RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 20

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

Ooh myy u posted the second chapter too ...

just read ... so the superstar is at Canada 😳 ...so the lazy stubble man is RK ..loving it !!!👏 ⭐️

btw the name Rudra cracked me up ...Maria better this guy be really lame in the story ...😉 just kidding ...



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love those lines Maria !!!! 👏 😳


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@red : why does even the slightest note of a movie" DVD " makes me blush ..its the DVD effect ..am no longer able to differentiate the movie DVD's 😆

the next lines where u mentioned an Indian shopkeeper is so apt ..sure that guy must be wondering " Did i really see the super star RK in my shop ?"

dearieee ..please keep updating soon ...when i read i usually love to read without break..n am sure response or no response am here reading urs ..n there must be surely tons of secret silent readers ..so keep us posted !!!!

now i NEED THE NEXT chapter !!! i have started visualizing !!!☺️

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

What the ?? am i in for a TREAT !!! 😳

now i got the third !!!! 🤗

Lovely, Maria.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome update, dear.

I was such a dimwit to have started reading your story without going through the prologue...thats why i was having difficulty in connecting the loose ends...but this chapter was the missing link for me...wow...i wish vd had such reincarnations or rather his clones so that we had few more to drool on [LOL..this is getting quite intense...and i m loving your quick updates as well...]

A truly wondrous update Maria 👏 I just really love your eloquent style of storytelling. With such great thought you link mood of surroundings with traits of the characters and incidents in their life both present and past, but it's so beautifully subtle. For instance the way you brought in change of seasons, by way of glorious imagery; expressing why Maya loves the fall as you mirrored this to her own desire to shed the darkness in her past and strive forward just as new life grows on trees..Marvellously articulated. 👏 The shrouded mystery of Rudra is so rife and it's awesome how you kept this intact through the rumour mill convos, keeping us on toes. Gosh, the encounter between Meera and Rishaan (Uff what a name) was so riveting, I laughed out loud at the 'I need you' pause then music to her ears destroyed as he continued 😆 Fabulous comedic touch Maria 👍🏼 Could that movie he was watching possibly be Ishq ek Junoon..hmm. What a contrast Rishaan is to his sibling, smouldering full of attitude but in charmed BBB portrayal, yet manically determined and authoritative when challenged; wonderfully showed us his initial layers 😳. Loved how you made revelations with such eye raising and striking crescendos in this chapter Maria, eagerly waiting your next update 😳

Awesome update Maria
So Rishaan is RK who looks like RK and Maya is Madhubala. Very interesting. And I like Rudra, want to know more abt him. Meera is Bittuji's daughter and Bittuji does not like his chief's look alike? Btw can u pls pm me the next updates. I tried to send u buddy request but it showed some error. Sorry to bother u but pls I really need to read ur updates. I am taking a break frm show and forum. Both pissing me bigtime. So if I won't get pm I can't follow u. So pls pls pm me.

Btw which actor do u like as Rudra.

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow me first after ankita

Congrats!! 😆

its a fantabulous mind blowing outstanding awesome superb update

Thank you so much, Dia!! 😳

so its rishaan kapoor

nice name i like it

Anki looked up the name for me.. 😳

and good that meera is bittus daughter

I wanted Bittuji in the story.. 😳

who bittuji married ?

You will know it later...

i am curious to know it

😆

and so we know both are look alikes of themselves in the previous birth

Or so they think... 😉

so meera definitely line maroes rk

but rk cares and gives a damn

You got that right!

and i find it funny and strange that bittu does not like meera to work for rk

Because he thinks that Rishaan is an imposter who is gathering fame by acting like his chief...

i am wondering what will be his reaction when he sees rk

how shocked he will be

He has already seen him ... Rishaan is a superstar na... but he thinks of him as an imposter...

and i loved when rk unknowingly says maya was madhubala and he was rishabh kundra

he actually said the truth

😆😳

but has meera never seen rishabh kundra ?

why then rishaan had to say it ?

Rishaan said it to convince Meera that if Rishabh kundra can have a look alike.. then it's no surprise that Madhubala has a look alike as well.. Of course Meera has seen the real RK and Madhubala..they are a legend in BW... and she is after all Bittuji's daughter na..

so rk has to get his madhu to live the life again

So he thinks.. 😳

well with every update its becoming more gripping

That is my intention.. 😆

sorry again for the long rant

LOL! Take a look at my reply.. as I say always.. I am a blabbermouth.. 😆

Originally posted by: rekha.366

lovely update dear so rk stands rishaan kapoor like the name