RishBala FF: Broken Ways - Part 19 - Page 125

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Well, I planned to share this with you all before classes began. I had hoped to have completed writing at least 20 parts to the FF, but I've only written 4 so far. I can't seem to get out of writer's block lately. Anyways, I'm sharing this with you all now. Hopefully now that it's out there, I might be able to start writing updates again. This will receive weekly updates since I won't have much time to write with school around the corner (Monday). Enjoy! PMs will be sent out shortly. Scroll down for the index. Title credit goes to Hiya (war_is_peace)!



- What if the person you're meant to be with...could never be yours? -


Prologue


"Name?"

"Madhubala Malik."

"No. Your name?"

"Number Nine."

"That's better. Age?"

"25."

"Where'd you come from?"

"Oswald Orphanage."

"Family?"

"Dead."

"How?"

"Fire."

"How old were you?"

"15."

"How'd you survive?"

"Was out with friends."

"How'd the fire happen?"

"I'm not sure..."

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I watched the bright fire blazing up to the sky like a bunch of dancing demons mocking me. With a glint of orange, the fire screamed and I had to hold back a sob of my own as I watched my home being engulfed by flames. It was a horrible site. It was as if all of my home's love was burning into a pandemonium of flames. Not much remained of my home. Whatever was left was a disturbing sight to say the least.

"Ma...Papa...Didu...?"

I frantically turned in a circle, searching for my family. I found myself surrounded by many unfamiliar faces, none of which were of my family. I looked towards our home, burned down to ashes. I rushed towards the first fireman I could see.

"Where's...where's my family?!"

"I'm sorry ma'am, but we couldn't save them."

I fell to my knees, losing hope.

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"Father's name?"

I shuddered, pushing away the horrid memories invading my mind.

"Shamsher Malik."

"Mother's name?"

"Padmini Malik."

"Any other family members?"

"Trishna...my sister."

"All of them are dead?"

"Yes."

The man before me intimidated me with his smirk and malevolent attitude. I lowered my head, staring down at my hands in a nervous motion.

"Perfect. Bittuji, she's hired, tell her what to do."

"Yes Chief."

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay! First time first one to comment!😛
Pritt FAB prologue!!😳

Mr.Kundra has hired Ms.Malik.. Let see why he hired her..😆 But her family is dead..😲


@Faiza I am evil..😈 🤣
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Yee!!!! me 2nd to cmmnt

@poo!! 😡 terese pehle maine read kiya!! aur tu res. pehle ki!! 😡 😆


well, Pritt awesome prologue...
m super excited to read!!


Finally u start a new FF 🥳



Edited by RockchickFaiza - 11 years ago
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Yayy 🥳 new FF .
Nice Prologue Pritt.
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new FF🥳!!!!!!!
NICE PROLOGUE!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue with morning coffee! treat pretty much 😆

nice start! i love number 9 too 😆

oh i started with crap again...so, i like the prologue...waiting for broken ways in broken ways 😉

oh no next monday! seems far!
btw MEIEJ will air only mon-fri now...pls update on sat or sunday 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice prologue pritt..madhu's family dead..waiting to know in which job RK hired her..its RK..na??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's greatly Interesting prologue pritt ⭐️
tfs for pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear...
thanks for pm...

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