Apne Part 17 PAGE 9

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Hey guys, it's nida here.im sorry for not continuing my ffs for so long but my best friend had gone into depression and I became really busy what with my studies and her problems.I'm making this new link for my ff because the old one was closed though I don't know why.Im posting all the old parts first and then I'll post the next one.I have no idea which ones of my old readers would want to still read this ff so im not sending any pms for now.

Character Sketch

The Sharma's (all live in Hong Kong except Josh)

Suryaban Sharma - A loving father to his sons and a rich businessman.He hates his daughter and doesn't pay a lot of attention to her because his wife gayatri sharma died after giving birth to her.Her family hates her.Best friend of Karan Nanda and Dillip Khanna and is still in contact with Dillip after he moved to UK 26 years ago.

Sujal Sharma - 25, Goodlooking, He helps his father in business.Is engaged to and in love with Kashish Nanda.Hates Kripa

Josh Sharma - 24, Handsome, He is in his last year at Oxford University, A big flirt , has feelings for Aaliyah Khanna but hasn't realized it yet. Bestfriend of Angad Khanna. Hates Kripa

Armaan Sharma - 23, Hot, Going to UK to study in Oxford with his big bro and Kripa. A Casanova(Angad has competition).Hates Kripa

Kripa Sharma - 22, Extremely gorgeous, no matter what kind of clothes she wears, she looks good. She loves her father and brothers a lot and wishes they also love her.She wants to make them proud of her but they always shout at her.She never tied them a single rakhi.She has saved all the rakhis she bought for them in different boxes so she knows which is for which brother of hers.She only tied a rakhi to Kavya.He and Kashish are like her siblings.Their parents also gave her the love Suryaban never gave her.If they hadn't been there for her together with Naina and Dillip when they came to visit, she would have started blaming herself for her mom's death and either would have killed herself or gone into severe depression. She no longer expects anything from life cos she doesn't want to be disappointed. She has no interest in boys and doesn't believe in love.She is beauty with brains but likes to hide her beautiful blue-green eyes with brown lenses.She used to have a lot of innocence in her eyes but now she is facing reality and is very cold towards people she doesn't know and only with a little respect to her father and brother.

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The Nanda's (All live in Hk but Kashish has gone to visit her grandma in India and then will go to Uk for her studies in Oxford uni.)

Karan and Nandini Nanda - A loving couple and parents to Kavya, Kashish and Kripa. They treat Kripa like a daughter cos they didn't like the way her biological family treat her. They don't blame her for Gayatri's death cos they know when god wants something to happen, humans can do nothing to stop Him.

Kavya Nanda - 24, Handsome, flirt, believes in love but thinks you should have some fun before you meet the one meant for you. He loves Kripa a lot and doesn't treat her any different than Kashish.Maybe he does pamper her a lot more than Kashish but only becos she's smaller than Kashish.He helps his father in business.

Kashish Nanda - 22,Beautiful, sweet, caring and loving,loves her family, Kripa and Sujal a lot. She is kripa's best friend.She will also attend Oxford uni but will come from india where she is currently staying with her grandma.

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The Khanna's (The kids have not met either the Sharma or Nanda kids except Josh and have seen all kids pictures except kripa cos Josh showed them and he didn't mention her once)

Dillip and Naina Khanna - They are loving parents and love their children a lot. They spoilt Angad the most since he is the only boy.They have only one wish and that is to get them married to their best friends' children's.

Anjali Khanna - 22, She is a good daughter, sister and friend but if you get on her wrong side, only god can save you.She is a modern girl and sometimes dates but knows her limits.

Angad Khanna - 23,very arrogaant and has a lot of attitude,the casanova of jis college.For him,girls are a one-night stand.He canget very angry very fast.He thinks he can get anyone or anything he wants.

Aliyah and Riddhima Khanna - 21, fraternal twins they are very close to their siblings and can do anything for them.They love to play pranks on others and their teachers They are very sweet and caring.

Part 1

(guys i'm changing the story a bit.Angad is now 23 and Anjali is 22 as Angad plays a good role as a big brother and Kripa has a past.she came to england a few months before but the khanna kids and Josh had gone on a camp so she didn't meet them.)

dear diary,

I'm scared to go to england again.After all, I went there for a month and fell in love but it all went wrong later.what now? I have a feeling something's gonna change my life but what?I hope that b****** doesn't come back in my life cos after what he did, I won't be to blamed if I kill him but I'm still scared of him.after all he tried to r*** me.but sometimes I wonder why he didn't love me and lusted my body?why don't my family just accept me?was being born such a big mistake?they knew this pregnancy was complicated so why didn't they just aborted me instead of making me live in hell?thank god for kashish, kavya bhai, Nandini Aunty, Karan Uncle, Dillip Uncle and Naina Aunty.even though I knew Dillip uncle and Naina aunty for 1 month, I feel really comfortable with them.Whenever I was with them, Inever felt the loneliness I felt with dad and my brothers.gotta go.the plane's landing.

Bye

Kripa

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Annoucement : we will be landing at the London Airport in a while.please fasten your seatbelts.

We see Kripa and Armaan sitting next to each other.

Ar: Thank god.ab main thodi hi dair is manoos ke saath bethoonga.

Kripa felt bad but hid it.

After a while,

Annoucement: We have now landed at the London airport.we hope youi enjoyed your flight.

Kripa: Chalo Armaan.

Armaan: Chal rah hoon.Main bacha nahin hoon jo tum mujhe batao kya karna hai aur kya nahin.I'm your big brother,understand.

Kripa(mumbled):but it never seemed like it.Always Kavya bhai fulilled the role of big brother in my life.

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Part 2

Kripa and Armaan are walking out of the London Airport.Kripa spots Naina and Dillip.(She met them only 2 years back when she came to Uk for a month.)

Kr: 'There they are.'She points towards them.

Ar: 'Pata hai.Miss-know-it-all'feeling annoyed she saw them

Kripa feels bad but bravely puts on a happy face and walks towards them.

Kr:'Namaste Aunty, Uncle.'

Ar:'Namaste aunty, uncle'

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnk u so much for continue.

its a lovely story.
its a request pls show sujal-kashish love story also dear as tey r my fav char.
pls do cont soon
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so many views and only 1 comment?plz comment and tell me if u want me to continue or not.I really would like to get some more feedback.
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Nobody liked it??😭should i continue or not??
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Nobody liked it??😭should i continue or not??

dear
i want to request one thing
pls agar ho sake to ek baar sabko pm kardo ii'm sure they al r not aware of ur continuation and after pm they wll ill rally like u to continue.
pls don't stop it now. and do this favour if u can.
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dear
i want to request one thing
pls agar ho sake to ek baar sabko pm kardo ii'm sure they al r not aware of ur continuation and after pm they wll ill rally like u to continue.
pls don't stop it now. and do this favour if u can.
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thanks very much.im continuing my other ff so plz comment.😊
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amazing parts
im really glad u have continued the fanfic cant wait 2 read the next part.
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amazing parts

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Part 10

At a beach party.Angad,Josh and Armaan are having fun.They're all dancing with girls though only Armaan's keeping some distance from his partner as he was not much interested and was quite bored.Josh notices this.

Jo:what's up Armaan?What's wrong?You were most interested in girls in Hong Kong so why the change here?

Ar:Nothing bro.The girls here dont attract me.

ARmaan's dance partner:What??If you're not interested then why are you dancing with me?Im leaving,

Ar:Thank god !You irritated me so much.

Gi:What?!You know what, go to h***.She leaves.

Josh and Angad are laughing at him.

Ar:Whatever!I wanna go now I'm so bored.

An:OK, Let's go home.

Jo:fine by me.

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At home

Naina,Dillip,Aaliyah,Kavya and Kripa are in the hall waiting for them.

An:What's up mom?

Na:Today, a guy came to see Aaliyah.Josh feels a bit angry as he hears this.

Jo:And?

Na:Where were you guys?Do you know how bad it looked when Aaliyah's brother is not here with her to check out the guy?

An:Im not a gay that I'll check out a guy mom.Armaan looks like he's gonna laugh.

Di:Angad!

An:sorry dad.

Jo(impatient):What happened aunty?Did the guy like aaliyah...or not(hopefully at the end)

Na:They said no.
Jo:"YES!"Everyone looks at him."I meant OH NO!"He makes a sad face while smiling on the inside though he didnt know why was he so happy.

Na:Anyways, has anyone seen Anjali or Riddhima?

An:Oh mom, I forgot to tell you,they're gone to a sleepover at kirti's home.

Aa:Oh ya.She invited me too.I forgot about it with all the rush in the morning.I gotta go now.Do you want to come Kripa?

Kr:Uhmm sure.

Aa:Great.Let's go get ready.Angad bhai can drop us, right Bhai?

An:Sure, why not.Let's go.

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At night in Josh's room.He's standing at the window looking at the full moon.

Jo:What is wrong with me?She is my best friends younger sister and im thinking about her.I can't think about her like that.My relationship with Angad will be ruined.But why was I angry when aunty mentioned the guy coming to see her.Why did I feel like finding who he was and beating him up?Why was I thinking she's mine?Why was I so happy when I found out they said no?Why?Why?Why?No, this is wrong!I can't think about her like that?I have to stay away from her for Angad and my friendship.I can't throw away our precious friendship for a crush.Yes,that's it.I'll stay away from her until she gets married to someone else.But why do I feel sad and angry whenever I think about her getting married to someone else.What is wrong with me?

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END of Part 10
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nice parts...................i read the story before too and once again read...................glad that u r continuing................cont soon dear..............

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