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vinolya

@vinolya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Gosh... First of all I got the shockkk of my life.. 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Kiran tune FF shuru kiya... I cant believe my eyes... Am still in a state of shock... 😲

Chalo lelo mera comments... The first chapter was mindblowing. OMG I was so thrilled and was so desperate to know what was going to happen with that girl and who the girl is as I read line by line.. WOW I just loved the way you started up... loved your first chapter..

And this is for your first chapter.. 👍🏼 👏 🤗

Come on now update fast... waiting for next chapter... 😍

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snehasri

@snehasri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

kiran it is nice chapi is kahani may bhi talli😡 hai kya dont bring her yaar

when r u posting the next chapi thoda jaldi karna

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chweetu

@chweetu

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Oye..kithe ho..kiran..dear..where is next chappie..😡jaldi jaldi bring it..😛

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Fantastic start. I always like mystery, horror, sub/unconscious level unfolding, my eyes always catches it like magnets. "Destiny keeps haunting in ones dream" Amazing concept👏

Update soon dear.

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: bioinfo
omg😲ye to raaz pichle janam ka lagta hai😕ye gullu kahin hamahri keithwa to nahi, soti rehti hai isliye aise sapne dekhti hai😆but jokes apart very beautiful chappi, flavor bhi alag hai👏 i was like this jab mai chappi padh rahi thi, but now i want the next chappi jaldi jaldi😃chal ab aaja next chappi ke saath warna😛

raaz pichle janam ka 🤣 n keithu in FF 😆 na re gullu soti nahi rehti, kaam karti har yaar n thak jaati hai, per yeh dream us ka peecha nahi chorta, jab kuch imp ho yeh dream peche peche aajata hai us k 😆 thank u thank u so much chaitu, i m so glad u all like the concept 🤗 oye warna, dhamki de rahi hai mujhe, warna kya karegi han 😉 n next chapi coming soon 😆

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Keithuu
Meri kiranwa...😳
Kya fantabulous start hai...😊
Main tho pehle darr hi gayi...then main bhi gullu ke saath neend se jagi...😳
nice chappi yaar...loving it...😳
N woh aankhon ke maalik kab chhab dikhlaayega...?😳
Mujhe his chhab jald se jald dekhni hai...😳
Next chappi jaldi laana...😳

keithu 🤗 thank u so much my sweety, n tu dar gayi 😳 aww i made u afraid 😳 per did u guys thought k woh reality men happening? i mean maine socha tha k shayad shru men hi sab figure out kar lenge k sab kuch is not happening in a normal way ????

n chab ayegi ayegi keithu, thora sabar toh kar na 😉 ayegi chab jaldi se ayegi 😆

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: chweetu
Oye..kiran dear..aaja..🤗The FF is so beautiful...good start...😳😛..ab mein comment dena chahthi..hgoon har line pe..par tujhe phir se mere liye type karna padega..😕so..me withdrawing my thought..nahin tho mein kahan chodnewali hoon teri FF ko..😉😛Gulaal in kesariya field..😉😆loved loved loved d chappie..😳I t is just awesome..u described d tense situation so well..👏👏👏.now jaldi next chappie..la n batha gullu kya kaam karing..n d family backdrop..😳love u..🤗

agayi meri siree, aaja aaja 🤗

awww thank u so much sweety tweety for liking this start 😃 n tu jaise chahe waise comment de yar... n gullu kesariya field men kahan thi 😉 woh do eyes ka saying? maine kab kaha woh kesar ki eyes hen 😉 🤣 next chapi soon coming up yar n ahista ahista i vl disclose all the details regarding the FF 😃 love u too siree, thanku so much for liking yar 🤗

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
⭐️OMG meri sunehri kiran..kya dhansoo chappi tha..me all balle balle...Kiran tu sach mein jadugarni hai ekdum...ekdum sach jadugarni..yeah ab jaldi la chappi next wala👏

agayi chulbuli chehekti pyari piyu maaari 🤗 u liked the chapi me so happy yar 😃 n me jadugarni 😳 me all blush blush now, thank u so much yar me toh simple human like u all 😳 n next chapi coming soon 😃

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: chweetu

Yahan kisne poocha ki continue karoon ya nahin..😡mein tumhe toffee dungi..😛agar tune FF ka next chappie nahin layi tho..😆😛Briliiant start..my dear..🤗
😛

hehehehehehhe toffeee 😲 nahiii, remember the cheekh in the first chapi ? 😆 n continue karing my dear dont worry 🤗

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: prachurya
Another FF, ab toh nachooo! Aagaz aisa hai toh anjaam kya hoga-interesting start. Wah Kiran!Luking forward to the forthcoming chappies😃

hey prachu 🤗 thank u so so much for liking it, wow nice one, aaghaz agar yeh hai toh anjaam kya hoga 😉 me adding here:

aaghaaz agar yeh hai toh anjaam kaisa hoga

soch ka asar yeh hai toh uska saath kaisa hoga 😃

other chapis coming soon, thanku for liking my dear 😃