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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kiran..you are back with a chappie after many days...
Ohh fantastic showdown of events...totally rocking chappie...MB is angry at gulaal initially he understood gulaal atlast..he is atlast a sensible person...PB was total vampy here...another twist was gulaal's khundali...and the person who informed PB...why do they want to spoil gulaal life...loved how kesar n gulaal are with eachother in this situation๐Ÿ˜ณ

Waiting for the next chappie...looks like we would have wedding in next chappie๐Ÿ˜

Edited by MR21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachurya

Chapter 14:

Very well written. It was brilliant how u depicted, SF coming and fretting over GK friendship as Gulaal is a widow- as she is the elder person who has been through such a phase, so she is da one who wud mark it out. Kesar' dialogue abt the two-faced society were superb! Finally, Gulaal says it in frnt of every1 dat she is Vasant's widow. Is Deeyarvattu on the cards??? Exciting times ahead. Waiting for the next chappie! Love u KKKiran...๐Ÿ˜‰


thanku so much prachu ๐Ÿค— hmmm Sf ka character kya rang laata hai yeh toh yar abhi seriously i have also not thought about ๐Ÿ˜† but yes right now she has to point it out that way na ๐Ÿ˜ณ heheh thanks so much for liking the dialogues also my dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ deeyarvattu, yeh deeyarvattu kya hai yeh deeyarvattu??? ๐Ÿ˜† love u prachu, next chapi is here ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

hahahaha examiner bechara bechari ๐Ÿ˜† aur baqi papers kesar ja rahay hain teray? kal last hai na ๐Ÿ˜ƒ n tere achay marks ayen ge insha Allah ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

@Gullu being a doctor - oopsie doopsie ๐Ÿ˜† Yeh, I remember now, she was at a company and had to get a promotion to marry Talli acc to Giga and JK's condition! Sab yaad agaya ๐Ÿ˜† My bad, i think I mixed Arti's Gullu with yours


Anyway - to the chapter now! Oh about time someone was going to confront Gulaal (not that I like the idea of her feeling so cornered) but the confronting is important for both Kesar and Gulaal to understand where this thing between them is headed, in their own way. Kesar's fierce defense for Gulaal - even against her - is the alarming sign of a ripe emotion that will be making presence in all alacrity so soon! Gulaal trying to slip back into a safe boundary - hoping she can stop what's begun from happening, will realize how futile trying to turn down a forest fire is!

Overall - great pace and and ground work for more showdowns, between these two, and of these two with others. I have a sinking feeling that PB will be up in arms against Gulaal not long from now - saving her son from 'older widow'

Of course the Vasant angle coming to fore now, makes it only more interesting.

Update soon ๐Ÿค—


JZee ๐Ÿค— u love arti's gullu so much ๐Ÿ˜† i love her too, no probs my dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ yup kesar's fierce defence is so much alrming to everybody, specially PB n SF n more to SF as she has gone through all these things a widow faces so she is concerned about gulaal, she doesnt want her to feel the same way she had felt in her life, n see PB is now standing against gulaal n its like some cold war has begun between these two, she has openly declared that she vl not forgive gulaal, n she brought in the age issue as well, n vasant angle came n is gone also ๐Ÿ˜† but it can again come back ๐Ÿ˜ฒ have updated but sorry for being so late ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by Geeshani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kiran..kiran..๐Ÿค—
what a showdoen yaar..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Loved d chapiie..h d whole clane came acroos d truth..n yahan bhi kundali ka sach hai๐Ÿ˜ฒ..๐Ÿ˜†
N ye PB jaroor plastic surugery PB hai..๐Ÿ˜กjo aise bathe kar rahi hai..
Acha laga when MB showed his bharosa on gullu..๐Ÿ˜›
N rewa also..n SF bhi..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved d last wala chotu hug..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
N d convo...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved d chappie..n waiting for d next..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
choory for d late comment..๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by chweetu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,Kiran
new here but I have been a silent reader of your story and I love it.After you left the last chapter at such a cliffhanger was waiting impatiently for the next one.so happy that you updated and just finished reading it.you know I could see the entire scene being acted out while reading it,very powerful stuff.I was worried for a bit regarding Kesar's reaction after Gulaal's confession,very happy that this has only strengthened their bond.MB was good and dialogues were outstanding.please update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasri

very nice chappi yaar bechaara he got slap from mb


hey sneha thank u so much for liking the chapi, na dear bach gaya woh, MB ne haath uthaya tha per gulaal beech men agayi n kesu ko bacha liya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Keithuu

loved all the chappis yaara...๐Ÿ˜ณ

main bohot late na..issliye chotu comment...๐Ÿ˜Š
dono ke beech such strong dosti...just lubbing it๐Ÿ˜ณ
but ye gharwale na...๐Ÿ˜ฒpata nahi kya kya honewala hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ
bas..sab accha ho...๐Ÿ˜Š
lubb the dialogues re...๐Ÿ˜ณ
tu jaldi next chappi la...kabse waiting...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


keithu ๐Ÿค— chotu sa comment ๐Ÿ˜† thank u so much for loving the chapis meri keithudi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ han dekh yeh ghar wale, uf yeh samaaj ki deewaar ๐Ÿ˜† u loved the dialogues, thanku so much yar ๐Ÿ˜ณ n agaya next chapi finally ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chweetu

kiran..superb chappie,..this is...don't want to make kachra of it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ kachra ๐Ÿ˜ก u think k tere comment se kachra hoga chapi ka ๐Ÿ˜ก where is my danda n loved h SF was welcomed..n then gullu in all serving mood..n SF is already impressed..๐Ÿ˜ฒ..n then she is becoming suspicious of d relation between..kesu n gullu..acha twist hai..yaar..๐Ÿ˜•ye kesu sab par chiillatha rehetha hai.n akeli gulu pe pyaar barsatha hai..tho ajeeb hi lagnewali thi na..๐Ÿ˜• hahahaha ๐Ÿคฃ kesu bechara sab pe chilata hai ๐Ÿ˜† aray yar toh sab us ko useless samajhte hen sirf gullu supports him n rewa also to some extent, ab aur kya karay woh ๐Ÿ˜•..n then again gullu overhearing d convo..I think..its a positive..sign..kyon ki she can protect herself from becoming fool..infront of everyone...na,...๐Ÿ˜ณbut she will again restrict herself na..๐Ÿ˜•n she does d same..but thank god not in a mean way..she was avoiding kesu...๐Ÿ˜ณlike...he will feel ajeeb if she will not respond even if he says hello..but gullu is smart..n yaar...n then kesu bringing gift n then baki sab log becoming so conscious of it..๐Ÿ˜ฒn it was always there k widow should not wear bright colors..n all..n good h kesu has questioned about samaj being cold to widows...n yes everyone will point out when there is a prob but nobody will come to help when there is need...he was so right at his place...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘.n tehn gullu manaoing kesu..loved that..n aagin family members restricting about d relationship kesu n gullu share..n then gullu confessing k she is vasy's wife...n that god-bharai muhoorath..I think..kesu..should fill d mang of gullu na.๐Ÿ˜†n loevd d chappie yaar ..n lub u my cutie kiranwa...๐Ÿค—


hehehehhe yup gullu ne accept kiya about vasant, atlast, ab aur kya karti woh yar, she had to blurt it out na ๐Ÿ˜• n what mahurath ๐Ÿ˜† i love u too siree ๐Ÿค— thanku so much for loving the chapi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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