FF'Dream OR Destiny' Last Chapter 35, Page 111

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The future belongs to those,

who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

- Eleanor Roosevelt



Destiny, fate, future... what they r having in store for us? No one knows...

No one is aware that where the time vl take us...

Some believe in fate, some do not...

Some witness their lives having drastic changes and hear the approaching thunder storms, while some live happily, enjoying sweet melodious songs of their lives...




This is world !!! Where every person exis for a reason.

All tied with their own fates.

But some times, in this journey of life, some people r brought in front of each other and the decision which they take...

becomes their destiny...
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Khanna Family:

Kesar: Mota bha n Paan ba's youngest son of 23 years, he Was a sweet lovable, naughty young boy in his childhood but his circumstances has changed him into an angry, stubborn young man about whom everybody thinks of as being selfish,
he is secretly searching for his brother's killer.

Vasant (died at the age of 22 years): Was Mota bha n Paan ba's second son, he was in love with gulaal n married her but they vr not destined to be together so he died 7 years before, in a car accident.

Mota Bha: Sarpanch of Talsaagra village, n father of Raman, Vasant, Rewa n Kesar. He lives in the city now as he n his family have left their village. He was a very close friend of gulaal's father.

Paan Ba: Wife of Mota bha n mother of Raman, Vasant, Rewa n Kesar.

Raman: Mota Bha's elder son of 31 years, n husband of Sudha.

Sudha: Raman bha's wife of 26 years n she is a sweet lady who loves her family so much and has a very good relation with her brother in law n sister in law.

(Raman n Sudha have two twins who have gone to spend their holidays with their grand mother (sudha's mother) in another city)

Rewa: Mota Bha's daughter of 25 years who is married but her husband is out of the country so she currently stays with mota bha.


Mehra Family:

Gulaal: An innocent, sweet, loving, mature, sensible, 27 years old girl, daughter of Revji bhai n Poonam Ba.
She loved vasant n married him but is a widow now after his death.

Revji Bhai: Father of Gulaal n Yogesh n a very close friend of mota bha.

Poonam Ba: Gulaal n Yogesh's mother n wife of revji bhai.

Yogesh: Gulaal's selfish brother, who left her n their mother when they needed him so much after their father's death.

Giga Kaka: Revji bhai's younger brother n husband of Jamna. he is a selfish person n often planned bad things for his brother's family.

Jamna Kaki: Giga kaka's wife, she is also a very selfish person n always thinks of her husband n her daughter n no one else, she has always been a supporter to giga in his evil doings n some times dominates giga also.

Talli: Gulaal's cousin n Jamna kaki n Giga kaka's daughter of 22 years, she is a complete contrast to her parents n loves gulaal like her own sister.

P.S: This is also updated on page 15 😊


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It was a sweet, blissful morning... the sun was shining brightly in the sky, spreading its rays in every nook n corner of the world. The chirping of birds n the sound of blowing wind was like music to the ears. People vr happily going around here n there, busy doing their usual chores, not noticing that girl with normal height n simple looks...
There was not much traffic on the roads at that time n this seemed to be the very reason for her to walk so confidently near the middle of the road. Everything seemed to be normal except "that girl"... Yes !! That girl !!
If someone had observed closely, he would have found that the girl was walking in a trance !

Suddenly, the black clouds started to gather above her n a thunder storm started to blow. It started to rain very heavily. The girl opened her eyes wide n looked around her, snapping out of her trance instantly...

" Main kahan hoon? Ye sab kya ho raha hai? "

At that very moment, she saw a black cloud coming towards her very fast, she heard lots of running footsteps approaching her...

She started to get frightened,

" Nahi ! Main ne kuch nahi kiya, main ne kuch nahi kiya ! "

The footsteps can be heard closer now,

"M...mm...main... mujhe chupna hoga !! warna yeh log mujhe maar denge... sab maar dalenge mujhe !! "

The girl started to run, she ran as fast as her legs n her stamina allowed her to. The view around her kept changing... the buildings around her kept becoming large n small... until she reached a place which looked like a cliff edge...
It was dark all around, only a little light made her understand that she has reached a dead end ! There was no where to escape !! She started shivering...

" Ab main kya karoon? Kahan jaoon? Main marna nahi chahti ! "

Only the footsteps vr heard previously but now, those people can also be seen. They vr having horrifying appearance n vr approaching towards her very fast... they nearly reached her...

She heard some voices... some people saying "han yehi hai woh... ise raaste se hatana hai hamen"

She started backing out... being very afraid, not realizing that only one or two steps more n she would fall off that cliff with her soul leaving the body n the body disappearing in the depth of those huge mountains where it would be impossible to know that where did it go...

She took those 2 steps n slipped from the edge... her senses stopped working n she could just feel herself falling down...

" Nahiii iii iii iii !! "

A loud cry echoed in the mountains !!!

It was all of a sudden when two hands got hold of her hands n pulled her close, the last thing she remembered was a pair of beautiful eyes...

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She opened her eyes n got up !! She was sitting on her bed, sweating from top to toe n breathing heavily. She switched on the light n drank whole glass of water n lied down again. It was still night n she started thinking...
" Phir wohi sapna !!! Bachpan se hi har kuch months baad yehi sapna ata hai ! Akhir kyun ? Kon hen woh log ? Kyun mujhe maarna chahtay hain?
Aur wo... wo kaun hai? Wo aankhen... I cant forget them... Kon hai wo? "
"Oh is sab men, main bhool hi gayi... subah itni important presentation deni hai tujhe gulaal... yeh sapna bhi aaj hi aana tha... ab kesay degi tu presentation aur agar kal sab sahi na gaya toh tera promotion toh gaya n promotion gaya matlab yeh ghar men rehne ki jagah bhi gayi... so ja gulaal subah jaldi uthna hai..."

n thinking all this, she again fell asleep...


This is Gulaal... a simple innocent girl, medium height, fair complexion, long hairs, n simple eyes but un do bolti ankhon men kuch baat toh thi, aur yeh tha gulaal ki zindagi ka aik bohot bara sach... us ka yeh sapna jo har kuch months baad woh daikhti thi aur har baar isi tarah ghabra jaati thi... woh aaj tak samajh nahi paayi thi k akhir woh log kon hen jo us k peechay paray hen? n the most important thing vr the pair of eyes... us ki ankhen jisne use bachaya... that moment she used to feel like everything was alright, she used to feel the happiness which she had never felt before... she never understood that y she always feel this??


Why ???
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 13 years ago
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Hey friends, i have started writing this FF, plz read the intro n the first chapi n tell me hows it? 😕 😳
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 13 years ago
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omg😲ye to raaz pichle janam ka lagta hai😕ye gullu kahin hamahri keithwa to nahi, soti rehti hai isliye aise sapne dekhti hai😆but jokes apart very beautiful chappi, flavor bhi alag hai👏 i was like this jab mai chappi padh rahi thi, but now i want the next chappi jaldi jaldi😃chal ab aaja next chappi ke saath warna😛
Edited by bioinfo - 13 years ago
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Meri kiranwa...😳
Kya fantabulous start hai...😊
Main tho pehle darr hi gayi...then main bhi gullu ke saath neend se jagi...😳
nice chappi yaar...loving it...😳
N woh aankhon ke maalik kab chhab dikhlaayega...?😳
Mujhe his chhab jald se jald dekhni hai...😳
Next chappi jaldi laana...😳
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Oye..kiran dear..aaja..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗The FF is so beautiful...good start...😳😛..ab mein comment dena chahthi..hgoon har line pe..par tujhe phir se mere liye type karna padega..😕so..me withdrawing my thought..nahin tho mein kahan chodnewali hoon teri FF ko..😉😛Gulaal in kesariya field..😉😆loved loved loved d chappie..😳I t is just awesome..u described d tense situation so well..👏👏👏.now jaldi next chappie..la n batha gullu kya kaam karing..n d family backdrop..😳love u..🤗
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⭐️OMG meri sunehri kiran..kya dhansoo chappi tha..me all balle balle...Kiran tu sach mein jadugarni hai ekdum...ekdum sach jadugarni..yeah ab jaldi la chappi next wala👏
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

Hey friends, i have started writing this FF, plz read the intro n the first chapi n tell me hows it? 😕 😳


Yahan kisne poocha ki continue karoon ya nahin..😡mein tumhe toffee dungi..😛agar tune FF ka next chappie nahin layi tho..😆😛Briliiant start..my dear..🤗
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Another FF, ab toh nachooo! Aagaz aisa hai toh anjaam kya hoga-interesting start. Wah Kiran!Luking forward to the forthcoming chappies😃
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

haila yeh meri destiny hai ya dream i got the golden oppurttunity to read kiran ff i can imagine the fantabulous scenes between the protogonist...kudos kiran👏👏





It was a sweet, blissful morning... the sun was shining brightly in the sky, spreading its rays in every nook n corner of the world. The chirping of birds n the sound of blowing wind was like music to the ears. People vr happily going around here n there, busy doing their usual chores, not noticing that girl with normal height n simple looks...lovely start👏👏👏👏

There was not much traffic on the roads at that time n this seemed to be the very reason for her to walk so confidently near the middle of the road. Everything seemed to be normal except "that girl"... Yes !! That girl !!
If someone had observed closely, he would have found that the girl was walking in a trance ! ow wow what a build up...the girl is lost or what????⭐️

Suddenly, the black clouds started to gather above her n a thunder storm started to blow. It started to rain very heavily. The girl opened her eyes wide n looked around her, snapping out of her trance instantly...

" Main kahan hoon? Ye sab kya ho raha hai? "

At that very moment, she saw a black cloud coming towards her very fast, she heard lots of running footsteps approaching her...

She started to get frightened,

" Nahi ! Main ne kuch nahi kiya, main ne kuch nahi kiya ! "

The footsteps can be heard closer now,

"M...mm...main... mujhe chupna hoga !! warna yeh log mujhe maar denge... sab maar dalenge mujhe !! "

The girl started to run, she ran as fast as her legs n her stamina allowed her to. The view around her kept changing... the buildings around her kept becoming large n small... until she reached a place which looked like a cliff edge...

It was dark all around, only a little light made her understand that she has reached a dead end ! There was no where to escape !! She started shivering...

" Ab main kya karoon? Kahan jaoon? Main marna nahi chahti ! "

Only the footsteps vr heard previously but now, those people can also be seen. They vr having horrifying appearance n vr approaching towards her very fast... they nearly reached her...

She heard some voices... some people saying "han yehi hai woh... ise raaste se hatana hai hamen"

She started backing out... being very afraid, not realizing that only one or two steps more n she would fall off that cliff with her soul leaving the body n the body disappearing in the depth of those huge mountains where it would be impossible to know that where did it go...

She took those 2 steps n slipped from the edge... her senses stopped working n she could just feel herself falling down...

" Nahiii iii iii iii !! "
omg what a thrilling start u r genius kiran...i read it and shiver ran down my spine...awesome👏
A loud cry echoed in the mountains !!!

It was all of a sudden when two hands got hold of her hands n pulled her close, the last thing she remembered was a pair of beautiful eyes...
oh wow lovely


She opened her eyes n got up !! She was sitting on her bed, sweating from top to toe n breathing heavily. She switched on the light n drank whole glass of water n lied down again. It was still night n she started thinking...

" Phir wohi sapna !!! Bachpan se hi har kuch months baad yehi sapna ata hai ! Akhir kyun ? Kon hen woh log ? Kyun mujhe maarna chahtay hain?
Aur wo... wo kaun hai? Wo aankhen... I cant forget them... Kon hai wo?
"
omg it was a dream i thought ppl were after her and she was literaaly fall from the cliff
"Oh is sab men, main bhool hi gayi... subah itni important presentation deni hai tujhe gulaal... yeh sapna bhi aaj hi aana tha... ab kesay degi tu presentation aur agar kal sab sahi na gaya toh tera promotion toh gaya n promotion gaya matlab yeh ghar men rehne ki jagah bhi gayi... so ja gulaal subah jaldi uthna hai..."
ghar me rehne k jagah gayi means is she having conflicts at home...oh wow this chapii is so capitivating
n thinking all this, she again fell asleep...


This is Gulaal... a simple innocent girl, medium height, fair complexion, long hairs, n simple eyes but un do bolti ankhon men kuch baat toh thi, aur yeh tha gulaal ki zindagi ka aik bohot bara sach... us ka yeh sapna jo har kuch months baad woh daikhti thi aur har baar isi tarah ghabra jaati thi... woh aaj tak samajh nahi paayi thi k akhir woh log kon hen jo us k peechay paray hen? n the most important thing vr the pair of eyes... us ki ankhen jisne use bachaya... that moment she used to feel like everything was alright, she used to feel the happiness which she had never felt before... she never understood that y she always feel this??


Why ???oh she is dreaming and she is dreaming since childhood is it her intuition or rebirth?????

awesome is the least word to say about this ff its so captiviting i really wanna know about her dream really bring the next chapii fast fast mujhse intzaar nahi hota
it was capitivating start ...loved it i never knew u write and u write so well u know how to bind ur audience since day 1 hats off kiran fantastic job

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