SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

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"GIRLS"...hahaha

What happened to KRIA

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update... 😳
ReYam convo was fun.. Loved the way Swayam described Siya infront of Rey... mixture of Sharon and Kriya 😆 .. beautifully written 👏
plz do update soon!! 😃
thank u for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
I loved the all conversation..reyam convo was funny..
Then kriya and swayam,rey and sharon part was good to read..
i enjoyed..Keep update..
Sorry i am here without PM

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awosm update
love it 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
reyam convo was funny..😃
plz pm me wen u update


Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update .. can't wait to knw the reason behind swayams sudden happiness ..

Update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
I think kria confessed to swayam that she likes rey..:P
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u everyone for your likes and comments...

P.S- i have seen certain comments mentioning "getting together swaron" but u'll have to wait till end, atleast for happy swaron meet as the day of their togetherness will mark the end of this story... sorry...

P.P.S- sorry for the mistakes... nd again.. i'll be sending only PM'S fron nw on...

so, here goes the next part.. hope u'll like it..


Swayam( in his room) was smiling remembering the last nights convo with kriya'

*flashback*

Swayam: what happened kriya..??? pls tell me..

Kriya: she called me' I heard her voice for the first tym in my entire lyf'

Swayam: who..???he was confused

Kriya: mom' or whatever should I call her' she had tears in her eyes..

Swayam mentally scolded himself for this'

Swayam: what did she say'???

Kriya: she's coming' she's coming here'

Swayam didn't know how to react. After weighing different options for a about a minute, he decided to divert her from this'but wait that isn't easy'

Swayam: hmm.. so why r u upset..??? u can't do anything about it' can u'??? kriya looked at him dejected but he continued..

Swayam: so let it be' we'll see it when she'll come' hmm.. so was it the only reason ..???

Kriya felt little at ease with her best friend by her..

Kriya: yaa.. wat else'?? Coming back to her usual self..

Swayam: den why were u cursing bechara rey.. wat has he done to you'.??? and she remembers something that makes her angry again..

Kriya: because.. siya told me everything'

Swayam: what everything'??? He was confused again.. poor confused soul..

Kriya: don't u act smart'. She told me wat u told her about finding mea prince charming' nd swayam bit his tongue hearing this.. how could he forget that hi sdarling sis can't digest anything especially from kriya' bt he had to play smart for rey.. for his life at the moment..

Swayam: so' don't u want ur prince charming..??? he was praying for his life as kriya glared him..

Kriya: I dn't want rey' she said in a jiffy.. swayam just smiled at this..

Swayam: bt I didn't talked abt him.. I talked abt ur prince charming' with a grin on his face' while kriya was shocked as realized what she just said..

Kriya: vo' vo .. I know wat u and rey r planning'??? I'm nt dis fool to not understand ur intentions'

Swayam: hmm' bt I nd rey never said ny such thing.. infact we never ever talked abt u nd rey..

Kriya; oh shutup.. I know he's here for me.. I knew it d first day only' nd she just mentally facepalmed realizing she has let the cat out of the bag' swayam was confused again'

Swayam: what'??? U know..?? how..??? u kept such a big secret from me'.

Kriya: vo' actly.. I ..vo I wanted to' but' she just was nt getting any words' swayam was smiling inwardly at her condition bt maintained a stern look..

Swayam: out with the truth kriya..

Kriya Inhaled a deep breath as was gng to face the biggest kept secret of her life, infact she was..

Kriya: vo.. I knew he likes me.. from the very first day I met him at the party' the way he used to act around me and look at me.. was different and I' liked.. it.. she said last line a bit hesitantly'

Swayam: what'??? U like him.. but den why u behave so rudely with him..

Kriya: shshshsh' lemme complete.. and swayam acted as if zipping his mouth..

Kriya: I like the attention he gives me, I like the way he looks at me, the way he cares for me' and dn't like it wen he's with another girl, especially Sharon.. <and she looked at his surprised face but continued'> but I don't knw if I want to be with him'

Swayam just facepalmed' he didn't knew what to to do with his best friend..

Swayam: after knowing and feeling this much, u dn't knw if u like him..

Kriya: I knw I like him but I dn't knw if I want to be with him' she said with great patience although she was loosing it all..

Swayam: how will be u sure..??? by ignoring him..???

Kriya: I dn't knw' nd I thought u would help me cum out of it but no.. u r taking ur friend's side and vaise bhi he is also busy with his Sharon' nd she bit her tongue'

Swayam: what did u say..??? he was suddenly very sad..

Kriya: vo.. nothing.. I just saw them hugging after u left to meet siya'

Swayam laughed'.

Swayam: so what..??? they are besties..as if we dn't hug... nd that doesn't mean we love each other..

Kriya: but we do..' nd its different abt us..' I just dn't like him with her

Swayam: I meant.. not that way.. love nd all' nd hw is it different' even we are engaged' nd for ur information.. ur feelings for him can not be merely qualified as like.. its more than dat' nd u have to give him a chance to knw ur true feelings for him' he deserves it.. he has come all the way to be with u'

Nd before u start ur banter here.. I better be get gng.. see u 2morrow nd yaa.. by the way' rey is planning to patao siya in order to impress u' wat say.. should I tell him dat he need not get himself in this much of trouble as his princess already is in love with him..

Kriya blushed a bit, but then had a mischievous smile..

Kriya: naa.. vaise bhi I'm yet not sure' lets have sum fun'nd den winked at him..

Swayam(selfthought): hmm.. I have to do sumthng to make her realize that she loves him'I mean she remember his everything even after dis long.. he's special' rey dude.. thank ur star 2day' u have won half of the battle without dng much.. nd here I'm..

*Flashback ends*

The plan of action for the day for rey was to impress siya to help him with kriya, which was actually not needed as the two girls had already planned to fool bechara rey with their antics.. yes, kriya was still confused abt her feelings bt as swayam said she had to give him chance and thus, the POA of the day for kriya was to confess her like for rey to him.. ofcourse after having sum fun..

The POA for swayam was to atleast make a conversation, no, a decent conversation beyond hello with Sharon and Sharon, she just wanted to avoid all of them' the troubles of her life were not just ending'

In Sharon's room, she was looking at a photo frame, her family picture, her so called family picture as she never knew wat a family is because she never had them' all that she had was her dance and her loneliness. In the photo, a young Sharon was with her papa and mom' papa, who loves her a lot but mostly compensates it with expensive gifts and mom, well for her mom, she was always second, she even wondered if she really exists for her mom'.

Sharon( to herself): nd now she's coming here' but why..??? m sure nt for me.. she never does nything for me.. hmm'. She must be coming for her only'who else' nd for a moment I thought she might be here for me' no.. hw can I get so lucky' nd she was almost in tears..

She left for rehearsal hall.. there was still 2 hours to go for the practice but she needed some time for herself, to get herself out of this emotional stress, nd she was gonna do it only one way.. DANCE'

She went in the rehearsal hall without looking at anything and just started the music player.. the song "luttna from Cocktail was playing on" ( ok.. I'm very bad with remembering songs and this track is currently playing on my playlist and I think it suits the situation too.. but if u want to imagine sum other song.. u can' nd nd.. I can't describe dances' so pls imagine it too' sry')

And she started dancing pouring her each and every emotion in the dance' the anger, the helplessness, the sadness.. every emotion she had been going through' and as she was dancing.. something stopped her' she was just lost in the view she was watching' she hadn't noticed it before'

Sharon: swayam' she said slowly as she saw him staring at her.. but this time it was different than before' his eyes were filled with love nad affection.. nd she could sense it'

Swayam was standing their shirtless, showing his chiseled body and staring at her lovingly' just like he did the first time she saw him dance in the university.

Well,swayam was also there to dance his heart out as he was feeling very low off lately.. not being able to do nything.. not being able to comfort his love.. Sharon.. he could sense her every emotion just by looking at her' nd he knew she Is upset and upset because of him'

They both looked at each other.. the love and pain their eyes were reflecting could be read by the other very well' nd soon the song changed to " haaye rama" ( I personally love their dance and chemistry on this track) and both of them started swaying to the tunes without knowing what they are doing as they were lost in each other' they danced perfectly as if they were dancing together for ages.. well their hearts were.. ( imagine the same dance here)

As soon as the song ended, Sharon came out of her trance and all the bitter memories started playing in her mind again' nd she turned to left but as soon as she was about to get out of the door, swayam caught hold of her hand' which shocked both of them' sharon was not expecting any of of such thing as she always believed that he hates her and swayam, well he was shocked at his attempt..

Swayam: Sharon please.. we can talk this out..

Sharon: what to do u want to talk about' ohh' if u want to insult me.. den there is still some time for others to come' she said while looking at her watch'

Swayam was deeply hurt knowing that those things still haunts her' nd more hurt because he know he desserves all this..

Swayam: Sharon.. please.. can't we start again'.. he said looking hopeful..

Sharon: there's nothing to start' because there is nothing.. absolutely nthng' hurt and anger was visible on her face'

Swayam: I'm sorry for whatever I did or said back in college.. I didn't mean them'

Sharon laughed a bit, sarcastically..

Sharon: didn't mean it.. so u insulted me just for fun.. wow' it is so easy for u.. nhi' bt u knw what mr. shekhawat.. I dn't care.. i dn't give it a damn'

Swayam: but I care'.he had been very polite all this while..

Sharon: u care' for what.. for a sl*t like me' who use boys for her fun'

Swayam: sharon please.. stop it.. he shouted hearing those words from her..

Sharon: stop it'?? Why..??? didn't u were the one who said all these'

Bt before they could continue.. the rest of the group was there.. as it was time' and were shocked to see both of them like that' they looked at both of them..

Sharon: vo..i woke up early.. so, I came early to practice' nd den the group looked at swayam..who was wearing his shirt..

Swayam: vo.. actly.. I just came to dance a bit.. to relax' nd he said goodbye to all of them' nd looked at Sharon apologetically but Sharon alreasy had traces of tears in her eyes.. and she excused herself'

Swayam first decide to follow her and then dropped the idea' thinking she will take some time to come out of all the bitter memories..

Swayam( to himself): I'll erase all ur bad memories abt us.. from nw.. there will be nly happy moments.. I promise..

What will be rey's reaction on knowing kriya's feelings for him and will swayam be able to keep his promise'??


Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago

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