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Posted: 14 years ago
Hurrayyy !!!!! 😃
Thanks dear for the update... was missing you so much..
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Kiran..ithna pyaara chappie laayee hai tu..toh yeh tere liya bantha hai na🤗...
PB talking to Gullu abt Kesu anger...oye kya bahu ke saamne beta ka kachra bana rahi hai😉...gulaal assuring her that he will change😆...oye madam zara batha tereko kaise patha ki he will change😉...
so nice of gulaal for planning kesar's birthday party😊..and even sooo sooo nice of kesar making it all waste😆...aur uper se birthday pe MB se poora gaaliya pada...sab log birthday party ka dinner bhi khaye the...except birthday boy and the girl who planned it😆...
Sir arriving at 1:00 am...kya timing hai ghar aane kha😆...n madam waiting desperately for him...waise bhi woh toh kisi question ka answer nahi degha...phir bhi yeh ladki poochthi hi jaarahi hai...bachcha thakgaya hai bhaahar ghumthe ghumthe n mobile off rakh rakhe...usse rest toh karne do😳...
Oye me just loved the whole conversation between kesar and gulaal...very well written👏...
Pehli baar man handling bhi hua hai😳...kesar ki bhaashan aur gullu ki zakhm...in tears gulaal ki bhaashan when kesar in trance...haye haye...in do no ka kya hoga😉...
Kya dialogue mari hai gulaal ne toh end mein..vassy ko laakhe kya zabardast attach kiya hai kesar par...bachcha toh ekdum speechless and shock hogaya😲...
waise woh kya tha...she want to leave this house😡...magar ab toh lagtha hai kesar aisa nahi hone dega😉...bachcha jaldi jaldi realise karo she wanted to be ur sachchi frnd and want to share ur problems...phir toh dosti hojaayegi...aur uske bhaad toh😍..pehle dosti toh kar...

Just waiting what will be his reaction and his behavior after this towards her...and more over what will be gulaal's next step..as she told him that she will try not to come in front of him...

Me waiting for next chappie😍...hope u will update it today😊...

Edited by MR21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye..kiran dear thu agayi...missed u so so much...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭..n I lub u..lots n lots n lots...
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

The next day, while doing work in the kitchen, paan ba had told gulaal that she is really worried about kesar:


"Daikh na gulaal, pata nahi kya hoga is larkay ka, ise dekh k bilkul nahi lagta k yeh vasant ka bhai hai, vasant is se kitna pyar karta tha aur hum sab bhi is ko kitna pyar karte hen aur yeh hamesha apne mota bha ko naraaj hi karta hai, pata nahi kis baat ka ghusa bhara hai is k ander, vasant k gujar jane k waqt toh chota tha yeh, hum ne socha bacha hai, theek hojayega, abhi bhai k janay se pareshan hai lekin yeh toh bigarta hi chala gaya, aur dekh na ab toh kisi ki suntan bhi nahi, bas apne man ki karta hai"haann..ithna gussa kyun aatha hai..use shayad mirchii jyada khane ki adath hui hogi..🤣

G: "Paan baa p chinta mat kijye, kesar pehlay jaisa ho jayega, main hun na, main use phir se pehle waala kesar banana ki poori koshish karoon gi, ap ka kesar ap k paas wapas ajaye ga" she said smiling.

PB: "Tu kya kar sakti hai beta, mujhe nahi lagta ab yeh sudhar sakta hai, raman se bhi tere mota bha koi itne khush nahi hen, aur yeh kesar bhi unhen dukhi karta hai"

G: "Ap sab mujh pe chor den ba, aj se kesar ki jimedaari meri hai, mujh se jitna hoga main karoon gi aur poori koshish karoon gi k who phir se pehle jaisa ban jaye"yes..gulaal..broomstick pe baitkar..uske sar par NACHOO...😡

Gulaal knew the reason for kesar's behavior so she decided that she vl help him. She vl help him to return to his true self, she vl help him to get rid of his pain, she vl help him to be the kesar which vasant had told her about. She started caring for him more n more. She used to go to his room every morning to wake him up n to call him for breakfast. Kesar didn't like this but gulaal still continued doing this. Everyday she used to call him to ask if he has had his lunch or not n everyday kesar always tried to avoid her. Some times she was told that he is busy in a meeting, sometimes he used to respond to her call rudely n sometimes he didnt even bother to answer the call.oye..mujhe problem samaj mein aayi..kesu ko hearing aid gift dena chahiye..

One day, rewa n sudha vr talking that after two days, it was kesar's birthday...

Gulaal got an idea to plan a surprise birthday party for him. She involved all the family members in this planning and called all his close friends. Finally the day arrived. Everybody behaved very normally with him. In the morning, everybody wished him his birthday and he took mota bha n paan ba's blessings. Today again he was very sad as he used to start this day by taking vasant's aashirvaad n hugging him. He left for the office while everybody at the house got busy in doing all the arrangements for the party. Before kesar left, gulaal had told him to return early in the evening.Arre..woh ghusaail..ko yaad hoga ki nahin..

In the evening, they all got ready n were waiting for him to return. His friends had also arrived. The clock struck 8 pm n gulaal started to get worried. From some days kesar was returning home till 7 pm but today he was late. They all waited n waited n the clock struck 11 pm. Mota bha had become very angry:

"Daikha tum ne paan ba, yeh larka nahi sudhrega, dekha aj ise bola bhi tha gulaal ne k jaldi ana lekin yeh ghayab hai'. Pata nahi hamen itna pareshan kyun karta hai"hehehe..Mb in boiled (red)mode..

G: "Ho sakta hai koi jaroori kaam aagaya ho mota bha, abhi ajaye ga"

MB: "Nahi gulaal, tu nahi jaanti, yeh aisay hi karta hai, ise hamen pareshan kar k bohot acha lagta hai, pata nahi kya chahta hai yeh"

Sudha: "Mota bha ap pareshan na hon, kesar ajayega, hum mehmano ko toh khana khila dete hen, bohot dair ho gayi hai, aur ap log bhi chal k khana kha len, varun, rohan, ajao, rewa tub hi chal, chal gulaal khana kha le, kesar pata nahi kab ayega"

G: "Nahi bhabhi mera man nahi hai, ap log kha len, main kesar ka intezaar kar rahi hoon, who ayega oh us k sath hi kha lungi, dekhiye na us ka mobile bhi nahi lag raha, pata nahi kahan hai"

Sudha: "Aray chinta mat kar gulaal, who aisay hi karta hai, pareshan karne k liye apna mobile band kar deta hai aur late ghar ata hai, who ajaye ga, tu kha le"hehe..sudhi telling k kesu is a use less fellow..

G: "Nahi bhabhi plz ap log kha lijiye, mujh se nahi khaaya jayega"

Sudha n the others left to eat dinner as it had become very late n the guests also had to leave now. Gulaal's eyes vr stuck at the main door. The clock struck 1 am, it was very late n still kesar's cell phone was switched off. She was getting so much worried. Suddenly she heard some noise at the main door.

"Lagta hai kesar agaya" said gulaal to herself.

She quickly got up, reached towards the door n opened it. Kesar was standing there n was surprised to see gulaal awake at this time. He ignored her n stepped in n moved towards his room.oye..goggles pehen beta..ladki nazzar ayegi..

"Kesar, kahan that u ab tak? Tu theek hai na? koi kaam agaya tha kya?" she asked these questions in one go"

He didn't reply her n continued to walk towards his room.

"Kesar" she came in front of him, " Bol na, kahan that u, kya hua tha, tera mobile bhi band hai, bata na kahan that u, kyun aya hai itni dair se"

"Kuch kaam tha mujhe" said kesar in a tired n irritated tone.

G: "Aisa kya kaam aagaya tha? Tujhe kaha than a k jaldi aana, phir bhi kyun late aaya tu, daikh sab tera intezaar kar rahe the, main bhi kab se wait kar rahi hun aur'.."

"Meri marzi main jab aoon jab jaoon, tumhe kya problem hai !" he said angrily.

Gulaal was so surprised to hear his tone. "Kesar kya hogaya hai tujhe, har waqt teri marji toh nahi chalegi na, maine kaha bhi tha'"

"Main kyun sunun tumhari baat ! aur who kyun karun jo tum keh rahi ho ! tumhen aisa kyun lagta hai k main wohi karunga jo u said, y should I do it, its my life n meri jo marzi ho woh I vl do !" with that, he quickly moved towards his room. Gulaal stood their all surprised. Still she managed to come out of the state of shock n went into the kitchen to give some food to him.Arre..use ek laffa de bath khatham..

After a few minutes, gulaal knocked at his room's door. He opened it n said coldly:

"Whats ur problem gulaal, ab kyun ayi ho?"

G: "Yeh tere liye khaana laayi hun, tu ne kuch khaya nahi hoga na"

Kesar got surprised as he really had not eaten anything. He was surprised that how did she know that he didn't eat anything. Still he replied harshly:

"Nahi khaana mujhe kuch, jao yahan se !"

G: "Kyun nahi khana, dekh kesar tu mujh pe ghusa hai na, theek hai, per aise khane se toh naraaj mat ho na, thora sa kha le"

K: "Tum toh peeche hi par gayi ho ! keh diya na mujhe nahi khana, now just get out from here !" with that he moved towards the table n picked up his mobile phone to call some one. Gulaal put the plate on the table n snatched the mobile from his hand.

G: "Yeh sab chor kesar, khana toh tujhe khana parega ! Cha lab jaldi se kha le, dekh sab teri pasand ki cheezen hen"

Kesar ignored her words n tried to snatch back the mobile from her hand but she was not ready to give it n in all this snatching, the mobile fell to the ground n broke. Gulaal got a little bit surprised as she didn't want this to happen. Kesar's eyes became red with anger. He was not able to bear all this anymore. He clutched his fists n the very next second, got hold of her arm n angrily pulled her somewhat close.

"Bas !! bohot hua ! enough is enough ! tumhari problem kya hai haan ! kyun mere peeche pari rehti ho ! kesar yeh khao kesar yeh piyo, kesar aisay utho kesar aisay betho ! Tang aagaya hun main tumhari bakwaas sun sun k ! Tum hoti kaun ho mujhe yeh sab kehne waali, kya haq hai tumhen haan ! I had told u earlier also k mujh se door raho, koi haq nahi hai tumhen yeh sab karne ka ! Main ne bohot koshish ki k tumhen kuch na kahun, tum is ghar men rehti ho lekin ab bohot hogaya ! kis ne kaha tumse k meri chinta karo, mera intezaar karo ! kis ne kaha mere liye khana laao ! is ghar men rehne ayi ho na, is ghar men raho, meri life men interfere karna band karo ! Just go away !"oye..ithna bashan kyun de raha hai..😡😲

With that he left her arm with so much force that she got totally disbalanced n fell on the floor with her head hitting the corner table. Blood started to flow from her wound. The same instance kesar looked at her n was shocked to see her hurt like this.

"Gulaal..." He moved forward but gulaal immediately got up n put her hand on her forehead to stop the blood from flowing but she failed to stop the tears from flowing down from her eyes.haile ..hogayi accident..😕aa bhail mujhe marr..attitude gullu..😳

"Bas kesar ! bohot hua ! ghalti hogayi mujh se jo maine teri chinta ki, tu sahi kehta hai, mujhe koi haq nahi is sab ka per maine toh tujhe apna dost samajh k yeh sab kiya, mujh se ghalti hogayi, I m really sorry, mujh se ghalti hui jo maine socha k tujhe aik dost ki zaroorat hai, mujh se ghalti hui jo maine socha k tu akela hai aur tere dukh ko share karne waala koi nahi, mujh se ghalti hui jo maine socha k tera dukh kam nahi kar sakti toh share hi kar lun, main ne socha k tu apne vasant bha k janay se bohot dukhi hai aur kisi se who dukh nahi keh paata. Mujhe laga tha k tera dukh tujhe ander hi ander khaye jaraha hai ! maine bhi dukh dekhen hen kesar aur jaanti hun k in se akela larna kitna mushkil hai... main toh sirf teri madad karna chahti thi... tera saath dena chahti thi... Tujhe khush dekhna chahti thi... Is men mera koi suvaarth nahi tha kesar ! mujh se bohot bari ghalti hogayi ! maine kese soch liya k hum dost ban saktay hen... Kese socha k main teri dost ban sakti hun... Kese socha k main tera dukh share kar sakti hun... Tu ne theek hi kaha hai, kon hun main teri? Koi nahi !!! kya rishta hai mera tere saath ? kuch nahi !!! tu ne theek kaha, mera tujh pe koi haq nahi hai !! tu ne bilkul theek kaha kesar... !!! acha kiya jo mujhe yaad dila diya k yeh ghar mera nahi, main toh bas yahan rehti hun, main sach men bhool hi gayi thi... mujhe jo pyaar yahan k logon se mila who sab paa k toh main sach men bhul hi gayi thi k main kon hun, kya hun...!! Maine tujhe itni takleef di, mujhe maaf kar de..."Arre..woh behera hai..thu kyun chilla rahi hai..😡

Gulaal was breathing heavily now as she was not able to bear the flow of anger, frustration n sorrow together. Kesar was listening to her while standing still as if he was in a trance. Gulaal continued:

"Mujhe nahi pata tha k mera is ghar men rehna tujhe pasand nahi, main teri pareshani nahi banna chahti thi, mujhe maaf karde, anjanay men mujh se bohot bari ghalti ho gayi'. Per tu chinta mat kar, tujhe ab mujhe bear nahi karna parega, bohot jald main is ghar se aur teri zindagi se chali jaoon gi'"oye..kaise chale jayegi..thu apna vaada nahin nibhayegi kya..😕

With that she turned around to go but before leaving the room, without turning towards him, she said:

"Aur tu pareshan mat hona, is wound k baray men main kisi ko kuch nahi kahoon gi aur haan, main poori koshish karoon gi k jab tak is ghar men hun, tere saamne na aoon, aur janay se pehle aik aakhri baat kehna chahti hun'. Main toh chali jaoon gi kesar lekin tu itna yaad rakhna k tu ne apne aap ko jis tarah bana liya hai us se tu kisi ko takleef de na de lekin apne vasant bha ko zaroor dukh puhancha raha hai, aur us se barh k... khud ko... ho sakay toh is sab ko rok le, apnea p ko takleef mat de kesar'. Mat de'.."yeayy..vasanth ka name..liya.ab tho us buddhu ka mind ki bulb chalni chahiye..😡

n she left the room.

Kesar came out of his trance, he was shocked. He got himself seated on the chair n stared in the air. What ever happened just then was all flashing before his eyes.oye..ab tho ankhe khol..


Next Chapter 😊: Chapter 11 (Embarrassed)


Note: Guys i m so so so sorry for the late update n its a bit short too, i know but i vl try my best to post next chapi in the evening insha Allah !! actually i m having problems here with the internet n electricity n jese hi net started working, i m posting this chapter 😊 i m sorry that i m not able to reply u guys but i vl come back for sure n reply u all 😛



Good chappie kiran..loved it..🤗bass abhi..hamara kesuda..imli ke ped se neeche aajaye..jameen pe...😆tho sudhar jayega...😭😭but gullu is have 2 much of patience..😳.I wish k woh bathaye k woh vassy gullu hai.but chod dethi hoon..kyunki..bina vassy ke affect ke hi acha lagtha hai..kesu ka realization..😛😛waiting for d next chappie..😳
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Kiran aa gayi...

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Hey friends, next chapi agaya 😃 ab main soon wapas ajaoon idhar, pray karo sab 😆 😳 this internet n electricity problem have made me all mad 😕 thank u all so much for liking the chapter, i vl individually reply u all soon 😊 n

kalika dear, u always like the chapters, thank u so much for liking the FF 😃

P.S: See again light chali gayi thi thats y yeh msg post karne se reh gaya 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye kiran!!

Tune suraj ko west se uuga diya 🤣
Tune nadi ki disha mode di 🤣
Tune kesu se gullu ka sar phudwa diya 😲

But loved the chilla chilli and khicha khichi 😃
Hain?!! ...tu kesu aur gullu se itne lambe dialogue bulwa rahi hai ... its really good that have not written the original script...otherwise hamare NB aur MP ka gala phat jaata 🤣

Your FF contineuously reminding me brat kesu of early epi 😭
Thanks kiran for chapi...praying for your electricity and net.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am so happy to see u back dear.
and this most famous HAQ is so inevitable for GULSAR, now Kesar is avoiding her in all possible ways but aage jaake kya kya hoga kaun jaane...(except kiran😆)
Wonderful Kiran, update soon.

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I felt as an another version of Kesar throwing stone at her😆
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sneha: chapi agaya my dear tension na le 😃 😆 n jaldi se comments de 😉

chanda: thank u so much chanda for liking the chapi yaar 😃

arti: tu agayi 🤗 tujhe kitna miss kiya yar kab honge tere exams khatam? n thank u so much for liking the chapter 😃 i wish k u vl be here with us very soon 😃

vino: tu agayi vino 🤗 aik saath saray chapis u read 😆 i m so glad u liked them, thank u sooo much for liking all the chapters n the scenes also 😃 n update is here my dear 😃

piyu: chapi agaya meri pyari piyu 😃 🤗

nirmohi: thank u so much for liking the chapter nirmohi 😃 n u dont have to beg for it yar 😲 chapter 10 is here n 11 vl soon be here too 😊 n gulaal cant slap kesar, she knows the reason behind his behavior na 😃

sauris: next chapi is here my dear 😃

siree: tu ne toh reply bhi kar diya hai fast fast meri siree 🤗
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Originally posted by: MR21

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Kiran..ithna pyaara chappie laayee hai tu..toh yeh tere liya bantha hai na🤗... ramya 🤗 thank u so much yar u liked the chapter 😃
PB talking to Gullu abt Kesu anger...oye kya bahu ke saamne beta ka kachra bana rahi hai😉han yar dekh bachay ki izzat ka kitna kachra kar diya 😆
...gulaal assuring her that he will change😆...oye madam zara batha tereko kaise patha ki he will change😉... actually use lagta hai k she can do this per kya pata agay kya ho 😆
so nice of gulaal for planning kesar's birthday party😊..and even sooo sooo nice of kesar making it all waste😆 hahahaha u r happy that kesu nahi aaya 🤣
...aur uper se birthday pe MB se poora gaaliya pada...sab log birthday party ka dinner bhi khaye the...except birthday boy and the girl who planned it😆... han yar see sab ne maza kiya, woh becharay toh khana bhi nahi kha paaye 😆
Sir arriving at 1:00 am...kya timing hai ghar aane kha😆...n madam waiting desperately for him...waise bhi woh toh kisi question ka answer nahi degha...phir bhi yeh ladki poochthi hi jaarahi hai...bachcha thakgaya hai bhaahar ghumthe ghumthe n mobile off rakh rakhe...usse rest toh karne do😳... Sir 😲 kesu bana sir 🤣 so sweet yar 🤗 bahar ghumte ghumte thak gaya bechara, actually thrz a reason k woh itna ghusay men n thaka hua tha, woh i vl soon tell 😆
Oye me just loved the whole conversation between kesar and gulaal...very well written👏... thank u thank u so much my dear 😃
Pehli baar man handling bhi hua hai😳...kesar ki bhaashan aur gullu ki zakhm...in tears gulaal ki bhaashan when kesar in trance...haye haye...in do no ka kya hoga😉... han see yar, bhashan pe bhashan hi going on, aik chup hua toh dusra start 😆
Kya dialogue mari hai gulaal ne toh end mein..vassy ko laakhe kya zabardast attach kiya hai kesar par...bachcha toh ekdum speechless and shock hogaya😲... oh yes, gullu knows na k kesu ko kis baat pe aqal ayegi so she said those dialogues 😃
waise woh kya tha...she want to leave this house😡...magar ab toh lagtha hai kesar aisa nahi hone dega😉 ...bachcha jaldi jaldi realise karo she wanted to be ur sachchi frnd and want to share ur problems...phir toh dosti hojaayegi...aur uske bhaad toh😍..pehle dosti toh kar... hahahahaha han yar dosti toh kar 😃 agay pata nahi kya ho 😲 😆

Just waiting what will be his reaction and his behavior after this towards her...and more over what will be gulaal's next step..as she told him that she will try not to come in front of him... yes yes this vl be revealed in next chapi which is a bit long 😃

Me waiting for next chappie😍...hope u will update it today😊...


me too hoping dear k aj update kar paoon, not sure but i m trying my best to do it 😃 thank u so much for so sweet comment yar, i felt so happy, i was laughing reading the whole comment 😃

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