RishBala FF: Broken Ways - Part 19 - Page 125 - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
Evrytym Iread ur update I get those goosebumps! Awesum update pritt di! Madhu in red saree...looking pretty...n all dat he hs to say is % cud hv dun better???? Really...dude hs got such a helluva attitude! I dnt really like it wen he calls her Number Nine. But e1 den ur story is just great!
Wher r dey going???? Can't wait to knw!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
MADHU IN A RED SAREE LOOKING GORGEOUS AND RK AWED BUT STILL NOT WILLING TO COMPLIMENT
WHERE ARE THEY GOING
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb..!!! Madhu in saare thats interesting..hope this surprises ot shocks her..Waiting for enxt!
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Posted: 11 years ago
WHAT IS HIS PROBLEM THAT HE KEEPS TREATING HER LIKE SHE SHOULD BE GLAD THAT HE IS EVEN LETTING HER BREATHE NOT LIKING HIM AT ALL AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update pritt:)
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ...so where is he taking her...u left it at such an exciting stage...update next soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read 4 chapters in on go... it was amazing... loved it her much...
So madhu's family died... why rk hired madhu??? What is his intention for hiring madhu??? What is written in the contract papers??? Why she not allowed to read the papers??? rk is very rude with madhu... this rk is scaring me... i feel bad for madhu... where he is taking madhu??? well written... waiting to see what is store for madhu... continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz plz plz update soon 😛
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Poor Madhu she has to do everything watever RK is saying. Where is he taking her...??? Waiting to know update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

It's a short update, I know. But my reasoning behind that is that I'm contemplating changing up the storyline after this update. Still thinking about it. Anyways, enjoy!

Oh wait, I'd like to add again that the update is misleading. You'll read the dialogues and automatically assume something but I want you to know it's nothing of that sort!



- Resentment is like drinking poison and waiting for the other person to die. -


Chapter Five - The Lady

A huge building came into view from behind a bunch of trees. Black Cherry Hotel Club read a huge red sign from on top of the building. As the car came to a stop, I watched as RK stepped out. Knowing he wasn't a gentleman, I opened my own door and let myself out. I straightened out my sari and went to stand next to him. A sudden gasp escaped my lips as he gripped at my waist and pulled me close to his side.

Then without looking in my direction he spoke.

"Not another sound should escape those luscious little lips of yours tonight."

I kept my eyes on him, staring up at him, until he returned my look with his famous smirk. I knew it meant trouble. I quickly looked away and dreaded what he had planned.

The smell of cigars filled the air in the building lobby. It took everything I had not to push free from RK and run out of the building. The smell of smoke only brought back bad memories which brought along terrible feelings as well. I closed my eyes, gave myself a second to calm my nerves, and then reopened my eyes.

RK pulled me towards the lady at the front desk. She wore excessive makeup, from bright red lips to a dark smoky eye. All I could see was the top of her tight dress, but that was enough to tell me that she was not the kind of girl I'd ever want to be friends with.

"Welcome Mr. Kundra."

"Hello gorgeous."

I felt RK's hand leave my waist and for some odd reason, I didn't feel free. I felt like he left me open to all the dangers in the building. In that moment, I wanted for his hand to have never left me. And in that moment, I wanted to die for having thought that.

RK took both his hands and grabbed onto the lady's hands. Holding her hands in his. I watched her cheeks flush red and I couldn't help but silently roll my eyes from behind RK.

"You look prettier than the last time I saw you."

"Oh stop it."

"No, truly. What's your secret?"

Was I dragged along to watch RK flirt with a girl like her? I crossed my arms and noticed the lady's eyes glance towards me for a second.

"I see you've brought a new one this time Mr. Kundra."

"Grew sick of the old one."

"I didn't like that one either. Always gave me dirty looks."

Were they talking about me? I felt like I was an object they were talking about and it bothered me like nothing had ever bothered me before. I felt like giving a dirty look to the lady myself.

"This one's different."

"Yes, I can see that Mr. Kundra. So, would you like your usual room?"

"Not this time. I'm here to see Mr. Agarwal."

"Oh, right. He mentioned he was expecting you."

"Everyone's always expecting me. I'm superstar RK after all."

She giggled.

"Yes, yes. Well, he's in room 809. Don't forget to knock before you enter."

"I never do. Thank you my lady."

RK kissed her hands and then let them go. He then turned to face me with a glare. After putting me through that, he gives me a glare of all things. I returned his glare with a dissatisfied look of my own. He slid his arm around my waist again, but this time touching my bare waist and not where my sari covered my skin. I felt an electric shock ripple along my spine. I swallowed and told myself to keep myself under control.

We walked into the nearest elevator and slowly, but silently, reached the eighth floor. He continued to pull me until we reached a room that read Room 809. I looked up at him and watched him knock at the door in front of us. He returned my look with an odd look. As he stared down at me, I tried to decipher what his eyes were saying, but before I could, I heard a voice.

"Ah! Mr. Kundra! I've been waiting."

Edited by PrittB - 11 years ago

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