SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31)

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Hey.. i'm new to this thread. though i like writing, this is my first attempt at fiction. so please bear with me. 😊
Character Sketch- you will come to know as the story will proceeD
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P.S- i have not read many fanfics here, so if story matches with any, apologies in advance. and do let me know. i'll not post further.😕

P.P.S- sorry for any grammatical errors. all the comments and suggestions are welcomed.

now, here goes the story



ENTANGLED DESTINIES



Gosh' my life is always adventurous in a negative way'why..??? no shoes' what would I do now'.???how would I go to the party' I cannot wear any old pair. What would people think'??? The fashionista siya shekhawat' is wearing an old pair of shoes' no this can't happen. I can't even drop the plan of going there. Afterall it's my party' what would I do now'??? siya shekhawat, a 16 year old teenager was going through the biggest turmoil a girl of her age and stature can go through. She could not get her desired pair of shoes matching with her party dress, Party of her 16th b'day. Now there is only one person she can turn to' her big bro, swayam shekhawat, for whom her wish comes before anything. He is 10 years elder to her. She is apple of his eye and treats her as his kid and not sister. Shekhawat's own the country's biggest conglomerate and lead a very lavish lifestyle. Siya being the youngest is the most pampered person in the family and need not say twice for her wishes to be fulfilled but she is closest to her brother, who has just came back from USA after completing his MBA and has joined his dad. Siya has grown into an obnoxious, self-centred, rude teenager whereas swayam is just opposite. He is all a girl can dream of' good looking, intelligent, well mannered; a true gentleman.

He came out of his trance with the ring on his cellphone. The caller ID flashed princess and instantly a smile crept on his until gloomy face. "Hello princess'"

Siya: bhai, in a tensed voice'

Swayam: what happened baby.. itni tensed kyun ho..??? with a worried tone

Siya: bhai.. vo mere pass dress ke matching shoes nhi hai' ab main party me kaise jaungi'

Swayam: while smiling, bas itni si baat' don't worry darling' just wait for 15 min.

Siya: pakka na bhai'??? Still worried

Swayam: ofcourse sweetheart.. aisa kabhi hhua hai ki aapne kuch maanga nd vo main aapko naa dun' just relax' nd get ready till I get u shoes'

Call ends and he immediately called on somebody and asked the person to get all his shoe collection to his palatial home.

Siya, in her room, pacing to and fro, all dressed up is looking angelic in her baby pink frock dress and loose hair with soft curls falling on her shoulder and a pink hairband. She was indeed looking a princess. Suddenly, she heard a knock on her door. A smile crept on her worried face as she knew it's her bhai. She opened the door and swayam entered with a couple of salesman holding boxes of shoes. The room was no less than a palace for them. The room was all painted in white and purple with a bed in its middle filed with different kind of stuff toys. On her dressing table was makeup kit of almost all labels. Her wardrobe boasted of more than 100's of dresses. In all, it was a dream fairy palace.

Swayam looked at the somewhat relieved face of his kid sister and forgot all his worries for a while. Siya tried different shoes and finally got what she wanted. Her face glowed like that of a kid on seeing those shoes and she hugged swayam almost running into his arms. Salesmen were amused at her this behaviour and swayam himself chuckled.

Party was very lavish affair with all the who's who of the town in attendance. Everybody is enjoying the party but one person. Soon, announcement was made for the cake cutting. Everybody gathered around a table having three tier Barbie cake but the most important person for the b'day girl was missing. He was lost in his own thoughts. Another announcement was made for him after which he came rushing towards the cake. He made some random excuse and then the cake was cut and everybody went on to enjoy the party.


Bhai' bhai' kya hua..??? kahan lost ho'??? R u not enjoying the party'??? He was suddenly brought back to the reality by the sound of his darling sis.

Swayam: no siya, nothing like that' was just thinking about something'

Siya: bhai.. r u ok'??? I'm noticing u r lost since u came back from US' is everything fine..???

Swayam: why r u asking so..??? I'm perfectly fine, just missing my frnds' he made an excuse'

Siya: bhai, u don't call me by my name unless u r very disturbed and u just did dat'

There was absolute silence for few minutes with Sharon being worried for her brother and swayam realising the gravity of the matter that he until thought will be resolved by itself in few days and at the same time thinking of some excuse to make for his odd behaviour. Sharon realised it'

Siya: it's ok bhai' I do understand. But if there's anything your princess is always there to listen' flashing her gorgeous smile.

Swayam: I know sweetheart' vaise what are you doing here'??? U r supposed to enjoy your party.

Siya made a sorry expression remembering the reason she's here. She continued'

Siya: bhai, I have a surprise for you. Just close your eyes and I'll be back

She left leaving behind a confused swayam. But he followed like an obedient brother and closed his eyes. Just then siya entered with a girl in her tow. The girl was almost swayam's age and was looking breathtaking beautiful in her purple flowing gown. Both girls giggled seeing swayam like that. Then the girl went behind him and closed his eyes. He went perplexed for a moment and then flashed a huge smile calling on the name Kriya. Both girls again giggled and swayam joined them this time. Kriya Ghai, swayam's best friend and daughter of his dad's best friend. They grew up together and Kriya was another person who had spoiled siya with her pampering but again she's the only one who can smack her on her faults. Swayam and kriya are engaged. They always thought that are meant to be as they were always busy among themselves that they never had time for anybody else. Though swayam was happy seeing his best buddy there, he was confused at the same time. The two years that he has spent without her as changed his notion of love. He is confused as to talk to kriya about it or not as he was not sure of anything at this point of time. At the same time, kriya is also going through the same confusion as him. These two years sure have some long bearing on the lives of these two and the little arrogant siya, apple of their eye.

After the party, swayam drives to his favourite spot in Mumbai, haaji ali' he loves the calmness there at this point of time. He was lost in his thoughts, thoughts of "HER". She has changed his notions of love, of friendship and of world. She has changed the swayam shekhawat.

*flashback*

"He entered the auditorium to see a beautiful girl performing indian classical dance. The girl caught his attention in a moment not only because of her dance, but there was something enigmatic about her. It was his first day in NYU. In next moment what he saw, made his heart flutter, the girl started swaying to the tunes of a contemporary songs while taking off her saree( she was wearing a salsa dress beneath). In next 10 min. the girl performed almost every dance form imagined. After the dance, she bowed down and the audience and panellists gave her a standing ovation. Yes, she was Sharon rai prakash, daughter of one of the world's famous choreographer and was auditioning for a Broadway play. She was a student of NYU and junior of swayam as he was doing a masters course there and she was in the final year of her graduation."

Sharon Rai Prakash, the name made him smile in his thoughts.

<Sharon Rai Prakash, the diva of the college, the egoistic, rude and self-obsessed girl, who was her dad's princess, his darling, who has been habituated to have things her way. Her best friend, reyaansh singhaniya, son of one of the richest person in USA was swayam's classmate and soon his best friend too. Sharon and reyaansh were engaged. Sharon had a liking towards her but rey, as he is fondly called was looking for her dream girl, somebody who is his love and not friend. But he never said these things to Sharon as he was himself not sure if he'll ever meet such a girl or not until one day when he was visiting his grandparents in India. He met the girl of his dreams who was just opposite to Sharon, a selfless, pure soul who loved everybody. The girl was kriya, kriya ghai.>


Index

Chapter 2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83056997�

Chapter 3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83134412�

Chapter 4- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83203745�

Chapter 5- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83272895�

Chapter 6- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83367033�

Chapter 7- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83423321�

Chapter 8- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83833768�

Chapter 9- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84055255�

Chapter 10- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84115660�

Chapter 11- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84137256�

Chapter 12- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85300439�

Chapter 13- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85718634�

Chapter 14- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86913081�

Chapter 15- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90110691�

Chapter 16- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90933094�

Chapter 17- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91068586

Chapter 18- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91255229

Chapter 18- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3584354/swaron-kriyaansh-ss-entangled-destinies-updated-on-page-31

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Nice start 😊
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here's the next part

After a while he came out of his thoughts and was enjoying the cold sea winds when he saw a girl sitting at some distance. He immediately recognised her. She was kriya, they both used to spend a lot of time together here.

"But what is she doing here at this hour." He mumbled to himself and went towards her.

She was lost in her own thoughts and didn't notice him at all. After a while, when swayam got no response from her, he put his hand on her shoulder and this freaked the hell out of her. She was about to punch him when he shouted her name. His voice calmed her down a bit but made her angry.

Kriya: what the hell swayam' you scared me'

Swayam: ya ya' I know.. sorry' but tell me what are you doing here at this time??? looking at his watch. It was 1 A.M.

Kriya: vo' nothing.. just wanted to spend some time alone. What are you doing here'????

Swayam: hmm' just catching on the old memories' he said thinking about Sharon.
but she took it as their memories of this place and this made her all the way more confused.

Swayam: where r u lost' chalo.. its late.. we should be going back'

Kriya: yaa.. lets go'

Both left for their respective houses but not before making a plan to catch on the next day' ofcourse along with siya'


The time went by' but swayam was still not able to talk to kriya about whatever happened in NY

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Whereas in another part of the world, in NY , two people were engaged in a heated argument. The people were rey and Sharon. Rey being well aware of his feelings for kriya wanted to break off their engagement as their families were planning for their wedding. But Sharon being Sharon could not digest the fact that a guy is leaving her for some random girl, despite having some feeling towards swayam herself.

Sharon: how can you do this to me rey'??? We are best friends' we are engaged' how can you leave me, THE SHARON RAI PRAKASH for some random girl'???

Rey: enough Sharon' she's no random girl first of all'she Is way better than you'

This enraged Sharon even more..

Sharon: how dare you mr. singhaniya' how dare you say that to me'???

Rey calmed down a bit' and tried to explain her..

Rey: sweetheart, we are best friends and I love you but you are not my love' she is' I know you are hurt but please try to understand'she is very nice' she is the one for me' and you'll get the perfect partner for you' even if we'll get married.. we'll not be happy' pls understand'

Sharon: u mean I'm not a good person' I'm not nice' I cannot keep you happy'??? that bloody *****' she not only took away my fianc but my best friend too'

Rey: enough Sharon' you know what' it's over' everythings over' even our friendship'

And he left' Sharon cried and cried' and broke every possible thing of her apartment'

Later that night' Sharon was sitting by her window' thinking about whatever happened that day'

She knew rey doesn't love her and neither do she'. So why was she so upset with it'??? She could have accepted the fact gracefully...' has it been any other girl, would she have reacted the same way'??? Why the name kriya itself left her burning from inside'

Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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nyc concept!
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nice concept
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Nice start
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Fab start .. Loved d story till nw..
Waiting for ss meet again..
Siya is a cuto pie..
Awsm story pls update soon and pm me..
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Thank you guys... your likes and comments mean a lot...😊

P.S- i'm obsessed with certain words and three dots... so please bear with it..😆

here goes the next part.


Meanwhile Rey called swayam. Swayam was on a shopping spree with kriya and siya.( time difference). Rey narrated the whole argument that happened between him and Sharon to swayam. Rey and swayam had grown very close to each other in these two years and share all secrets except about their love. Swayam was shocked and happy at the same time. Shocked because he couldn't believe sharon's reaction and happy because' well' he loves her' he loves his best friends fiance. That is why he keeps on rejecting the very thought of her but he can't help thinking about her. It didn't occurred to him at all dat rey just talked about another girl whom he loves.

His train of thoughts was stopped by a smack on his head. It was kriya who was trying to gain his attention from past 5 minutes now'

Swayam: what'???? Can't I talk on phone now', visibly irritated.

Kriya: now seriously' ??? with a sarcastic tone' then atleast put your phone on your ear dude' and she left to look for siya.

Swayam immediately put phone on his ear, only to find rey taking kriya's name in a shocked manner.

Rey: was that kriya..??? kriya ghai..???

Swayam: yaa.. but how do you know her..???

Rey: first of all, u tell me how do you know her'. ??? stressing on you..

Swayam: well she's my best friend and now my fianc too' fianc in a bit low tone.

Rey: what'!!!!! Fiance'???? Several things were going on his mind' he remember him telling about his fiance'.but he had never imagined even his wildest dreams' kriya to be dat girl'

Swayam: rey' rey'r u dere'????

Rey: yaa' dude' I guess there is some network problem' I'll talk to you later and cuts the fone..

Swayam: ab ise kya hua'???? Nd again gets lost in his thoughts'. Of whatever rey just told him'

At other corner' siya came out of the trial room, and was looking for kriya.. when she saw swayam lost in his thoughts again'. Suddenly she saw kriya by her side'

Kriya: what has happened to your brother'??? why is he behaving so weird and told her the instance that passed few moments ago'

Siya laughed at it' kriya initially frowned but den joined her'

Siya: I'm noticing him since long now'. Vo pta nhi baar baar kahaan kho jaate hai'??? Shayad US me kuch hua hai jo vo humse chupa rhe hai'he won't tell me' why don't you try'???

Kriya: hmm' I'll talk to him' now chale' It's quite late and I'm hungry'

Siya: I'm dieting'

Kriya: have you lost it' you're just 16'

Siya: but' she was interrupted by swayam who by now was well out of his dreamland'

Swayam: kiddo' r u ok' dieting..??? no ways' hmm'actually on second thought.. why not'??

Kriya: what..??? u r allowing her to diet.. r u ok now'???

Swayam: yaa'. Let it be her choice naa' siya was happy.. but the very next line took it all away' even I'm very hungry.. lets go to pizza hut' and winked at kriya..

Kriya: yaa.. sure' and she played along..

Siya loves pizza and mere mention of it makes her hungry and now they are going there' she couldn't resist...

Siya: umm' vo kya hai na bhai' vo'. I think u were right kriya' I'm too young for dieting' lets go' I'll have pizza...

Her statement made both of them laugh' siya knew it was coming and den joined dem' they went and had their pizza.

On the other hand' rey was devastated' he couldn't believe his ears. His love was engaged to his best friend. Wait' he doesn't know yet if she loves him or not'

Rey: why.. why..??? why it has to happen with me' kriya' the girl I love the most... for whom I fought with my bestie is engaged and that too to my another bestie' swayam' I can't believe it'

and he decides to come to India' to solve the mess around but before that he had to talk to his parents and Sharon. No matter how angry he was with her, he can't leave her like this.

At the same time, Sharon has fallen ill owing to over exertion and not having any food. She had fainted and there was nobody who could help her. After an hour or two when she opened her eyes, she found rey by her side. She tried to get up but was too weak to do anything. Rey saw her and helped her sit on the bed and den got her some food and fed her. She was looking at him with questioning eyes.

Rey: what'??? Don't you have your play next week.. how can you hurt yourself at this point of time'?? He was talking as if nothing has happened. (yaa' Sharon is by now a very famous dancer and actor)

Sharon didn't say anything but gave him a confused look.

Rey(to himself): aww.. she looks so cute with her innocent look, only if she shows it more often and den pulled her cheeks.

Sharon: ouch' rey' stop it'I don't like it'

After a pause'she continued

Sharon: what r u doing here'??? U said everything is over between us' den..??? gave him a quizzical look

Rey: Sharon' u know I love you and no matter what.. I can't leave you. Its true that she's my love but you are equally important to me. I can't see u hurt.

Sharon: hmm' how do u came to know that I'm hurt'??? She was just too curious.

Rey: vo actually' I'm leaving for india in few days and looked at her' she was broken but had a understanding look. He continued'

Rey: just wanted to sort things out with you before I leave so I came here. And then I saw you fainted with all your stuff lying here and there. Then smiled' guess I'm used to it'

Sharon too smiled at it and this made rey satisfied of her health.

Sharon: actually.. even I wanted to talk to u..

Rey nodded his head, not knowing what is coming his way' she continued

Sharon: vo actually' vo' I wanted to say sorry'. And rey almost fell from his place...

The thing is Sharon never says sorry, not even to her dear ones, only if he knew certain more truths..😉

Sharon gave him a deadly glare'

Rey: what..??? in entire 10 years of our friendship, I have never heard you say sorry. Not even to uncle'

Sharon: whatever' I won't repeat it' I shouldn't have reacted the way I do' I understand' go get your kriya'

Rey: am I dreaming'???? Sharon rai prakash admitted that she's at fault' wow' only to be stopped by her deadly glare' ok sorry' I don't know' mention of kriya made him restless. He took her leave and went.

Sharon: what did he just said'??? God.. I have to solve my troubles first before I loose it. The mention of kriya again sparked that anger in her.

Kriya' the name is itself enough to make her frown and loose it all' but why she hates kriya'??? Is it because rey loves her or'???

Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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It was wonderful, I want more !! I want more !! 😔

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