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MR21

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#531

res res

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Kiran..ithna jaldi next chappie...me very happy shappy re...

Gulaal blaming kesar for her problems n also telling him that he is reason for mBs condition is soo rude...i agree she is angry but ithna gussa kyun...

PB kya zabardast thappad hai..but I really dont like PBs words against gulaal...

Thappad padha...pehle brain sakhlagayee hai...ab poora ka poora kaam karna bandh kardiya...thats the reason she ant to leave them n go away...Kesar jaane de thab na...

Loved how he said that gulaal is his wife very spontaneously...

Kesar toh very smart nikhla...guess bhi karliya aur gulaal se mila bhi...aur mila bhi kaise ek dhansu hug ke saath...

gulaal in galool mode...but this is kesar...pati ka haq bhi jathaaya aur usse MB ka naam lekhe manaa bhi karliya...

looks like next chappie mein MB makes gulaal accept to marry kesar officially...

me super like thsi chappie...ab aise hi jaldi se next chappie laana...me waiting here...

Edited by MR21 - 14 years ago

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#532

Mummy Main kahn thi😭

res😭😭

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O meri pyari si sunehri Kiran.😳.Kya emotional chappi tha.😭..Ye Gulaal ki pitayi main hi kar deti yaar.😡..Kesu ko kitna rulaying...wo...Chii I hate Gullu par I just lubbed the station wala scene...Kiran tere FF ki speciality tere dhansoo dialogues hote hain.⭐️.sidhe dil mein utarte hain..👏..Happy Eid..😳..and we will desperately wait for your next update

Edited by manzilmukul - 14 years ago

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smitha2728

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

Very emotional and superbly written waiting for next chapter

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MR21

@MR21

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#534

unres done in the same page...

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EXOL

@EXOL

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#535

very nice chappi kiran..loved how u showed first gulaal's accussation followed by PB...both were right in their place..and finally gulaal had no choice but to leave from there...loved the station scene also..ab kithna aur w8 karna padega agle chapi ke liye

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Yash141

@Yash141

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

Haila meri Kiranwa..🤗 I was looking for this ff, like, everytime I came to the forum.. Thanxwaaa...
Your Gullu is similar to our Gullu with her ghussa n stubborness naa.. But I'm sure our Kesu will win her heart over time.. 😉
Waiting for next chappi.. Jaldi likho..ha.. ❤️

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sauris

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Posted: 14 years ago

#537

Kiran wedneday toh bahut door hai paheli se ek badi se kesgul ki chappi dede aur badle main advance main id ki jhappi lele

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#538

lovely chappi 18 and 19 yaar loved them both 👏i loved how rewa made kesar realize the consequence of his deed par gullu kesu par kyun bhadki😭pb ne bhi kass ke lagaya and hamare mb ko heart ka attack 😭but loved the chappis update asap 😳

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prachurya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#539

Sry missed two chappies

Chapter 18: I just loved Rewa's dialogues to Kesar. Yaar Kiran itne acche dialogues likhti kaise hai???? Gulaal's anger is right in her place she is the girl who once told that she luvs her man so much dat even death can't stop her frm loving him- so I fully understand how insulted and hurt she wud hav felt dat her life was decided was someone else- mainly bcoz of Kesar's hot-headedness!

Chapter 19: Gulaal's dialogue reminded me of the pondside confrontation in the show- such powerful were Gulaal's dialogues...Paan Baa slapping her- aarey tune toh new PB jaisa banaya hai isse! Gulaal finally leaving everything to salvage some self respect! I loved how Kesar seeked her and finally the hug scene and Gulaal coming back only for MB.

Superb chappies, Kiran! Tu update mein late karti hai par chappies itna accha laati hai ki main kya kahoon! Happy Eid!