urs ..n there must be surely tons of secret silent readers ..so keep us posted !!!!

now i NEED THE NEXT chapter !!! i have started visualizing !!!☺️

lovely update dear so rk stands rishaan kapoor like the name

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

Whoa !!! 👏 👏 DEATH is after all the Beginning !!! ⭐️

Madness ..u girls are awesome ...👏 👏 ..am loving it ...this story will have super duper take off ...thank u soo much ...after all that's happening in Mb land am sure this story of urs will be a stress buster !!! 😳


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Absolutely Loved it !!!!⭐️

i dont know why i cud relate D to Maya .n am loving it ..the curls ...the way u described her ..glowing even in the dim lights of the pub !!! awesome !!!

am waiting for the man now ..😳 must be V ... :-D 😉 ...n Maya already became his personal sunshine !!! ❤️ ...

awesome awesome Maria !!! n am still wondering abt the connections ...reincarnations...waiting for it !! ...am sure even the Man's Name would be as sexy as Maya !! 😳

superb update!so bittuji is meera's father!& rk looks like rishab & he knows it!waiting for them to meet soon!pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

Whoa !!! 👏 👏 DEATH is after all the Beginning !!! ⭐️

Madness ..u girls are awesome ...👏 👏 ..am loving it ...this story will have super duper take off ...thank u soo much ...after all that's happening in Mb land am sure this story of urs will be a stress buster !!! 😳

Thank you for liking it Bella 😳
This prologue was my gift to this story...a story that is shaping up into one of my favourite stories...all thanks to my Alpha's wonderful creation...I am glad you are enjoying the FF so much .😳

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Montreal, Canada.

She loved the way the beauty of leaves remained intact or some may say it grew even more when they got close to parting ways from the branches that held them to meet their fate. -- this is so dam wonderful to read Maria ...parting from the branches to meet their fate ⭐️

Mumbai, India.

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Rudra Kapoor was hammered or was on his way there at least. Sitting alone at the bar of one of the most happening pubs in the city,

"He is into S&M and stuff." She said with a horrified look on her face and the other two girls gasped. But the one in the pink dress looked at her with a bored expression on her face. --😲this really scared me ...his nature yuuckk ...as i said earlier...i have decided to not like this character since the start😉 ..i mean since the time i read the name !!! 😆

Her father remained quiet for a minute then he said through his teeth, "I understand. You may go this time. But remember one thing; never ever compare my Chief with that imposter of yours!!" Meera nodded in haste as she understood the intensity of her error and then quickly left the room.

honestly speaking ..am replying that is typing after i read each of ur beautiful lines ...as i might forget later to comment on !!

..n when i read the above i came in to type about the CHIEF word reminding me of Bittuji .. n the very next paragraph ..i get to see him😃 ..

Maria , the story of urs is getting very interesting ..specially the once u are showing us readers .. i usually visualize when i read n i love that feeling ...the way u mentioned abt bittu ji looking at his chief n bhabhi's picture gave me gooseflesh all over !!!

Bittuji sat down on the arm chair by the window and picked up a photo frame from the nearby side table. It was a wedding picture of his Chief and Bhabhiji. They looked at him through the photo frame, smiling and he smiled back at them sadly.

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Montreal, Canada.

The unusually chirpy receptionist gave her the keys and directions to her room. Meera looked at the receptionist with eyes narrowed for a moment before going towards her room. She knew without a doubt that the girl was Rishaan-ified! --haha what a word !!! Rishaanified ☺️ am already !! 😳

, her Greek God interrupted her train of thoughts without looking away from the TV screen, "You may sit. I have work for you and it will take me some time to explain it to you." --must be following or getting information about Maya 😳

"Anyways...since we have got that cleared, let me tell you why I called you here." he said in a casual tone. "I want you..." he pressed pause on the remote and then continued, "to find me this girl." --tadaaa bella is right !!!! 😳

He pointed at the TV screen. Her eyes followed the direction at which his finger pointed. She saw a girl in a

black saree with a pink blouse on. She had a gorgeous face which was apparently a little wet and she looked quite sexy. She stared at her for a while and then turned back to see her crazy Greek God grinning at her. OMG i can imagine 😆 n am laughing like crazy reading it maria ..u dont knw how much am enjoying this !! i feel like i have fallen in love 😳

"That's exactly what I just said, Sharma!" he said, sounding annoyed and then continued, "I saw this girl the other night in a pub. I followed her a little. I know she lives nearby and manages two jobs at once. On second thoughts, I have actually found her already; you just have to get me every single detail of her life. I want to know all there is to know about her." --- now this is what i want 😳

'He has truly lost it,' she thought. "Sir, I already know about her! She is Madhubala Rishabh Kundra!! She has been dead for the past 29 years!! What is wrong with you?! I know you're upset but this is just absurd, you need to come bac..." ---ooohhh myyy 😲

Meera kept looking at him, quietly. He continued, "And seriously, tell me something you, being my PA, do not believe in look-alikes? Really? Then who the hell am I? That girl I saw in the pub was just as much Madhubala as I am the deceased Rishabh Kundra!" --oohhh soo Bittu ji was talking abt this ??? i was wondering why he was talking abt impersonator n stuff...🤓

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Now girlieee please make sure u post the next one as a surprise sooon 😳


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Anki it was wonderful lines ...Appreciate the hard works ...🤗

Maria ..keep writing am loving it ... 😳 dont mind ..i keep replying my thots on each lines ...u just take a read ..neednt repy .. as it will be quite long after updating chapters 😳 🤗