SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31)

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aku30

@aku30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream
It was wonderful, I want more !! I want more !! 😔

thanks a lot...

i'll post the next update by 2morrow...😊

till then just try and guess wat it could be...😉

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow

it was an amazing uodate..

loved it a lot...

it was really well written

and im also obsessed with 3 dots...

as u can see in my comment.. 😛

thank you for the pm

and do update soon

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Omg its amazing nd awsm...
M too addicted to three dots...
Rey kriya swayam and sharon interlinking m loving it thnx for pm
update soon

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

res..will read n comment

welcome to d forum dear😊

1st part:

It was so so BEAUTIFUL...LOVED the bro-sis relationship...we can always imagine swayam as the caring bro...

Kriyam and Sharey engages...woah...thats a twist...

Loved Sharon's entry..beautifully written...

2nd part:

Woah...Kriyansh love each other...and Swaron...yet to confess..yet to realize the feelings...

Entangled Destinies...so apt title...

Sharon..the hurt Diva...Swayam..the lover boy...kriyansh

Couldn't get better..

AMAZING style of Writing dear👏👏👏

U have some serious skill of a writer😳

PS-thanks sankriti for pm😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Its Oosum and different concept..i just loved it..All the characters kriyam and Sharey are beautifully potraits..Loved the bro sister relationship..And yes i like the entry of sharon..that was oosum..
And the way u write is amazingly perfect..
Keep updating..

Thanx for scrap

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago