RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 16

Nice update.👍🏼 Is it rk following maya?Plz cont soon 😃

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

lovely update!pls continue soon!

In one word...I am lost...and I know THAT is your intention...but even after failing to get hold of any head or tail of the storyline, I am quite hooked to it...I have to know what it will shape up into...so for bringing this on so brilliantly...👏👏👏👏

Another exquisitely written chapter you have given us Maria 👏 I just love how you firstly threw us into new territory, deliberately leaving us to figure out where we are and who are these new faces, created such mystery with give and hold back approach you portrayed; enticed as I read trying to put jigsaw pieces together. I found it so superb how you revealed him as Rudra Kapoor later but gave insight into what type of man he is through the decor of his office, etched in darkness, reflection of persona and what possibly resides within him?? A man that might have many faces and doesn't particularly like sunlight..Hmm. The way you revealed his suicidal tendencies in remarkably subtle but shock value way, left me in an enigma with this trait sounds familiar thought. Gosh, at the moment he really enjoys toying and mocking. Felt so sorry for Meera; looking forward to finding out more on her deal and connections with our mystery man Superstar Kapoor; who seems to be a man with a plan in Montreal pursuing a Maya who is finding layered hope and happiness. On tenterhooks awaiting your next update 😳

Wooow...very nice update 👏

Originally posted by: punam2712

NEW ENTRIES - MEERA AND RUDRA

WHAT A CONDESCENDING bas***d

MEERA'S WORRY DID NT BOTHER HIM AT ALL

AND WHO IS THE GUY FOLLOWING MAYA - SHE WAS FEELING HAPPY AFTER A LONG TIME

Lovely update
thanks for the pm maria

Originally posted by: Sharoan

Nice update...I loved it..

Originally posted by: raj80

awesome update Maria...the best part is your screenplay writing which is brilliant...could literally visualize the chars and their emotions through words...first an encounter between Meera and Rudra and Rudra's BBB...guess the mysterious guy following Maya is RK...