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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting lets c wat happens n great part thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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intersting ff....

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hey dear wen r u gonna upd
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Recap: Ridhima is sitting on armaan's lap feeding him pizza.He starts kissing her neck and she gasps
Ri:Stop it armaan koi ajayega.
Ar:Koi nahin ayega.We're home alone.Pulling her even closer.
Ri:I dont really like the sound of that,
Ar:But I do.Socho Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chabhi kho jaaye.
Ri:Armaan please chodo.
Ar:Nahin.He bites her neck gently.
Ridhima puts her arm around him and goes closer to him.He closes his eyes when he feels her breath on his lips.Then she pushes him and runs from him laughing.
Ar:Now I will get that kiss from you ridhima.also laughing he runs after her.He tries grab her but only gets her dupatta.She jumps on the bed and he grabs her leg when suddenly.......
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I have no idea about the medical procedures so don't mind if something is wrong.

Part 16

Suddenly, ridhima slips and her head hits the bedpost really hard and starts bleeding. Armaan gets really worried since she was unconcious and a lot of blood was comming out of the wound.
Ar: Ridhimaaaaa!!!!
Armaan calls an ambulance immediately. Then he calls everyone else and tells them to come home as ridhima was hurt.
Armaan talking to ridhima: Open your eyes, Ridz. I swear I won't ask for any kiss. I won't do anything you don't want me to do. Just open your eyes once, jaan, just once.
The ambulance arrives and they take Ridhima to the hospital. She's taken into the operation theatre since she lost a lot of blood Then, Naina and all also arrive and start bombarding Armaan with questions on what, how and when this happened. However Armaan just goes straight to Kashish and starts crying. Kripa realizes that Armaan is really affected by Ridhima's accident so she talks to the others.
Kr: Naina aunty, I think we should worry about how this happened later and concentrate on Ridhima's health right now more.
Na: You are right beta. Ridhima's wellbeing is more important.
The doctor comes out of the operation theatre and walks up to them. Angad and Kavya ask him about Ridhima.
Dr: There is nothing to worry about. She is absolutely fine. Other than a few dizziness spells in the next couple of days, she should be completely fine. She was very fortunate that the wound wasn't deep so it will heal very fast.
Armaan speaks up for the first time since arriving at the hospital: So my basket is going to be completely fine?? She's ok ya? Did you check everything??
Dr: Don't worry young man, she is absolutely perfect. And don't you think basket is a childish type of nickname for the girl you love?
Everyone is surprised to hear that including armaan.
Ar: How do you know I love her?
Dr: It's pretty obvious considering you haven't done anything but wait for me to come out and tell you something about her health.
Ar: Oh!( feeling embarrased, he scratched his head. anyways, I call her basket because she plays basketball really well.
Dr: That's really cute.
Angad butts into the conversation: Uhmm, Armaan, you like Ridhima?? Since when? Get one thing clear STAY AWAY from her. She's my baby sister and i'm not allowing her to go out with a player like you.
Armaan is unable to come up with an explanation but Kripa speaks up: Oye Angad! You listen to me, Armaan and Ridhima have been in love for 1 whole year.(everyone is shocked at this because armaan and ridhima apparently haven't even met each other before armaan came to uk) They met each other in Yahoo and they fell in love. But they didn't know about their families knowing each other until they met here in uk. And Armaan has not dated any girl since meeting Ridhima one year ago so he's no longer a player. And finally, you have no right to forbid Armaan from dating Ridhima since its Ridhima's personal life.
Angad and Armaan are both speechless but for different reasons. Angad because no girl had ever, and I mean ever, spoken to him like that and Armaan was wondering just how in heaven did Kripa know his love story.
Before anyone could speak, the doctor interrupts since he feels that a volcano might just erupt in his hospital if this continues.
Dr: You can meet the patient two by two.
Ar: Im going in!
An: Over my dead body.
Kr: Shut up Angad! Go Armaan and take Naina aunty with you. She's the mother after all.
Ar: I know that, you don't need to tell me that.
Kripa feels bad because after all she had just said, Armaan was still the same.
Kripa thinks to herself: Well, what was I expecting? Armaan to change? That will only happen if the sun rises from the west. It has always been the same. I help him and he just continues with the bad behaviour. Forget it krips, you have kavya for a brother, you don't need these 3
pieces of crap.
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Coming up next: boy, girl and mother in law all in the same room.

I am sorry for not posting for so long but I had a problem. Thank you to monikaseth who sent me a pm to update. This ones for you.
Nida
P.s. Im going to start updating regularly from now on and really sorry for the long break.

Edited by xxlibragurlxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 16
nice part...............
glad shes fine.....................
cont soon....................
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Part 17

In the hospital room, Ridhima is lying on the bed with a bandage on her head, looking very pale. Armaan sits next to her bed and takes her hand.
Ar: I'm so sorry jaan. This is all my fault.
Ri: Chup Armaan. It's no one's fault. It was just an accident.
Ar: But if I had been more care...
Na(interrupts): Shut up both of you. What was Kripa saying outside, Armaan? Is it true that you both are in love with each other?
Ri: Mum?? What are you saying? How does Kripa know that?
Na: Sisters know this kind of stuff about their brothers. So tell me, you both like each other?(stern tone)
Ar: Yes, aunty but I swear we have done nothing wrong.
Na: I know beta. I trust all of you enough to know you won't do anything wrong, well except Angad but everyone knows him.
Ri: So you don't care we were sneaking behind all of your backs?
Na: Wrong. I do care but I don't mind because Armaan is a nice boy and I know he will keep you very happy. I'm already imagining Surya's face when I tell him two of his sons are getting married not just Sujal.
Ar,Ri: What? No no no.
Na: Huh? What are you guys saying?
Ar: Aunty, we talked about this already. Me and Ridz want to get to know each other more before taking such a big step.
Na: Didn't you talk to each other the past year?
Ri: We did mom, but that was the Internet. You say one thing and it means another. We want to get to know each other personally. You know like go out on dates and stuff like that.
Na: Ok fine beta as you guys wish.
Ar: Oh and Aunty one more thing. Save me from Angad please.
Ri: Why? What did you do that he's after you?
Ar: I did nothing. he believes I'm playing with you.
Ri:Oh! He doesn't need to worry about that. I'll kick your backside if you hurt me myself.
Na: Don't worry beta. I'll explain to Angad that Rids can take care of herself.
Ar: Aunty, I really do love Ridhima. I won't say I will not hurt Ridhima because that's a lie. I will make mistakes and some may hurt her but know this, everytime I hurt her, i will hurt a thousand times worse. And Ridhima I promise that I will always do my best to take care of you.
Na: I will not ask for more Armaan. Just take care of her.
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Ridhima get discharged and all go back to Khanna house. Angad and Kripa are also there.
Kas: Mum and Dad will be arriving tomorrow aunty. They have finished all the business there and it's official, the Nandas are permanently moving to UK.
Jo: Yes, and soon Dad and Sujal bhai will also come here, bhabhi.
Ar: Then her family will be complete. By the way, bhabz, will you sing the song Mera Piya Ghar Aaya, when you see Sujal bhai?
Ri: Oie armaan. Stop teasing her, will you.
Ar: Yes, madam.
Jo: Oooh, Armaan's listening to a girl.
Ar: Shut up. I finally understand how Sujal bhai felt when we teased him. You just wait Josh, tujhe bhi love hoga.
Jo: Mujhe toh hogaya. (glancing at Aaliyah)
Ar: Kisse?
Aaliyah feels angry and nervous at the same time because she wants him to say her name but feels afraid that what if he says someone else's name.
Jo: Khud se. I love myself. (watching Aaliyah's reaction)
Aa: Dumb. (stomps away towards the kitchen, disappointed)
Ar:What happened to her?
Jo: She was hoping I say her name.(loudly so she hears)
Aa(screams from the kitchen): In your dreams, dumbo!
Kripa was silently observing them both. She seemed to be the only one to notice the sparks flying between Josh and Aaliyah.
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Kashish is in her room still annoyed about the whole Sujal-coming-to-UK teasing session downstairs. Her phone rings.
Caller: Hey darling. What's up?
Ka: Shut up, Sujal. I don't want to talk to you.
Su: What happened to my sweet baby? Why so angry?
Ka: Your darling brothers happened. They always tease me.
Su: About?
Ka: You of course. What else?
Su: Oh ok. Then i'll talk to those two idiots. Don't be angry na.
Ka: You don't talk to them. You shout at them, ok?
Su: Yes ma'am. As you wish, ma'am? now can you relax? Chill mar yaar. Itna gussa theek nahin hai. Tum hasti hui zyada achi lagti ho. Especially jab tumhari light-up-the-whole-room-smile tumhare chehre pe aatu.
Ka(smiling slightly): Acha? Aur kya kya acha lagta hai mujhpe?
Su: Jab tumhare bal khulle hote hain, jab tumhari aankhon mein thora sa kajol hota hai, jab tum mujh se baat karti ho, jab tum mujh se pyar karti ho, the list goes on, sweetheart.
Ka:Aww, my baby! You're so sweet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 17
nice part...
loved Sujal Kashish scene...
BTW i did NOT get pm for this part...
cont soon...
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hey nice ff..
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nice part yar...

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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