SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 3

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love it----akansha----sanstina let me know of this--- and thanks to her i can read this up. do pm me when u updt.

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read all the 3 chapters .. amazing start and great story so far.. nicely written .. waiting for the next chapter..

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Thank you everyone for your likes and comments.

P.S- since i'm a newbie, i can't send pm's as i'm out of the limit of pm's. sanskriti can u please pm them about the update. and sorry for not replying..😳

Here goes the next part.. and last line defines what you can expect in upcoming updates.



Kriya' the name is itself enough to make her frown and loose it all' but why she hates kriya'??? Is it because rey loves her or'???

*flashback*

"She was early to the college as she had to rehearse for her play alone before any one comes. She was going to the changing room when she heard some music from RH. Her feet automatically lead her there and what she saw was a magical sight for her. She had never ever seen any boy doing dance with so much grace and poise. "he is better dan rey'", she mumbled to herself. He was doing a contemporary number, bare chested showing off his well-toned physique. He was looking no less than a greek god. This was for the first time that a guy had made her go weak on her knees and that too without even looking at her. She was busy noticing him when he suddenly turned around and found her looking at him.

As he knew her through rey, he greeted her.

She was surprised at this sudden gesture of his. Not knowing what to do' she ran off from there, leaving behind her a confused swayam."

<Swayam was a fabulous dancer but never intended to make a career out of it, just like rey. He danced only to vent out his emotions, thus not much people knew about this quality of his. His heart lied in business, that is why he was there, for his MBA.>

And then again the name kriya sprang in her head causing a severe headache as she hated this name to the core. She decided to call it off for the day. She had taken a day off.

At the same time, swayam was lost in his thoughts, again. He was revisiting the words of rey and then suddenly' he remembered what he said.. "she is not ready to understand dat I love somebody else'" and he jerked up from his position.

Swayam( selftallk): somebody else'. Who somebody else'??? He never told me about this. And how he knows kriya'??? When did he met her'??? what the hell is happening' he almost shouted' and his door was sprung open. It was kriya.

Kriya: why r u shouting..??? r u ok..???

Swayam: wat'??? Can't u knock the door'??? And wat r u doing here at this time.. it was 12 in the night. He was irritated by the interruption.

Kriya: excuse me.. knock..??? have u ever knocked before coming in my room'a girls room. And at this tym.. u forgot.. I'm staying here tonight. She continued'

Kriya: you know wat..??? u have changed' u're behaving weird these days. Even uncle, aunty and siya has noticed this. So will u now just shoot wats going on'

Swayam was first shocked at her reaction and den started laughing, just to avoid the matter, he was yet not ready to talk to her.

Swayam: hey.. hey..hey' chill'. Nothing has happened. And I shouted because I was not expecting nyone at this hour. And u people are worrying unnecessarily.

Kriya: dude.. if u don't wanna talk' it's ok.. but please u know.. u can't lie to me' so don't even try.

Swayam: hmmm' u know me so well' trust me' wenever I'll be in a situation to talk about it, u'll be the first person. I'm myself not clear about nything. Leave me.. u tell..??? wat do u want to say'???

Kriya was flabbergasted' she didn't knew what to say.. how to start' but it was time that she talks to him. swayam smiled at her reaction'

Swayam: even I know u very well' wait.. first tell me how do you know rey' I mean reyaansh singhania???

Kriya: reyaansh' hmm' yaa.. I remember.. I met him at a party'actually 3-4 parties' he's anjali's cousin' remember.. my classmate'

Swayam: oh..okk' accha.. u wanted to say something.. carry on'

But before she could say anything' their darling siya entered the room and sat in between dem giving kriya a cute angry look.

Siya: what.. I have been looking for you everywhere'addressing kriya' u were supposed to give me company and not ur fianc and she giggled..

Swayam and kriya gave each other an awkward smile.

Swayam: don't u hav ur school tomorrow..???

Siya: kya bhai' tomorrow is Sunday.. dats why she's here..

And then three of dem chatted whole night'.

Meanwhile, rey had talked to his parents. He didn't told dem the whole truth but just that he is going to India for few days.

*Morning*

In US, Sharon was all ready to leave for her rehearsals when rey entered her apartment.

Rey: how r u now..??

Sharon: I'm fine.. what r u doing here at this time..??

Rey: I'm leaving for india today. So just came to meet you before I leave.

Sharon: hmm.. I'm late for my rehearsals' we can talk on the way'

Rey: yup' r u ok naa'??

Sharon: I'm fine rey...yesterday.. whatever I did' was not because of you. I always knew dat u don't love me.. nd neither do I'

Rey: then' why..why sudden outburst..???

Sharon: leave it rey' I don't wanna talk about it now.

By now, they had reached their respective cars and bid adieu to each other.

What is haunting kriya and Sharon..??? what will happen when rey will land in India..???

Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just read all ur updates...
And trust me all of them were superb!! 👍🏼
I loved it all... ❤️
And i am extremly excited to read further!! 😛
Do continue soon - 😊
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Originally posted by: prakriti4u

I just read all ur updates...
And trust me all of them were superb!! 👍🏼
I loved it all... ❤️
And i am extremly excited to read further!! 😛
Do continue soon - 😊



Thanku..😊

i'll update daily by the same time. so even if i am not able to send pm, do check it by 10 or 11P.M
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update 😊

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