SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

fab update dear... oh i would love it.. if you'll give some past flashes of swayam and sharon


thanx.. 😊
nd i'll do keep dat in mind while writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
I'm sorry i didn't replied to the individual posts..
but i thank everybody who has liked or commented and your valuable suggestions are always welcome...😊

P.S- i'll update the next and the final part either on Saturday or Sunday...😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
amazing update...
i loved it
it was siply amazing...
sorry fir the small comment
busy right now


P.S. thank you for the scrap
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: aku30

<font color="#6600cc" size="4">I'm sorry i didn't replied to the individual posts..</font>

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Final part ????? 😲
u r going to end it????!!! 😔
jo bhi ho waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: aku30

I'm sorry i didn't replied to the individual posts..

but i thank everybody who has liked or commented and your valuable suggestions are always welcome...😊

P.S- i'll update the next and the final part either on Saturday or Sunday...😳



ok waitinggg😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Well.. i knw i said i'll update the final part.. but while writing.. i realised it'll take some time.. so here's the next part... i hope u'll like it..

At swayam's place at night, everybody was shocked to see the marriage making headlines not only in india but worldwide. Although everything was final, they never wanted to make it a public affair. It was supposed to be a small family knit affair far away from media glares. But now, that everything has come out in such an abrupt manner, it was decided to make it official through a joint press conference by both set of parents with swayam and kriya at attendance.

Well, the three people whose lives had been upside down with this news were together at their usual hangout place and were thinking about the ways for the damage control.

Swayam: shit...shit shit shit' he was very disturbed and was not able to think anything'

Kriya: relax swayam' we'll manage something..

Rey: manage.. now really.. how..??? by now Sharon must have got the news'

Swayam: and there's no way I can convince her of my feelings now..

Swayam completed the sentence for rey..

Kriya: we'll make her understand.. we can explain'

Swayam: xplain.. to Sharon..it's nex'

Rey: next to impossible' Sharon rai prakash, the diva will never understand it..nd especially with his behavior'

Swayam: my behavior towards her.. he said in a hurt tone..

By now, kriya was totally irritated at their complete the sentence game whereas swayam got lost in the memories of those two years.

On the other hand, at hotel, Sharon who was now tired of crying was also lost in the thoughts, thoughts of their last interaction'

*flashback*

Sharon POV

"It was annual dance fest of the university and rey was not well enough to participate. Sharon had to lookout for a new dance partner. As she had seen swayam dancing before, she asked him to be her dance partner, but to her bad luck she asked him out in the university campus in front of all the students. She had never expected that he would refuse, and that too in such a rude and insulting manner. She had experienced his concerned looks for her and thought that he has liking towards her. But she got to know the truth in very hard way.

Sharon: swayam' swayam wait.. I need to talk

Swayam: yaa.. hurry up I have a class.. he said rudely

She was first shocked at his rude behavior but still continued..

Sharon: vo.. dance fest is around and rey is not well' so I was thinking.. uhum.. can u be'

She was interrupted by swayam..

Swayam: your partner' right'???

Sharon: yaa' I mean I have seen u dancing nd u r amazing.. so' is it a yes from your side..??? we can start from 2morrow'

She said in one breath without waiting for his response' and when the response came, it took her world by storm' tears started rolling from her eyes by now( in present).

Swayam: whoh.. whoh.. easy girl.. wen did I said yes' he said mocking her..

Sharon: what'??? R u refusing..???

Swayam: yaa' why'what would u do??? Ohh ohh ohh'I forgot' nobody says no to sharon rai prakash, the diva 'poor me.. what is she gonna do with me now'

She just glared at him 'she was way too shocked to say anything at that moment'and by now whole college has gathered near them and swayam continued

Swayam: what do you think of yourself miss rai prakash'??? U think u can get your way around with nybody.. sneeking on me.. right..??? but hey.. I'm nt anybody' and never ever dare sneek upon me again.. nd u know wat'

Sharon was not able to understand why is being so rude and mean' if he doesn't want to be her partner.. he could have refused and walked off' why all this drama. But it was very much for her to take, afterall she was Sharon rai prakash..

Sharon: sneeking on you' nw really'??? Who are you..??? some greek god or something' nd u knw wat u r right.. u r not nybody'u r a nobody.. a looser... and she was about to back off'when swayam spoke..

Swayam: m a nobody' fine.. atleast I don't roam about in the college sneaking on boys'oops sorry.. not sneaking' you jdn't just sneak' with a smirk' and slap'

Sharon slapped him hard on his face and ran off with tears rolling down her eyes."

Swayam POV

"swayam' swayam' I heard her calling my name. I can't even define how I felt when I heard my name from her as if suddenly my name has got some meaning' but.. I had to control myself.. I can't show her my weak side' It won't b good.. so I replied rudely..

Sharon: swayam' swayam wait.. I need to talk..she said

Swayam: yaa.. hurry up I have a class..

She was shocked and so was I, I don't knw how was I talking to her in that way'

Sharon: vo.. dance fest is around and rey is not well' so I was thinking.. uhum.. can u be'

She was interrupted by swayam..

Swayam: your partner' right'??? I was ecstatic that she asked me but showed oderwise..

Sharon: yaa' I mean I have seen u dancing nd u r amazing.. so' is it a yes from your side..??? we can start from 2morrow'

She said in one breath without waiting for my response' I was very happy inside and was admiring her innocence that she has managed to hide from everyone. I wanted to say yes.. I wanted to feel her presence near me, her scent, her smile, her attitude everything.. but' when I opened my mouth' it was all different' only I knw how I had managed to say that without faltering'

Swayam: whoh.. whoh.. easy girl.. wen did I said yes' i said mocking her..

Sharon: what'??? R u refusing..???

Swayam: yaa' why'what would u do??? Ohh ohh ohh'I forgot' nobody says no to sharon rai prakash, the diva'poor me.. what is she gonna do with me now'

She just glared at me'that one glare told me everything.. the hurt, the pain she was going through'and it broke me from inside but I had to b strong because.. because she was rey's fiance, my best friends fiance and if I don't do it this tym.. I would never b able to hide my feelings for her'

Swayam: what do you think of yourself miss rai prakash'??? U think u can get your way around with nybody.. sneeking on me.. right..??? but hey.. I'm nt anybody' and never ever dare sneek upon me again.. nd u know wat'

Sharon was not able to understand why I was being so rude and mean' even I couldn't' I knew my talks are making no sense.. but still I continued'.

Sharon: sneeking on you' nw really'??? Who are you..??? some greek god or something' nd u knw wat u r right.. u r not nybody'u r a nobody.. a looser... and she was about to back off'

This just broke my heart into millions.. yes I was able to make her hate me.. nd dats what I wanted.. but still.. nd in this hurt' I crossed my limit.. dat hurt of not being able to be with her ever, of loosing my first love' overtook everything'

Swayam: m a nobody' fine.. atleast I don't roam about in the college sneaking on boys'oops sorry.. not sneaking' you dn't just sneak' with a smirk' and slap'

And this was it.. she slapped me' I deserved it' before I could realize my mistake ' she ran off'dat was our last encounter'nd since den my heart breaks daily' remembering that day'"

While swayam was in his thoughts, kriya gave rey.. what the hell look' rey was confused..

Rey: what..??

Kriya: what ke bacche' here I'm trying to console him and tum uske ghav pe namak chidak rhe ho'

Rey: ghav' namak.. what..???

Kriya: yaa' mr. America.. I meant 'u r rubbing salt on his wounds..

Rey mentally chided himself for doing this while admiring kriya and this tym it didn't went unnoticed by kriya..

Kriya: what..??? focus..

Kriya then put hand on swayam's shoulder and this made swayam come out of his thoughts.. or rather her thoughts.

Swayam: I'm fine guys' so we do it from 2morrow'

Kriya and rey exchanged confused looks..

Rey: but what'??? I mean we haven't decided nything yet' kriya nodded in positive..

Swayam: old plan guys' there's nothing we can do right nw' until one of us gets the love of his/ her life' he said looking at rey and den kriya..

Rey gave him a big smile and den looked at kriya.. kriya by nw, has understood what swayam is trying to do and gave him a blank look' rey noticed this.. nd tried to control the situation'but in turn damaged it further..

Rey: cool guys.. den 2morrow.. mission swaron and kriyaan' nd he bit his tongue..

Kriya: what kriyaan'??? What r u guys planning..??? she was angry nw..

Swayam gave a deadly glare to rey..who gave him a please save me look' well he had to save it' as it was also about his life nw..

Swayam: nothing yaar.. he just gets too excited that he blurt out nything.. glaring rey.. rey made cute puppy face..

Though kriya didn't believed him.. she decided to shut the topic as it will only complicate the already..complicated matter' nd dats when rey remembered..

Rey: sharon'

Swayam and kriya: Sharon..?? what..???

Rey: she didn't called me.. she said she will call me once she'll reach.. it's almost a day now'

Swayam: wow.. nd u r realizing it nw..??? hw gud is dat' he said sarcastically..

Rey: sorry' but all this thing going around I forgot' vaise u also forgot..

Swayam: I forgot..??? helloo.. she was supposed to call' u.. what if I forgot..

Kriya: stopit both of you.. kabhi bhi shuru ho jaate ho' call it day nw' we'll start from 2morrow'

P.S- i knw it's li'l boring but it's just a build up part... the real drama in next part..😉

Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nice update
Do next update soon really nice chapter hurt swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wow..i am loving this SS..

loving d way u have weaved 4 lives together

plz update soon dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...And i just loved kriya's dialouge delivery...and yes,SwaRon and KriYaansh was superbb...So i liked it..
Sorry,this time i am here without u'r scrap..

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊

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