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Kinza

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Henriette
hey i just read ur whole ff and i love it... please continue soon and send me a pm when u do

thanks and im going to post the next part soon.

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Part 14

Later all of them are going home.Kashish, kavya,anjali,armaan, ridhima are in one car.Angad, kripa, josh, aaliyah are in another car. In Angad's car, josh and aaliyah are teasing him.
Jo:Waise Angad, aaj tere saath koi ladki kyun nahi hai?I mean, everytime we go to a club, you always bring a girl back and the next morning send her away.Thank god you live in the outhouse.Agar dilip uncle ko pata chala to tere khair nahin.
An:Shutup josh.I dont know why but i just felt sick when all those girls were dancing with me.It felt disgusting because i knew if they saw another good-looking guy, they'll run to him also.I felt disgusted looking at them in their skimpy clothes.Don't know whats wrong with me?I never felt this way before.You know me don't you?I'm a big casanova.I never cared if a girl wore skimpy clothes.I change girlfriends like clothes then what is wrong with me now?Why do i feel so different now?
Aa:Sounds like the Angad Khanna famous on page 3 is reforming.
An:I don't know aaliyah but i kind of like this change.I feel better now that i dont have a s*** hanging on my arm.
Kripa feels happy hearing his words.
Kr:(in her mind)He's not as bad as i thought.He does have a conscience after all.
Aa:Acha hai.If you had brought some girl with you, kripa would have gone mental from the disgust of whats going on in the room next to hers.
An:Its not disgusting you know.Plus who knows maybe kripa might want to be with me herself
Kr:eewww.Me and you never!! (In her mind):I take my earlier words back. He's a first class donkey.
An:I didnt say it was possible too.I just said you might want me not i want you.
Kr: You wanted me the first time you met me didn't you?
An:...
Aa:You know that's the first time i saw Angad speechless.What happened, Oh master angad the great?
An:Shut up Aaliyah.
Jo:You all shut up.I can't concentrate on driving.(annoyed that Kripa was with them.)
An:Who told you to drive?Im here ya.
Jo:I wish u go there.
An:Where?
Jo:Ughh...Leave me alone!
An:OK!smirking
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In the other car, Kavya is driving and talking to anjali.Ridhima feels tired and doses off in armaan's arms. Armaan sees a strand of hair on her face irritating her.He removes it gently and stares at her face
Ar(in his mind):Beautiful!The innocense is so obvious on her face.She looks just like an angel.
Kas:Kya hua armaan?Why are you looking at ridhima like that?
Ar:Huh..Like what?
Kas:Like you're going to eat her.
anjali turns around
An:Oie mister, my sister is not a slice of pizza that you can eat her.
Ar:Chillax! I'm not going to eat her.She's the one sleeping on me, not the other way around.Sheesh.
Ridhima half wakes up hearing all this noise.
Ri:Shut up anjali, go back to sleep.Its still night.(Her eyes are still closed.)And whats this thing under my head.So hard.She pushes armaan and opens her eyes not feeling the "thing" move.
Ri:God save the queen!! I was sleeping on this...this monkey?
Ar:Who you calling monkey you elephant?
Ri:Elephant?You dare call me an elephant?Im only 28 kgs you hippopotamus. Ar:Hah felt like you're 120 kgs you female rhinoceros.
Kavya starts laughing so hard that he loses control of the steering wheel and the car turns sharply throwing ridhima on armaan,They both start staring into each other's eyes.
Kashish and anjali start shouting at Kavya who quickly breaks before anything happened.
Kas:Watch it Kavya. What if something happened?
An:Ya Kavya.Dont drive if you can't drive.
Kav:Its not my fault.Those two were the ones fighting so hilariously that i lost control of the car.
An:Speaking of them.Just look at them.First they fight like tom & jerry, now they're staring into each others eyes like armaan and ridhima from dil mill gayye.I admit their names match with the couple but they dont have to act like them.Seemed like they didnt even like each other the way they fought.
Kav:Arre Anjali, don't you know?The more you fight, the more you love.
Kas:Kavya, it's actually "The more you hate, the more you love".
Kav:Oh whatever.Somebody snap them out of it.
Kashish shouts loudly in their ear: WE'RE HOME!!
Both of them are embarassed and just look in different directions.
An:Acha now hurry.We're getting late.
Kav:How much more late can we get?It's already 2.
An:Angad and Kripa are so lucky they're in the outhouse.Atleast mum won't be able to shout at them.
Ri:Kripa is actually unlucky.She's living with Angad Khanna The Great.I'm surprised he hasn't made a move on her.
An:I'm actually surprised he didn't bring a girl back with him.Otherwise, every night a different girl.
Ri:He's actually becoming more responsible.
Ar(in his mind):You girls are too innocent to know what your brother is planning.He is just too good.
Kas(in her mind):I wonder what is angad upto?Sujal had told me josh, armaan and angad are planning something.Why couldnt they tell sujal the whole thing clearly?Atleast I would have been able to stop them.Dumb idiots.They hate their own sister and plan against her.But does angad reforming have anything to do with it?Oh god i'm so confused.Please help me.
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Dear Diary,
Today was quite a surprising day.I went to the club with the gang and not one of my so-called brothers said a word.Literally.They didnt say one word to me, good or bad.Although josh was pretty irritated in the car but other than that it was great fun.We danced so much at the club.Btw I think josh and aaliyah like each other.The way they were dancing was so beautiful.They were totally looking the couple made in heaven thing.Although I did remember me and prithvi dancing and that brought a wave of feelings like pain and hatred.Why did he do that?If he didn't love me, why pretend?Just to satisfy himself, he was ready to ruin a girl's life?What kind of a guy does that?And the other thing that's confusing me.Angad Khanna!He's an enigma.At first glance, he's very very attractive.However the first meeting disgusted me.Then he said sorry and I thought he might be okay.We became friends and he continued flirting but he remained in his limits.Today, he was dancing with girls but he wasn't dancing too closely.He put some distance between him and his partners.Then in the car, the words he said made me feel like he did think about what he has done in the past and wasn't as carefree as I thought.He's a nice guy if you dont think about the flirting part.Now i'm going to sleep.
Bye,
Kripa
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Here's the next part.Plz do comment.

Nida

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

nice par missing sujal-kashish cute romantic scenes terribly.pls do some help dear

pls cont so soon

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

nice part...................so angad is shapening his plan..................hope kripa doesnt get hurt..................and kashish is there for the lookout...................cont soon and thanks for the pm..................

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Antara Mazumdar

@dmg_roks_antara

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

nice part..........thnx fr d pm n cont soon

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: pinky901
nice par missing sujal-kashish cute romantic scenes terribly.pls do some help dear
pls cont so soon

Sujal is going to enter the story soon but i havent really thought abt what to do.I just had the idea of the main story...the small details i make them up part by part.

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara
nice part..........thnx fr d pm n cont soon

ur welcome and i might post the next part today

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Part 15

Kripa and Angad go back to the outhouse to sleep while the others go to the main house.Kripa is about to enter when angad stops her.

An:Wait kripa.First let me demonstrate to you what is going on in the main house right now.Mum is probably still awake and waiting for us to come back and give her 30 mins long lecture to us on coming home so late.First she says Ruko bacho

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at Khanna mansion

Na:Ruko bacho

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Outhouse

An:Then she says:I want to talk to you.Josh answers:Yes aunty?

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Na:I want to talk to you.

Jo:Yes aunty

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An:What is the time?

Answer will be 3.30 aunty

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Na:What is the time?

Ar:3.30 aunty.

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An:then the long lecture starts...

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Na:Angad nahin aaya?

Aa:Mom he went to the outhouse with kripa.He's probably mimicking you right now.

Na:Kya?

Ridhima speaks up:Yes mum.He always does that.He has your speech memorized and he always tells us what you are going to do and say next.

Na:Usko toh main nahin chodongi.Chalo mere saath.

The kids follow her as she leaves the house.

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Angad is facing kripa and has his back to the door.

An:Is this the time to come home?3.30 in the morning.If you sleep now, you'll wake up after lunchtime.Then I'll have to make double food for all of you lunch and breakfast together.I already have so much on my hands and you have to add to it..

Kr:Angad..

An:No no, im not finished yet..

Kr:But angad..

An:Shhh kripa listen..mum's probably having a fit.And why do you look like you see ghost?

Kr:Angad look behind you.

An:What?

Kr:Behind you.oops too late.

Naina grabs angad's ear and starts twisting it.

An:Ouch!Mum it hurts,

Na:Ooh my baby.Very good.Apni maa ki nakal lagata hai.Sharam aani chahiye hai tujhe.Kothe jitna bada hogaya lekin akal nahin aayia.Pata nahin iss ladke ka kya karoon.

An:Mum chodo na.Aaj ke baad nahin karoonga.Please.

Na:Acha theek hai.Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega.Chal ja sooja.Subha phir nahin uthaga aur dilip mujhe hi kahenge.

Ri:Dad never says anything to you mum.He loves you too much.

Aa:Ya mum.and dont say he doesn't cos we have seen you both making out a bit too many times.

Na:Aaliyah!Your mouth is getting too big.You dont want me to put chillies in it do you?

Aa:Im going to sleep.Bye guys.she runs away.

Na:Chalo everyone go to sleep now.

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In Naina-Dilip room

Na:Dilip

Di:Yes jaan?

Na:You have to write me a new speech for when the kids come home late.Angad already memorised this one.He keeps on making fun of me.

Di:Darling if you keep saying the same words again and again then of course someone's going to notice and make fun of it.

Na:Dilip?

Di:Yes jaanu?

Na:Shut up.

Di:No jaanu.

Na:Shut up.

Di:Make me.

Na:Fine.

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Ridhima is sitting on armaan's lap feeding him pizza.He starts kissing her neck and she gasps

Ri:Stop it armaan koi ajayega.

Ar:Koi nahin ayega.We're home alone.Pulling her even closer.

Ri:I dont really like the sound of that,

Ar:But I do.Socho Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chabhi kho jaaye.

Ri:Armaan please chodo.

Ar:Nahin.He bites her neck gently.

Ridhima puts her arm around him and goes closer to him.He closes his eyes when he feels her breath on his lips.Then she pushes him and runs from him laughing.

Ar:Now I will get that kiss from you ridhima.also laughing he runs after her.He tries grab her but only gets her dupatta.She jumps on the bed and he grabs her leg when suddenly.......

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when suddenly what happens??😉Do comment.

Nida