SWARON+ KRIYAANSH SS- ENTANGLED DESTINIES(updated on page 31) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..Thats was great to read Kriyam part..i enjoyed
Then SwaRon convo was beautifully written..
In short..Each part was beautifully written
Waiting for next one.
Keep update soon

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all parts on one go ..
loved it alot:)
bond between swayam siya n kria is so cute
rey is in big trouble now ..
SwaRon convo is beautifully wtitten ..
some more Swaron plz 😳
update soon n pm me plz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww veryy nic story... read in on go


egerly waiting 4 nxt

plzz pm me when u update

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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

LOVELY

BEAUTIFUL

KRIA LOVES REY ALREADY...GRT

SWARON TOO

BOTH DIDN'T GOT DERE MOM'S LOVE SO WHERE WAS SHE??

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.. m back with an update... hmmm... actually rather a short one... but m too busy and lazy to write a bigger one.. 😭 😆 and it goes as i promised to give it by today to swaronlove001.. and also zk456789 aka zainab...

Thank you very much for your likes and comments.. i haven't replied to individual comments but it is overwhelming to read your response...

Now, here goes the update... hope you'll like it...

Siya was going for shopping that day and rey thought it to be the perfect occasion for him to impress her. So, he decided to meet her at the shopping mall only and impress her with his charming personality. He had already seen her once and had also took her picture from swayam.

On the other hand,

Kriya: hey baby, how r u..??

Siya: hmmm' thik hun' kya baat hai..?? u seem different today' raising her eyebrows.

Kriya: hmm.. nothing' nothing at all'

Siya: nhi' something is different' u seem so happy' I have seen u this happy before' wats up'?? Bhai has let go of that girl' she said making weird face..

Kriya: siya'show some respect towards her' she is elder to you and moreover' ur brother loves her'. She said with a strict tone..

Siya: yaa.. whatever' but den why are u so happy'??

Kriya: we'll have some fun today' and she winked at her'

Siya: fun' yaa I knw dat.. we are going shoppinnng'

kriya: hmm.. but not only dat' today u'll get to rag a handsome hunk'

siya: whooah' handsome hunk.. ragging'. Dats sounds interesting.. no very interesting'. She said excited like a 5 yr. old..

kriya: ohkk' so here's d plan'.

In the evening, at the mall'

Siya and kriya were busy shopping, actually busy waiting for rey to come and there he was hell scared as how to impress siya. He was trying on different lines to impress siya. But everytime he tried to come up with something gud, swayam's statement "and she is siya shekhawat' perfect mix of Sharon and kriya.." now, only these two can understand how difficult it is to handle the two alone, then handling their mixed version'..

Here rey was going through this great dilemma of his life as how to impress siya and there kriya was eagerly waiting for him.. not to rag him but to see him' she herself wasn't able to understand this feeling.. she is feeling all the way more drawn towards rey after she confessed her feeling to swayam'

ahh' and swayam'. He was the most confused and dejected soul at this point of time' he was going through the dance he had with sharon'.. in literal sense'

*flashback*

He was dancing when he heard some noises. There, She entered the rehearsal hall in a very low mood.. she didn't even had a look around.. and started dancing' letting her emotions flow through her perfect moves' the only way to soothe this immense pain she felt everytime.. she thinks of her family' he was standing their mesmerized by her beauty, by her emotions' he just wanted to catch this in his camera.. as a cherished memory of her with her dance' he was placing the camera at a position from where he can shoot her dance and more importantly her sad yet angelic face.. face of his love.. his Sharon.. he was done.. and was just staring at the beauty in front of him when he heard that magical voice taking his name.. his heart did several summersaults hearing his name in her voice' but at the another moment, it went gloomy.. what if Sharon had seen him placing the camera' what if'. But no' it wasn't so' he went towards her'

*flashback ends*

Swayam(self thought): what was that'??? I saw care and love in her eyes' for me'?? Was that for real or m I dreaming'

Swayam1( his alter ego: optimistic one): no' u r not.. u saw that for 100th time by now'

Swayam: 105 to be precise'. He was shocked to see his alter ego'

Swayam2( alter ego: pessimistic one): stop both of you' dat was no love and care' btw how do you measure someone's love and care through their eyes' is there any measuring unit..???

Both swayam and swayam1 looked at him confused with weird face..

Swayam1: u won't understand' love has its own language.. language of understanding.. a connection they have since always..

Swayam2: since always'?? What since always' dey hardly know each other for 2 years.. don't listen to him' and forget her'

Swayam1: what forget her..?? no.. u love her'. And u ( pointing towards swayam2)' yaa.. they know each other for only 2 years.. but u don't need lifetime to understand people' u just have to be pure in your feelings'. And he is pure and selfless in his love for her' looking towards swayam..

Swayam2: this all so bookish and impractical'. No body can be pure and selfless'. Wasn't he selfish he pushed her away.. when he insulted her' when he degraded her, when he questioned her character in front of whole college'.

Swayam1: no'. no' he shouted, he was just trying to' hmm' to protect her'.

Swayam2: oh' shutup' he was selfish' he wanted to save his image of being a good friend and a good person who doesn't fall in love with his friend's fiancee. But in all this, he never noticed.. how low he stooped.. he insulted her no reason' wat was the need' it was he who couldn't control his feeling' but why she had to suffer.. why..??? he was selfish'and she hates him' she hates him for right'. And he must'

Swayam2 was going on and on'. And it was getting difficult for swayam to hear further as every incident swayam2 was talking about was flashing in his mind, one by one'.

Swayam: just shut up both of you.. I said just shut up.. he shouted at the top of his voice' and both the alter egos vanished'

The people outside his office just gathered around his cabin when they heard him shout' his assistant went in to check'. But there was nobody.. just swayam who had very horrific expressions on his face'.

Assistant: sir' sir'. But no response'

He went towards swayam' shook him a little'

Assistant: sir'. Are you ok'??

Swayam looked around and tried to calm himself and after some tym'

Swayam: yaa' I'm fine' nothing' u may go'. Hmm.. actually'. I'm going out.. just look onto this project.. I have finalized everything'

Assistant: but sir, you have meetings'.. but before he could complete his sentence..

Swayam: cancel all my meetings for today.. infact of all this week'. I'll talk to dad'

Assistant: ok sir' and he left'

After few minutes.. swayam also dashed out of his cabin and left leaving all his employees confused' there were rumours going on among people'


i know it is very lame and i also made swayam look negative... sorry.. but i'll explain it in further updates...
Edited by aku30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres

yipee me first
🥳
party !!!!


now coming to the update
this update contained all kinds of different emotions...
it was so well penned down 👏
amazing 😃
love, naughtiness, guilt etc...
everything was there...
loved it..
fabulous job 👍🏼


Hope swaron have a proper convo ASAP...
and some swaron scenes as well ❤️
and rey impressing both the girls 😆
khub hangama hone wala hain
not forgetting masti as well


loved the update
thanks for the PM
update soon
and do pm me 😃
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was one update with all kinds of different emotions...
love, nervousness, naughtiness, guilt and what not...
Well written 👏 loved it ❤️
Hope Sharon and Swayam have a proper conversation soon...
and Can't wait to see the fun stored when Rey tries to impress both the girls 😆
Update Soon!!!!

P.S Thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

BECHARA REY...KIA HONE WALA USKE SATH??WHUD BE FUNN

N SWAYAM WELL HE HAS ALOT TO DEAL WID ALTHOUGH SHARON TOO LOVES HIM

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
veyyy nic

nd tnx 4 update but small one tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter! Please update soon and thanks for the pm...😊

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