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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Kiran..🤗O meri pyari si chamchamati si badlon se luka chupi khelti,sardi ki os se bhigi subah ki satrangi sunehri Kiran..

Chappi padhne k baad main ekdum 😭...aise😭

Tune Talli k dahej k karan Gullu ko dhamki dilwayi..😭

Aur past itna interesting hai..👏👏👏⭐️aur Vassy ki photu...😕

me like..

itne interesting mod pe akar tune band kyun kiya😡

Kiran I lubb you Kiran..👏

Tu kitna mast chappi lekar ayi re.👏👏👏

.Too good..😍

haila 😲tune suspense ki had kar di.😆.jaldi chappi la pls ..Kiran😳

warna main soch soch k pagal ho jaungi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Kiran..this is for u 🤗

Kya chappie laayee hai😳...past present mein tho chappie katham bhi hogaya...
aur Giga bro of Revji...kya character change..n Talli madam tho JK ki daughter😆...n yahaa bhi talli ki dowry ki problem hai...
Vassy ka photo...ithna interesting point pe aakhe koi chappie end kartha hai kya😡...
Inthna suspense bhi achchi nahi hoti health ke liye...so jaldi se next chappie update karna😊...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

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Sorry friends I forgot to mention that in the previous chapter, Gulaal was not able to see kesar's eyes as he was wearing sun glasses 🤣chup kar..😡weird joke tha..😆




Mehra House (Gulaal's home):

" Aa gayi tu ! Shukar hai tujhe ghar aane aur hamen yaad karne ki fursat toh mili !"
Gulaal (G): "Jamna Kaki, wo sorry mujhe aane men thori dair ho gayi"
JK: " Lo aur suno ! thori dair hui hai inhen, yahan aasmaan pe taaray chamakne lagay hen aur inhen yeh thori dair lagti hai ! ab maharani ji sorry bol k chali jana chahti hen !"
Giga kaka: " Aik minute ruk ja jamna ! Pehle us se who toh puchne do jis k liye hum kabse us ka intezaar kar rahay hen... Han toh gulaal beta kaisa raha aaj ka din? Tere promotion ka kya hua? Dekh tu jaanti hai na k jab tak tujhe promotion nahi milta, tu loan k liye apply nahi kar sakti aur jab tak loan nahi milay ga hum talli k dahej ka intejaam kaise karen ge? "talli..😲talli ki marriage fix yeayy...hope that bride is not kesu..😆
G: "Ji Giga kaka main jaanti hoon aur poori koshish..."
JK: " Koshish nahi gulaal, hamen kuch nahi sunna, dekh gulaal ab bohot ho gaya, agar tujhe yahan rehna hai toh tujhe yeh karna hi hoga ! tu ne teen mahiney pehle kaha tha k jald hi tera promotion ho jayega lekin ab tak toh kuch nahi hua aur hum talli ko ghar bitha k toh nahi rakh sakte na, aik toh tere maa baap ji ki taraf se bhi tujhe kuch nahi mila hai, hum kab tak sambhalen tujhe, akhir hamari apni bhi beti hai, bas ab yeh sun le, agar tujhe yahan rehna hai toh loan k liye apply kar warna apna intejaam kahin aur kar le ! "hain..😲jawan ladki..layegi..tho baitke..dono HM banayenge..CHII🤢
"Talli, tub hi kaan khol kar sun le, agar gulaal ne who nahi kiya jo hum usay keh rahay hen, toh usay is ghar se jana hoga "
Talli: " Per Ba... "
JK: " Bas talli ab phir se is ki taraf daari karne mat lag jaana, tujhe is ki kitni chinta rehti hai aur aik yeh hai k teri kabhi chinta nahi ki, foran jaa apne kamre men "haan..promotion kya bazzar mein milthi hai..ki jab chahe kharidsake..😡
After listening all this, Gulaal guietly headed towards her room, Talli was very sad for her but she also didn notice those tears which fell from gulaal's eyes, travelled through her cheeks n fell on the floor.kya fayida..😕

The Past:


This was a daily routine, n JK n Giga kaka had always been like this. When her parents, Revji Bhai n Poonam Ba were alive, they used to shower their fake love on her in front of them n behind them, they always hated her n treated her badly. Revji Bhai n Poonam ba vr blessed with two children, yogesh n gulaal, while JK n Giga kaka had one daughter, talli.

Gulaal never told about her kaka n kaki's behavior to her parents as she didnt want to create rift between two brothers. From a very young age, she was a very mature person n really hated fights n all that. But Revji Bha n Poonam ba vr her parents, they realized JK n Giga kaka's fake love n finally confronted them. On being confronted, JK n Giga kaka forgot every relation n openly declared that they hated them so much. Still, some where she was tension free as her parents vr always there for her n to support her, but she didn't know that her happiness was not there to stay...oye giga n JK...in gullu biradari..😲n MB..kahan se ayenge..n Mb..gigaka ka..jeeju honge kya..😲😲

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Present:


Gulaal opened the door of her room, n went inside. She had no strength left in her now, the pain which she had to bear every day was out of her control now, she was not able to bear it any more, her confidence n her strength vr completely shaken. She completely broke down n sat on the floor in a way of falling down.

The past started to flash before her eyes like a filmstrip ...ok...now.whirlpool...started..doing..doing..doing...circles..infront of gullu's eye..😆

Past:

It was ten years before... Gulaal was a young girl of 17 at that time. Till then everything was fine becoz she had her parents with her, although they vr having problems with JK n giga kaka after the confrontation but still she was happy with her parents n her brother.
They all used to live in a village called Rasipur. From some days gulaal was continuously observing that her baap ji's forehead always had some wrinkles on it. It was very clear that he was very worried about some thing. After some days, when she found poonam ba also behaving awkwardly, she decided to ask them the reason behind their worry. As she was young at that time n her parents loved her so much, they didn't tell her anything n behaved as if everything was absolutely fine.khandani prob hai..kya..😕
One day, she was outside with her friends. She was so happy, again she had defeated her friends in Pagathia. She reached home being all happy n her face glowing with the pride of victory, but, the news which waited for her, took away all her happiness ! She was forced to come down to earth from cloud nine !yahan bhi cloud..ye bhi aarthi ka hai..😆n pagathiya..at 17..🤣
Revji bhai had met with an accident n it was so severe that their was no chance for his live. Yogesh was also not at home but coincidently returned the same time as her. They both rushed towards the hospital n reaching there they got the news that their baap ji was in I.C.U n in a very critical condition, there was no chance of his survival. Poonam ba was also not in a good condition after hearing this news n finding her children in the hospital, she completely broke down n cried very badly. Just when gulaal was consoling her mother, doctors came out of the I.C.U n gave them the bad news of revji bhai's death !oye..poor revji..😔
Gulaal n yogesh vr completely shattered, the days after this incident, without their father with them vr very difficult. Yogesh used to become angry at very little things, he was close to his father n was not able to bear this pain, Gulaal was also close to revji bhai n she was more mature than yogesh. Things had started to change n poonam ba n gulaal can easily observe his behavior changing very rapidly, one day they gave them the news that he wanted to go outside the country. They vr so hurt listening to this but yogesh had made up his mind n he left, leaving his sister n mother alone. He had really become so selfish.ye..yogesh ba...ko foreign kisne baja..😲n h they allowed him..😆shayad kuch saaf safai ka kaam mili hogi..😆
Days passed by n poonam ba's health started deteriorating n one day she also left gulaal alone in this world. But before her death, while taking her last breaths, she called gulaal n told her some important things...
" Gula..aall bai...ta mere paa..sss ab jyada waqt nahii rah.aa, main tujhe yogesh k bharosay chor k nahi ja sakti... Ab tujhe majburan giga aur jamna k paas hi rehna hoga, dekh baita jab tu umar k us mor pe ajaye k khud apne pairon pe khari ho toh sab se pehle giga aur jamna se bachana apne ap ko.. yeh pata choray ja rahi hun mai..n tere paas... yeh Talsaagra k sarpanch mota bha ka pata hai... tere baap ji k bohot achay dost thay lekin kafi saalon se hum unse mil nahi paaye.. Tu jitna jald ho sakay un k paas chali jana, who jaroor tera khayal rakhen ge... Yeh tere maa baap ji dono ki akhri icha samajh, bol gulaal, karegi na aisa?"

n gulaal completely shaken by the pain of loosing her mother also agreed to this... n poonam ba breathed her last !!oh..tho MB..phrend hai revji bhai..k..n y she has to protect..herself when she starts earning.😲

Present:

Gulaal snapped out of her thoughts, it was 1 a.m.

" Oh mere dimagh men yeh pehle kyun nahi aaya, sab tensions men mere dimagh se yeh baat hi nikal gayi, mujhe mota bha ka pata lagana hoga... itna toh pata kar chuki thi k who ab talsaagra men nahi rehtay per ab un k current address ka toh pata karna hi hoga... kal hi yeh kaam karti hun main, ab toh mujhe is ghar se jana hi hoga ..."wow..phinaally out of hell.n detective gullu o searching MB.😎

Then she slowly got up n walked towards her cupboard, tears still flowing from her eyes. She tried to find something in the cupboard n then took it out, it was a picture.
Gulaal sighed n exclaimed:
" Vasant !! "Oye..ek dungi tujhe..ye le..kahani ka end is tarah kiya..😕
Next chapter to come up 😊: Chapter 5 (Game of Fate)
(Sorry friends for this boring chapter but had to tell the details na 😳)


Oye..nice chappie.👏👏tune sare relations change kar diya..so giga n Jk..r 2 lazy souls on earth..n talli behen gullu ki..🤢bhabhi banadethi tho kya hotha..😭😭..n loved d FB..n vassy..😡okie now..next chappie la jaldi se can't wait..😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely chapii kiran so gulaal is orphan child in the hands of evil gigaka and jamuna kaki they are cruel literally yogesh is sheepish brother hate him how can he leave his mother and daughter in the world so hateful character..and now gulaal needs to find out motabha and panba address lovely...so she isnt married right???? and maybe vasant is her childhood friend ???...so now gulaal is in city ???
omg this is so interesting story plz bring the next chapii soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

ok friends here is chapter 4 😳 sorry for this extremely boring chapter, per kya karoon details batana bhi zaroori theen na plz dont throw tomatoes at me 😳


no tomatoes! only hugs🤗
Toh, apni Gullu bechari cinderella hai jo khadus logon k saath rehti hai. BTW Talli ko JK ki beti banaa diya!hahaah😆. The past was sketched out very nicely. So, now Gullu must find MB, toh phir Vasant kahan se aaya??😕
Waiting eagerly for da nxt chappie!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I've updated my comment on page 7 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

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Sorry friends I forgot to mention that in the previous chapter, Gulaal was not able to see kesar's eyes as he was wearing sun glasses 🤣
iss ghatiya pj pe kaun hasa re

jk and giga villains hain 😆

talli unki beti, jk ki beti😆

but gulaal pe kitna torchar karte hain

upar se yogesh selfish darpok😡and pooba and revji dead

jk and giga ko talli ke daheg ke paise gulle se lene hain😆ye to hadd ho gayi😡

poor gulaal kitna dukh sehna pada usse😭

Then she slowly got up n walked towards her cupboard, tears still flowing from her eyes. She tried to find something in the cupboard n then took it out, it was a picture.
Gulaal sighed n exclaimed:
" Vasant !! "gullu ke pass vassy ki photu😕
Next chapter to come up 😊: Chapter 5 (Game of Fate)
(Sorry friends for this boring chapter but had to tell the details na 😳)

oye sorry bolne mein time waste mat kar jaldi next chappi la warna hum vasatified ho jaenge btw lovely chapii👏tere liye 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ho gaya mera unreswa on pg 12...😃
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Oye Kiran me all...Sab characters ne mujhe pagal kar diya...lekin me likes me likes😳
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Kesar's dialogues vl be highlighted in orange color from today



"Vasant !!" exclaimed Gulaal,

"Kyun chor k chale gaya tu mujhe? Maa baap ji k baad aik tu hi toh tha aur tub hi chala gaya ! Kyun? Jana hi tha toh mujhe bhi saath le jata ! Mujhe yahan akela kyun chor gaya !!"
She started questioning the picture as if vasant was standing in front of her. She continued:
"Kyun chora mujhe yahan? Bolo ! kis k liye ?"
suddenly a small box fell from the cupboard to the floor, Gulaal picked it up n exclaimed:

"Kesar !"

some flashbacks started to come in front of her eyes...
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"Aray vasant ! yeh kya ! tu mere liye kesar laaya !"

Gulaal spoke happily as her eyes refused to turn away from vasant's face.

"Haan gulaal, kesar ! sirf tere liye ! aur yeh dekh is k saath yeh kesari sindoor bhi hai, ise hamesha apne paas rakhna aur kabhi apne se dor mat karna, main chahta hoon yeh hamesha tere saath rahay"

G: " hahahaha vasant ! tu bhi na ! tu hai na mere paas bas mujhe aur kya chahiye... Pehle mujhe lagta tha mere paas kuch nahi lekin jab tu mere saath hai tu mere paas sab kuch hai"

V: "oho pagli hai tut oh ! sun main aj tujhe apne parivaar k baray men batana chahta hoon, aur sab se pehle apne sab se pyaray rishtay k baray men' mera chota bhai, mera sab kuch, mera kesuda' mera kesar !!"

G: "kesar? Tera bhai bhi hai ? aur us ka naam kesar hai? Per yeh toh kisi larki ka naam lagta hai ..."

"hahaha han gulaal lagta toh hai per who mera bhai hai' main ne tujhe bataya tha na k main koi dholi nahi hun, asal men main talsaagra gaon se hun'.hamare ghar men 7 log hen, mere baap ji..mota bha, meri maa' paan ba, mota bha talsaagra k sarpanch hen aur hum chaar bhai behen hen, sab se baray hen raman bha, un ki shadi ho chuki hai, sudha bhabhi bohot achi hen, phir main hun, phir rewa aur aakhir men hamara kesuda' asal men mota bha aur paan ba ko yeh naam bohot pasand hai, kehte hen k kesari rang bohot hi shub maana jaata hai, suhaganen ise bohot shradha se apni maang men bharti hen, wese main bhi hamare jeevan ki shuruvaad isi sindoor ko teri maang men bhar k karna chahta hun..."

With these lines, gulaal blushed n vasant looked happily at her face and continued:

"Kesuda k anay se hamara jeevan khushiyon se bhar gaya is liye is ka naam kesar rakha gaya... pata hai main kesar aur sab ghar walon ko hamari shadi k baray men chithi likh chukka hoon... who bohot khush hen aur kesar toh khaas tor pe... Tujhe is liye bata raha hun k aj se kesuda aur mere parivaar ki jimedaari mere saath saath teri bhi hui, aur han agar kabhi main idhar udhar ho jaoon toh pareshan na hona, tera saath dene hamesha tere saath kesar hoga... Mujh se waada kar gulaal tu hamesha us ka khayal rakhegi?"

G: "han vasant tu fikar na kar, main tujhse waada karti hun k us ka khayal apni jaan se jyada rakhoon gi lekin yeh tu ne jaane ki baat kyun ki... dekh tu kuch bhi keh, main tujhe apne se door jane hi nahi dungi"

And their laughter echoed in the surrounding...

(After her maa baap ji's death, life became very miserable for her, there was no where to escape as she was young n was not able to figure out that how to look for mota bha and where'.. until one day she met vasant... He had come from some other village and soon they both fell in love, those vr the happy days of gulaal's life... vasant wanted to take her out from that house which was a living hell for her so he talked to jamna kaki n giga kaka about their marriage n they both happily agreed to it becoz vasant had promised to give them what ever they wanted... Gulaal was surprised and finally confronted him that from where vl he bring so much money to give them n he finally told her that he was not a dholi, n promised to tell her all the details... He had said that he vl always be with her n vl tell her about himself on the day of their marriage, she trusted him completely so agreed to this n as he had promised, he told her about himself on their marriage day)

Present:

Gulaal again snapped out of her thoughts. She sighed and put the picture back in the cupboard nd laid down on her bed thinking about vasant and their marriage. That day vasant had put the kesari sindoor on her forehead n made her his wife. But fate was again not on her side n her happiness was short lived'. The same day he had to leave for city due to some work and the very next day, the news of his accident came ! Vasant had died on the spot !

Tears again blurred her vision and she dozed off to sleep while thinking:

"Aakhir kab tak mujhe yeh sab sehna hoga? Kab tak?"

Khanna Mansion:

"Kab tak? ! aakhir kab tak mujhe yehi sunna hoga k pata nahi chala? Maine pehle bhi kaha tha k nothing is impossible! Pehle bhi driver k saamne mujhe company ki baat karni par gayi... Main kuch nahi jaanta ! Dhoondo usay ! mujhe har haal men who chahiye !"

and he disconnected the call and slammed the cell phone on the wall in front of him n tried to control his anger...

"Kya hua kesar?" asked a voice from behind.

"Kuch nahi sudha bhabhi, bas kuch kaam ki tension hai"

S: "Uffo kesar aik toh tera ghusa ! ab kaam ki tension ka ghusa mobile pe kyun nikaal raha hai ? inta ghusa kyun karta hai tu? Pehle toh tu aisa nahi tha. Dekh kesar main jaanti hun wo haadsa hum men se koi nahi bhool sakta lekin us k peechay agar tu apni zindagi kharab karle toh yeh toh theek nahi hai na, us men teri kya ghalti thi?"

K: "plz bhabhi, main pehle bhi kyi baar keh chukka hoon main is baray men koi baat nahi karna chahta ! plz mujhe akela chor den"

Listening to his so much rude n angry tone, Sudha sighed and left the room.

K: "Nahi bhool sakta main, na us haadsay ko, na apnay vasant bha ko, yeh koi nahi jaanta per mujhe pata hai, hamen maarne k liye woh accident karwaya gaya tha per vasant bha... ap ne mujhe bachanay k liye apni jaan dedi... kaash k ap ne mujhe car se dhaka na diya hota, per main ap k qatil ko nahi chorun ga !"

Anger n determination vr very visible in his eyes.

Mehra House (Morning):

JK: "Ji han, ji han hum ne bilkul wesa hi kiya hai jaisa ap ne hamen kaha tha, hamen toh wese bhi us se peecha churana hai ! wo jahan bhi jaye jo bhi karay ! Talli k dahej ka bahana kar k hum usay is mor pe le aye hain k woh khud hi yeh ghar chor de !"

The person on the other side:

"Theek hai ! toh phir tumharay pesay jald tum tak puhanch jayen ge !"

The call was disconnected...

JK: "Oh shukar hai yeh pesay jald hi bhejay ga... aur subah bhi ho gayi, yeh maharani abhi tak kahan hai"

"Gulaal ! O Gulaal ! kya kar rahi hai tu ab tak!" yelled JK.

Gulaal came running down the stairs as she didnt want JK to start her tauntings again.

"Lo agayi tu... ab jaldi se nashta bana ! yaad hai na tujhe k aj loan ki baat karni hai tujhe aur achi tarah sun le ! agar paison ka intejaam nahi hua toh aik haftay men tu apna intejaam kahin aur kar lena !"

Gulaal listened to all this while staring at the floor and keeping her head lowered. A tear fell down from her eye. She had already applied for the loan n had done every possible thing for it but had failed. She knew that there was only one thing left for her to do now. she would have to leave the house and find another place to stay, as soon as she can !!

Khanna Mansion (After 4 days):

Sudha: "Kesar bas bhi kar ! baqi news baad men parh lena, news paper kahin bhaag nahi raha, aik toh tu dair se uthta hai ooper se sahih se khaata peeta bhi nahi hai, seedhe office chala jata hai, meri tohg samajh nahi aata k tujhe kon sambhaal sakta hai ?!"

" Gulaal !!"

exclaimed Rewa.

"What !!" Kesar and Sudha both turned behind to look at her, shocked.


Next Chapter 😊: Chapter 6 (Destiny's Arrival)

Edited by kiran_trudecent - 14 years ago

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