SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 13

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Hey.. Thanks everyone for their likes and comments. they mean a lot. here's the next part.. hope you'll enjoy

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Siya told everything about that letter and her convo with swayam to Kriya. She never hides anything from her and also swayam had told her that kriya knows everything.

At night, swayam and rey were together at, by now their daily hangout place, haaji ali. They were discussing about the next plan to impress the girls.

Rey: dude.. we have to plan something'fast' we have only 4 days..

Swayam: hmm' I knw' I haven't been able to talk to Sharon properly' i dn't knw.. how'll I impress her.. but u knw wat' I saw jealousy in Sharon's eyes today..

Rey: what..??? when..??? why'???

Swayam: are when I hugged kriya'.sharon was jealous'nd I could read it on her face'

Rey: seriously' but why was she jealous' hmm' mayb'

Swayam: dat I dn't knw' but she was jealous'.

Rey: if dat is so'its good sign for u' but kriya is ignoring me big tym.. I have no idea why'???

Swayam: just give her sometime.. she'll be ok'

Rey: that reminds me' why were u so happy today'.???

Swayam: r u jealous'???

Rey: ohh please.. just tell naa.. to which swayam chuckeled..

Swayam: ok.. are nothing I had shouted on siya today' and I had to make amends..

Rey: ohh' so why were u happy' as he didn't understood the point swayam was trying to make

Swayam: because kriya reminded me of siya and the blunder' vo u dn't knw about siya and my relation much..??? he added seeing inquisitive look on his friends face.

Rey: yaa' and I already got a sort of reprimand from your best friend for this'

Swayam laughed at it and explained him everything and also told him that siya has come to know the truth about his and kriya's marriage and the fact thatshe's worried about kriya.

Rey: hmm' dats gud'

Swayam: what gud'??? What's in ur evil mind'???

Rey: u knw me so well' nyways.. I meant we have another person who can help us in the plan..

Swayam: hmm' actually she can help u more because she is very close to kriya, more than me' but.. u have to impress her first and trust me.. it's not an easy job to impress my sister.

Rey: yaa' seriously' I'm reyaansh singhaniya dude'

Swayam: and she is siya shekhawat.. a perfect mix of kriya and Sharon.. with an helpless yet evil smile..

This statement definitely made rey doubt his idea but anything to get his love.

And while they were discussing their plan, their phones rang' it was kriya and Sharon.

(Imagine both set of conversation going on together..)

Kriya: where r u'???

Rey: hmm.. vo I'm with swayam'

Swayam: what happened'???

Sharon: I want to meet u nw'

Swayam & rey( together): fine..i'm coming'. Nd disconnects d call..

Both of them looked at each oder and said "girls" together'

Rey: but dude.. m to surely dead today'she'll kill me'

Swayam: well... atleast den I dn't have to worry about ur setting too'.

Rey: hw mean' vaise den u won't hv to worry abt urs either' and they both start laughing again..

Swayam: lets leave before they actually plan to kill us..

Rey: tera to pta nhi' but I'm gonna have tough tym'

Swayam: bt we'll have to do smthng concrete 2morrow'

Rey: we'll chalk smthng out'as of nw'get gng'

And they both wish each oder good luck and bid goodbye'

At kriya's place

Kriya: WTH swayam' u r ignoring me big tym since that rey has come to india.

Swayam: what..??? no.. nothing like that.. u r my best frnd.. hw can I ignore you..

Kriya: yes.. u r' if nt'den why didn't u met me 2day'it was us who used to go haji ali daily and nw u dn't even bother to ask me'

Swayam was shocked as to what has happened to her.. she never behaved like dis'

Swayam: arey nhi.. vo rey wanted to talk smthng alone.. just dat only..

Kriya: alone'??? What does he wanted to talk about.. I mean if it was about Sharon I should have been dere too..

Swayam: vo'vo' actly.. he was nt getting wat to say nw'.

Kriya was fuming with anger nw'

Kriya: wat do u think' dat I dn't understand wat two of u r planning' mr. swayam shekhawat.. dn't u forget' I knw u way to well for you to make fool of me'

Swayam was definitely nt expecting this..

Swayam: WTH are u talking kriya'wat am I planning..??? showing fake anger as only this can appease kriya at the moment..

Kriya was on the verge of crying nw'

Kriya: dn't u show me this anger of urs'I knw everything'. And she ran to her room'leaving a shocked, and guilty swayam..

At sharon's hotel room,

Rey knocked the door but before he could enter..

Sharon: wow... Mr. Singhaniya is finally here'. So Mr. Singhaniya' I hope u have something to explain me'. She said gritting her teeth.

Rey: well... can I come in first'

Sharon just made way for him to enter the room...

Sharon: now, what are u up to'???

Rey: what..???? What r u talking about'??

Sharon: don't act smart rey'. Why the hell u didn't told me dat this is swayam's company'

Rey: but how does it matters' even if I had tell u dat dis is his company, what would u have done'?

Sharon: whatever...but u were supposed to tell me'. Nd nd'wat about u helping in this' hmm' or Even this doesn't matters..??? she was very angry'

Rey: hmm' vo' I was abt to wen u got d call nd den I thought dat'

Sharon: u think so much no.. she said sarcastically..

Rey: I'm sorry.. I knw I shud have told u' sry'

Sharon: no.. I'm sorry.. I over reacted'

Rey: what did u just said' he was surprisingly shocked'

Sharon: what..????

Rey: whoah.. somebody has changed a lot'.u said sorry' dat too twice in a week's tym' I'm amazed'

Sharon: stop'overreacting' as if I never said sorry before'.

Rey just glared'raising his one eyebrow'

Sharon: ok..fine' cut the topic here'. U were supposed to tell me about ur kriya' she changed the topic..

Rey: hmm.. kriya'.what abt her'???

Sharon: huh' she's getting married to swayam' but still seems to be very happy'why..???

Rey: hmm' because she is'. Hmmm' because I'm happy for dem'. He immediately diverted as he reminds the words of swayam'

Sharon: what'???? But'

Rey: but what nothing'. I shud get gng nw' its late'u must take rest' bbyee..c u tomorrow' gudnyt.. he said in a breath nt giving her any chance to react and left immediately...

Sharon: bye' gud nyt' ab ise kya hua( selftalk)

At kriya's place,

Swayam went in her room after 10 min, thinking dat she might have been a bit relaxed by nw'

Swayam: kriya.. kriya' knocking her door..

Kriya: go away swayam' I dn't wanna talk..

Swayam: please' tell me whats the problem'

Kriya: u stll asking dat'.

Swayam: kriya' I knw..dats not d problem.. its not dat I never went out with my guy frnds' nd its not this big thing dat u would cry over it' dere's something else' pls tell me what is it..

He was still standing outside her room' Kriya opened the door and hugged him tight'

Swayam( while caressing her hair): wat happened' tell me pls'

Next morning, swayam was unusually happy.

What was the reason for his happiness and will rey be able to impress siya and make her a part of their plan and what will happen when siya will meet Sharon.

Please ignore the mistakes as i really didn't got time to proof-read.


Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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great update..awsome ..
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Nice update thnx for the scrap
Do update soon
N please next update me swaron ko milvana
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

thank you for the pm

loved it

and please swaron ko jaldi milwau na...

update soon

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i hope they became one together soon and...
continue soon and pm me...

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