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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey friends, posted chapter 3 also 😃 ab i want comments on both the chapis, jaldi jaldi comment n tell me that kya yeh FF sahi lag raha hai sab ko? 😳

Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

mera do do res yahan bhi😭mera net to😡

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

UPAR UNRESWA KAR DIYA HAI😆

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prachurya

@prachurya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

2nd chappie: Luved Kesar's intro- and luved wen Gullu remarked Psycho hoga! But seriously I am intrigued to knw is dat dream related to her destiny or is it a past memory that she has forgotten...or sumthing else.

3rd chappie: Okay now confirmed, its a dream abt her destiny. Kesuda is full on snobbish, kitni rudely baat ki, yaar! Apni gullu ko rula bhi diya! BTW loved dat u put the dupatta flying scene...how romantic!

Eagerly waiting for 4th chappie, ghar pe kaun sa dhamaka hone waala hai?

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Keero - main agayi 🤗

and you already posted 3 chapters - so I read them up in a go. Dude your fiction and this Neil Bhatt show called Kismat Connection ka koi overlap to nahi hai?! 😲 😆 What kind of cosmic coincidence is it, that I discovered that show yesterday and actually sat through it (duh me) and then found out Nithya saw it all yesterday too - and now you're writing an FF about fates and destinies?! Whoaaa!

Chiii had to come into picture of course 😆 and Kesar's aisa koi kaam nahi hai jo Kesar nahi kar sakta 😆 and we already have a dupatta scene!!! 😲

The enigma around your storyline is intriguing, pretty please update soon?! You'll see me lurking around and liking/commenting of course. Btw - Gullu didn't get to see his eyes second time or did she? The tears blurred her vision right?!

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

oh chapter 2 & 3 updated here also kiran u r genius loved how u r unfloding the mystery i think kesar has winning streak in him he is bit snobbish...gulaal on the other hand is blessed with some bad luck or misfortune as per her dialogue and the dupatta scene are so contrast ...in the show kesar was complete goner and here he is snobbish he didnt even react to touch of her hand really wanna see this ff...though my exams are next week but still i will read ur post

plz bring the next chapii soon😳

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

O meri pyari si..chamchamati sunehri satrangi kiran...🤗

naya chappi kahn hai

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: snehasri
i like this gulaal phele se hi kesar pe 😉
nice chapi yaar

thanks sneha 😉 han daikho gulaal ko, wese she is not kesu deewani right now 😆 thank u so much for liking 😃

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OYesSheDid

@OYesSheDid

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

res (;

first comment ever since college started. oh yes.

Edited:

Yo, where do I even start?!
Your Fan Fiction is amazing, no lie.
You know what? I read others FF's
and im like dead confused on what the hell just happened,
maybe it's because they don't go into enough depth..
or they are too busy looking at neil picture,
that they have no clue on what they are even writing...
LOL. 😆
Every line you write has a very deep meaning..
I love reading you chapters, its like im there ;)
It's like im Kesar, LOL. Okay a bit over the top but yeah..
Do continue, can't wait for the next one.

Edited by CertifiedBummer - 14 years ago