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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 13

At the club
Josh, Armaan and Angad are dancing with random girls while the Kashish, Kripa, Anjali, Ridhima and Aaliyah are sitting at the bar with Kavya irritating them.
Kav: Kripa why dont i find a guy for you and aaliyah?I mean Kashish has Sujal jeeju and Anjali has me but u both are so lonely.
An:What do u mean by Anjali has me???I haven't been bitten by a crazy dog that i'll go out with you right Kashish?
Kas:Come on Anjali my brother isn't that bad.(teasing tone)
Kr:Yes yes he's not just that bad, he's extremely bad.
Kav:Kripa, What have I ever done to you for you to say that?
Kr:Nothing except all the times you hide my stuff and what about that time when u told that nerd ashutosh i like him and he came to me trying to kiss me with fish stuck in his braces in primary school!! I was so embarassed in front of all my friends and none of them forgot about it for a whole month.
Kav:But I said sorry for that a thousand times and you still keep bringing it up.I even bought you 2 barbie dolls.
Ri:You like barbie dolls Kripa??
Kr:I used to when I was small.Now I like stuffed toys.
Kas:And poor Kavya has to buy her 2 everytime she gets angry at him.
An:He deserves it.I say you make him buy 4 not 2 Kripa.
All of them laugh however Aaliyah is looking at josh dancing closely with another girl.
Aa:(in her mind)"What is wrong with me?Why am I so unhappy about that bandar dancing with that s***?Let him dance with whoever he wants.And why am i cursing that girl?I dont even know her.I seem to be going crazy nowadays.Keep on thinking about him.Oh god, I'm supposed to chill out with friends and I'm sitting here pretending to enjoy while he dances and cozies up to every girl within a 10 feet radius."Just then a cute guy comes to her and says: Hey Im Rahul(Rahul from DMG).Wanna dance?
Aa:Sure why not?(in her mind:Im gonna enjoy and not care about that bandar)
They go and start dancing.Kavya asks Anjali for a dance and she agrees.
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On the other side the girl josh is dancing with gets angry and says to him
Gi:Look at him.Doesnt even care that im dancing with another guy.Instead he goes and gets himself another girl.Kankajura.Pagal.Idiot.Chodongi nahin usse.She tries to go somewhere but Josh stops her.
Jo:Arre bas bas.Don't get angry.I know the girl he's with.Tu dekh ab mein kya karta hoon.(secretly happy that he will get to dance with her now)
Gi:Jaldi kar jo bhi karna hai warna main uska katal kardoongi.
Jo: Kya Muskaan?Kyun bechare ke piche pad gayi hai.
He goes to the DJ and tells him to play a slow song next.
Then he goes takes muskaan to the couple they were talking about and asks Rahul:Do you mind if I cut in?
Ra:What about your partner?I thought she looked quite happy with you.(Sarcastically)
Mu: Oye chup kar kaankajure.How can I be happy when you dance with somebody else.
Ra:And what about you?You also were dancing with someone else oh so happily.
Mu:I was just teasing you ya.How would I know that you would go to another girl?
Ra: Haan Haan chal lets go dance.
Mu:Chal.
They leave and aaliyah is just watching this silently.
Aa:What about me?
Jo:Main hoon na.
Aa:Wish you were SRK then that would have been nice.
Jo:Ya ya lets dance.this song is nice.
Surili ankhiyon wale - veer

Surili akhiyon wale
Suna hai teri akhiyon se
Behti hai neendein
Aur neendon mein sapne
Kabhi to kinaro pe
Utar mere sapno se
Aaja zameen pe aur mil ja kahin pe
Mil ja kahin ..

Ohhhoooooooo

Mil ja kahin samey se pareh
Samey se pareh mil ja kahin
Tu bhi akhiyon se kabhi meri akhiyon ki sunn

Surili akhiyon wale, suna hai teri akhiyon se

Jaane tu kahan hai
Udti hawa pe tere pairon ke nishan dekhe

Jaane tu kahan hai
Udti hawa pe tere pairon ke nishan dekhe
Doondha hai zameen pe chana hai falak pe
Saare aasman dekhe
Mil ja kahin samey se pareh
Samey se pareh mil ja kahin
Tu bhi akhiyon se kabhi meri akhiyon ki sunn

Everytime I look into your eyes
I see my paradise
The stars are shining right up in the sky
Fainty words of desire
Can this be real
(can this be real)
Are you the one for me
(are you the one for me)
You have captured my mind, my heart, my soul on earth
You are the one waiting for
Everytime I look into your eyes
I see my paradise
Stars are shining right up in the sky
Fainty words of desire

Hoth mein chupke dekh rahe the
Chaand ke peeche, peeche the

Hoth mein chupke dekh rahe the
Chaand ke peeche, peeche the
Saara jahan dekha dekha na aakhon mein
Palkon ke neeche the
Aa chal kahin, samey se pareh
Samey se pareh chal de kahin
Tu bhi akhiyon se kabhi meri akhiyon ki sunn

Surili akhiyon wale, suna hai teri akhiyon se
Surili akhiyon wale, suna de zara akhiyon se
Surili akhiyon wale, suna de zara akhiyon se

Josh-Aaliyah, Kavya-Anjali and Rahul-Muskaan are happily dancing while looking at each others eye.Kripa remembers her relationship with Prithvi and feels a bit sad.On the other hand Anjali feels shy and runs back to the bar.Aaliyah just blushes and leaves josh and he gives a cute smile and runs his hand through his hair.
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So thats the end of part 13.Plz comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
nice part...................aaliya has some feelings for josh and rahul muskaan scene was nice......................cont soon...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: spvd

nice part...................aaliya has some feelings for josh and rahul muskaan scene was nice......................cont soon...................

thanks and i will cont soon. its my holidays so i have lots of time.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


love
Riddss

thanks
your welcome
I will.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx fr d pm and cool part............cont soon n pm me on ur parts
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara

thnx fr d pm and cool part............cont soon n pm me on ur parts

ur welcome and i will post the next part today or tomorrow..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey just read ur ff
nice one
i guess the person who called kash was sujal
hope everyone starts liking kripa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey just read ur ff
nice one
i guess the person who called kash was sujal
hope everyone starts liking kripa
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thanks for reading and commenting...yes it was sujal who called her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i just read ur whole ff and i love it... please continue soon and send me a pm when u do

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