RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thank you so much, Dia. 😳

Lol. No. I just liked the name. It goes well with his personality. And Anki approved of it as well (as I do not know many Hindi names, I asked her only). 😳

You will find out why he got those things specifically and not something else in the next update.

As I said, with every update some questions will be answered and more will make way to your mind.

Yes, there is more to Meera and Rudra. They are pivotal to the plot. 😳

P.S. This was what I wanted the season 2 to look like, but that is never going to happen. That is why it has important supporting characters occupying spaces in the updates.. I thought of it like a story to a series... but oh, well.. 🥱

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Thanks Dia 😳
I will explain about Rudra...

Rudra is a name of Lord Shiva...of his avatar signifying rage and destruction...

as you will see it is implied in a line of this chapter that he is self-destructive.
So Rudra is his name.😳

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL

Nice update.👍🏼 Is it rk following maya?Plz cont soon 😃

Originally posted by: mimibm

In one word...I am lost...and I know THAT is your intention...but even after failing to get hold of any head or tail of the storyline, I am quite hooked to it...I have to know what it will shape up into...so for bringing this on so brilliantly...👏

Originally posted by: dvs_smiRK

Another exquisitely written chapter you have given us Maria 👏 I just love how you firstly threw us into new territory, deliberately leaving us to figure out where we are and who are these new faces, created such mystery with give and hold back approach you portrayed; enticed as I read trying to put jigsaw pieces together. I found it so superb how you revealed him as Rudra Kapoor later but gave insight into what type of man he is through the decor of his office, etched in darkness, reflection of persona and what possibly resides within him?? A man that might have many faces and doesn't particularly like sunlight..Hmm. The way you revealed his suicidal tendencies in remarkably subtle but shock value way, left me in an enigma with this trait sounds familiar thought. Gosh, at the moment he really enjoys toying and mocking. Felt so sorry for Meera; looking forward to finding out more on her deal and connections with our mystery man Superstar Kapoor; who seems to be a man with a plan in Montreal pursuing a Maya who is finding layered hope and happiness. On tenterhooks awaiting your next update 😳

Originally posted by: tulipstar

Wooow...very nice update 👏

Originally posted by: Chitrarocking

great update maria dear👏⭐️
loved it😃
keep it up 👍🏼
tfs for pm 🤗
& keep pming 😉!!

Originally posted by: leelaa9

Awesome update, Maria.⭐️ Looking forward to the mystery unravelling in the next parts.😳

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Prologue

"I'll find you, Biwi," he said into the silence that had descended on them, except for the crackling of the ominous fire all around.

"I'll be waiting, Rishabh," she replied, eyes all watery and smile all wobbly.

It was a promise, made by two hearts as they faced the end of their life together.

Rishabh Kundra and Madhubala Rishabh Kundra died in a tragic fire in Sitara Studio on the very night that saw their first, and last, movie break all records at the Indian Box Office. Their names were forever etched on the pages of Bollywood as a most cherished couple who remained entwined in death, just as they had been in life.

Time has moved on since then and so have the people. Yet...if one visits the charred remains of what was once a celebrated movie studio, one can still feel the tingles of a loving promise hanging in the air.

Death is after all, just the beginning...

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

I had the idea for this FF when I wanted a season 2 of Madhubala - EK Ishq Ek Junoon. But I know nothing of this sort will ever happen so I decided (after a nudge from Anki) that I should just write it down as an FF.

Now, as many of you guessed this story is about reincarnation.

Love,

Maria

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Chapter One: A New Dawn...

"Stay away from me... Please..."she whispered through her trembling lips. She knew it was of no use. .

He came towards her with a smirk as if reading her mind and caressed her tearstained cheek with his fingers while he breathed onto her neck, "You know you have to come to me like always... my Madhubala!" Numbness took over where fear had resided earlier and she closed her eyes...

Montreal, Canada.

Maya was an aspiring dancer. She was a dance instructor for kids in a small dance school. She loved her job and she used to forget everything when she danced.

Maya took a quick shower, dried her curly hair down and put on a high-low blush colored chiffon dress. It was sleeveless with a round neckline. She put on light make up, put her hair down, grabbed her coat and clutch, took the keys and her phone and left the apartment at sharp 8: 00, only to find an empty hall.

At the far end of the corner a man sat alone from the hustle and bustle of the pub. He had lazy stubble growing over his face and bags under his eyes. He was drinking and looking around and cursing the several days old long dark night that has engulfed his world. He knew he couldn't go back now. He had to find a way to get rid of this darkness and that's exactly when he saw her... she was glowing even in the dim lights of the pub. Dancing like the wind, her moves so swift, her perfect and curvaceous hour glass figure swaying to the rhythm of the music as she had her eyes closed. Her gorgeous long black curly hair dancing with the wind as her body caught the tune. She had the most beautifully sculptured face and milky complexion that made it all the more beautiful. As though she felt his gaze on her, she opened her doe shaped eyes... and he saw just the burning hazels in them that he needed to shed away the darkness from his life.

Absolutely Loved it !!!!⭐️

i dont know why i cud relate D to Maya .n am loving it ..the curls ...the way u described her ..glowing even in the dim lights of the pub !!! awesome !!!

am waiting for the man now ..😳 must be V ... :-D 😉 ...n Maya already became his personal sunshine !!! ❤️ ...