SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
what a twist all of them are afraid to tell each other that love some one else...
looking forward to read more... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Please update the next part its Sunday and you promised that you will update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Awesome update .. eagerly waiting to see what will be sharon's reaction on swaron's meet ..

Update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really loved i had to take my all time only to read this os...
i will be back on comment it regular and pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: zk456789

Please update the next part its Sunday and you promised that you will update the next part soon


m so sorry.. actually, so many things are going around dat i couldn't write anything proper. 😳
but i'll definitely give one 2morrow, even if it's a small one...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
I knw it's very small update, but this is all i could write. But it didn't turn out the way i wanted it to, so pls bear with it.😛

P.S- i have used various types of look, pls manage with that too as i was not getting ny better way to xplain.😳
apologies for the errors.there will be many.

P.P.S- m nt sending ny pm or scrap for this update.🥱

now, here's d next part.

At swayam's place, someone was real angry on swayam's behaviour.. it was siya' of course..

Siya(to herself): bhai, this is not happening' u r hiding things from me nw' I need to talk to you.

On the other hand.. Sharon was writing her diary..

Swayam, how much I hated him dat day.. how could he talk to me like this.. what had I done to face all his wrath.. but.. but.. I can't hate him.. I can't because I love him' yes.. I love him.. his nature, his personality, what is not there to love about him.. but with me.. he always was the opposite as if he hated me to the core' but why'??? Why..??? dat is what I'm thinking for this long. But I know this that he doesn't love me..he never did.. I do but I can never forgive him for what he has done to me' and how does it matters nyway.. he's marrying that kriya nw' I envy her.. she have had everything that I wanted.. mom, dad and nw swayam' no.. I hate her.. I hate her' because she snatched everything that was mine' I hate everybody.. everybody.. dere's no one who loves me.. who cares for me' I knw papa is there but.. he's too busy.. nd rey..

Suddenly..she jerked on her bed..

Sharon: rey.. shit.. I had to call him' nd she dialed his no.

Swayam. Kriya nad rey were together, when his fone rang..( imagine rey talking about sharon and Sharon writing diary as two events happening simultaneously and rey's fone ringing when kriya finished her statement)

Rey: helloo..

Sharon: hey.. wassup..???

Rey couldn't recognize the voice because of sound of the waves..

Rey: sorry.. who's this..??

Sharon: wow.. great.. nw u have forgotten me for dat kriya of urs..

Rey(almost shouted in happiness): Sharon..!!

The two looked at him equally happy and excited and shouted her name together. Sharon was quick to catch his voice. She was happy to hear his voice after a long time but still hatred creeped into her.

Sharon: was that swayam..???

Rey: swayam.. vo hmm.., he was confused as to tell her or not but then decided to tell her as she'll know the truth by 2morrow nyways'

Sharon: vo hmm'. What..??? yes or no..???

Rey: yes, but why r u so curious to know about him.. rey found her behavior unusual'

Sharon: what..??? me curious abt him.. noways'

Rey: yaa.. whateva.. vaise is it the time to call'???

Sharon: what..?? what's wrong with the tym..

Rey: are dumbo.. I meant.. u had reached hours ago nd u r calling me nw..

Sharon: ohh.. dat way' sry.. jetlag'u knw..

Rey: hmm' u r sounding low .. u need rest..

Sharon: rey.. vo.. actually' vo..

Rey: whoah.. Sharon'r u scared to ask me smthing..??

Sharon: noways.. I just wanted to knw ur kriya's full name' vo actly I read abt swayam marrying sum kriya.. so just wanted to knw..

Sharon, couldn't resist herself from asking as she had feeling sumwhere that she's the same kriya.. and ofcourse she wanted to knw abt swayam.

Rey was first shocked bt den happy to knw dat sharon is trying to be normal with him. But he can't take kriya's name den as she was dere also' meanwhile, swayam and kriya who were listening to the one sided conversation of rey were very confused.

Rey: hmm.. yaa she's d same..

Sharon was praying her not to be the same but on hearing rey..she couldn't say nything..rey understood what was going on in her mind' he continued while walking away from other two.

Rey: I knw what u r thinking.. but don't worry I'm fine.. I'll xplain u everything.. u take rest.. I'll catch you 2morrow..

Sharon: hmm.. ok.. bbyee.. take care'

Swayam and kriya came near rey and gave him "c'mmon tell us nw" look. But before rey could say nything, swayam's fone rang. It was his mom, for a change.

Swayam: helloo maa' kya hua..???

Swayam's mom: where r u'??? siya is in super angry mood.. come soon. I can't handle her any more.

Swayam: m with kriya and rey' dn't worry.. we r cumng..

Rey and kriya were surprised to hear we from him..

Kriya: what happened..??

Swayam: siya'

Rey: who siya..???

Kriya: his sister' nd gave him "what kind of a frnd r u" look.

Rey: he never told me.. replying to her'

Kriya shrugged and continued..

Kriya: what happened to her..??? but by nw swayam was way ahead both of dem.

He looked behind and shouted'

Swayam: if you guys are done with your guess my look game.. can we leave..

Kriya passed him a deadly glare which he couldn't see because of darkness while rey chuckled at his statement.

At swayam's place, they went straight into siya's room, who by nw was fast asleep due to exertion because of her hyper active mode. Well she and kriya are quite alike.

Swayam then dropped kriya and rey at their respective places. All were silent during whole journey.

All the four were in deep thoughts.Next morning was the biggest day of their life. Will they be able to untangle their destinies.? While two were aware of what to expect in future, the other two were totally unaware.



Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
lovelyyy part...i loved it dear...

Sharon's apprehension about swayam...her love...awww...beautifully written

update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Lovely chapter
Sharon love for swayam is beautifully penned down
Loce the whole chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Does sharon know that kria is her step sister?
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update .. too small but really interesting part ..

Update soon n bigger one this time .. 😛
Edited by neeliyer - 12 years ago

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